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Posted: 13 years ago
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Malik and Arjun is angry with Geet for telling night incident to Nair...

awesome update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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read all in one go
oswm it is
updt nxt soon thnx fr PMz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update 😊 ,waiting for Maan & Geet convo ,surely Arjun will help Geet frm Malik .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update...

its amazing...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 13


Arjun & Geet meet each other in training grounds before lights out & Geet asked casually,"Any news from HQ...?"Arjun answered seriously,"No,but Geet why r u behaving like a teenager...u r an CID officer...just behave urself.Why u r making urself in trouble...look that Major Nair isn't a nice guy..!And what abt Malik...?Dekho tum jitna un sab se door raho utni achchi hai tumhaare liye...behtar hai ki tum apne mission par dhyaan do naaki yeh pay back mein...!"


Geet asked angrily,"Toh Arjun...mujhe mazaa ata hai...yeh sab karthe huye..!Arjun...hum ab is academy ke cadets hai...hum apne hi attitude mein rahenge toh yahan sabko shak hojayega...!aur humein ab in cadets ke beech gulmil kar rehna hoga aur Captain Khurana ko protect karna hoga...!"


Arjun said worriedly,"Geet,Baat toh tu sahi keh rahi hai...lekin...us Malik se door raho...mujhe woh ladka theek nahi lag raha hai...!"Geet smiled at concern & said calmly,"Don't worry...mein apna khayaal achche se rakhungi..!"


Arjun nodded dismissively & said,"Thik hai...mein bata doonga agar kuch news aaye HQ se...!Tum us Major Nair se bachke rehna aur us Malik se bhi...!"Geet nodded showing dimples & said,"Good night!"Arjun said sweetly,"Good night gudiyan...!"



Geet went to her room to sleep but sleep was snatched away from her becoz the chocolate brown eyes was haunting her sleep.Geet got up & cribbed to babaji,"Ab meine kya galathi ki hai ki aap mujhe us aadmi ke khayaal man mein jaga rahe ho babaji...mein yahan us aadmi ko raksha karne aayi hoon...aur yeh kya kar rahe ho...jahan bhi dekhthi hoon...woh hi nazar aatha hai..."


Then she talked to herself,"Geet tum bhi jalli ho gayi hai...koi us aadmi se aise ehsaas rakh saktha hai kya...tum bhi na...bhatar hai ki tum apna kaam par dhyaan de...!"And she slept once again but turned this side & that side becoz of the lack of the sleep.



Next morning,bugle played & everyone got ready for the training.Maan was sitting in the mess sipping the black coffee while Major Nair came & informed him abt Dr.Sen.Major Nair said bossily,"Captain Khurana,another faculty member has joined us,Dr.Sen psychiartist.I want u to go & meet that person.I want to know the cadets mental strength but before that I want to know the mental strength of their teachers.Do u understand Captain?"


Maan noticed the sarcasm in Major Nair's words but answered politely,"Yes sir...I surely understand...Mein unhe miloonga sir."Major Nair glared at him but went from there silently.Maan said impressively,"Psychiartist...interesting!"


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Next morning,a woman entered the academy wearing the sari & sleeveless blouse & has a tattoo on her right side back.She had black eyes & roman nose & had applied so much mascara & wearing high heels slipper entered her office corridor.


She had kind face & now she was full of herself & entered the office holding some files & saw that Captain Maan is sitting in her office & said curiously,"Captain Khurana."



Maan turned to the source of female voice & was amazed to see a woman standing in front of him seeing him apprehensively.Maan also saw her apprehensively but said confirming,"Dr.Sen!"


Sameera said stretching her hand to Maan,"Dr.Sameera Sen...psychiartist...defence minsitry has appointed me here...!"Maan said apprehensively,"Mujhe nahin pata tha ki aap she male...😛!"Wacking his head...


But Sameera said directly,"Sorry...am not interested in sex change operations...!"Maan said apprehensively,"I didn't mean that...!"Sameera said smiling sweetly,"Am just kidding...pls sit down Captain...don't be afraid of me...!"



Captain Maan sat on his chair back while Sameera sat opposite to him keeping the files near Maan.Sameera said clearly,"Do u want to introduce urself then no problem...so tell me Captain...what's ur tension?U've come here to meet a psychiartist!


Maan said clearly,"I'm mean no problem...actually I hear abt u from BC..that's why...I wanted to know that what u r going to do!"Sameera said curiously,"BC...u mean Brigadier Chandok...right!"Maan said simply,"Correct..!"Sameera asked directly,"Interesting...so tell me Captain...what do u know abt my work...?"



Maan said clearly,"Nothing much...u r going to monitor the cadets psychology...actually am also preparing the report..."Sameera said immediately,"U r also preparing the report abt teaching...traiing & techniques...to military board correct!"


Maan said impressively,"Yeah...I think BC has given u information abt me!"Sameera said calmly,"Captain aap bhool rahe hai ki mein ek psychiartist hoon.Logon ke dimag mein jhaank ne se pehle mein unke baare mein sab kuch jaan lethi hoon...Do u agree...!"


Maan said clearly,"of course I agree..."But he saw the cadets profile files & thought,"Toh yeh file inke paas hai...!"Then he tried to take the file & open it but Sameera snatched it & said,mein cadets ko note karne ke saath saath...cadets ke teacher ko bhi note karloongi...!"




Maan felt awkward but said slowly,"My pleasure...lekin mujhe bataayiyega ki kya note kiya hai aapne mere baare mein...!"Sameera said smiling,"I'll not u Captain..!But that's confidential...!"


Maan saw her suspiciously while Sameera said sweetly,"Well Captain,if u don't mind then i'd like to take some rest for sometime...aapko note karthe karthe...meri energy thodi khatam ho gayi hai...!Am sure u agree...!"Maan said smiling,"Yes I do...!"And he exited the cabin while Sameera wished good night to Maan.Maan nodded her & went from there.



Here Geet was thinking abt something sitting on hr bed in her room.

BSA said,"Geet was thinking that she has done right thing by telling BC or not abt Malik.She did that to hide her weakness orshe wants to teach a lesson to Malik.We'll be in two minds when we are in war like situations,like now.Geet has to learn so many things here."


At night before lights out,Maan overhears the conversation of Sameera & BC.Maan comes near Sameera's office door & tries to overhear her conversation clearly.Sameera said confidently,"Sir,don't worry abt this new batch.I've read cadets profile & their interview CDs.I can say that this batch's students will be enough promissive,bright & intelligent."


BC said impressively,"Dr.Sen...I appreciate ur justice...U started ur work.Can u give me specific names...?"Sameera said confidently,"Yes sir...in this new batch..there r 6 cadets,who've ability to become best cadet.In fact..i had not met them...but am sure when i meet them i'll tell my opinion to u...i'll give the names of 6 cadets tomorrow morning.



BC said impressively,"Thank u doctor...!"Sameera said curtly,"U r welcome sir...good night...sir!"And she hung up the phone.On that time Maan goes further showing that he's only passing by & sameera comes outside the office & closed the door.Maan & Sameera bumps each other.


Maan said sweetly seeing his watch,"Hi Dr.Sen...!Aap office mein is samay mein...aap kaam bahut karthi hai...!"Sameera said smiling,"Actually Captain,I work slowly...!"Maan said sweetly,"Oh really...aapko dekhke aisa toh nahi lagtha...!"


Sameera said directly,"Aap mujhe dekhna band kijiye Captain...So tell me what made u to come to me...?"Maan said sweetly,"Kuch nai...mein yahan guzar raha tha ...toh socha ki kyun na mein cadets ki profile file aap se lelu..!"Sameera asked curiously,"Profiles...kyun???"



Maan said innocently,"I want to know the my cadets before my first class...don't u agree doctor?"Sameera said directly,"Actually Captain I don't...!"While Maan raised his eyebrows while Sameera continued,"It's my opinion that u concentrate on ur subject...u know ur students in the class Captain...and that file...I can't give it to u...that's confidential!"


Maan asked smiling sweetly,"Cool...Dr.Sen aap mujhse naaraaz toh nahi...!"Sameera said slowly,"Nahi...!"Maan said innocently,"Well...ho could u?We don't know each other...so let's have the cup of coffee & know each other...what's it...?"

Sameera smiled & said,"Why r u so interested in me Captain?Well now it's going to lights out & coffee we'll take some other time...!"Maan smiled at her & said,"As u wish...!"While Sameera said smiling,"Good night Captain & Maan nodded her & went from there.



Precap-ragging of the cadets...


Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...

so maan is also suspicious abt sammera sen...good...n geet getting feeling fr maan...its amazing...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

really loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Edited by love2_soma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arjun is worried for Geet as he don't want her to make enemies...because she is CID officer and a mission to complete...

Sameera has entered as a psychiatrist...Maan is getting friendly with her...

this story reminds me of Rajeev Khandelwal's serial----Left Right Left...

interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
sameera is finally here...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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