LoveWillFindAWay-ON HOLD: 8-8-2014

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00cc">I am a new user of IF. I have read some FFs here & I must say that they have been written beautifully. The writers here really have great potential & I would congratz them for their talent. Though am not very good in writing but these FFs 7 writers have encouraged me to write something.Ofcourse, I know I may not be as good as them but I am just giving it a try (basically for self satisfaction😉)</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00cc">Mostly I have read FFs based on the show Geet orpreciselyof Maan-Geet as they are my favorite.</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00cc">So, I thought why not I start with them only.</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00cc">Well, guys before I start writing I want to know ur views abt it.I am giving a brief info abt my concept.First of all wud like to tell that my concept is not based on Geet unlike other toics.Though I have picked some characters from the show but it has total different concept.I have changed the characters as well as faces as per my idea.U all might feel its a larger than life types but that's the advantage of FF, isn't it ? So, I have introduced some new faces & characters in story.Its not abt a TV show, so don't think how this actor or actress is playing role here.Its my story & i have chose people as per the need.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00cc">Guys here am giving u a brief & character sketch of my FF.Plz go thru it & lemme know if I shud continue wid it.</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">Gurmeet Chaudhary</font> <font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">as</font> <font size="4" color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Maan Singh Khurana</font>
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<font size="5"><font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" color="#ff00ff">Drashti Dhami</font> </font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">as</font><font size="5"> <font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" color="#ff00ff">Geet Handa</font></font>

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<font color="#990000" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Sushma Seth</font> <font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">as</font> <font color="#990099"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Chandrika Singh Khurana</font> </font><font size="4">a.k.a </font><font color="#006633">Dadima</font>
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<font size="4"><font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Ayushmaann Khurrana</font><font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif"> as </font><font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Jai Singh Khurana </font><font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif">(Maan's younger</font><font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif"> brother)</font></font>

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<font size="4"><font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font color="#660099">Kanwaljit Singh</font><font color="#333333"> as </font></font><font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Mohinder Handa</font><font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#333333"> (Geet's father)</font></font>

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<font size="4"><font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font color="#009933">Rantna Pathak</font><font color="#333333"> as</font> </font><font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff00ff">Rano Handa</font><font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#333333"> (Geet's mom)</font></font>

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<font color="#ff00ff" size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Parineeti Chopra</font><font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#333333"> as </font><font color="#ff00ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Shagun Handa</font><font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#9933ff">(Geet's sis)</font>

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<font size="4"><font color="#ff0000">Bani J<font color="#9933ff"> as </font><font color="#cc0099">Bani Rathore</font></font><font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" color="#ff66ff">(Geet's best friend)</font></font>
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<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#0000ff">Rajeev Khandelwal</font><font color="#ff66ff"> as </font><font color="#0000ff">Capt. Rajeev Sharma</font></font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3" color="#009966">There are more characters which will be introduced as story proceeds.So, guys lemme know ur views over this.</font>

<font size="3">The story revolves around two families</font> <font color="#0000ff" size="5">Khuranas</font><font color="#6633cc"> & </font><font color="#339900" size="5">Handas </font><font size="3" color="#6600ff">based in </font><font color="#ff0000"><font size="5">Mumbai</font><font size="3">.</font></font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font size="4" color="#0000ff">Khuranas:</font></font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font color="#9933ff"><font size="4">Chandrika Devi</font><font size="3"> is oldest person in Khurana family.She has two grandsons & a grand daughter.Her son & daughter-in-law passed away years ago & she herself has raised her grand children simultaneously handling the business started by her husband & maintained by son for sometime.Even though she is old yet she is a woman of 21st century, elegant, sophisticated & modern.</font></font></font>

<font size="5" color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Maan</font><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9933ff">is her eldest grandson.A 25yrs. oldruthless, arrogant, short tempered businessman.He loves his family to death & can do anything for them except one thing i.e. marriage.He has taken over all business responsibilities fron his Dadi so she can now relax.He is the MD of Khurana Constructions & Industries.He has made it India's top most firm in business.He has a strong feeling of dislike & mistrust for women due to his past.Please note that Maan has never been in any relationship nor had any GF so don't think he dislike women coz of that.He hates women since he was 12.The reason wud be disclosed as story will move.Though he is kinda anti women still he has no problem with his brother being in a relationship.</font>

<font color="#009966" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font size="5">Jai </font><font size="3">(23yrs.)</font></font><font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3" color="#009966"></font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9933ff"><font size="3">his younger brother has done MBA & now helping his bro in business. He is in a relationship with </font><font size="3">Bani</font><font size="3"></font><font size="3">his childhood love. He respects his brother a lot & considers him as a father.</font></font>

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<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9933ff">Mohinder Handa is India's most successful lawyer.Alongwith law practice he handles his family business set up his late father.He is married to Rano, a social activist.Has two daughters: Geet & Shagun.</font>

<font color="#ff00ff" size="5">Geet<font color="#9933ff">(</font></font><font color="#9933ff"><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">22yrs)</font><font> studying law, has done CS & also a distant learning course in PR.She is a brilliant student.She is modern yet traditional.Very bubbly, vivacious, charming, naive, clumsy gal.She's darling of her dad.</font></font>

<font color="#00cc00" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Shagun</font><font color="#6633ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font size="5">,</font> </font><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9933ff">twin sis of Geet is studying in Germany.She & Geet are best buddies,partners in every crime in childhood.</font>

<font color="#ff0099"><font size="5">Bani<font size="5">,</font><font size="4"></font></font><font size="3" color="#9933ff">belongs to a royal family of Jaipur, daughter of Prithvi Singh Rathore. Her family has shifted to Mumbai years back. She is Geet's best friend & studies with her in same college. She has yet not told Geet abt Jai.</font></font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5" color="#009933">Rajeev</font><font color="#9933ff"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">is the son of Rano's best friend who passed when he was 6yrs old in a plane crash.Ever since then Handa family has taken care of him as their own son.All love him very much.He is 3yrs older than Geet & Shagun but has been their best buddy.He has joined army, so now gets less time with family.Very protective abt Handa family.</font></font>


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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3" color="#9933ff">Thanks for waiting but I see I haven't got a good response but still am posting the very first part of my most ambitious FF hoping I might get atleast an average response from the readers & my friends coz only ur response is 1 thing which will encourage me to write more.</font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#ff00ff">Part #1:</font><font color="#0000ff">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2821693/lovewillfindaway-on-hold-8-8-2014</font></font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#ff00ff">Part #2:</font><font color="#0000ff"></font></font><font color="#0000ff">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2821693/lovewillfindaway-on-hold-8-8-2014?pn=2</font>


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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#ff00ff">Part #5:</font></font><font color="#0000ff">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2821693/lovewillfindaway-on-hold-8-8-2014?pn=11&#56150202</font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#ff00ff">Part # 7:</font><font color="#0000ff"></font></font><font color="#0000ff">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56938367&#56938367</font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#ff00ff">Part # 8:</font><font color="#0000ff"></font></font><font color="#0000ff">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58260786&#58260786</font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">Part # 9:</font><font color="#0000ff">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59658454&#59658454</font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">Part # 10: </font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/61284861&#61284861</font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font size="4" color="#ff00ff">Part 14 :</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff"></font></font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2821693/lovewillfindaway-on-hold-8-8-2014?pn=47&#64543749</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9900ff">Okay, now before starting our story lets see where our characters live, I mean their abode/ house.</font>


<font color="#0000ff" size="4" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">KHURRANA MANSION : KM</font>



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<font size="4" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#339900">Okay here it goes...Lights, start sound, roll camera, shot one take one & action...</font>


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</b><b><font size="6" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif"> <font color="#ff00cc">~</font><font color="#ff0000">Love</font><font color="#ff00cc">Will Find A Way ~</font></font>






<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#ff00ff">Love changes people in the most unbelievable way. Two individuals,</font><font color="#ff0000">Geet </font><font color="#00cc00">&</font><font color="#0000ff">Maan</font>, <font color="#ff00ff">who are as different as chalk & cheese, comes together in this powerful & heart warming Love Saga.</font></font>








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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#cc00cc" size="3">It was 11pm. The darkness of the no moon nite has engulfed everything in its embrace. Though Mumbai is a city which never sleeps but somehow tonite it is quite much silent than usual. The outskirts of city were deserted. The Khurrana Mansion was no exception. It was pitch dark in KM and every member of KM has now retired to their rooms.Each member in KM was sleeping peacefully coz there is 1 member who has sacrificed his sleep so his family can have peaceful nites. The whole mansion was dark with no sign of light except 1 place from where a little light was emitting behind the closed doors. It was his study.</font>




<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#009933">imagine this as his study & its nite outside the window.</font>

<font color="#cc00cc" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Yes, he was in his study after making sure that his brother & Dadi are sound asleep.His Dadi hates him being working till late nite, so he has sneaked out of his room after Dadi was asleep.He don't want to hurt her in anyway but then he has to be in study for some real important reason.</font>

<font color="#cc00cc" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He was flipping the pages of a file which has some info about some people.He was reading each word very carefully so he won't miss anything here.He was not happy with the info he has got.He wanted morecategorical links & info to persue his long awaited task.He frustatedly closed the file & threw it on the table in front.He fished his cell & punched few keys & waited for other person to pick up.The person picked after 3-4 rings.</font>

<font color="#cc00cc" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Person: hello</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Maan: Its Maan Khurrana..</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#cc0099">Person: yes sir, how come u called at this hr. ?</font>
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<font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Maan (in angry tone):The info u have given is not complete.The threads are loose.I have given u enuf time & money & then too u haven't got proper info, why ?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">P<font color="#cc00cc">erson (scared at his tone & stammers): uhh...sss...sir..wohhh...uhh..am sorry sir. But its been a long time & ppl doesn't know much abt them.I am trying my best sir & I might have to travel out to gather more info as they moved out from Mumbai long back & as per my info they hadn't been at 1 place for long.This is the reason it is taking time.but trust me sir I shall get whole info soon.</font>
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<font color="#0000ff">Maan (calmed himself hearing the man's scared voice): Look, time is 1 thing which I can't give u, but since ur efforts seems sincere I am giving 1 last chance & if u fail this time then don't turn up & show me ur face. 1 more thing, come to me only when u get something meaningful & big.Understand ?? You better understand.</font>


<font color="#cc00cc">Person (still stammering): uhh...yyyess sss...sir! This time I will get u wot u want as am quite close to it.I won't give u another chance to complain.I promise.</font>



<font color="#0000ff">Maan(bit relaxed): hmm...I'l be waiting & u better keep ur words.</font>

<font color="#cc00cc">With that Maan hung up the phone.He threw his cell on table in irritation & got up from the chair. He brushed his hand in his hair & tried to calm himself down.But all in vain & he banged his hand on the table making loud noise.</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#cc00cc">He realized he has made a quite audible noise & any1 might have heard it.He pour some water into a glass & just drank it 1 go thinking it might cool down his temper.Feeling a bit relaxed he walked towards the window of study & stared outside in the darkness of nite in thehorizon.He stared & stared & stared, himself not knowing for how long.Nothing going in his mind.It was as blank as the darkness of nite.He was thinking nothing & just staring.Lost in the trance of his own his slowly slid the glass of window to open it a little.The cold breeze which was blowing outside now cam in contact with him, soothing him.After a while he came back to his senses & realized the track of time.Its mid nite now.He again looked outside but this time his mind was thinking something.</font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font size="4" color="#0000ff">Maan(self thought)</font><font size="3"><font color="#0000ff">:Darn it! I failed again. Maan Singh Khurrana failed again.The life has once again failed me.but no I won't give up on it till I breathe my last.That's only purpose of my life.I shall find out everything about it at any cost.I will pull all the forces to trace out this whole thing.Yes, I will find out no matter wot, no matter how.Maan Singh Khurrana can never fail.I can't let my words fail.I have to find out everything & have to bring it to its destiny.I have worked for it for so many years.I can't let my hard work go in vain.I can't let sacrifices of others go in vain.If not for me then for those lives I have win this battle.But I can't let Dadima know abt it.She won't approve of it.So, I have to keep it under wraps.</font></font></font>



<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#cc00cc">After convicing himself Maan felt a bit relaxed but still his heart wasn't at peace.Well, it hasn't been at peace for past many years & that's why he has never been able to have a peaceful sleep at nites & so he hate the nites.Atleast, in days he can merge himself in his work but at nite he has to drag himself to bed & have to toss restlessly over bed fighting wid his eyelids to get close to have some peaceful sleep.But that's the last thing on earth which he thinks wud ever happen to him.By now he is sure that he can never have a peace of heart & can never sleep peacefully in his whole life.Well, least did he know is that his much awaited peace is sleeping peacefully, wandering in the dreamland of her own in the same city only a few miles away from him.The life has its own plan for him which presently he's unaware & probably its right this way.As everything happens when it is destined to happen & when it is least expected.
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<font color="#339933">"Waqt se pehle aur kismat se zyada kabhi kisiko kuch nahi milta aur waqt aane par he sab milta hai...!"</font></font>


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<font face="Philosopher" color="#009900" size="3">So, friends this was the very 1st part of this FF.I hope u all liked it & if u liked then plz don't forget to hit Like & if u wanna give any suggestion then plz go ahead.And, if u wanna criticize then I am open to accept.So, plz be responsive & kind to ur friend.😊</font>

<font face="Philosopher" color="#009900" size="3">Love u all</font>
<font face="Philosopher" color="#009900" size="3">Anky.</font>

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tooo gud
and choice for dadi is best one
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Awesome start

please continue with this F/F

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its interesting dear..
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lot of suspense..
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Originally posted by: muskanp

lot of suspense..

loved it all the best


hey thnx muskan...ur acknowledgement means a lot to me.Its u who is behind me writing. :)
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awsome concept...

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Hello friends...am back with my 2nd update.I have tried my best to satisfy you all & I hope u'l like it.Ur feedbacks & suggestions are precious so plz do drop comment to let me know ur reactions.If u like it then do hit like which takes only 2 sec of ur precious time.So, go on & enjoy.😊


Part 2



Next morning,


Khurrana Mansion:


Maan woke up at his scheduled time 5:30am. He never wakes up late no matter how late he gets at nite.His schedule is quite strict & he doesn't like any changes in it. He went to his gym to do his regular routine exercise & some marshal arts. His morning starts with this only. He never skips his gyming. After completing his action package (that's wot his brother calls his exercise) by 7am he went to his room to have shower & got ready for office. He came down at the dinning room by 7:30am. Dadima was already there by the time. She likes to have breakfast with her grandsons & esp. wid Maan coz that's the only time which she cud spend wid him else he remains unreachable for rest of the day. Though he tries hard to be wid family at dinner but most of the time he got stuck wid some or the other work.


Imagine this as their dinning table.

Maan went near Dadi & hugged her. Dadi hugged him back & patted his back smilingly.

Maan : Good morning, Dadima!


Dadima : Good morning beta.

Maan went back & took his seat infront of Dadi. Both sits on the 2 head chairs opposite to each other.Maan never changes his place but Dadi sometimes comes & sits beside him knowing he won't take another seat.Nakul came wid breakfast & put it on the table.He 1st served adi & then went to Maan & served him & went back to kitchen.

Maan : Dadima, Jai kaha hai ?

Dadi: Beta, lagta hai shayad so rahe hain.

Maan : Abhi tak so raha hai ?? Its 7:45am already. Usse office nahi chalna hai kya ?? Waise bhi aajkal main dekh raha hoon who roz late hota hai.

Before Dadi cud say anything jai came running down the stairs & straight away went near her & hugged her.She too hugged him back.he broke the hug & said,

Jai : Good morning, sweetheart!

Dadi (smiled & said): Good morning beta & signaled him that Maan is here & was asking abt him.

Maan cleared his throat to gain his attention. Jai straightened himself & sat beside Dadi & said,

Jai: Good morning, bro!

Maan: Good morning. Jai why are u late today ? Infact u have been getting late daily from past few days, any problem?

Jai: uhh...nothing bro. Actually, who I have to submit a project report of my internship so I have been preparing that, toh bas raat ko sone mein der ho jati hai aur aap toh jante am a late riser & winked at Dadi.

Maan: Ok, but Jai ur final sem exams are over then how come ur still working on college project?

Jai: bro, actually I had already submitted my project but my professor asked me to do 1 more as he wants to keep it library for future reference to help other students.You see he's quite impressed by me 😉

Maan: hmmm...good!

Jai: bro, do u have any meetings today ?

Maan: yeah, actually 3-4 meetings I guess, why ?

Jai: nothing much bro! woh aaj mujhe thoda jaldi jana that oh agar apko koi prob na ho toh...

Maan raised his eyebrow at his statement & asked : Do u have any other meetings or shud I say commitments ?? He said the last word with a smirk on his face.

Jai only smiled & shook his head knowing very well wot his brother means.he replied, "yaah, bro. Who aaj Bani ko dinner promise kiya that toh bas usike liye jaldi jana hai."

Maan nodded : Ok, u can leave early rest I'l manage.Don't worry abt office & enjoy ur time.And drop Bani home by urself, don't let her go wid driver.

Jai (smiled): Thnx bro! And yes I'l drop her.


Though Maan dislikes women yet he has no problem wid Jai being in relationship. He has his own reasons to distrust women but he never imposed his thoughts over Jai. And, he has gladly accepted Bani to hs family coz Jai is in love wid Bani & she is his happiness.Also, since Maan has known from her the time since she was teenager, he knows that she is perfect for his brother but never shows his emotion to any1. The 3 of them had their rest of the breakfast silently. Maan got up from his chair & said,

Maan : Dadima, am leaving now.I have a meeting at 10am. Aap apna khayal rakhiyega aur haan plz lunch time par kar lijiyega aur apni medicines bhi lena mat bhuliyega.

Dadi also got from her seat as she was also done wid breakfast.She went near Maan & said,

Dadi: Bete, aap hamari itni chinta mat kijiye.Hum samay par lunch bhi kar lenge aur medicine bhi le lenge.Aap toh humein aise hidayat dete hain jaise aap hamare dada hain aur hum apki poti. Maan smiled a bit & said,

Maan : Dadima, aap kisi bacche se kam thodi hain. He gave her a hug & bid bye. "See u at dinner, Dadima!"

Dadi (surprisingly): Aap dinner ke time tak ghar aa jayenge ?

Maan who reached the hall gate turned back & said: Dadima ka beta unko akele dinner kaise karne de sakta hai! I will be at home by 8pm.

Dadi( smiled delightedly): Okay, beta hum apka wait karenge.

Maan nodded & went out.

By the time jai has also finished wid breakfast.He came to Dadi & said: Bro loves u a lot.

Dadi smiled & said: He loves u too a lot, beta!

Jai: I know, dadi. Anyways, main bhi chalta hoon warna bro meri date cancel kar denge.

Both laughed & Jai made his way out.


Same time (8am) at Handa Palacio:

There was the usual chirpiness of morning going on. The servants were busy in their routine work. Mohinder came from his routine jog & sat on the stairs & called for his wife Rano.


Rano came to him with a towel in 1 hand & a glass of juice in other.Though there are servants to do all such work but Mohinder likes being pampered by his wife.He won't take juice if she sent it with some servant.Plus he gets chance to tease his loving wife he loves a lot & how can he miss those moments.

Rano gave him the towel to wipe off the sweat.he wiped himself & put the towel aside & took the glass from her.After taking few sips he said,

Mohinder : Oye hoye, ki gal hai soniyo aaj toh aap bilkul ghazab dha rahi hain ? Kisi ko shaheed karne ka khayal hai ??

Rano( gave him a u-r-so-impossible look & said): sudhrenge nahi naa aap! 3-3 jawaan bachhe hain par phir bhi aap aur apki yeh lafangagiri khatam nahi hoti.Apni badhti umar ka toh khayal keejiye.

Mohinder: Tum kya kehna chahti ho ki main budha ho gaya hoon ?

Rano just nodded in yes wid a teasing smile.

Mohinder(got up & went near her & said softly): Memsaab, budhi hongi aap main toh maashah allah abhi bhi jawaan hoon aur chahu toh aaj bhi ladkiyon ki line lag jaye mere liye. He said & smirked at her.

Rano's mouth went wide open wid his statement.Though she knew he is just teasing her but still how dare he 1st called her old & then talking abt flirting wid other women.This is just so not acceptable.

Rano(in little angry tone): Toh jaiye apni deewaniyon k pass yaha kyu khade hain?

Mohinder(smiled & hugged her from behind):hmm...sujhaav toh achha hai par main toh apka deewana hoon toh unke paas kaise ja sakta hoon.

Rano's anger just went away wid his sweet words & she smiled.

Mohinder: Oye hoye, issi muskurahat ke toh hum qayal hain.

She hit him playfully on his hand & moved away towards kitchen.Mohinder shook his head & grabbed the newspaper & went to dinning table but shortly stopped by a voice.


"Freeze"

Mohinder stood froze at his position.He has recongnized the voice & was quite happy & wanted to just hug the owner of the voice but poor he can't break the rule of this stupid game.The person came near him & stood in front of him.

"hmm...to kya keh rahe the aap? Abhi toh main jawaan hoon! Chalo lets check."

with the person atarts observing Mohinder checking his muscle, physique.

"hmm...muscle toh achhe hain, dole-shole bhi badiya hain aur 6 toh nahi par haan do packs bhi hain.Toh overall body toh thik he hai aur..."

But he was cut short by when he heard Rano's voice.

Rano(smiling widely): Aree Rajeev! Beta tum kab aaye aur yeh kya baat kar rahe the kya badhiya hai ?

Yes, Rajeev, Capt. Rajeev Sharma.


Though he was Rano's friend's son but he was no lesser than their own son to Mohinder & Rano.Rajeev immediately ran towards Rano & hugged her tight & lovingly.Their eyes got moist.They hugged for some time & broke apart reluctantly.

Rajeev: Maa, I missed u so so very much.

Rano: I too missed u son & pecked his forehead. Kaisa hai mera bachha?

Rajeev:Ekdum fit & fine & in 1 piece.They both smiled at his reply.Just then Mohinder cleared his throat to gain their attention.

Rano looked at him & then at Rajeev & then burst out laughing loud.

Rano: Toh aate he hi apne papa ko bali ka bakra bana diya Capt. saab.

Rajeev: Yes General.Woh kya hain naa yeh apki shaan mein gustakhi karne ki saza mili hai inhe.

They both laughed.Mohinder was now getting really pissed off by these 2 monsters who were hell bent on teasing & irritating him.But poor soul can't shot an angry glare even or else he has to remain in that position till his saviour comes who was till now nowhere to be seen.So, he looked at them pleadingly.Rano was enjoying his plight but then finally she said,

Rano: Rajeev, i guess hume ab inn par reham karna chahiye itni saza kafi hai.

Rajeev:hmm...i guess thak gaye honge aakhir budhe jo ho chale hain.

With that both laughed.

Rajeev went a bit near to Mohinder & said, "hmmm...okay! Over"

Mohinder came into a relaxed position & sighed in relief.Rajeev who was standing near him & smiling & relaxed was blown away wid a sudden tight knock wid a newspaper on his butt.Before he cud decipher anything another shot came.He knew there is no time to think & he ran.Mohinder who was fuming now ran behind him.Rajeev ran to dinning room to living room.Mohinder who was behind him picked up a cushion from sofa & threw at Rajeev.Ofcourse it him on his back & he fell on the sofa next to him.But before Mohinder cud catch him he got up in a fraction of second & moved away.Mohinder was surprised to see such fast response.Well, being an army man Rajeev has to be quick.They running like kids around the house, grabbing things & throwing on each other & eventually breaking some.Just then Rajeev picked a big vase & was abt to throw, Mohinder spoke up: Arre, usse mat todna yaar bahut mehenga hai aur antique bhi.Agar toot gaya toh teri maa mujhe tod degi!

Rajeev instantly put it down.ofcourse, he too can't take his mom's wrath.Mohinder who was tired by now sat of a couch & was breathing heavily.Rajeev came to him & sat on the floor taking Mohinder's 1 leg in his hands & massaging it.


Rajeev: Papa, see i told u ab aap budhe ho gaye ho.

Mohinder(jerked free his leg & said): Oye budha hoga tera baap!

Rajeev(smiled slyly): Exactly, pops.

Just then Rano came & said : Agar aap dono ka ho gaya ho toh ab hum nashta karle ??

Both men nodded & followed her to dinning table.while settling Rajeev asked: Maa, where is my darling princess ??

Rano rolled her eyes & said: Ur princess is still sleeping in her room.

Rajeev: abhi tak ??

Rano: don't look at me, ask ur dear papa.Apni ladli ko sir chadha rakha hai.

Mohinder:Kya Rano, bachhi kitni mehnat karti hai toh sone do naa!

Rano: see Rajeev as if sari duniya mein sirf ek woh he hain jo mehnat karti hai.

Rajeev smiled & got up from his place.Rano looked questioningly at him.

Rajeev: I will bring my princess down.Aaj uske sath he breakfast karunga.

Saying so he made his way upstairs towards her room.He knocked the door & slightly opened it.He peeped inside & stood froze with the sight in font of him.






precap: umm...ofcourse princess's entry & lots more.


Part #3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2821693/lovewillfindaway-on-hold-8-8-2014?pn=6


So guys this was the second part I hope u liked it. I know u might be thinking why I haven't introduced Geet yet but guys have patience.She is the lead & I want to give her a mast entry. ur suggestions are most welcome so plz tell ur POV.

And if any of u want PMs then add me to ur buddy list. 😊

Edited by anky_s - 13 years ago
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waise yeh underline current kya hai
kinhe search kar raha hai maan

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