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Posted: 13 years ago

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 2

After reading that letter I became stunned for sometime,there was no signature,not any clue to know who's this.There was only one hour to decide what to do becoz that day was 8th Feb & we go the letter this morning & I had no time to read that letter.

Then I called Arjun & showed it to him, & then he thought for a moment & said that someone is doing this for laughs & said to me to ignore this letter.We didn't place the handkerchief & slept tight but I wasn't sleeping that night.My brain was full of questions.

How someone knows that am Brij's sister?Ten I saw repeatedly to my garden but no one came but I thought that someone had come in black Chevrolet car.But who are they I didn't recognise they saw towards my gate & dialled someone & started the car.I didn't understand the head to tail business & I slept with the confusion.

I woke up in the morning & get ready for the office & sat at the dining table to take breakfast.During breakfast,a phone came to me & I stepped near phone table to take the phone.

That was a female voice when I answered the phone & said the same wordings of the letter but the date of meeting was changed.The date of meeting was changed on 9th feb at 22o'clock,i.e.,tonight.

I didn't recognise the voice & she also added that don't tell to ur best friend Arjun & come alone.There was a layer of a sweat on my forehead, & my mother saw that & asked what's the matter,but I didn't answer,wiped the sweat & changed the topic by saying it was a nice breakfast.

In office,I tried to tell to my friend abt the mysterious phone call.but I couldn't tell him.Becoz,I want to know who's this mysterious girl who want to talk abt my brother's death?I need to know.

I closed my office works & came home & had the dinner,my parents went to sleep I pretended to go to sleep but after sometime I woke at 2200hrs & came outside & slipped the red handkerchief onto the gate & opened the lock of the gate & sat there on the garden bench & waited for some time.

I was kept seeing at my gate waiting for someone to come,but no one came,on the third time when I saw towards the gate there was a package which was entangled to the gate,a white package.I took the package & opened the contents,there was a mobile & a letter which said,

Hi Geet,

I know that you are shocked seeing this parcel.But I've no choice of contacting you.I need talk to u face to face but not in ur house.Please meet a man near the high court who'll be selling coconuts.That man will have a big moustache & has a mole on his face on the right cheek.You go to him & say the half proverb,"All the glitters..."And he completes the proverb to you.You've the coconut.He gives a package,take it & give him Rs 20/=,he gives Rs 10/= to you as the change which contains a code.After seeing the package give me the missed call from the mobile which I've given,there I'd stored my number pls do this work quickly becoz I've small time.Please give me the missed call at 10am.

I was shocked with this parcel & the letter & I thought whole night abt this & I had so many questions arising in my mind then I made up my mind & I went near high court,there I found the same man who had the exact description in the letter.I said the half proverb to the coconut vendor & he completed it like written as in the letter.

I gave Rs. 20/= & he gave Rs 10/= & the package where there was written definitely something.When I saw the package contents,it revealed some photos.These photos revealed my brother's best friends becoz his best friends were with him smiling at me.When I saw the photos my eyes became wet.

I saw my brother affectionately.Last I saw my brother was my brother's dead body.There was an innocent smile on his face with this friends.I wiped my tears & there was something written behind the photo.in his first photo,there were the names called Captains Maan Singh Khurana & Aditya Rai Chauhan.The man to my brother's right is Captain Aditya Rai Chauhan & my brother's left is Captain Maan Singh Khurana.

On the second photo,'their life is in danger.On the third photo,there was something else,'see ur brother's trunk'.On the fourth photo,'missed call me immediately."Then I missed call the number from the given mobile at 10am.

After my work I came home,had my dinner,all slept except me.I took my path towards basement & entered & then I took Brij's trunk & saw that there was a clear inch of dust,I cleaned it & opened coughing.Firstly,I saw his uniforms which contained the stars when I was seeing him,but there were no stars in this.

My eyes became wet & I wept for sometime & then there was a talisman which he was wearing that always.then further lifted the contents of the trunk.There were more clothes & then there was a diary.On that time only a message came to the given mobile.

The message said,"Examine the diary curiously,you reveal a letter & crack the code on the Rs 10/= note & come to the location."I had forgotten abt the 10 rupees note & I ran to take it from my purse.But I panicked becoz that day I had given changes to Arjun for 50 rupees.

I dialled to Arjun immediately & said abt the 10 rupees note then he immediately took that note & came to my home silently so that my parents aren't disturbed.

Precap-A letter hidden in the diary.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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HI GUYS,I'LL NOT BE AVAILABLE FOR THREE DAYS SINCE AM GOING OUT OF STATION.SO JEEVAN SANGINI,FARZ,MAAN-EK MRIT INSAAN & MAAN AUR GEET -DO JADUGAR WILL BE UPDATED AFTER I COME TO HOME.SO DON'T WAIT FOR ME.ENJOY READING GUYS & DON'T FORGET TO GIVE UR COMMENTS.

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

PART 3

Arjun gave that 10 rupees note & there was a code in that said,"5595 2348199 281289 8665 4591 5114 46227 135511 819.3645 16 185 51296513 8978517".Firstly,I didn't understand the mass numbers,but on thinking I thought the answer to the code is,"MEIN TUMHAARI BHABHI HOON,MERA NAAM DOLLY JUNEJA HAI.COME TO THE NATIONAL HIGHWAY."Then the code showed this answer.

I thought that who's this Dolly Juneja?But it was answered by Arjun when he saw the surname Juneja,he said that he's the defence minister of India & he also thought that how can she become my bhabhi & my bro's wife & I didn't understand head to tail of this code.

Arjun also thought of some points but those became baseless but I noticed that Arjun was hiding something from me but I didn't asked him & started reading my bro's diary.Brij had wrote so many things in his diary & I started reading till the morning.But Arjun had gone to my room to sleep.

Acording to the code I st out to the National Highway slipping a note to Arjun in my room then I said that Arjun had come late last night for some case discussion & is sleeping in my room to my parents & set off for the morning jogging to the national highway road.

There I stood for one hour waiting for the mysterious Dolly Juneja girl but instead a boy came & gave a package to me & ran away in top speed not giving any oppurtunity to enquire.

Then I examined the package contents,it revealed a letter & some photos which contained my brother wedding with some lady & there was the marital certificate & there was a letter.I was shocked seeing the photos that veerji is wedding with some girl & thought that we didn't know that veerji was married.

This was becoming a big puzzle to me that how can he not said anything to anyone that he married;I was becoming more & more suspicious.There was a letter too,it said,

Hi Geet,

We're meeting again,how r u?I know u r shocked with these photos.I need to talk to u face to face.Crack this code given below & come to the location.Please don't show these photos or certificates to anyone.These are originals,I'll give u another clue that I am also a CID officer.I'll give my introduction when we meet.The code is "3645 16 185 51296513 8978157 1267 18595,1855,49935 65 16 12621 242410 10167 154 4191."Please once again am saying don't show these documents to anyone.Crack the code & missed call me from the mobile.See u soon.

I took the package to the home & cracked the code,it said,"COME TO THE NATIONAL HIGHWAY STOP THERE,THEN,DRIVE ON TO ABOUT 24KMS AND WAIT."I missed call from the mobile & set out to national highway at dusk after her work.

I came by taxi & said to take me further 24 kms.The taxi driver took me as I've said & I said to wait for me but a phone call came to the given mobile.I answered it,a female voice said to me,"No need to say to driver to stay,I'll drop u."

I was fed up with this mysterious girl & my temper raised & I shouted at her,"Look who r u?Why r u in undercover?If u want to talk to me then why r u giving me clues like this,come to the open & talk to me?What if it is a trap from u?What do u want from me anyway?"angrily.

The female voice said firmly,"Yourbrother's justice,Geet trust me blindly am not here to harm u ok,u want another proof then I'll say a wording which ur brother always said to u when u said that u'll join army like him,he was saying that,"Geet,I'll protect the border of my country,u protect the country from inside."

I was shocked with these wordings,becoz,I & veerji only known these words.Then I said once again,"Look who r u?"The female voice said firmly,"If u want answer then pls send the car driver,pay him & send him.Just trust me Geet am ur friend."The she hung up the phone.I did as she told me & I stood there waiting taking my gun ready.

For some second,I saw only the vehicles,becoz it was a highway.Then I saw a black Chevrolet car,the very same I saw the day before yesterday in front of my house.I became alert,the car came towards me.It stopped & the door opened,which revealed the very same lady whom I had seen in the photo who's wedding with my veerji.

I was shocked to see her.She was young lady but slightly aged now.She was so beautiful.She was smiling at me & said,"I appreciate ur alertness Geet."impressively seeing the gun on my hand.I asked her once again suspciously,"Who r u?"She said firmly,"I am Dolly Singh Ahluwaliya,tumhari bhabhi."

She gave her hand to shake & I didn't give I was still suspicious.On that time a familiar voice came from inside the car & it said,Don't be afraid & suspicious,she's you bhabhi truly."I saw who said that & saw Arjun there & asked,"How come u r here with her Arjun.

Arjun smiled at her & said calmly,"If u step inside the car then we can explain,step inside the car Geet.Then I stepped inside the car & sat beside her shaking her hand keeping my gun in my back pocket.The car started to move while I asked,"Arjun where is the car moving???"

Arjun said clearly,"We've been called by Prime minisier Jagmohan Singh in his guest house that we're heading there."Geet couldn't believe it & asked innocently,"Did he called me also???"Arjun smiled at her tone & nodded yes to her.

Precap is same.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

part 3
very nice...
so Dolly and Arjun are taking Geet to that place...
cont soon...

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

PART 4

The car drove to the farm house where Prime minister Jagmohan Singh had resided.The car entered the courtyard of farm house which had tight security.Geet,Arjun & Dolly showed their ID card & the security saluted them before they checked them.They gave their gun to sharp shooters who checked them with metal detector.One of the sharp shooter took the three to Prime Minister & the three saluted him introducing themselves to him.

Geet said firmly,"CID Inspector Geet Singh Ahluwaliya reporting sir."
Arjun said firmly,"Senior CID Inspector Arjun Sharma reporting sir."
Dolly also said firmly,"Senior CID Inspector Dolly Juneja reporting sir."

The prime minister nodded the three & gestured them to sit down.The three sat in front of him & Prime minister started talking firmly,"Mein paheli mein nahi baat karna chahtha hoon mein aap logon se seedhe baat karna chahtha hoon.Mere paas ek mission hai jisme aap teeno undercover kaam karna hoga jab tak woh mission khatm na hojathe."Arjun asked politely,"Kaisa mission...???"

Prime minister saw him but said firmly,"Mein aapko meri mission ke baare mein bataane se pehle mein chahtha hoon ki aap teeno mujhe promise kare ki aap kisi bhi paristithi mein apna farz nahi bhoolenge aur aap apne is mission ke baare mein aap log leak out nahi karenge ksi ko bhi...chaahe woh apna ho ya paraya...aap log is mission ke baare mein concerned logon ke sivay kisis aur ke saamne apna moo galathi se bhi ya jaan boochkar nahi kholenge."

The three nodded & promised him that they're ok with the conditions.PM was a bit relieved but he had an bis suspicion with Dolly & he cleared it asking abt it.PM said firmly,"Inspector Juneja,mujhe maaloom hai ki aap is duniya ke liye abhi bhi Ms Juneja hai naaki Mrs Brij Singh Ahluwaliya.Toh mein yeh sawaal pooch raha hoon ki kya aap apne pitah ke khilaaf jaana chahthi hai ya nahi."

Dolly was taken aback & asked innocently,"Ap aise kyun pooch rahe hain sir?"PM said confidently,"Kyunki yeh jo mission hai woh aapke pitah ke virudh ho raha mission hai.Mujhe maalum hai ki aap is mission ke liye qualified hai lekin kabhi kabhi jasbaat insaan ki sabse badi kamzori ho jaathi hai.Toh mein aapse pooch raha hoon ki kya aap apna farz achchi tarah se nibhaane mein maahir hai ya nahi."

Dolly said proudly,"Sir,aap yeh sab kehne ya poochneki koi zaroorat nahi.Desh bhakthi kya hoti hai meine apne pati se seekha hai.Har baar woh kisina kisi ko kuch seekh dethe aaye the usme mein bhi ek hoon unke shishya ki sthan mein."Geet was amazed seeing her Dolly bhabhi who was praising her husband proudly.Geet felt proud seeing her.

Dolly continued,"Dukh ki baat toh yeh hai ki unpar galath inzaam lagaya gaya par mujhe nahi pata ki woh log kaun hai."Tears threaten to fall from her eyes.PM considered thi & asked,"Kya mein jaan saktha hoon ki aap Captain Brij se kab aur kaise mili thi."Dolly's face lit up & started telling them,"Hum dono Ambala ke sports club mein drug traffickers ki adda chala kartha tha wahan unki mulakaat hui.Mulaakat toh ek awkward situation mein hui thi ki meine unhe us drug traffickers ka boss samajh liya tha.Lekin jab unhone unke ID dikhaayi thi ki woh ek army officer hai tab mujhe yakeen huva tha.Is mulaakat mein meine unko apna dil dediya tha.Us waqt woh ek mission par the KMA mein.

He was tailing a lady called Dr.Sameera Sen.She was in his suspect range so he had become her boy friend.He was telling me everything abt his mission to me as am an intelligence officer too.He was posted to KMA on officer on special duty to protect nuclear triggers.

He was tailing that lady becoz he thought her as a foreign spy who has come here to theft those nuclear triggers.The day,when Brij was arrested he wanted to announce abt our marriage & wanted to capture Dr.Sameera Sen,but he got arrested himself to save the nuclear triggers,he was abt to meet me in Ambala,but he didn't came after that next morning,I saw the news & ran to enquire abt it disguising myself as a press reporter & tried to meet him but that army people didn't gave me permission.

And then,thinking & disguising myself in burkha & introduced myself as Dr.Sameera Sen I met him.I think this Dr.Sameera Sen has politicians influence that's why,they gave me the permission to meet Brij.When I met him I couldn't see him in that state,they had tortured him very severly & he always said that he feels dizzy.Then I asked what's all this abt?,Then he answered that Dr.Sameera Sen cheated him & see my diary,you'll know everything & said to pls meet his sister & tell abt this incident.

Then he said to me that protect myself,from the army people or,else I'll be tortured as like him & said that there's a letter which I had written & see that with Geet & said that where the letter is kept.Then he also said that Geet should have to protect his best friends who are Captains Maan Singh Khurana & Aditya Rai Chauhan & he gave these photos which I'd given to Geet.

That was the last I saw him alive & when I saw him as dead bady next time.I saw the funeral also but in disguise as a old woman with hunch back,"crying.Dolly's eyes filled with tears once again.Geet then remembered the woman standing near the tree with hunch back & crying but I had thought she's also crying for someone during veerji's funeral.

Geet 's eyes also welled up immediately.PM asked curiously,"Kya woh letter aapne dekha Mrs.Ahluwaliya???"Dolly nodded no & saw towards Geet while Geet had brought that diary with her.Then Dolly continued,"When I met Brij then I came to know that their superior officers are involved in the consiparcy.I investigated abt that secretly,but I didn't come to the conclusion that,who kept those nuclear triggers in Brij's bag when he wanted to go outside the KMA.I tried to know abt that,but no one said becoz one who know the truth are wearing the mask of lie & then I couldn't know further.Kya tum woh diary dikha sakthi ho???"

Dolly took the diary & examined it & got the letter which was plastered to the hard bind & it was closed to the diary wrapper so that no one knows that a letter is hidden there.Dolly took the letter & opened it & read it.Her calmed face turned into shock & next it turned to hatred.

Geet saw her expression & took the letter & was shocked,then one by one Arjun & PM took it & read it.Arjun face turned into shock while PM's face was calm as if he knows the truth.

Geet said angrily,"We can arrest him with this letter."

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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nice story...

do add me to ur PM list...

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

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part 4
wow so they have found the culprit...
where is Maan?
cont soon...

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 5

After reading the letter which was hidden in the diary Geet said angrily,"We can arrest him with this letter."But PM said firmly,"No..."The three were puzzled & saw PM innocently.PM explained their mission & gave some files to them & their place to work undercover from there.

He also said they've to report to ACP Pruthviraj Chauhan who's the new boss to them.He then explained the objective of the mission & they left the farm house with a satisfied smile.

In Delhi regiment base camp,an army base stood in the way of Noida & Ghaziabad.That camp contained mainly the office,mess,gym & ammunition room for weapons.In the gym,a man with 6 pack abs working out doing sit ups.He had chocolate brown eyes,long nose, exact 'M' shaped pink lips & clean shaven.

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His eyes showed guitly & he remembered killing a man who had widened his arms standing in front of him telling,'Captain Maan Singh Khurana...do ur duty."And he had shot the man & the man had collapsed in front of him.Then the man once again exercised aggressively remembering the incident feeling guilty & anger on him.

On that time a soldier entered the gym holding a gun & said politely,"Captain Maan...!"That man who was exercising aggressively lifted his head towards the soldier.The soldier said politely,"Colonel has called u in his cabin."Maan nodded & said,"Ji aap unse kahiye ki mein abhi aata hoon."

The soldier saluted him nodding & exited the gym.Maan took the towel & wiped his sweat on his face & body & went to his cabin & freshen up & wore his military uniform & walked towards his senior's cabin locking his cabin door.Maan entered his senior officer's cabin & saluted him & said politely,"Captain Maan Singh Khurana reporting sir."

The man had turned that side thinking something & turned this side seeing Maan bossily.He saw Maan's eyes & said,"Kya baat hai Captain aap pareshan lag rahe hain?"Maan said innocently,"Mein kuch samjha nahi sir aap kis baare mein baath kar rahe hai...!"His senior officer smiled & said with concern,"Captain ateet mein rehne se kuch faayda nahi hoga...woh sirf hume dard detha hai...aur farz ke aage kuch nahi diktha yeh baat hum sipayiyon ke alaava aur kaun jaantha hai..."

Maan was silent but nodded yes vigorously.His senior officer said bossily,"Aapke liye ek mission hai Captain...Lekin is baar aapko wahan ek teacher bankar jaana hoga..."Maan was amused,"Ek teacher...mere liye namumkin hai sir..."His senior officer said bossily,"Namumkin toh tab aapko kehna chahiye jab aap us place ka naam sunenge..."

Maan saw him curiously while his senior officer continued,"Aapko Kanchenjunga Military Academy transfer kiya jaa raha hai aapke mission ke liye..."Maan was silent becoz of some reason..."His senior officer understood & said comfortably,"Captain ek sipaahi ko apne jasbaat bhool jaana hai jab woh unki desh ki raksha ki baat aayegi...mujhe maaloom hai ki aap wahan jaathe hi purani yaadein taaza ho jathi hai lekin jo aadmi apne past se ,guilt se ladtha hai wahi sachcha sipaahi hai...am sure u won't disappoint me in this mission also like previous ones."Maan nodded yes politely to him & took some of the files which was concerned to his mission.

Next morning both Captain Maan & Geet got ready to their mission.Geet had convinced her parents that she had been given a chance to prove that she's not traitor's sister from the mission & had warned them not mention abt her that where she is.Her parents were worried that she's going to Ambala where KMA is present.

Geet only told them that she's transferred to Ambala CID bureau.Geet had thought of going from the bike while Maan thought of going from the jeep.Geet & Maan started their journey from Delhi to Ambala from jeep & bike.Maan & Geet stopped for the signal in the highway of the Delhi to enter Punjab border.They both stopped beside each other near check post.

Maan saw Geet when she took off the helmet then he was mesmerised with her beauty.He saw her with mouth hanging open,her hazel brown eyes,long white nose,baby pink lips & rosy cheeks,and white jawline which were inviting him to kiss her passionately.He had a change of heart.Geet went inside the bunker near check post & showed the ID card.They saluted her which was unaware to Maan becoz he was still mesmerised with her beauty.

Geet came & wore her helmet & started the bike & went fromt there when they opened the gate.Maan was still mesmerised & was looking like an idiot seeing her beauty while the soldier poked him to make him to come to the present world.Maan came to the present world & showed the ID card to the sentry & he also saluted him & opened the gate.

Maan started his jeep & thought of following that girl but she wasn't seen further while he drove towards Ambala.Geet drove towards the Ambala town towards her bureau.When Geet had entered that she had suspicion that someone is following her.Geet went to an empty road & stopped her bike in an narrow lane & hid herself behind a large bush.

A man who was twice taller than she was & was seen like a heavy weight champion searched for Geet.Then he took his mobile & pretended to dial someone & said with disappointment,"Where did she go yaar?Kya solid item thi boss.Agar woh mil jaathi aur usse dubai bhej dethe toh hum karodon kama lethe boss.Ek baar mere haatho mein aajaaye toh mein usse kachcha kha jaane ka man kartha hai..."

Geet waited to keep his mobile hen she jumped on him & held her gun to his head & said,"Tum ladkiyon ko Dubai mein bech rahe ho..?Kaise...???"He was a stout man with the height of abt 6 & said,"Kaun ho tum?Sweating.Geet said angrily still poking him from the gun,"Haath mein gun dekhthe hi hosh tikhaane par aagaya...ab abtaavo kaise bech rahe ho ladkiyon ko...answer me!!!"

Geet shouted at him.He was silent still & she was suspicious of something that why he didn't struggling from me or to run away.Then Geet said angrily,"Tum itni asaani se nahi kahoge...thik he chalo..."The man lifted his both hands & Geet held her gun poking him from back."Chalo..."Geet took him to the nearest police station.

There was a guard sitting on a baench snoring happily.Geet saw him & poked him immediately.The guard shouted at Geet,"Tum kaun ho kudiye aur yeh kaun hai..."Seeing the man & he was alarmed seeing the man & was abt to say to Geet that he's a CID officer but he winked at him & he became silently.

Geet went & pushed him to a cellar & locked it while the guard tried to tell her the fact.After the Inspector came & said the man who's in cellar is also a CID officer & Geet was amazed & embarassed.Becoz she had put her senior officer into the cellar.Then Geet came to know that it was the test which was took by him according to the orders of ACP Saab.Geet apologised repeatedly while Inpector Daya was embarassed.Then he took Geet to the bureau.

Precap-Entry of Geet to KMA as Cadet & Captain Maan as teacher.Entry of other characters also.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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