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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome updates..all updates are very well written..Thanks for giving fast updates..Sorry for late entry,but loved all your updates..thanks for PM.
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PART 10


Malik entered the boys hostel & entered the room number 202 & said doubtfully,"Jai jawan jai kisan."No one answered & then he entered the room & opened the blanket of Kunal.Kunal gets off & said shockingly,"Who's that?"Malik asked doubtfully,"Are u a boy or not?"Kunal said innocently,"What?"Malik said then confirming that he's a boy,"Nothing...tum so jao."


Here in girls hostel,Lolita Sen enquringly,"Are u sure that was a boy?Am guessing that he's ur boyfriend!"Geet said clearly,"Madam,mera koi boy friend nahi hai..."On that time Pooja got up.Lolita Sen asked her,"Do u have any boy friend?"


Pooja replied innocently,"Rohit."Lolita Sen said angrily,"Come again!"Pooja asked innocently,"Where?"Geet said innocently,"When I find out then i'll inform u madam."Lolita Sen said,"If u inform me or not am going to kill him,"angrily.


Geet saw the watch on the floor in front of Lolita Sen's feet & smiled mischievously.Lolita Sen asked seeing Geet smile,"What makes u smile Cadet?"Geet said innocently,"Nothing madam.Lolita Sen said bossily,"Fine lights out & close the door Cadets."And she exited the room.Geet closed the door & locked it.



Pooja asked innocently,"Kya huva yaar?"Geet answered,"Kuch nahi tum so jao."Pooja said angrily,"Ab neend kaise aayegi...badi mushkil se mein apne aapko sleep mode mein daali thi aur woh bhi davayi khaake lekin woh toh full volume mein rest hogaya hai."Geet switched off the light & said,"Good night Pooja."And went to sleep while Pooja also wished her good night.



In the meantime,in boys hostel,Ali woke up suddenly & saw that fan isn't on & asked to Arjun,"Kya bijli chali gayi hai kya!!!"Arjun said,"Mujhe woh glass dena aur meine hi pankha band kar diya hai...mujhe achchi nahi lagthi ki koi bhi cheez mere room mein hile..."


Ali gave the glass & asked,"Apko paani chahiye...?/?"Arjun said directly,"Nahi...so jao..."Arjun opened an alcohol bottle & poured some rum to the glass of water & started drinking & asked to Ali,"Peeyega...waise tumhaare dharam mein ye allowed nahi haina???"Ali said feeling uncomfortable,"Why don't u sleep,we've to get up at 530hrs tomorrow morning.


Arjun replied,"I was getting up at 430 hrs in jail..."Ali felt even more uncomfortable & asked,"Jail...kya kiya aapne?"Arjun said carelessly,"Khoon."Ali felt uncomfortable."Tension nahi lene ka...ek kaan se sunne ka aur doosren kaan se chod dene ka...!"He started drinking while Ali said feeling uncomfortable,"Hum abhi washroom jaa kar aathe hai..."And he exited the room...



When Arjun was drinking the alcohol then he got the message from Geet in the mobile.Arjun answered it immediately & his it inside his sleeves.Ali went to meet Kunal while he met Malik there.Malik appreciated the girl who is residing in room no.202.


Ali feels uncomfortable & said that we've to give respect for woman.But Malik said in flirtation style,"Hum bhi auraton ko izzat dethe hai...aur unhe mohabbat bhi..."Ali commented abt his roommate that he's decent not like Kunal's roommate just he has the drawback of drinking.Kunal asked innocently that he has come from the jail then Ali nodded yes to him saying that he said it himself.


Malik noticed that he has lost his watch & remembered that it has fell in the room no.202 of girls hostel.Then Malik took Kunal with him to take the watch from the room no.202 girls hostel.Then both Malik & Geet quarell each other on that time only Malik sees Geet's bro's photo & Geet twists his hand once again.


Malik screams with pain calling her phoolandevi once again.Geet ties his hands & takes him to BC's office but sees Maan there.Geet asks Maan apprehensively that what he's doing here while Maan saves himself by sending them both back saying that they've to solve their problem only.


Geet was a bit suspicious that what Maan was doing in BC's office & sends the message to Arjun to come & meet her near the hostel.
Arjun came there while Geet stood there waiting for him.Arjun asked worriedly,"Kya hai Geet tum aise mujhe kyun bulaaya sab thik to haina...???"


Geet said calmly,"Sab thik hai Arjun...mein Captain Khurana ke baare mein baat karna chahtha hoon...mein unhe aaj shaam se BC ke cabin ke aas paas bhatak the huve dekha hai..."
Arjun took a deep calming breath & said smiling,"Tum bhi na...Geet...mujhe daraa diya..."Woh isliye kyunki Maan Cadets ki profie dhoond raha hain...aisa mujhe HQ se information aaya tha...Woh unke mission ke kuch sambandh ki isiliye woh Cadets ki profile dhonnd rahe hai...aur kuch nahi..."

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Geet asked worriedly,"Par kyun...!!!"Arjun said smiling,"Woh toh abhi...Abhijeet se pata chalega...tum uski fikar mat karo...mein tumhebata detha hoon...kal...ab tum so jao..."Geet nodded & went back to her hostel.



While Maan had seen Geet's guts when she charged the flriting Malik after meeting with Maan.She apparently twisted Malik's arms.He was getting suspicious of her...but his heart said that she's not the culprit...


Maan was mesmerised with her beauty & her big grown eyes which were windows of her soul made his sleep snatched...He was awake all the night without the sleep & sleep came when he concluded that she's not the traitor...


Precap-Geet's first training - encounter with Major Nair.


Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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part 10
nice part...
so Geet's doubt is cleared...
cont soon...
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PART 11


Next morning bugle plays & then all the cadets gets up.Ali prays for god.In the meantime,Pooja's mobile rings.Geet gets ready & saw that Pooja's mobile giving the alarm.Then Pooja gets up & asked,"Papji kahan hai...!!!"


Geet answered her curtly,"Woh neeche hamara intezaar ka rahe hai...!!!"Pooja said,"Give me the towel...!!!"Showing her hand.Geet sprayed the water on her face & Pooja opened her eyes & said in panic,"Kaun ho tum...aur mein kahan hoon...!!!"


Meanwhile Ali wakes Arjun.Arjun gots up & goes to Kunal's room & asked for a cigarette then Malik answered,"Mein toh hukka peetha hoon.Kunal said appreehnsively,"Chief...this is academy...u can't go outside..."


Arjun said dismissively,"Jab mein jail thod kar aa saktha hoon...toh yeh academy toh badi baath nahi..."Malik said sarcastically,"Paper laa...iska autograph lethe hai...!!!"


Arjun entered his room to get ready while Kunal said seeing Malik who was still standing wrapped with towel,"Chief,you didn't get ready till now...!!!"


On that time Malik released the H2S gas & Kunal said not resisting the smell,"Bloody hell."And he ran outside the room to take some fresh air.


Here in girls hostel Geet asked to Pooja,"Tees minute bache hai ready hone ke liye...kaho toh shall i bathe u here only?"Pooja hurried to the washroom shouting.Then pooja wore a stylish dress & showed it to Geet & asked,"Mein kaisi lag rahi hoon...yeh meri nayi dress hai...!!!"


Geet saw the dress & asked calmly,"Aur uniform kaun pehnega???"Pooja made all kind of faces & said,"Uniform...!!!"Geet sighed nodding no to her.



Geet came to the field first & stood & then all the cadets.

BSA-"Geet has read abt our training in the letters,but training in charge Major Nair se milne ka experience pad kar sunaya nahi jaa saktha tha...wahan cadets inhe BC ki MC bulathe the...!!!"



Cadets assembled including Geet & Arjun.Major Nair blew his whistle & said,"Cadets attention(Cadets stand in attention position)Mera naam hai Major Nair...aur mein aapke outdoor drill training incharge hoon.Am mean to make u strong physically & mentally,so let's begin with our first drill by running 10 rounds around the academy.Cadets baaye mud...!!!"


(On that time all the Cadets turn left side & run while Maajor Nair runs with them)Run cadets run...one who wants to abandon ur training can go & pack ur luggage & get out of this academy...!!!"


Cadets run as Major Nair is ordered meanwhile Malik came near Geet & started flirting with her,"Wanna hand..."Geet said firmly,"If u do that...then am gonna twist ur hand to ur back...like yesterday!!!"Malik said sarcastically,"You'll doing that only jhansi ki rani..."


Pooja asked,"Well jhansi ki rani...u didn't tell me what happened yesterday.Did u meet BC?"Geet said disappointedly,"No Cap.Maan sent us back...!!!"Malik said in flirting style,"Tell her what happened last night between us."


Pooja asked eagerly,"Kya huva?"Geet said casually,"I gave him strong punch & his nose started bleeding with my punch..."With this Malik gulped down his saliva & went backside to run with Kunal.Geet & Pooja laughed so much aith his movement.Pooja said impressively,"Banda bada handsome hai..!"Geet nodded dismissively.



All the cadets run towards training grounds while BC observed them in binoculars.cadets run to the training grounds & rests for sometime.Malik asked curiously,"Hey,where they'll send us after the training...moon or other place...!"


Kunal said sarcastically,"No mars...we're the future soldiers..when the martians come,we're going to war against them..."All laugh except Geet & Arjun who were mumbling in their minds,'Teenagers.'But Kunal said to Arjun,"Laugh man...I only cracked the joke..."


But Arjun not laughs but comments..."Yahan martians se bhi zyaada khatarnaak log hai...aur woh log humare desh ko bechne mein lage huye hai...behtar hai ki aap log un cartoon ki martians se ladne se zyaada apno se ladna seekhe jo is desh ko bechne mein lage huye hai...!!!"




Everyone were impressed with Arjun's words & Kunal said,"Point toh tera sahi hai boss..."Meanwhile BC had called an urgent meeting & he introduces Maan to the staff of the academy as he has come there to inspect the runnings of this academy.


Then BC talked abt the new batch's cadets training while he also announces that a new faculty would join them tomorrow & that person's name is Dr.Sen,the psychiartist.Maan listens to BC intently when BC explains abt the person Dr.Sen.


Lolita Sen complaints that a boy cadet had gatecrashed the girls hostel yesterday while Maan comes to the conclusion that it was Geet & Malik.


Precap-Entry of the psychiartist to the academy while Geet knowing that Maan abt her.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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very interesting...

Pooja is not ready to wear uniform...

training of cadets have started...

thanx for pm...
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PART 12


Lolita Sen complained abt yesterday's incident to BC while BC asked that is it senior but Lolita madam answered that it is new Cadet.


Maan came to conclusion that they're talking abt Geet & Malik & said sarcastically,"Toh aap unhe ek doosron ke khilaaf kar rahe hai...meine suna tha ki dushmanon ki unity mein phoot daalna lekin apne army...yeh mein pehli baar sun raha hoon sir...is this the new technique..???"


BC said angrily,"Is baar tum sunoge aur dekhoge bhi...!!!"After the meeting everyone exit the meeting room after BC except Dr.S & Maan.Maan was still thinking abt Dr.Sen.Then Dr.S said calmly,"Kya baat hai...aap ate hi...BC ko ched diya...!!!"


Maan said casually,"Woh...mein..."And he thought & asked,"BC...yeh naam toh mere batch ne rakha tha...aur is academy ke paas out toh nahi..."Dr.S asked,"Is personality ko hum kya keh sakthe hai..!!!"Maan said smiling,"Wow...smart!"Dr.S said smiling,"I'm..."And streched her hand & said,"Hi...am Dr.Captain.Shalini Singhal...!"


Maan gave his hand to shake & Dr.S saw him eagerly while He saw her expression & said immediately,"Am Captain Maan Singh Khurana...!"Then he said casually,"By the way...kya aap is Dr.Sen ke baare mein jaanthi hai..!!!"Dr.S said,"Nahin toh...lekin kyun?"Maan said enthusiastically,"Am curious abt this Dr.Sen...!!!"Dr.S said smiling,"Lagtha hai ki hum dono ka taste same hai...!!!"


Maan smiled at her sweetly & said,"Right...!!!"And he exited the room immediately.Here Major Nair is giving first training.Major Nair said bossily,"Did u enjoyed ur drill cadets?"Kunal said fearfully,"No sir..."


Major Nair said bossily,"Zor se bolo..."While Arjun thought,"Behra he kya..!"Kunal said raising his voice high..."Actually...!"Major Nair bossily,"More loudly...!"Kunal said loudly,"Yes sir...!"Major Nair asked angrily & loudly,"I don't like two types of people;one is idiot boys...and second oversmart girls...!!!"



Arjun dug his finger for ear wax while Major Nair came near Geet & said proudly but sarcastically,"Women never become soldiers...!"Loudly seeing towards Geet.While Geet glared at him eye to eye.


Major Nair asked proudly,"Meinne jo kaha woh sahi hai right cadet Singh..!!!"Geet said casually,"No sir."Major Nair said sarcastically,"Meine suna nahi Cadet Singh..."Geet said,"No sir,"Loudly & firmly.But Major Nair said loudly,"More loudly...!"Geet shouted,"No sir..!"



While Major Nair said calmly,"Good...is josh mein aap humesha rahenge aur mein aapko itna push karunga ki aap toot na jaaye...aur aap log tootenge...!And in the starting of the drill;I'd said u all that those who wants to abandon their training can pack the luggages.Par mein woh nahi kehne waala...If u want to leave this academy,then you've to ring this deserters bell(Showing the deserters bell)So that we can see ur unableness & shame to become soldier & I think u all ring the bell."


Malik shouted,"No sir."Major Nair nodded sarcastically but Malik continued,"Sir,mere paas teen bhaisen he sir...aur mein un par bet karna ke liye tayyar hoon...is saal ki sirf ek drop out hogi...aur woh bhi...!And he saw towards Geet.


Geet saw Malik & nodded sarcastically.Then Major Nair came to Geet & asked directly,"Kya aap is saal ki drop out hogi...???"Geet saw Major Nair eye to eye & said politely,"No sir...!"Major Nair said dismissively,"Well we'll see...!"And shouted,"4 minutes to relax...& complete the morning session..."



All Cadets relax while Malik said painfully to Major Nair..."Sir,I've fracture in my leg...!"Major Nair said bossily,"Don't worry Cadet Malik...if u run once again...then ur fracture will be gone...!"Major Nair went from there to meet BC who he has seen coming towards him.


While Malik said proudly,"Agar yeh mujhe kheton mein miljaatha to mein...!"Arjun said carelessly,"Tum kuch nahi kar paathe...woh wahan bhi tumhaare pant utar detha...!"Malik grabbed Arjun's collar but Kunal said showing the finger towards BC who was coming towards them only.



BC came & enquired abt last night's incident to Geet & Geet explained yesterday's incident & complained that Cadet Malik had came to her room twice.Then BC punished Malik that he's going to prepare a bunker in 20 minutes & if he'll not complete that then he'll have to starve today.


Then other cadets disperse for the lunch.Cadets having the lunch in the mess...meantime Cadet Malik lifted the gunny bags to the place where it is told.Maan observed this & smiled dismissively.Maan said to Major Nair,"U're making him as traitor not soldier..."


Malik exited to have the lunch while Major Nair said bossily,"I don't want another Brij Singh Ahluwaliya Captain...you're also this academy's student...u know the rules & regulations of this academy...I push the cadets in higher way that no traitor passes out from this academy."



But Maan smiled dismissively & went from there.Here in the mess,Arjun said angrily to Geet,"I hate those people who are informy type...!"Geet answered angrily,"I hate those people who closes others mistake & helps them...!"Arjun said warningly,"U didn't right thing saying his name...!"


Geet become serious while Malik entered the mess in a manner like he's defeated & Kunal asked,"Hey chief...how r u?"Caringly.But Malik fell down fainted or i've to say pretending to faint...while Everyone ran to him & was worried.But Arjun & Geet nodded dismissively & sat in their place eating their lunch.



Ali brought some water & sprinkled on Malik's face & he opened his eyes & saw that Geet was eating her lunch not giving any attention to Malik.Malik felt awkward his ego was hit very powerfully & stood immediately & came to Geet's table & said,"For the first time..I'd lost trust on the god...par tumhe dekhke...mujhe bhagwaan par phir se vishwaas aagaya...!Today's revenge will be kept as loan...I'll give u ur loan back..!"


Geet ate her last bite from her plate & said seeing smiling at Malik sarcastically,"Malik,firstly have trust on urself becoz over confidence isn't good...firstly u've to keep confidence on u & trust on god...all the best for ur loan...!"She exited the mess smiling at him sarcastically while Malik stood there dumbstruck...



All the cadets saw her in shock they thought that Malik was threatening her but she took it casually & said all the best to him...they thought that Geet is special...of course...zindagi mein itna utar chadav jo dekha hai ussne...but Arjun didn't like the fact that Malik is threatening his little sister...his gudiyan...his Geet...!Arjun was angry on Malik but resisted & decided of protecting Geet from these prying eyes...!


Precap is same.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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just read all the parts thanks . pm me to dear

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