Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37

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Subii

@Subii

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

as promised i am back with my comments:😊

Dutta is damn happy with his rascal as if he is got into a space craft to moon..😆

he is so energetic..awww bechari nakku.. hehehe look at him he labelled her misfit..😳

well major saheb with this speed and enthusiasm who wud dare compete with u and ur rascal.

he doesnt leave any stone unturend to tease her..does he? he is sucha fusspot..but i loved his vivaciousness.. 👏i mean the way he interacted with the patients of shakti ward..even though he has momentarily lost his legs but he hasn't let it affect his sense of humour and his way to look at life..

awww nakku cried in the washroom after listening to anecdotes praising her saab..gosh! she loves him dearly..and the best part was even he sensed that she cried coz of him...😳

I love this man yaar.. bacche ki tarha hai bilkul..though he seems to be a tough nut from outside..he has that kind of aura..but he is ek dum coconut.

no matter how tough he tries to be but he cudnt stop tears in his mother's embrace.. 😍

😲yeh lo abhi to pyar shuru bhi nai hua aur abhi se jealousy.. hehe i am liking jelous dutta..

PT session was just awesome he is a cheeky monkey.. he wants to be with her but at the same time doesnt want to show any kind of affection towards her..

Baji is sucha sweetheart.. chup chup kar pee li..😆 in baji's style" bahu aaj apun ka pankha fast hone wala hai.." hehe😳

awww i love baji ki nautanki..

ummm now comes patte ki baat major sahab has actually fallen for her and that too real hard but he doesnt want to give into his emotions coz of his mental blocks about his profession and its effect on relationships but kab tak bachoge... i m sure this cant stop him loving her...😳😊

kafi lamba ho gaya naa rambling... kya karun .. yaa to main likh nai paati aur jab likhti hon to fir ruk nai pati😆

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

my dearest subii ! Aye subii !! what a lovely appreciation...what an analysis of Major Lion king's character...honestly your words in the feed back made me fall in love with the sour puss! beautiful words!

Aye subii... paisa wasul hogaya apun ka..xx. i guess for a writer such an indepth review is what gives the impetus to continue on. so thank you I did look forward to your opinion ... thanks for your pm tooo.

have a good week ahead... here's to loving Mishal our one and only Dutta...with much luv hammie 😊

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Hammieee !

First of all i need a hammer to get my senses back !

wohooo !

Major sahab oh i mean sir ko tu ap nay full on character twisting ki hai :P

i just love it

and hammie had to ask u

are u a gardener cuz the way u describe and remind us and review D very own garden was enough to lose my senses :P

even i would do the same what N did , run away from him !

well after blurting out all my chichori baatein !

Hammie awesome story ,

believe me ,

their is always a sensitive thing going aside the romance or tehf eeling D is going through ,

they way he is acrrying himself , he cant alk and he needs to take help from others

cuz he got injured saving his collegue , taking help is so not him

but here he is doing so

but may be thats the plan of God , some times we need a change to understand ourselves !

and wow how u describe D feeling when his father died ,

how does a young widow feels are beautifully decipted !

i had tears in my eyes

so he just make his way cut off from women cuz he cant see any one more like his mother ~

such a beautiful and sensitive thing u described beautifully from the view point of the child !

amazing

and yooo LOve D and N interactions

D is going gaga over Naku , he hates when her class fellow comes

and Baaji being adorable as always :)

not once he act like something huge has happen !

LOve that part abt him

and when D got his new comapnion the way u write in precap , i was so scared what was coming but u just nailed it

and Major doesnt wnat to sit i womens lap so make his name Rascal :P

smart move major

i likes it !

Oh Ayi saab and D scene beautiful

a women who lost his husband and now legs of his son for her country !

salute to her !

im sooo loving ur FF

and love that part when N says to D that

she wont let go theman she love to risk his life and they way D got disappointed !

amazinggg !

its kind of afiller to the updates i dont read , bear with these

i know ye comment kahan say kahan chala jata hai :P

but me also kya karo 97 inbox messages :(

im scared :P

but from now on proer comment on each update !

superb Hammie

i loved ur post , enjoy ur romantic comedy scens

but this is just too good !

keep rocking Rapture :D

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

@ kiran welcome back😊..I hope exams were tackled well. ok I have to say I missed your comments a lot and was wondering why? she has not bothered to read 3,4,5chapters grrr😡. Aye kino,aaj tu tonay khamoshi tor de ,soo I wont hammer you ... chal chor yaar janay de! Nahin! mein malli nahin hai.. mein just a Dutta/Mishal lover hoon who is keeping him alive beyond LTL1... glad you liked the peek into his past, and his bond with his mother... yes as far as Rascal is concerned ,I could'ent in essence show Dutta a soldier get detterred by his temporary paralysis... on the other hand think of all the touchy feely he's having with Nakku, courtesy of Pshyio! ha haaa besharam gadha😳 ... anway thanks for your much awaited feed back .Incidentally Iam working on chap.6 now hpoe fully by weekend should be ready yo have a much deserved rest after your exams... xxx hammie

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

waitin 4 update honey...plsss jaldi karo.x

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

@ mishez

Aye mishi! chahai tu mujay honey bola, ya cheeni, ya gujar ka halwa

Maan wapis aaaon gi ,intezaar kar!!! xxxhammie

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Hamlet53
@ mishez

Aye mishi! chahai tu mujay honey bola, ya cheeni, ya gujar ka halwa

Maan wapis aaaon gi ,intezaar kar!!! xxxhammie

LOL!! yeh na insaafi hai!!😆

zyada intezzaar mat karwana😳 pls dont tarapao-fying us lol