Painful Rapture~thread2~ chp.59 ~ pg 144~3.8.12

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Painful Rapture~ Hamlet53...

ch2:The Reckoning-p.3

ch3: Noncompliance-p5

ch4: The Battle Within-p8

ch5:On The Mend-p 11

ch6: Knowing Me Knowing You-p15

ch7: Homecoming-p.19

ch8: Rocking The Boat-p.23

ch:9 Tempest- p.23

ch 10: "green ey'd monster"-p.33

ch11: "cudgel thy brains".p37

ch12: Love is many - splendored thing~p.43

ch13:"Marriage of true Minds"~P.47

ch14:"blow winds and crack your scrutiny"~p52

ch15:"sweet are the uses of adversity"~p57

ch16:"the most unkindest cut of all"~p61

ch17: "tying up loose ends"~p.63

ch18:"till death do us part"~p1 p67,p 2p68

ch19:"time..thou ceaseless lackey to eternity."~p74

ch20:"there are many things in heaven and earth"~p76

ch21:"parting is such sweet sorrow"~p81

ch22:"thou art a votary to fond desire"~p84

chap23:"brave new world"~p88

chap24:"the short and long of it"..

chap 25:"when shall we three meet again" ~p95

chap 26 part1:"give light,and darkness will disappear it self"~p99

chapter26part 2give light ,and darkness will disappear it self"

chapter27"the forms of things unknown"~106

chap28 "there is a tide in the affairs of men"~110

chap29"one may smile and smile and be a villain"~p.113

chap 30"a hit a very palpable hit"~p 117

chap31"double,double toil and trouble"~p120

chap 32"nothing either good or bad, but thinking makes it so"~p.123

chap33 "journys'end at lovers meeting~p.127

chap34"lord what fools these mortals be"~p132

chapter 35 Amother is a mother still ,the holiest thing alive"~144

chapter 36"our remedies oft in ourselves do lie"~p 147

Painful Rapture # thread 2 Index.

chapter 38~ "love is a smoke raised with the fume of sighs" thread 2,page 3

chapter 40 "love can do much,but duty more"~p14

chapter41 "am I in earth, in heaven or in hell" p20

chapter 42 "now go we in content"~p25

chapter 43 "to be or not to be"..p31

chapter44 "infirm of purpose" p#37

chapter 45"method in the madness"~p 43

chapter46"Sterner stuff"p54

chapter47 "the primrose path" p64

chapter 48 "be my guest" p69

chapter49 "be my guest still" p.73

chapter 50 "back to the grind" p 82

chapter 51 "strives mightily"~p86

chapter52 "foregone conclusion" p.93

chapter 53 "short shrift" p103

chapter 54 "mastersof their fates "p.109

chapter 56"we have seen better days" p.123











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Listen my wonderful reader friends...what a palava! new thread, me went to see Agneepath yesterday...returned home after 8.00pm... Found on my thread , 150pgs? new thread? hain! panic! now the kurris /chorris, who alertd me were Nakusha, Missy! so pmed Daya ...created a lot of noise !what? how? baata mujhe ? kaise and the rest, poor Daya papayaa,she definitely wants to break up with me! I have drained her! any way ,she umhhed and arhhed and instructed me to pm shabz etc...now you can see the botch I have made on thread 2 ...sab us Daya ka kasoor hai itni lousy teacher hai!! Many thanks to Naku, Missy ,Brvv, Tamanna..for your kind thoughts ..the truth is we all did the century and a half together...and it's fun this we all have to admit! love each one of you.. many thanks xxxhammie PLz see...I'll annotate your comments on this thread 2... will have to go on thread one and call it one 1 date it May 2011...when I first started...
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Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Found on my thread , 150pgs? new thread? hain! panic! now the kurris /chorris, who alertd me were Nakusha, Missy! so pmed Daya ...created a lot of noise !what? how? baata mujhe ? kaise and the rest, poor Daya papayaa,she definitely wants to break up with me! I have drained her! any way ,she umhhed and arhhed and instructed me to pm shabz etc...now you can see the botch I have made on thread 2 ...sab us Daya ka kasoor hai itni lousy teacher hai!!



Well congrats on the new thread ! I did not even notice but then I have not even made it to your UD yet ...still to read...and yes after all that I get lousy teacher! ...chal me am so so tired i have nothing to say...530am heading for a 12hr shift on a sunday... ab dont mess with me! 😆 chal I have pmed u what to fix ...ab u do that while i got get myself ready and leave ...take care you...lots of love ...phir milenge chalte chalte ...

PS. me will get the honor of posting my comment for ur latest UD in this thread 😆 will be back for that :)
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hi my hammiee
i 'm happy for the milestone you covered accha baa hum saab 😊i hope you acheive more 150 & we are there to appreciate you .poor daya will have to go through trail again to teach you .
keep on writing & readers keep on commenting 😊
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congrats hamlet REgards uvi😊
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Congrats on the second thread...May we get to read more and more from your side
!!!Stay Blessed!!!
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Hammie ! first and foremost CONGRATZ with your new thread although I know exactly how miffed you were to figure it all out ...making me tear my hair out in the process haha ...i'm just kidding...u still have to fix some things :P anyway getting to the update...

Chapter 37 ~ the lady doth protest too much...
So ur UD is in another thread lol and my comment in this one 😆😛 talk about confusing haha woh bhi tumare saath...ur probably more confused on how to annotate everyone's comments 😛 cut and paste dear hammie...its an excellent option lol ...

So we're back to work...but seems that Major Dutta is having some difficulty enjoying anything that is not made from his lover's hand ...oh an I tell you the amount of screen space that chunni gets...substitute hai na...sniff sniff and put away in laptop case for safe keeping ...if I was Naku I would need to be jealous of those chunnis that are always entangled in him haha ...

I quite liked the progression in the story with Khan. The fact that Dutta saw the talent she had and when she herself was putting that offer down he was quite a manipulative soul...using words to make her reverse that thought of hers...well done major...glad to see her accept the challenge...and would love to see where it takes her ...there is a lot of potentional with the girl which is what Dutta sees and would like her to work on...

Naku and Nandi ...the way their story pans out is nice. The way you show the slow improvements in her condition overtime and the way you have mentioned that personal and professional life in some sense come together...the goals ...achievements ...and Naku's selfless thought to first put Nandi's situation before her own marriage I would say is great. Her life isn't about just getting her love but to have him there when she feels that she has done much with her life and can share that joy with him...

Then came that Khan and Kapur scene. He was so straightforward ...just said what he felt which i liked...instead of avoiding it or beating around the bush...of course I like the pairing of the two but it seems that its a no go on one side... and Dutta lands their ...have to specifically mention the line "who goes there? and added "friend or foe? lol well well that is Dutta for you ...so of course what else is going to do but blow up BOOM ...GO TO YOUR DORMS NOW !

And need I say the lovely end with TaSha...he was quite calm to my surprise haha ...and when she asks about his work and i just died reading the answer..."haan woh mein ne do premiyoon ke upar zoor se bomb phoraha! ...haahaa well he did indeed...but whether they are lovers ahhh well that is at question ...

Loved the update Hammie...sadly I only got a chance to even open the UD today...maaf ker...late latif is me this time...hmm ...ab chal phir milenge chalte chalte...lots of love...see you in pms!
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Congrats hammie on completing another half century...had been a wonderful journey...in terms of cherishing this saga between our tasha and your much awaited feedback on our replies...can still recall the day you posted your first chapter...at that time i was just heading towards exams hardly10...15 days to go...so had to held it for some time then and later started off with it when there was no looking back then...😊

Call of duty had once again called them to join their respective fields...and this is one thing for which i praise these two characters a lot..ohh i always enjoy whenever dutta is checking himself in mirror...and pleased with his looks ...no doubts on that..😊
the chunni is his partner here again ...love it how it is always placed safely in that laptop case as his most prized possession ...😳
aww...him missing nakus tea and sandwiches...and on that part i agree naku aadat bhigarti hai...but i guess no one can resist to pamper him more and more 😳

and the OUTs too discussing his new looks...i know how students react when suddenly teacher comes out with a new look 😆...them discussing it sounded so natural...
oyee they thinking he got a facial...lol...he is tu naturally handsome ...😊

Major and brig.Parekh ...i enjoyed their informal conversation a lot...about his looks and asking about his aaye...relived to know he will return to conventions and no doubts that one person is naku 😊..once again loved the detalied description of his sitting posture...in discipline in front of his senior...it makes it so easy to picture it while reading...
a very well written session with OUTs...very well detailed*applauses*

Khan has actually disappointed Major here...her major reason to deny and accept the post is only major...here she fails the spirit to serve the nation ...an integral elemnt of an army officer..as a mentor major questioning his capabilities towards his students and his disappointment was
very evident...a teachers role in a students life is not only to teach them but also to highlight their capabilities ...to guide them towards the path for which they are actually meant to be..
i kind of enjoyed their argument...particularly duttas parts...very clear and staright...rightly said the
degree of risk is involved in many other fields a s well...or i would say it is always attached with each individual in some way or another...yes in their field its probably higher...but thats where they are actually trained to work in all the hazards...just with a motive to serve their country...and the title is so apt for khan here...lady doth sure protest too much!!!

Naku and Nadi share a lovely bonding...more so of a friend than a patient doctor...and for that naku deserves the credit...it makes so easier for the patient na when the doctor is more of a friend ..it defo helps to recover soon...apart from medicines the TLC also do wonders...and btw i love the deal between them...tasha getting married when nandi will be standing on her feet...hammie me planning to bribe this girl now.😆..hehe...wese i love nakus spirit a lot...her dedication towards her work :)
Khan and Kapur caught together...was one surprise...i love kapur casual proposal...kudiye tu bhi mujhe pasand karti hai...it was cute...but as expected the answer had to be no...is it true she is already spoken to someone in her community or she just said so to get rid of kapur...Enjoyed it how Dutta made an entry...Friend or foe...ahh...loved the lines 👏
Too eager to read how this track will turn...now the two of them had to face Majors wrath ...excited to read weather khan will confesssomething in front of Major...keeping fingers crossed for that...

And the ending is beautiful with tasha fone convo...love it how they are concerned with their respective works during their working hours...so much in discipline...and end their day with each other...oyee naku will never change inquiring about his work...love his reaction there...😆
and im sure his ohhh ahhh ohhh are very effective on naku...😉

Looking forward to the next update...thanks a ton for our weekly dose...this is also like an aadat😊 ...and many congrats once again for shifting to the second thread...way to go ...hopefully we will complete those 150 pages as well with the same fun we did here...kind of feeling
as well...have loads of memories on this thread...will always cherish it...still remember how we used to spam...daya...ivy...brvr...wese we plan to continue the same on another thread as well*ducks from chappals* 😆

But as an ending note for thread one ...would like to thank you to start an ff ...based on army background...letting us know the pain which is suffered by the loved ones of these officials...the degree of risk involved in their jobs...how a mother...sister...a wife/lover let go her man
with such courage...just because of the spirit to serve the nation...her son is no more hers ...he belongs to the country now...What a feeling it is...im finding it difficult to write and those who actually been through it...kudos to them...Salutes those officials who serve miles away
from their homes ...keeping their lives on stake and making it possible for us to sleep peacefully in our homes...Thank you so much Hammie for writing this journey in such a beautiful way...BLess You !!!


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Originally posted by: brvr

Anybody Home???
all you need to know my heart called for you...me in one of duttas rage moods ,iam not lying brvv,hammie is very transparent... i was moaning since 4 days ,.. no one bloody reads my work ,why the hell should i write...but my heart called for you ...i know its srange but you were my last hope ..i said if brv ne mujhe pukara tu i.ll carry on writing nehi to ...look i am not lying...why would i in front of the whole forum ...felt i pour my sweat and blood ...and no one reads my work ..perhaps i need a few bum pe laats or slaps from you...
ok..now business...just finshed doing UD ...very long ...saturady chale ga ,i have to proof read..
thanks bhi karne hai just one liners ,because they are on thread 1 ,aap ka bhi...
regards hammie ...hummmh the face ...hummh dunno what to say...

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