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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

many of them have come...still the main hero hasnt...😆

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

part 6
so nice...
very good...
cant wait for Maan's entry...

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

part 7
very good...
the stage is set...
cont soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

waiting to see Geet & MSK aamna -saamna 😊

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

PART 8

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Get met Pooja Ghai as her roommate who always talks like the mobile phone language.Geet came to know that Pooja have come here to search his boy friend as her marriage was stopped becoz of his absence in front of her family.

Then Arjun asks Suriji to what the work do He have to do here in the academy becoz they're giving free food & free clothes.But Suriji sayd him to become soldier & don't eat his head further.

In BC's office,BC examining a file calls an orderly.BC called bossily,"Rustum...Rustum..."The orderly entered the cabin & stood panting.BC said bossily,"Academy ki gates sahi time pe band ho jaana chahiye..."On that time he got the phone from his senior officers telling that Captain Maan Singh Khurana is posted here as strategy & communications teacher.

But BC argued that they've expert soldier to teach this subject but why he's sent here.But his senior officer refused his comment & BC hung the phone with bottled anger & ordered the orderly to closed the gate at correct time.

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On that time only Maan enters the academy wearing jeans pant & t- shirt.He also wore an white over coat & walked with attitude wearing sun glass.Maan walked past the hall of fame after saluting to amar jawan jyothi proudly & saw the portrait of Brij.

BSA-Captain Maan Singh Khurana,he was my best batch mate...but now...situations are changed..."

BC came there & said angrily,"Captain Maan Singh Khurana,to tum yahan aa hi gaye!!!"Maan saluted him immediately while BC said to relax.Maan relaxed himself.

BC continued,"Captain Maan,tum toh mujhe impress nahi kar sake jab tum academy mein the...aur ab yahan aane ke liye mere senior se shifaris kardi..???Aur tum kabse strategy & communications mein expert ho gaye???"

Maan said politely,"Sir,am posted here..."BC said angrily,"Postings my foot...postings will be done to soldiers...not of teachers."Maan said politely,"Sir,aaj tak mujhe pata nahi ki aap mujhse itna nafrat kyun karthe hai...woh isisliye kyunki mein Captain Brij Singh Ahluwlaiya ki tarah best student nahi bana...?"BC asked curiously,"Tum kehna kya chahthe ho...?"

Captain Maan said politely,"Nothing sir,but the truth is that Captain Brij Ahluwaliya is the best cadet pass out of KMA & we can't deny that truth sir."BC was angry once again & said,"Tha...lekin koi desh drohi is academy ka best cadet nahi banega..."And he threw the photo of Brij taking from the hall of fame to the ground.The photo frame brakes...

Maan said softly,"Sirf tasveer phekne se sach nahi badal jaayega...And we can't deny the truth that military board is thinking of closing the KMA."BC said angrily,"Haan,lekin military board ko Brigadier Chandok par abhi bhi vishwaas hai..."

Maan said politely,"Ussi yakeen ko pakka karne ke liye mujhe yahan bheja gaya hai sir...mein khud bhi nahi chahtha ki yeh academy band ho jaaye...Chahtha toh yeh aap sab se co-operation...and there's no connection to Capt.Brij Ahluwlaiya's death my report sir."

BSA-Who wants to keep the connection with a traitor?I Capt.BSA was thi academy's best cadet pass out but in front I didn't give my proof of my courage & patriotism.Am not a patriot but a bloody traitor.My death has dragged on someone here & she's Geet Singh Ahluwaliya."

On that time Geet lifted the photo of her veerji & thought in her mind with wooden expression on her face,"I'll prove that u aren't a traitor.One day,ur photo will be put on the hall of fame.Aur jinhone isse phenka hai...woh hi aapke tasveer ko lagayega veerji.Don't worry veerji,becoz of whom u were made traitor he'll be behind the bars.I promise u in front of this fire of amar jawan jyothi that becoz of the reason this academy is abt to close,i'll show them that the reasons are lies & ur last wishes will be fulfilled without fail...trust me."Geet wept silently while Maan passed past Geet & noticed that a girl seeing the photo of his best friend &called her,"Fresher..."

Geet turned wiping her tears immediately & saw Maan standing in front of her.Maan was now aged abt 28 yrs,very handsome...he has chocolate brown eyes,long white nose...exact'M' shaped lips & clean shaven.His muscles were seen as shaped above his shirt when he shakes his arms.Geet saw him mouth hanging open while Maan was shocked to see that girl who he had seen near the checkpost.

Maan & Geet stood there still mes mesmerised by their beauty.Geet saw hungrily,she had the change of heart.Geet had saw Maan in the photo but didn't glanced it totally but she was mesmerised to see him in front of her.

Maan came to the present world & said politely,"Fresher."Geet came to present world & saw him in puzzled face.Maan asked warmly,"What's ur name fresher?"Geet answered nervously,"Geet Ah Singh."Maan repeated,"Geet Ah Singh...interesting name..."smiling sweetly.Geet changed the subject to save herself & asked,"Sir,yeh kaun hai???"

Then BC answered angrily,"Ek desh drohi."Geet feels angry but resists but Maan answered proudly,"Aur is academy ka best Cadet..."Geet was impressed with him.BC said angrily,"I don't think Miss Singh that u've come here to discuss the history...u r dismissed."Maan nodded dismissively.Geet said politely,"Yes sir."

And she kept the photo at it's place & was abt to go but BC said bossily,"Ek baar meri kaan khol kar sunlo...this academy has produced so many soldier who r now become shaheed.I don't want to listen the name of the traitor Capt.BSA not importantly in the mouths of the cadets...do u understand?"Geet resisted the anger & said politely,"Yes sir."Maan observed this but not takes it for concern.Geet exited from there to her hostel.

BSA-"Here my name isn't allowed to take...can my sister will be allowed here?Geet's challenege isn't the training but she has to hide that she's Geet Singh Ahluwaliya & undercover CID officer.Traitor Brij Singh Ahluwaliya's sister.I said my last wishes in my letter but can she fulfill it???We've to see..."

Precap-Malik's entry...and row between them.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

bc is so much angry...coz he cant believe that he was a traitor...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

part 8
i just love this episode so much...
the way HIS entry was too good...
cont soon dear...

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

PART 9

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A young boy riding on his bike attends the phone call from his mobile & replied,"Yes maa,am reaching...it's not aeroplane...it's a bike..."Then he saw a beautiful woman driving a red car & disconnected the phone & started flirting with her.He follows her car & he introduces himself,"Chori,...am Captain Malik...Vikram Malik...am going to KMA.Woman like u have to be in the army."

That woman who was irritated thinks of having fun with him & said giving a wide smile,"Really...will u help me with the admission..."Malik said proudly,"Of course,let us meet on Friday night dinner...I'll explain u all abt the courses...what say u madam?"

That woman said innocently,"Really...lekin suna hai academy ke gates 6 baje band ho jaathi hai...aur abhi band hone mein 2 minute bache hai...???"Malik said confidently,"Bet with me my dear we'll reach..."That woman said confidently,"1 minute 40 seconds..."Malik said confidently,"Let's go madam..."

Malik went ahead in the bike from the car.That woman also drives in top speed.Malik comes on the time of gate closed & that woman also.The guard saw the womna's car & opened the gate,that woman entered & Malik also entered immediately.The guard protests then Malik said calmly,"Abe diktha nahin hai mein Captain Snghal ke saathe hoon!!!"That woman was amazed & Malik smiled at her widely.

That woman said impressively,"Doctor Captain Shalini Singhal(Dr.S)...very smart..."And she exited from there.Malik followed her & said smiling,"Madam,I've won the bet...if u're free then...let's go to friday night dinner...?"Dr.S said bossily,"I'll not socialise with Cadets."Malik said confidently,"No problem madam...I'll not be wearing the uniform on that time..."Dr.S said immediately,"First let us meet Brigadier Chandok..."Malik said happily,"Of course madam...let us meet tawoo..."They report to BC's office.

BC asked bossily,"U're late Mr.Malik..."Malik said confidently,"I was here before the gates were closed..."BC asked sarcastically,"Oh & where u lost?"Malik said confidently,"I was repairing Capt.Singhal's car."Dr.S was shocked hearing this while Malik smirked seeing Dr.S.BC asked Malik,"Are u mechanic?"

Malik said,"No sir I'm a farmer's son...but in the fields...i repair my tractor...jai jawan jai kisan..."BC asked seeing towards Dr.S,"Is it true?"Dr.S said calmly,"Yes sir..."Then BC admits Malik...Dr.s & Malik come from BC's cabin while Malik follows Dr.S & tries to impress her for the dinner.But Dr.S was least interested then Malik asks the way to boys hostel.

But Dr.S sends him to girls hostel giving him wrong direction.Malik reaches girls hostel not seeing the board & enters room no.202 & sleeps on his bed.

Here Geet comes near hall of the fame & picks her bro's photo from the dustbin but someone said apprehensively,"Miss Singh!"Geet threw the photo back to the dust bin & turned & saw it was Maan.Geet was mesmerised once again in those chocolate brown eyes & their eye locked for a brief moment.Both come to the present world after their eye lock & both saw the ground immediately.

While Maan asked enquiringly,"Miss Singh,aap yahan kya kar rahi hai?"Geet was nervous & stuttered,"Woh...actually...mera rumall yahan gir gayi thi...usse hi dhonndne aayi hoon..."Maan was bit felt awakward but said warmly,"

Miss Singh,aap jaanthi haina ki Brigaider bahut strict hai rules mein...aath baje lights off hoga aur ab aath bajgar 5 minute hai...ab agar aap apne kamre mein nahin gayi toh abhi aap apna rumaal khoya hai...lekin aap ek aur minute bhi yahan par rahegi tab aap apne admission se hath dho baitogi...aap samajha rahi haina..???"Geet nodded politely.Maan said smiling warmly,"Dismiss."

Geet was once again mesmerised with his smile but comes to the present world & went from there & hid herself behind the pillar.Maan saw around him & went from there immediately.Geet came back seeing that he had gone & took her bro's photo from the dustbin & rolled it & went towards the way where Maan went.

Maan went but not to his room but to BC's office.Geet observed this & followed him but before that she took her bro's photo.Maan entered BC's room & started searching something in computer...in drawyer...in cupboard where the files were kept.He didn't get what he was searching & thought,"Agar Cadets profile yahan nahi hai toh kis ke paas hai!!!!"

Then Geet entered her dark room holding the picture of her bro & sat on the bed.She didn't switched on the light & closed the door & not thinking she sat on her bed,then Malik screamed & So Geet also.Geet said angrily,"Kaun ho tum aur tumhaari himmat kaise hui mere kamre mein aane ki???"

Malik was puzzled & asked her with amazement,"Kaun ho tum chori aur tumhaari himmat kaise huyi mere kamre mein aane ki?Yeh room no.202 haina???"Geet said angrily,"Yeh girls hostel hai naaki tumhaare room no.202."

Malik blabbered something abt jyothishya but Geet shouted at him.Malik tried to touch her in dark but Geet twisted his hands.Malik screamed with pain & said,"Phoolandevi...mere haath chodo..."

On that time Pooja got up rubbing her eyes & said excitedly,"Rohit...Rohit...at last u came...!"And tried to hug Malik while Malik frees from Geet's grip on that time his watch falls to the floor & said uncomfotably,"She's is an indecent girl...she's so dangerous yaar..."

While Geet tries to convince Pooja that he's not Rohit but Pooja insists on switching on the light.But Malik stops Geet by pulling her back on that time Lolita Sen comes there & shouts from outside to open the door.Malik jumps from the window to escape with his bag & luggage while lolita sen shouts to open the door.

Precap is same.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago