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Posted: 13 years ago

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superb dear ,many commented its like LRL but i haven't watched that serial ,i am liking it .

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

awesome... loved it dear...
looking forward to know the next...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

hey gr8 updts

bt precaps awesm..

maan as geets teacher!!

lukin fwd 2 dat!!

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

part 5
nice...
wow Maan saw Geet is mesmerized with her beauty...
cont soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awesome updates...

Maan is mesmerized by Geet's beauty...

they will work in Ambala Cant...

thanx for pm...

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

PART 6

We reached our destiny & Daya got off from the car & said,"ACP Saab is waiting for u Geet in his office.I can call u Geet?"Geet said smiling,"Of course,sir."Daya said comfortably,"No need to call me sir,u can call me Daya or Nayak...as its my surname."Geet said warmly,"Ok,Nayak..."Nayak said,"That's better..."

Geet nodded & entered the new office & knocked her boss's cabin door.A firm high pitched voice came from inside,'come in.'Geet entered the room & stood in front of ACP's chair & said,"Geet Singh Ahluwaliya reporting sir,"firmly.

ACP saab had turned his chair opposite to her turned which faced her & said sternly,"Geet Singh Ahluwaliya...sharp...very fast...and determined woman.You'll not sit quietly till u complete ur work.You r a very intelligent & I think u were in first place during the training in the entire police academy...u're not taken to field work becoz of ur bro's reputation in ur previous place & u aren't having any practise of field work,right?"

Geet said politely,"Right sir..."ACP said,"Then why have u comehere,Miss Ahluwliya,what u want to do?"Geet was puzzled & said politely,"Mein kuch samjhi nahi sir..."ACP stood immediately & took his gun & recoiled it & held it near Geet's forehead.Geet didn't flinched of fear & showed any scare on her face stood there blank seeing his face.

Geet said after sometime without any fear,"What r u waiting for sir,pull the trigger...!!!"ACP saw her guts & was impressed & said,"Good...am impressed congratulations...I appreciated ur fearlessness Geet."And he kept back his gun in his pocket.

ACP Pruthviraj Chauhan was a senior officer & has solved abt 500 cases.He's a stout man & has a normal neck,he has a roman nose & nose pits are very large & the nostrils are long.His age is abt 50 & has moustache & he's having very kind faced but his face has become red with angry becoz seeing Daya's wound.

ACP asked him worriedly,"Daya yeh kaise huva?"Daya said meekly,"Yeh sab aapka plan ka nateeja hai sir.U only told to test Geet's guts & this is the result of testing Geet's guts.She took me to the police station & she put me behind the bars & locked all becoz of ur plan.

Then when I tried to act like u said then she gave me a strong punch & my nose is bleeding & I felt dizzy also becoz of her punch,I never felt like ashamed of myself when my gril friend has slapped me.But yeh ladki toh bahut khatarnaak hai..."Everyone laughed at him while he saw them grumpily.

Then ACP introduced everyone to Geet in his office.Now came the major part how they've to be admitted to KMA without suspicion that they're undercover CID officers.They made a plan & Geet wrote the NDA exam & was got selected to KMA as Cadet.While Arjun was smuggled to KMA as a prisoner who was an hardcore criminal from Mumbai remand home.

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Daya was appointed as orderly in KMA who would keep an eyes around to know further complications.They knew that Captain MSK was coming to KMA as a teacher for strategy & communications.So it would be better that Geet would be as a Cadet to go close to him as he was a teacher.Dolly was sent to her father's place to keep an eyes on her father.

FROM NOW ONWARDS THE STORY WILL BE NARRATED BY BRIJ SINGH AHLUWALIYA(BSA)

BSA said,"Kanchenjunga Military Academy,which is situated in Ambala cantt Haryana.Un deewaaron ke peeche ek alag hi duniya basthi hai.Yahan common man enter hotha hai aur soldier banke nikaltha hai aur yeh sab hoga kayi processes se.And the Simon says,to become success,we need hard work & descipline.Simon...mera matlab hai Brigadier Chandok(BC)

BC was a big beefy giant man having the height of 7 who has hardly any moustache & has a very smug expression on his face,but now he has become angry becoz one Cadet hasn't pierced the target correctly.

BSA-He's the principal of this academy...to face this man is to face a firing pot will be equal.BC taught the Cadet how to pierce the target stiffly & made the cadets to remember their motto & the cadets shouted proudly,'strength & honour'."Yes strength & honour,this academy's motto.Now each cadet has to make it as an example.ab baari hai naye batch ki..."

On that time a girls entered in bike wearing the helmet & stopped on the porch of the administration office.She took the helmet & saw around her proudly.She then remembered her parents as she had convinced them abt the mission.

KMA has a very large grounds & forsts.It has 4 complexes...Main bulding where school is conducted...second building is staff quarters where staff settles after their classes...boys hostel...girls hostel.Nuclear trigger room is there but it is kept as a secret.Geet saw the amar jawan jyothi & saluted it patriotically.

Then she entered to it & proceeded to the principal office.There near the principal office a boy is sitting on the bench saw Geet & intorduced himself,"Hum Ali hai Kanpur se..."Geet introduced herself shaking his hands,"Geet from Nainital.Then both sat on the bench in front of the principal office keeping their luggages on the ground.

Inside the BC's office a boy stood who wore a t-shirt which had the wordings,'It's obvious you had me.'He gave an innocent smile to BC who was reviewing his profile.BC said sternly,"Yeh mat samajhna ki hum tumhaare baap ke wajaise tumhe admission de rahe hai.You're able & intelligent & we'll make u courageous."That boy said innocently,"Yes sir,I don't want to be called by my father's name.I want to be known by my own name,sir.Kunal,Captain Kunal...Major Kunal...after that Colonel Kunal & one day,...Brigadier Kunal...like u sir."

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BC said sternly,"Keep determintation during the training which will work there."Kunal said saluting,"Aye aye sir."Kunal came outside the office taking a deep breath of calm & said best of luck to both Geet & Ali.Ali was admitted.But BC saw Geet & said proudly that woman never become soldiers.

Geet asked him that what she want to do to impress him which he said sarcastically that what she can do.Geet went & closed the door & walked near BC & twisted his hands immediately & which the gun he kept in his pocket she took it & held it to his forehead.

Geet said angrily,"Sir,aapko impress karne ke liya mujhe uss tarah nahi aatah chaahon toh aap aise hi impress ho sakthe hai nahi toh I've to have to ask justice in front of the military board...so tell me shall stand in front of them or u're gonna give u me admission???"BC was amazed seeing her grip to his hands & said that he'll admit her.

Precap-Maan & Geet's meeting.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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H_Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Hi, geetsweet😛

awesome update...
Continue soon..

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Dona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

loved it

bt like button is nt working

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

geet twisted the hand of BC...nice...😆

continue soon...

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

PART 7

BC admits Geet after that incident but he underestimates saying that woman never become soldier.Then Geet challenges BC that she'll become best Cadet of this academy.Here Kunal's parents try to convince him that the army life is so miserable.Mr.Sahani said dismissively,"I've so many soldier marching left right left right...but don't worry...I'll talk to that Chandok.From 10 yrs,I supply the goods to this academy only."

Kunal said dismissively seeing the wall,"You bet yahan bhi aaap hi ne choona lagaya haina???"Kunal's mom said bossily,"Paint this room & make this room air conditioned...How he supposed to be live here in this heat...there's only one fan & bed is two...In logon ko koi akal hai ya nahi???"

Kunal said casually,"Mom,mein is room ko share kar raha hoon mere moony ke saath..."Mr.Sahani said,"Haan koi Malik naam he uska..."Mrs.Sashani said with disgust,"Hai...Hai...mera beta kisi Haryanvi ke saath share kar raha hai is room ko?"

Then she started her drilling session to her son while Kunal listened to it calmly,"Abhi bhi waqt hai beta...If u join the military academy then badook pakadke tank mein hi ghoomta rahega...phir mere mercedes mein baitneka sapne ka kya hoga???Dekho...tu aur Mrs.Shrma ka bantu dono america jaayenge ...wahan toh tum mere saath computer mein chat toh kar saktha haina...aur tu Big Ben ke saamne photo toh khichva sakthe haina..."Kunal said innocently,"Mom...Big Ben London mein hai..."She said,"Oh...😲Kunal said dismissively,"Please give me a break...chill..."

Then Mr.Sahani said proudly that he'll make the room single occupancy but Kunal stamped his feet to that oppurtunity also saying that he don't want any help from him.Then Mr.Sahani reminds him that he have betted on him so don't make him disappoint while Kunal said proudly that he's not gonna come back and he's gonna loss the bet.

After his parents exit he took the guitar & played a strong tune & said happily,"Freedom..."

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While Ali saw this & asked with confusion,"Freedom in this academy..."Kunal said happily,"Yeah from my mom & dad's world..."

On that time a police van enters the academy & from that Arjun steps out.His hand is tied with iron clamps.The policemen comes & salutes him immediately while Arjun said angrily,"Behave ursefl as policemen,now am a criminal,so act more like u're taking me to the academy fro reform."Policmen said unison,"Sorry sir."And he dragged Arjun inside the administration block.

The policeman called for Suriji.Suriji said turning towards him with attitude,"Haan...mein hi hoon Subhedhar Surinder Suri...aur aap 5 minute late hai..."While Arjun saw around him & saw Geet who was walking towards the girls hostel.Arjun's eyes twinkled seeing Geet there but he returned to their conversation.

The policeman said,"Sorry sir,here is ur Cadet.Arjun Sharma...father's name is Harilal Sharma...criminal no.121...child crime...remand home,,,,,,,,,,mumbai."Suriji saw that he was tied in iron clamps & said,"Woh sab toh thik hai...lekin aap uski bhediya khol de...yahan koi qaidi nahin hai sab bhaarat mata ki lal hai..."Police removed his iron clamps & exited.Suriji said to Arjun to forget the past & start a new life & concentrate on ur new life.Arjun thought,"Wahi toh mein kar raha hoon..."

BSA said proudly,"This is the importance of this academy.Yahan sabko ek aur mauka miltha hai.This academy has produced so many courageous soldiers,who has been awarded best medals.I,Captain Brij Singh Ahluwaliya was this academy's best student...This academy...yahan ke energy...yahan ke atmosphere...sab special hai..."

In mess,Suriji serves tea & bisuits to Arjun & said,"I'll give u clothes."While Ali came there to the mess & dialled to his ammi.While Geet enters hostel who was stopped by Subhedhar Major Lolitha Sen.Lolita Sen said,"Miss Geet,"bossily.Geet said,"Ah Singh,"softly.

lolita sen said bossily,"Come again."
Geet said firmly,"Geet Singh."
lolita sen nodded & said seeing her top to bottom,"Strong...independent...lekin agar kisi java mard ko dekhti hai toh uske baare mein sapne dekhna nahi chodthi right???"Geet saw her with puzzle.
lolita sen said,"Mein kabhi glgath nahi hongi.I'll hve every information abt what's going on behind the door becoz my name is lolita sen...girls hostel warden...ur room is 202 first floor...turn right...20 kadam aage...and no cell phones..."

Geet was abt to go but lolita sen stopped her & said bossily,"Cadet Singh before u go make urself clear with the hostel rules-1)in room,the high noises or voices aren't allowed.2)after lights out u r restricted to come out of the room.3)To go outside the academy u've to take my permission & mind u Cadet am not ur mother...am ur warden...if u r missing ur mummy or doggie I don't care all I do care is abt ur discipline...dismiss..."Geet went from there taking a deep calming breath.

Precap is same.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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