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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
lovely update...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
lovely update ,had not seen LRL ,so loving it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 16

Geet & Arjun meet each other in their evening's jogging & talk abt the devts in the academy.Geet said calmly,"Arjun,Captain Khurana has found out the names of 6 Cadets who has ability to become best cadets of this academy & in that our names are also there."Arjun said worriedly,"Mujhe pata hai...Daya ne mujhe bataaya tha iske baare mein when he came to me to give the food during my solitary confinement."

Geet asked,"Toh ab hum kya kare?Bataade in academy waalon ko ki hum kaun hai?"Arjun said immediately,"No let's save ourselves till the last breath...yeh completely undercover mission hai...aur jab tak hum Maan ko iss mission mein kaamyaab nahi banaathe tab tak hum apne aapko chipaana hoga...!"


Geet asked,"Did u get the homework from Maan?"Arjun nodded,"Yeah,but he didn't came to give me the homwwork.He was enquiring me like we enquire the criminals.Am sure he'll be suspicious on us.We've to work distributive then only we can collect the information abt ur brother & mind u we've to ask them as 3rd person."Geet nodded but said,"Dr.Sameera Sen,psychiartist has arrived.Hey,is this thw woman the one my veerji & parchaayji said in the information...!"



Arjun thought & said,"May be but we've to confirm first.Be careful with Malik & Maan also."Geet nodded & finished her jog & Arjun also & they both reach their hostels & their rooms also.Next morning Geet said happy brithday to her veerji in front of amar jawan jyothi holding the talisman which he always wore.Arjun asked that what was the matter & Geet said that today is veerji's birthday.Then after that Geet recieved a telephone from the home but Geet scolded them not to phone her.




This confrontation was seen by Sameera & asked abt that but Geet answered that as boyfriend's phone.Then Geet warned orderly that don't give her any phone if it comes to the home or any other place angrily.Geet tries to crack the code which is given by Maan but she can't crack the code.



BSA said,"Capt.Khurana didn't gave the code to students to crack it as homework.He gave that code so that he knows that one who cracks this code can be doubted as a spy which he came here to search."



Next morning,Maan is in his class & is amazed seeing the cracked code & read it,"HOOTIE AND THE BLOWFISH" and the answer is,"BLOW THE FISH,AND I'LL PLAY HOOTIE,"Interesting so someone has cracked my code.So someone is challenging me that he's here & search me.You hide & I'll search u."


Geet passed the classrom & saw Maan there & wished good morning to him.Maan said impressively,"Someone has cracked the code & my code has given me the answer.I must say that ur class is very intelligent...!"Geet saw the cracked code on the blackboard & wondered that who had cracked the code.Maan asked seeing her eyes sternly,"So tell me Cadet Singh...did u cracked the code...?"Geet answered immediately,"No sir...!"Maan said seeing her eyes intently,"Agar kiya hai toh usse sharmaane waale baat toh hai hi nahi...admit it Cadet Singh...!"



Geet said innocently,"Aap kya keh rahe hai mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa rahi hai...sir...!"Maan smiled sweetly at her & said,"Neither do I,(Geet felt that he's enquiring & is puzzled of his changed behaviour)anyways dismiss Cadet Singh..!"Geet said calmly,"Yes sir..!"She exited the class room & hurried to tell this incident to Arjun.She explained everything to Arjun.


Hearing this incident,Arjun was worried & said,"I think he gave that code to know the spy cadet.That's why he was seeing u enquiringly.Geet u should be very careful,ok.U can reveal that u r Geet Singh Ahluwaliya but u can't reveal that u r an undercover CID officer."Geet nods & both exit the place for medical check up.Dr.S's check up goes on.She checked their pulse & BP.


During check ups,Cadet Malik saw the talisman in Geet's pocket & took it trickily & said,"So this is the thing which gives the power to Phoolan,"sarcastically.Geet said angrily,"Give me that."Malik played with her helding the talisman higher out of her reach.Arjun sae him angrily,Then Geet's temper raised & she made a move to make Malik fall down & grabbed the talisman & went & stood in her position stuffing it inside her pocket securely.


Dr.S who saw this was dumstruck while Major Nair saw this incident casually & came there.Everyone saw them both with dumbstruck while Arjun saw Geet impressively.Dr.S saw Major coming & said,"Major...aapko is saal mehnat karna nahi padegi kyunki yeh log pehle se hi marne aur maarne ke liye tayyar hai...all the best...!"


Dr.S went from there while Major Nair saw Geet & Pooja & said,"Ek ke peeche toh mahaabharat rachi gayi...yahan toh do do hai...!"Which Geet heard this & gave a stern look to Major Nair.Major Nair started explaining today's drill.



Major Nair said blowing his whistle,"Cadets attention(all the cadets come to attention position)today's drill name is trust drill.To win the war for a soldier very importantly to be alive.But from 2 eyes or 2 ears,we can't watch the enemies from 4 directions.So for that we want another 2 eyes & 2 ears,so that we can kill the spreader enemies from 4 directions.This will be the work of our friend & our partner.So we've to keep the trust on our friend or partner,till death we've to be with him.Today's mission is 10 kms full of forest,u've to complete u've mission & u've to reach 'X' point & in 70 minutes.Mind u don't break with partner.Best partners will be awarded 10 points & if the person cheats his partner then they'll be awarded 0 points & ulti duniya punishment."



Meanwhile Maan is having a little chat with Sameera in the mess with a cup of coffee & said,"Did u notice these new batch's cadets?"Sameera said,"Very much captain,but depends that what u want to hear & what much I can say...!"Maan smiled & tried to ask further abt the subject but Dr.S came & interrupted them.Maan unwillingly said Dr.S to join them for a cup of coffee & asked abt the cadets.Maan said,"Hum log naye batch ke cadets ke baare mein baat ka rahe the...!"Dr.S said excitedly,"Highly power packed with extra hormones...!"



Maan asked,"Kyun...?"Dr.S said excitedly,"You know today my check up is going on,Cadets Malik & Geet fought each other.Cadet Geet sin't so soft from seeing we think.She really went for that guy.And u know Cadet Malik is strong & muscular & is so mischievous like other boys.But Cadet Geet...she made Cadet Malik fall off.(Maan thought abt that)oof,u should've seen it.This incident why came u know becoz Cadet Malik had grabbed some talisman from Cadet Geet...!"Sameera said,"U mean that Cadet Singh is superstitious...!"



Then Dr.S continued her conversation while Maan remembered the previous night's incident,that how she had twisted Malik's hands painfully & thought in his mind,"Some power is there inside her.Some things is going on in her mind & every thought is a live bomb ticking.But Cadet Geet Ah Singh cracked the code or not?No,but on that time she was passing on from the classroom,when I saw her.Is it a coincidence or something?"



Precap-Geet suffering from ulti duniya punishment becoz of Malik.
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74


very interesting...

Maan suspects Geet as a spy...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
update







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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
loved it dear ,hamari sherni ne malik ko girya 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
beautiful update...

really loved it...but do somrthing to dis malik...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
nice one..
geet s gonna suffer coz of malik. umm.
waiting 22 c geet respond bk 2 him!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan suspects Geet as a spy...😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update dear!!!!
Geet sufeering punishment because of Malik...
w8ing 4 d nxt part...
plzzz cont soon!!!!

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