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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely Update..loved it..Pls continue soon
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lovely update ,i like the way maan takes care of geet ,waiting for your next update 😊
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PART 19


After lot of provoking by Arjun Kunal drank the rum to show that he's also man.But he started making loud racket that his stomach is burning which made Ali & Arjun to take him to the infirmary.Meanwhile Maan saw Geet's interview CD once again in her laptop intently.Geet's answering ability in interview made him even more suspicious.


Then he took Geet's profile & saw her phone number & dialled to her home.Maan asked that is this Geet Singh's home then a male voice answered him as yes but on that time he heard police siren which he always heard when he was in Ambala town.Maan got suspicious & thought that her home is in Ambala town then why she gave the Nainital address.



Maan was confident now that Geet is hiding something which she don't want to know everyone.Maan thought,"Cadet Geet Ah Singh,kitna jhoot bolgi tum...!"But he didn't know that these all lies were only for him which he was unaware as Geet was working undercover.



Here in the hostel,Geet was dreaming abt Maan,his chocolate brown eyes which were haunting her.She saw the dream as if he knows the truth that she's Geet Singh Ahluwaliya & the dream changed immediately but this time Major Nair saying that u've failed this drill also...and then she's seeing the expulsion letter & was shocked...and she got up sweating.




Geet clutched her chest breathing heavily & she had the sweat all over the face & neck.Geet wiped her sweat immediately & her breathing became normal but on that time Lolita Sen entered her room opening her door & asked bossily,"Cadet Singh,r u awake?"Geet said meekly,"Ji madam,abhi bhi aankh khuli...!"She got up from the bed & stood while Lolita Sen asked,"Kyun?"




Geet didn't understand what she was saying & asked,"Ji madam...!"Lolita Sen asked,"Matlab...Captain Khurana aapko dhoond rahe hai...!"Geet didn't answer further but Lolita Sen asked,"Kya mein jaan sakthi hoon ki kyun..?"Geet asked innocently,"I don't know madam...!"Lolita Sen said sarcastically,"Come again...!"Geet said innocently,"I don't know madam...!"Lolita Sen said angrily,"Then u didn't even know that he
brought u here in his arms...!"



Geet was shocked hearing this & said with shock,"Captain Maan Khurana...?"Lolita Sen went from there angrily closing the door.Geet saw herself top to bottom & sighed calmly.But then she saw around her & saw her bed & saw that her pillow which has been moved & the photo of her veerji is pushed in hurry & was shocked & thought,"Kahin Captain Khurana ko pata nahi chala ki mein unki dost ki behen hoon...!If he has seen that then I would've been kicked out of this academy...!"After sometime she said to herself,"Geet be brave & face the situation."




Geet nodded & took her casual dress & wore it.Ali & Arjun came to ask abt the health of Kunal to Dr.S.Dr.S made them both tensed that she said that Kunal is dead.Hearing this Arjun thought for a second as the truth but then he thought & said the drinking the rum no one dies.Then Arjun went near Kunal to check his pulse but Kunal sprayed some chemical to Arjun & Arjun felt of throwing up everything.



Arjun choked & Dr.S showed him towards the bathroom while Ali & Kunal enjoyed this incident.Meanwhile Maan dialled to his senior officer & said,"Sir,I want an officer for field work.I want him to verify Cadets addresses & I don't want to be known by academy abt him."His senior officer nodded & ok to Maan & disconnected the phone.



On that time someone knocked at the door.Maan kept his walkie talkie in his bag & opened the door seeing once again around him that everything's fine.Maan saw that it's Geet & said,"Cadet Singh...pls come in...!"Geet entered his room & saw around her.Maan asked caringly,"Kaisi hai aapki tabiyat Cadet Singh...!"Geet said confidently,"Mein theek hoon sir...!"Maan asked with concern,"Did u had good sleep?"Geet answered politely,"Yes sir...!"



Maan asked,"Am asking that becoz Dr.S diagnosed that u fainted becoz of exhaustion which happens everytime with new Cadets...!"Geet said confidently,"Mein thabhi theek thi sir,woh isiliye kyunki mein subah se kuch nahi khaaya...!"



On that time mobile phone rings.Geet innocently saw that where is the sound coming & saw it is coming from her pocket.Geet took it & disconnected it but felt tensed inside.Maan observed this with a piercing gaze which she was feeling uncomfortable.She thought that she has being X-rayed becoz of his piercing gaze.




Maan said immediately,"Cadet Singh...relax...!"Geet didn't relax & she was tensed as if any second her heart gonna burst in front of him.But Maan said once again to relax warmly which made her relax for a second but his next question made her widened eyes with shock.



Maan asked casually,"Cadet Singh,aapki har baat ajeeb lagthi hai.In fact,kisine mujhe bataaya ki aap apni maa se aane waali har call ko lena mana bhi kardiya hai...!Aur aap ek baar bhi unhe yahan se phone nahi kiya hai...!And u don't like the letters from ur friends...aap mujhe kaha tha previously.Agar aisa hi hai,then why u need the mobile!"Geet said calmly,"Ye mera mobile nahin hai sir...!"Maan smiled & asked,"Yeh aapka mobile bhi nahin hai...chalo yeh bhi maan lethe hai ki yeh aapka mobile nahin hai...but Cadet Singh,u want to prove something...kya prove karna chahthi ho...!"He nodded no to her.




Maan asked once again,"Anyways,do u have anyone in the army?"Geet had expected this question but came to the conclusion that he don't know that she's Brij's sister then for a second calmed down but answered with fake calm,"No sir...!"Maan noticed that she's not seeing him eye to eye but said warmly,"You know one who in the army they'll be pressurized very much.U don't know anyone...!I know so many soldiers from Almora who r my personal friends."




Geet answered calmly,"Am not from Almora,am from Nainital...!"Maan said seeing her intently,"U r from Nainital.Do u mean ur 10th class board of certificate is a lie?So u mean to say that Dr.S's diagnosis was wrong & ur 10th class of board certificate is alo a lie then what's ur truth?"Maan gave a piercing gaze to Geet which she was msemerised.Those eyes spoke volumes which had the turmoil which Geet noticed.



Maan came & stood near her which made her inhale his masculine scent which drove her crazy.Maan whispered huskily in her ear,"Bolo Geet jawab do...tumhaara sachchayi kya hai...!"For the first time his heart's glimpse she felt she lifted her eye lashes & saw straight in those chocolate brown eyes which showed multiple emotions.Maan saw those hazel brown eyes which also had multiple emotions & their eye locked for brief moment.



Then Maan broke the eye contact & he turned that side while Geet resisted her emotions immediately.She closed her eyes for a moment & took a deep calming breath & said slowly trying to convince him,"Sir,my father was posted to Almora on that year & that's why i've to pass 10th std there,and the certificate isn't a fake sir...!"



Maan said smiling,"Interesting,ur father took trasfer on the yr of 10std.But servicemen,don't do that,seriously at ur yr of 10th std.In fact i've to ask this question to ur father becoz.u'll be not having any answer...Mobile phone please...!"Geet gave the mobile to him when her fingers touched his palm then current run down his spine & Geet also felt like that only.




Maan felt contented feeling her fingers on his palm but he brushed off & said sternly taking the mobile from her,"Thank u Cadet Singh,first of all,u want to prove something & comes in ur first out-door drill last leaving ur partner & u'll be punished for that also.I know that u're feeling bad,i know that.Bit I that Geet that u'll do better next time.On that time ur mobile will not be there to divert u.U'll not be in ur empty stomach & u'll try to complete ur sleep also...can u do that?"He said that sweetly smiling for Geet was mesmerised & said politely,"Yes sir...!"Maan said smiling sweetly,"Dismiss...!"




Geet exited the room in tension & saw towards Maan



BSA-When u're hiding something then the movement of their body and the movement of the muscles comes under the doubt.Geet is cursing herself that she became a CID officer but she can't tell an inch of lies in front of my friend Maan & can't tolerate his investigation.She's thinking that why she can't tell lies in front of Maan.This is becoz that Maan is my best friend or any other reason that she don't want to accept.On that time she thought that she have to save herself from Maan not from Brigadier...!"




Precap is same.



Previous Part 18-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2888808/farz-thread-1


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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awesome n beautiful update...


so maan feeling something fr geet...its amazing...geet trying to mislead maan...he he he...its difficult dear...he is maan singh khurana...nobody can mislead him...


loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

Edited by love2_soma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum update!!!!!!
Loved it...
plzzz cont soon
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PART 20


Kunal,Ali & Arjun came to mess laughing and chatting.Malik asked seeing them,"Kya baat hai yaaron?"He was sitting with Cadet Meenal Patel and was having dinner.She was the one who insulted Brij,geet's brother that he's the traitor.While Geet became emotional and had the row with her which resulted the ulti duniya punishment to Geet.




Malik also had the old grudge towards Geet when they both were doing trust drill then he behaved overly towards her which made her to tie his legs from the plaster.Kunal said that he'll say abt this in his room.Arjun chased him outside the mess.Geet entered the mess to have dinner.But Major Nair said bossily,"Mess band ho gaya hai...!"




Geet said innocnetly,"Mein Captain Khurana ke saath thi...!"Major Nair asked angrily,"TUM BRIGADIER KE SAATH KYUN NAHI HO...?"Geet didn't answered him.Major Nair calms himself & said,"Ok today you're released and don't repeat this mistake...!"And he went from there.Meenal taunted her sarcastically,"Yahan bhi lost...how can they give admission to these people?"Malik said immediately,"Hoga koi chacha ya maama...!"




Geet smirked at her remark & nodded dismissively & went to serve food taking a plate.Geet served the food plate in her plate while Ali asked with concern,"Aap theek hai...!"Geet smiled & nodded.Geet sat on an empty chair and abt to eat but Meenal came to her table & held some dry roots in front of Geet's plate & said angrily,"One who r victorious,they'll be awarded with garland & one who r defeated they'll be awarded with dry roots...!"




Geet saw her calmly.Meenal threw the dry roots in front of Geet's plate and abt to go to her table then Geet said calmly,"Miss Patel,these roots which u've shown to me is rich in carbohydrate and in mainly iron content & it gives a very good taste to ur food when it is added.And u know main role of these roots,when it is taken on the morning lowers ur pride and fat.This roots r perfect for u,take this every morning,tumhaara ghamand and fat will become less.And u'll have bright intelligence & have stable mind also...good bye...!"


Everyone saw Geet impressively with her speech.Malik was shocked hearing this speech.But Ali was impressed.Meenal saw Geet angrily.Geet was eating calmly after saying those words.Meenal took the roots & was abt to throw it on Geet's eating plate but Geet resisted by holding the hand of Meenal very painfully.




Ali & Malik came in between the two girls and made them apart.Malik stopped Meenal & said,"Wait look,we don't disturb the person,one who're having the food,come."Meenal said sarcastically,"Oh really...!"Malik said,"Yes...!"And he took Meenal from there & made sit in the table.Then Geet saw the dirt on the back of Malik's shirt.Meanwhile Arjun chased Kunal into the mess & saw Geet there in fit & fine and asked with concenr,"Are u ok?"Geet smiled sweetly,"Am ok Arjun!"




Arjun & Geet both meet during their evening jogging.Geet explained Maan's enquiry.Arjun asked,"Mujhe pata hai Daya ne mujhe sab kuch bataa diya...!Geet,u dial to home & say that they can expect any military officer from academy.And warn them that don't tell anything abt ur profession..!"Geet nodded and both depart to their hostels.




Geet came to her room after her evening jogging and saw flower plant on her bed and a note that,"Am sorry,I love u,Malik...!"Geet's temper raised & thought,"I'll show u Malik...!"Meanwhile Pooja dialled to some Rohit and thanks that he connection has been joined and is so happy.Pooja comes to the game room & hugged Ali with happiness and said,"Taht Rohit's connection has been joined."




Ali feels the current run down his spine when Pooja hugged him.Malik taunts Ali that his heart is broken.Then Ali becomes angry & exits the room.Arjun said to Malik that he's thinking wrong but Malik challenges that Pooja comes to Ali's room tonight.After betting with Arjun Malik was happy to make that happen tonight.




Meenal asked abt tonight's programme abt Pooja's then Geet interrupted Malik & said holding the flower,"How can she say?She didn't get the flowers Cadet Malik...!"Giving the flowers to Meenal.Meenal took the flowers & was angry.Geet said sarcastically,"Dear Meenal,ur boyfriend wanted to send u but it came to my room by mistake...!"




Malike tried to convince Meenal & said,"Aisa kuch nahi yaar,meri mummyji ne iss ped par latakthe huve dekh liya tha aur woh emotional ho gayi...isiliye mujhe usse phool bhejna pada...!"Meenal said angrily,"Ok next time if u want to meet me then take ur mother's permission...!"And she went outside the room angrily.




Malik said angrily to Geet,"Do u know how Meenal felt?"Geet said angrily,"She saw ur true colors...!"Malik said angrily,"Now also,she hasn't seen my true colors...!"And he grabbed Geet & tried to kiss her.Arjun came forward to stop him but Geet resisted him holding her hand to Malik's neck & distancing him from her & stabbing her leg from her foot.All were shocked to Geet like this while Malik screamed with pain.




Arjun smiled impressively.Geet said angrily,"Didn't I tell u that don't mess with me?Am leaving u now...!"Leaving her grip from Malik."In fact am not in the modd of killing u Malik...!"smiling sarcastically.Malik was shocked with this movement & he moved to grab Geet angrily but Geet moved and gave him the punch from her fist to his nose.His nose started to bleeding.Malik saw her with more shock.




Maan observed this incident and was also amazed of Geet's power and guts which made him more and more suspicious abt her.Maan went to his room thinking abt Geet only.Pooja came and asked her mobile to Geet which she's kept in Geet's dress pocket.But Geet didn't answered him & went angrily.




Malik played a game on Pooja sending a note to Pooja that his Rohit is gonna come to Ali's room.Pooja came excitedly to meet Rohit there but got blasted by Ali.Pooja was so hurted & went her hostel.Here warden saw the mess in Meenal's room & saw the note there which was given previously to Geet by Malik.




Warden asked Meenal next morning with Malik that they're girlfriend & boyfriend but Meenal disposes Malik saying that he was troubling her from few days.Malik was angry on her but even more angry on Geet.




Next morning Maan closed his class and came near his room,but someone coughed from behind,Maan saw the man who's coughing and he went towards wash basin & pretends to wash the hands.On tha time the man also went near wahs basin and started washing his hands also.That man is stout & having Liuetenant ranking in army.He's also the military intelligence officer like Maan.He gave the original home address of the Geet & said,"Sir,this is the Geet Singh's address & phone number,anything else sir?"


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Maan said bossily,"No I'll dial u when u r needed..!"Thant man said,"Don't dial me sir..I'll be with u as ur assistant sir.This academy's head cook...u know I love cooking...!"Maan said smiling,"U'll never change Chaube...!"Chaube said saluting him,"Liuetenant Bunty Chaube reporting sir...!Previously am with u in 2 successful missions...How can I leave u alone in this mission?"Maan said,"Ok let's go before someone see us...!"Maan entered his room first & Chaube also entered Maan's room by watching.Daya observed this & went to inform Arjun.




Precap-Geet's mom,"Ji humein koi bachche nahin hai...aur humein koi card nahin chaahiye...!"
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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nice update...


yeh malik nehi sudhrega...geet itni insult karti hai...phibhi usski pichhe pada rahta hai...


thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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