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Posted: 13 years ago
hey tahera,
buddy, hamare dilme koyi khot nahi. we r open abt all things good, bad, n ugly, as long as hammie has no issues we have no reason to be worried. But the biggest mystery is what happend to nakusha who has changed her colours, is it someone actg proxy in her absense😆, nahi toh kisne ghoos kilaya isko?😉 pata karo..
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Posted: 13 years ago
MY dearest MEENAXI!
thank you for continuing to read this FF..and for liking his last lecture...his going to UK ..abhi he has to broach the topic with his ma...dekho kiya bunta hai..me calling him😆 you wish...but wishful thinking in reality.haina? ..much love xxhammie..one of these hacve to visit your Realisation on DKDMD...waise lagaan was mind blowing..yes me watching it...very high level serial ..the subject..
all my love.xxhammie...
Hammie, you are the writer, creator of this story, everything is in your hand😆 for the Realsation take your own time😃 The level is very different that's what makes DKDM exceptional😊 TC😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
great UD as usual !!!thnks!!!!
loved all the desription of D getting ready for the lecture and the chaps from abroad were interesting
N thinks he is already going to the u.k (coming to see us with this weather raining non-stop)but maybe ayesahib won't let him go
hope you are well, miss your absence


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BHAuu: oops na mera matlab hai bharti main aa gaee pata laga ke...

bohat todha phoda, idhar se mara udhar se thoka...ghoda nikaal ke dhamkaya toh pata chala...kay apradhi kaun hain, ek nahin do do no1) LTL 1 ki nakku= the OTT sweet girl jo KKK (karva karela kala)😡😡 aur DSP (our very own neem ke darkhat ka jungle)😡 unkay sari karvahat apne ander dalnay kay baad bhi meethi ki meethi hi rahi ...(forget about ltl2 ki SHARABI LADAKI NAKKU)
no2) LTL 2 ka dutta s p= dhaba wala mujnoo nakku kay pyar mai bana = baverchi ya phir bhau se bana BAHU = jisnay halva , gulabjamun, kheer aur naajaanay kiya kiya cook karna seekha...aaahhh... dutta oh dutta phir ek din kala kiya seedhi hui... dsp no2 bechara kiya kerta dhobi ka ... na ghar ka na gh.. ka...jitni bhi shakkar wholesale main mangaee thi meetha bananay ke liyay ... so now
Nakku1 ki mithas}
=ghoos sab hamari dear nakusha ko khila di...😆 toh humari
Dutta 2 ki chashni} nakusha per asar toh hona hi tha
ab DSP2 bhi kiya kerta bechara DON giri nakku ne chora di chai ki dukaan se kala ki lipstick ka kharcha bhi poora nahin hoga😡 shayad hamari nakusha kahin baat kara de isliyay hammie per makkhan aur cheeni ka zyada istimaal ho raha hai.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tahera57

BHAuu: oops na mera matlab hai bharti main aa gaee pata laga ke...

bohat todha phoda, idhar se mara udhar se thoka...ghoda nikaal ke dhamkaya toh pata chala...kay apradhi kaun hain, ek nahin do do no1) LTL 1 ki nakku= the OTT sweet girl jo KKK (karva karela kala)😡😡 aur DSP (our very own neem ke darkhat ka jungle)😡 unkay sari karvahat apne ander dalnay kay baad bhi meethi ki meethi hi rahi ...(forget about ltl2 ki SHARABI LADAKI NAKKU)
no2) LTL 2 ka dutta s p= dhaba wala mujnoo nakku kay pyar mai bana = baverchi ya phir bhau se bana BAHU = jisnay halva , gulabjamun, kheer aur naajaanay kiya kiya cook karna seekha...aaahhh... dutta oh dutta phir ek din kala kiya seedhi hui... dsp no2 bechara kiya kerta dhobi ka ... na ghar ka na gh.. ka...jitni bhi shakkar wholesale main mangaee thi meetha bananay ke liyay ... so now
Nakku1 ki mithas}
=ghoos sab hamari dear nakusha ko khila di...😆 toh humari
Dutta 2 ki chashni} nakusha per asar toh hona hi tha
ab DSP2 bhi kiya kerta bechara DON giri nakku ne chora di chai ki dukaan se kala ki lipstick ka kharcha bhi poora nahin hoga😡 shayad hamari nakusha kahin baat kara de isliyay hammie per makkhan aur cheeni ka zyada istimaal ho raha hai.
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Yeh kya hai theory, very complicated..😆.mera bheja fry hogaya, aur yeh cheeni se diabetes is a myth😉, ulta asar hota hai, zyaada laad pyar sehat keliye teek nahi. Chalo dekte hai aaj kuch kaam ki baat hoti hai ki nahi thread me
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Posted: 13 years ago
bharti aaj toh ek meeting honi chahyay love birds main. nahin toh hammieji ki kher nahin!😃
aur yeh tera bheja hai ya nrd ka dhaba jo kabhi DAHI ban jata hai aur kabhi FRY ho jata hai😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

bharti aaj toh ek meeting honi chahyay love birds main. nahin toh hammieji ki kher nahin!😃
aur yeh tera bheja hai ya nrd ka dhaba jo kabhi DAHI ban jata hai aur kabhi FRY ho jata hai😡

🤣!, actually tere saat baat karke bheje mein wapas akal aajati hai, nahi toh hamesha short fuse, wiring me kuch gadbad hai😆...
I remember hammie sayg saturday is d UD, but no sign of her, So weve to either wait n watch or entertain ourselves
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Posted: 13 years ago
B Embassy main nakku kay visa ki baat chala ahi hogi 😉 !
zaroor shadi ke baghear lanay ke liyay koi reason chahyay😉 uski reasearch main time laga rahi hogi aur wo koi na koi jatan karke lay hi aayay gi shayad PT ki further training !😆 karvanay.
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Mishal Raheja as Major Dutta Patel

Painful Rapture ~Chapter 47

"the primrose path".. Shakespeare

The sound of the phone alarm.. "Jagoo Mohan pyaree jagoo"..rudely jarred Dutta's slumber and he growled ,with a twist of his arm reached his phone and disconnected the alarm function with the press of the right button.."hummmh, he buried his face in her chunni and smelt the admixtures of his and her fragrance, his cologne, his shampoo, her honey suckle odour, anommhhh he moaned hot breathe into her chunni, his life ,ummmh he went and turned his side as he dragged her veil with him between his taut lions , and further carried on with his deeds of loving her and delayed getting up , the phone ring and he brought it to his ear, "Saab ,mujhe pata hai ke ap abhi bhi nehe uthe hoga, haina?, she asked in a fresh tone , he smiled his nose still buried in her chunni , "hummh nehe utha hoon , thujhe kya takleef hai?, upne bed mein hoon.. tera bed mein nehi , bare aye muhjhe par humkaan chalona wali , ahhh baaaby he moaned, "mujhe ye takleef hai Saab ke ap mujhe chooru, jana do mujhe itna kas ke ap ne pakra hoi hai ke meri sanns band ho jaye gi!", she teased, he laughed ,with some difficulty with an early morning frog in his throat.."thujhe choorne ke liye nehi pukara maine Naku, just remember that baaby you are for keeps , forever and ever, never let you go.."he drawled with meaning, Naku, blushed, "pata hai Saab, I wouldn't want it any other way, want to be yours Saab, but for now you need to get up and embrace the new day.. your work awaits you , so main jalte hoon..she almost concluded , he rolled on his back with her chunni on top of him, "oye rok! Chaal fatafat give me a good morning kiss , meethi se , invigorating se kiss that really wakes your lover boy! Hummh" Naku shook her head and giggled and smooched him over the phone, he groaned "ye tu apne aashiq ko kiss de rehe hai ye kisi munno ko choom rehe hai !you bloody boring cow! chaal haat peeche have to get now! he protest and ummh..d and ahh..d as he lowered his toes on the floor and stood naked by the side of the bed, she shouted on the phone as he pressed the mic, he heard her question and pulled the bed sheet to cover his torso, "Saab kya ker rahe ho?, he tightened the sheet around his waist like a sarong. "Naango hoon"!..she screamed and he smiled devilishly as he stuffed the corner of the sheet around his waist.."oye maat kush ho, sorry baaby , but wrapping a sheet around me..sorry couldn't give you cheap thrills , but haan be my guest and feel free to use your imagination Naku!"!he chuckled , she shouted back, "mujhe nehi imagine kerna kuch bhi Saab, meri one track mind nehi hai ap ke theran"..he listened and shouted back " to ye le phir! I have pulled the sheet off me and he bent his wrist as his fingers grabbed hold of the stuffed corner of the sheet around his waist and threw the bed sheet flying across in a circular motion back to his unkempt divan bed..he heard her scream and rightly the phone went dead with the sound of the dial tone... he smiled "mujhe baton mein harne challe hai stupid woman"! ..he sashayed towards the shower his head tilted to one side and his right eyed narrowed with a pert smile on his lips..she was such a teaser, such a quiet rave, this woman of his ,he couldn't even imagine life without her! he mused as he turned on the shower.. and stood beneath it, his strong posterior frame faced the wall , his wide back felt tender and he needed to give it the hot soak treatment with the gush of water that fought to lace ,wash , douche, his flipside "ahhh! ,he cried as the water beat him part gentle part forcible..at cleaned him , soaked him and soothed his tender back... he bent his elbows and folded his muscular arms, the black hairs of his armpits stuck to the inner cavities of his shoulders .. he clasped his fingers and elevated his knotted arms above his drenched head and parked them against the tiled wall slightly above the shower..the shower puked ,and spurted on the top and back of his head as the insides of his pink lips were forced apart by the power of the water! "ahhh he went as his body perked with a thousand sensations from the hot wet drizzly fingers of the water. He gradually moved his well formed hind backwards to the wall and folded one thigh up and flattened the sole of his slender foot against the wall ,while he stood on one leg and thought of the day's commitments..a sea of this ,that and the other flooded into the crevices of his mind and he grit his teeth and stroked the thick mat of wet hair on his chest as , he prioritized , marking...that was the main target .. the thought of giving Parekh an answer regarding his decision about overseas duties could wait, as his family had not been consulted.. so assessment it had to be for the day! ,he nodded and rotated the anterior of his tall drenched glistening wet muscular body to face the shower ,and immediately the front of his face became like a water baby as the water slapped the top of his head and kissed his broad shoulders down his curved spine , whipping his taut hind and descending down his muscular legs. ahhh Nakuu! ohhh .,he spurted out of his pink lips ,it was in moments of such sensuous vibrations he never failed to take her name..hummmh he screwed his nose this place in itself was a great place to set your timetable table for the today! the shower room! he yanked his head , it seemed though... so far it will turn out to be a reasonable day as he started it with listening to the voice of the love of his life, his woman...

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Naku , triggered with renewed vigour moved towards Ms.Tendulkar's office, if there was one expectation her Saab had from her it was to use her on initiative.. she had told him about considering, promotion , he had in turn clearly left the ball in her court to take the decision and thereafter do the needful, so before he questions her about the outcome ,which she knew was not his style, for as she knew him, he was not the usual persuasive man who would over power a woman's own decision making quality..instead he was her action man who gave her space... yesterday she thought, he consulted her about his possible professional development ,i.e, lecturing abroad... which then reminded her of her own ... she reached the office and requested for the application forms for the post of PT coordinator, her eyes invariably popped out as she looked at the daunting pack... heaven's it looked sooo prescriptive and full of jargon, that she almost cowered ,and felt she needed to speak to him immediately ...she headed for the cafe and ordered a hot chocolate and dialled his number.. Dutta sweated over a sea of pupil assessments ,when the phone rang ,he saw her name and put his pen down and pushed back in his leather desk chair and rested his head back as he answered the phone, he had already concluded that it must be urgent .. as he already had his naughty games with her this morning, he hoped his mother was well, "haan baaby..kya hai ?everything alright with you my shahzadi" he responded, "Saab, woh main, woh," she stuttered," oye pagal aurat aage bhi bole ge kuch! ke woh aur main ke chaakar mein se thujhe main kanchej ke nikaloon !"he yelled, "ok!ok! Saab..now I have got my application form, and Saab, bahut bara pack ,hai kuch samjhe nehi ata , Saab dar lag reha hai usko dekh ker", Dutta smiled and in this instance his arms just throbbed to hold her and kiss her as if she was his child and he her parent..."aye Naku, Dutta ke sherni ho ker darte hai tu, baaby you are one hell of a woman, full of gusto , a go getter ! baaby , kya ho gaye hai thujhe ?himmat rekh , main hoon na tera saath, chaal open the form and tell me the subheadings... and listen baaby this a management position you are applying for baaby and that too of a government organization ,not some corner shop, there is information about what the purpose, the running, organizational structure, maintenance ,funding of the company..baaby there is accountability, which makes it necessary that the things are in black and white before every applicant when they go for the job, so darne ke kio baat nehi!"..counselled Dutta, as Naku flicked through the pages and nodded ,her Saab was so right..."Saab ,haan everything is like you said, she admitted, "ok chaal now go the actual application section" ,he suggested and then continued, "now in this one Naku you should have first personal spec. and then the job spec..along with desirable and must have requirements of the post",he predicted..Naku responded with understanding, "haan Saab personal mein I put in all the information about myself, qualifications, results, year, any previous jobs ,likes and dislikes..." Dutta well pleased replied "correct baaby ,aur if you have worked ,even in voluntary capacity put that down"... and after a pause he continued "oye likes mein sirf ek he cheez lekna "Saab". uhmm do ye thein dafa lekh dena" ...he chuckled, Naku raised her voice ,"Saab stay on task!", he sniggered and then continued "ok now the job specification baaby, is all about what they want from you , so I suggest ke before you attempt that ..think of all the things you have done as a PT, mostly your strengths , and for your weankness you could say..they are the areas you need to develop in ...and possible ways of how you may overcome those areas ..baaby will become your future targets"...he explained, but she groaned, "Saab ye mushkal hai" and he retorted ,"oh don't be silly woman! mushkil kaise hai? you are thinking about yourself! who you are ?what you have done ?and what you have to offer! Naku, pagal maat bun! aur ek baat aur tere interview ke questions sarre tere answers pe he based hoonge..so write only succinctly in the application form ,because everything else you out line verbally in the interview ,samjhe gaye tu?"he queried. Naku's eyes twinkled oooh how much she loved her Sher...there was nothing he didn't know ..he was always there for her when she needed him her action man...not just a stubble face is he?.she mused affectionately in quiet moment.."oye zinda hai ya maar gaye hai tu!"he roared, at her pause, "hoon zinda hoon Saab, ap ke bahoon mein my face turned up waiting for you to act!" ,he stroked his face shyly, "teri tu main! act ke aise ke taise!, bikwas maat ker besharam aurat! he roared, she giggled ,"waise Saab ap bahut kam ke cheez ho , saach mein ,lagan ke bad I'll keep applying for higher positions, aap jo ho mujhe help kerne ke liye", she admitted, he pulled his neck back and narrowed his eyes, "oye lardki lagan ke bad tera Saab ek he kam kere ga , thujhe ache theran se apne jorru bana ke rekhooon ,ahem !ahem !ahem ,only one job baaabyyy ..hummh" he said roguishly, and after a pause added, "chaal ja ab peecha choor mera", and she replied.."hawww" and the call ended. With a smile on her face and a spring in her step Naku, headed for her little office to secure her application form and headed towards the Wards...

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It was hard for young Nandi to ignore the young handsome almond eyed new male PT.. Sangakarra , munched at his tuna mayo salad filled crusty roll his eyes glued to the IPL cricket happening on the TV screen, it seemed he was dead to the rest of the world..he only reacted at the applaud of other patients in the recreation room. Nandi dressed in bubblegum pink leggings and a white loose shift with a single red strawberry on it with matching plastic white pumps speckled with strawberries..decided she would act. She hauled herself with confidence and held her cuff crutch under one arm and walked towards him and suddenly as she walked past him as he devoured his roll she tripped. Sangakkarra , jumped to his feet and prevented her from falling.. by his strong muscular arm.. once she was steady he looked sideways at her, "easy , young lady.. attempting a marathon are we? "he smiled, Nandi smiled churlishly, "how foolish of me I think it's these pumps of mine one of them slipped out of my foot , I am sorry and thank you, I am Nandi she said as she held her hand out to him. He smiled at her as he shook her hand, "and I am Sangakkarra , young lady..pleased to meet you", he said reservedly and drew his muscular chest back from her young frame. Nandi, giggled , as she spontaneously held one of her fingers between her mouth impishly, "look I could see you are one ,like everyone else ! a cricket freak!. Sangakkara looked at her bemused, "freak!, correction young lady! but enthusiast, yes clear cut that I am" he said ,with sophistication. Nandi looked into his hazel eyes and was only one step from disintegrating into a swoon ,when she held on to his arm and feebly almost steered him towards the two seater settee of the patients day room, and literally pulled him towards her as both sank into the settee. She beamed at him sideways, and exclaimed "we might as well watch it together, I must admit "Sann.." she attempted, and he helped her.. somewhat abruptly, "Mr. Sangakkara if you please... all patients refer to me by this name."..she turned her face towards him and jested,.."Mr! oh come on you are not that old that I should call you mister! can't I call you "Sang", it's very noteworthy!" she chirped, he looked at her as he stood to his feet and tersely but in honesty remarked, "look young lady, "the name is Sangakkarra" and I take great pride in having it! paused and nodded his head ..and continued, "but to have it chopped and changed in any shape or form because it's out of the ordinary and sticks out as different, nope not on! aaand while we are on the topic of modifying our names for the convenience of others ,surely Nandi, is not how your name is meant to be..."he pressed. She gave him a defeated smile, "ok Sangakkarra point taken, and you are right my name as it should be is Nandini...she relayed. He smiled down at her his dusky face lit up, "very pleased to meet you Nandini, and so I shall be calling you from now on .."he confirmed. Nandi could judge by his body language and his final word that he was about to leave ,and she slightly struggled to find her feet, he gently bent and passed her crutch ,which she adjusted around her left arm and started to walk beside him, outside the TV lounge into the garden through the French doors of the day room..Naku, who walked into the TV lounge was just in time to catch the glimpse of the person she required. Naku, was chaffed to see the positive influence Sangakkarra had on her prime patient.. he walked along the garden pathway, looking occasionally at a clearly over exuberant Nandi..Naku smiled and speculated what the conversation might be between the two, but she soon after checked her smile and, noted that she may have to have a conversation with Sangakkarra.. Sangakkarra nodded as Nandi rattled on as she sat herself on the wrought iron benches donated by the army hospital, she looked around at other benches with handles, "you know Sangakkarra I look at myself, a month ago I struggled to sit on one of those ,minus sides benches, Naku noted the need of without sides benches and set to work, I am sure you must have heard about her achievements...chatted Nandi, Sangakkarra smiled "I have heard for sure, but tell me what you were going to say about yourself" he encouraged, Nandi smiled, "well all I was going to say is that a month ago I used to sit here and think, how in life we always expect it to be blue skies and sunshine like today, we are content in our comfort zones..but when storm heralds we run for cover we seek refuge..we run towards whatever and whoever consoles us, I tell you Sangakkarra for me it was my PT Naku, I have to confess there were times after my car crash ,I ran myself to seek refuge from the storm of disillusionment within me..but gradually Sangakkarra with Naku's help I began to see the light through the tunnel" reflected Nandi as she became dewy eyed...Sangkkarra thought here he was a trainee PT, listening to a patient's perception of a healer or person involved in his or her well being and healing process...all this,he mused, is never in the in any application form ..it has to be learnt on the job when one actually mucks in...he thought...it was getting late and he alerted Nandi, "well young lady you'd better get some rest ..and I'll see you around" he said as he waited for her to stand up and follow him.

Naku spotted, Sangakkarra after lunch and approached him in a casual manner, "listen I was meaning to have an initial review meeting with you ,when would be a good time for you" she asked with quiet confidence, Sangakkara realized her seniority sway within the hospital and responded immediately with politeness, "now is fine if it's ok with you that is"?,Naku nodded and instructed, "ok let's grab a coffee and go to my office, shall we?" .Both realized that for Sangakkarra it spelt that some form of record of the interview or review would be kept.. Naku, was sensible enough to catch on to the fact that in order to put, especially probationers or trainees at ease at an initial meeting certain strategies had to be put in place ,like regards to use ofcertain body language ,and the content selected that was to be used in terms of articulation. She concluded that the questions asked needed to be modelled in a manner that the probationer is given the opportunity to express his or her views. She began, by using praise ,thus egging him on to engage in conversation, "I see Sangakkara that you appear to be handling your duties in a steady stride, what would you say,?"she prodded, Sangakkarra smiled immediately with positivity in his attitude, "oh most definitely Nakusha. I seem to have found my ropes ,and seem to know my way around ,he replied, before he fizzled out Naku ,questioned him, "so what would you say are your strengths so far Sangakkarra?"he charged up again and with reasonable ease he replied "I feel that one of my strengths so far, seeing that I am still fairly new ,is that I have a fairly stable knowledge of my patients", Naku nodded "so this then was the feel good about factor , now what would you say, are the not so feel good issues.."she teased him ,and he responded with equal ease "well Nakusha it's early days yet to identify many but to name a few would be to strike a bond between the patients and myself whereby they can gain my trust ,and allow me to give them the therapy that would prove beneficial to them in terms of their specific healing.."Naku felt she had veered him to the position where she wanted him and asked him bluntly "and how close a bond should there be between a patient and PT, Sangakkarra?..Sangakkarra began to get the drift now and he replied, "well Nakusha the bond should be based on professional entirety.." Nakusha perked up and spoke duty bound," I am glad you recognize the limitations that exist between a PT and his or her patients, as the company guidelines stipulates that no emotional links of a romantic nature, other than those of boosting patient morale,when administering treatment, should transpire between patients and company professionals ,or between two professionals of the same company" stated Nakusha, and she found Sangakkarra total in agreement with her. She felt, that before any further amorous links between Nandi and this young and handsome PT progress any further she would clarify the Dera's company rules and regulation policy..she had a feel good factor..and she pulled one of her metal filing cabinet , and fished out the companies policy booklet and handd it over to him "here take look in your spare time, and in the meanwhile if there are any other niggling issues about anything let me help", she offered. Sangakkarra smiled," oh by the way Nakusha ,Nandani was talking about the bond you two have,". A slightly flushed Naku, reponded "our bond it is that of a friend, I needed to have that bond so I could inculcate in her a spark that would aid in lifting herself on her feet, it was to promote self esteem!"justified Naku, and stood to indicate that the meeting had terminated, " well thank you for your time Sangakkarra I hope you found it worth your while as I did.."both smiled politely and left Naku's office to head for their further duties within the wards...

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Dutta, sat engrossed in marking, when a sudden commotion outside his door, checked him in task and impelled him to open his door. Amidst further hubbub, stood right under his stubble chin a sullen faced Khan ,surrounded by her uniformed colleagues, who immediately ceased their protests on seeing him. He scanned them one to all males and female officers , with a darted stare which came from underneath a pair of creased brows above the bridge of his strong nose. He moved his head to indicate the close proximity within which they all stood .."move back now! he commanded, and they obeyed and stepped back as he came out of his office and stood before them with his arms folded across his chest, "now what the hell is this bloody furore about! some on us are trying to work! and how dare you have the bloody nerve to forget where you are! he raised his pointed finger at their faces, now what the hell is the fuss?",he had barely said that, when nearly all of them went into a disorderly cacophony of , but's ,not's ..he raised his palm this time calmly and explained," may I remind you officers that you are not on site of a college or university campus ,creating a hullabaloo to rally support for some forsaken cause" ,Khan raised her oriental eyes up to his face ,"pardon our interruption Sir! but it is a cause , and we want your support", she said but checked herself as she briefly noted his cold distant downcast stare into her eyes, and in haste reshaped her request," if not that at least a chance to hear us out, please Sir!",she pleaded and the rest of them nodded in agreement...he looked at them , despite their rather unacceptable approach of drawing his attention ,he concluded that he would lend them an ear. He, turned to lock his room and commanded, "about turn!, single file! and follow me!.

The marched behind him as he ordered, their arms swinging only just, Bradley coming from the opposite direction in full uniform, bowed his head as the officers , saluted smartly. As they filed past, Bradley, turned his head briefly and noted them as they disappeared around the corner , he wondered ,what that was all about..Dutta's fixed countenance that he saw first, as he walked down the corridor gave nothing away, hence it was best he mind his own business thought Bradley.The Outs were mighty surprised as they, suddenly stooped outside the gym swivel doors and Dutta pushed open one of them to make entry. The huge space of the gym was unoccupied and Dutta waited for his officers to enter and once they had ,he cocked his hand and signalled them to position themselves in a horizontal line before him. They stood before him smartly ,their arms by their sides ,and he smiled, in satisfaction ,as he walked towards the wooden bench that stood parallel to his standing to attention Outs. He turned to face them and bent his long legs and gradually sat on the bench his legs kneed up slightly apart.He looked across to them with keen narrow eyes and brought his folded arms to rest on his knees, "ok! stand at ease! and lets hear it then Khan! and before you all start as if you are in a fish market!, if you do have anything to add then kindly ask permission before speaking.."he commanded. Khan, still in at an ease position like the rest of them, began, "well Sir, all of us have come across the news that within this country, the role of woman in active combat is subject to debate, now ,this has certainly shaken me ,as it might have certain implications on what I was meant to pursue after this course is finished.." explained Khan. Dutta raised an eyebrow , and responded, "ok! Khan and the rest of you..as you have pointed out ,yes there is a debate happening ,which simply means that nothing has been finalized yet.. so if I was you I wouldn't worry about it !, now regarding your future after this course ,again Khan, we'll cross that bridge when it arrives", he said curtly, but after a pause ,as he looked at his officers who still needed their feathers smoothed, he continued, "but I have to say, as your tutor Iam impressed that you keep yourself abreast with current news that effects either the government or more so importantly the defence policies of your country!". Dutta, could very well see that his answers were not enough for them and he raised his eyes up to them and jut his head at Bhatnagar, to speak, "well Sir, most of us feel that in these times to be discriminated against in the army, to be considered not good enough! to be possibly barred from participating in line combat, makes me wonder what we ,especially us women are doing here in the first place Sir! she complained ,and soon after, Kapur raised his hand and after permission and added in," it's hard to believe that we as an institution are implicating that are fellow women officers are subservient to male officers in terms of the job we do, which seems highly unfair Sir", Dutta listened intently to the mood and replied," your thoughts are valued Kapur, but that's how issues may seem at this moment ,but again have to remind you that nothing is set in stone, when they are we can take it from there.." he reasoned. Khan ,raised his eyes and expressed , "yes, Sir, we take on board the rationale you have out lined, but ,Sir, as our tutor we would like you to support us on this one..". Dutta noticed she left it open ended, which meant the onus fell on him now to clarify matters regarding this issue..he took some fast decisions in silence ,and hauled himself on his feet and strode towards his officers. He looked at them with a degree of respect and parted his lips, "ok officers ,thanks for letting me know , I'll get back to you on this one shortly..and now if you'll all excuse me I have pending chores to catch up with, dismissed! he commanded. He watched them leave the gym in a single file and followed them out.

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Dutta, made way towards, Brigadier Parekh's office, and found his boss involved in matters of defence with his British counterparts, Piggott and Bradley. The men looked up from the huge map spread across a large wooden table.. "ah Dutta come my boy! greeted Parekh and Dutta clicked his heels and saluted the senior officers, with elegant decorum. As , Pigott peered at a strategic location over the map , Dutta walked towards Parekh and stated in a low tone, "Sir I needed to have a quick word with you", Parekh rather jovially, responded, "actually young man I too need to have a word with you ,so good you saved me for sending for you, he boomed, stopped and then continued with gusto, "ok Dutta you go first! and don't worry about these gentlemen, they might as well listen in on the workings of what goes on in the dean's office of this school!".Bradley looked at Dutta and tried to read his face, after all he has seen this guy lead his class down the corridor..he conjectured, may be now he would learn what it was all about. Dutta stood his head erect, his hands behind his back, "well Sir, it's my duty to inform you as an officer and a tutor that, it has been brought to my attention that there is a degree of future job insecurity ,with regards to their roles, in particular the roles of females in the Army.Sir! began Dutta. Parekh ,alerted him self, and so did the visiting officers, and Parekh, encouraged ,"carry on Dutta", Dutta, with slight flared nostrils continued, "well Sir, as we are aware there is recent debate about the entry of women officers in the armed forces... now that news has reached the Outs through internet portals Sir! I have just had a brief chat with my officers to identify a few, and to me Sir they appear highly ill- informed and subjective with regards to this matter. Some of them have taken stands and expressed opinion without analysing the matter in its entirety. To me Sir! after just listening to them briefly ,both male and female officers consider it as an issue of equality of sexes or gender bias or even women's liberation. To me personally Sir! it may not also be a question of conquering the so-called 'last male bastion', reported Dutta ,to deeply pensive officers present. Parekh, responded, "hummh, gentlemen , this would amounts to trifling a matter, yet it may concern the well-being and the war-potential of a nation's armed forces. Armed forces have been constituted with the sole purpose of ensuring defence of the country and all policy decisions should be guided by this overriding factor". Pigott, after, a may I with his palm, contributed in Parekh's support, "of course all matters concerning defence of the country have to be considered in a dispassionate manner.No decision should be taken which even remotely affects the cohesiveness and efficiency of the military. Concern for equality of sexes or political expediency should not influence defence policies...in my opinion" he argued, but Parekh knew this was not enough so he turned towards his finest officer, who brought him this news of unrest among the ranks for a solution.. "ok Dutta so what do you reckon we should do", Dutta, piqued his lips and replied, "well Sir! the way forward would be to tackle the issue, in a debate here in the school as well, have a discussion, people express their for and against arguments, where the aim at least if nothing else is to raise awareness of our Outs to the issues the army has to face when recruiting personnel", suggested Dutta. Parekh 's face beamed in approval, "why that my boy is an excellent notion! at least we get to hear and see the reasoning skills of our Outs..so shall I leave it in your good hands to organize this debate, and maybe our visitors get to sit in as well", invited Parekh as he looked at the smiling officers. Dutta , bowed his head and doubled his chin, "with pleasure Sir!, it's sort of what my Outs are expecting from me ..as if by my magic wand make matters clear! He admitted with a small smile ,and looked ready to leave, when Parekh stopped him, "ohhh and Dutta I 'd like you to twirl your magic wand again ,and act the perfect host to our visiting officers by offering the warm hospitality of a Maharashtran household! ,boomed Parekh, before a stunned Dutta, and terribly embarrassed Piggott and Bradley, who, protested, "well no if it means encroaching on your privacy", Dutta ,slanted his neck, and with a twinkle in his eye ,he assured," no problem ,in fact it's my pleasure entirely". .Parekh too nodded, "see told you never a problem with his family , in fact Pigott I know the boy's family, his mother is the world's best hostess ,she's ready to receive visitors at the drop of a hat! isn't that so Dutta?. Dutta brought his folded hand to the corner of his mouth shly and bowed his head with a smile, "so that's settled then!, actually Dutta I was wondering if you could show these gentlemen the Dera hospital too", exclaimed Parekh while he winked his right eye at Dutta as he rubbed his hands.

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Parekh being the professional that he was phoned the local Dera , and used his charm, "ah! Ms.Tendulkar, how are you ma'am ? this is Parekh ,from the Military school, I was wondering if I could send two visiting British officers for a bird's eye view into the workings of the Dera hospital, eh, it'll just be an informal drop by so no great formalities please , so would that be convenient ma'am?" waited Parekh. Parekh was aware he could have used a more just letting you tone, and not given the choice to Ms. Tendulkar but, as always he kept in mind the image of the army not throwing it's weight around and forthwith used the rather ask first method than give an order. Ms.Tendulkar, replied in an obliging tone, "of course Brigadier, they are most welcome ,the staff here would be happy to receive them". Ms.Tendulkar, in total control , buzzed for Nakusha, and advised her of the task she wanted her to carry out. Within her mind, if Nakusha was going to come into management than she should be ready to handle the ropes.

Naku's heart missed a beat, at the sound of foreign officers visting and that to from the Military school. As it was mid morning tea break, and she had no more sessions till after lunch, she decided to change out of her two piece PT uniform into something elegantly casual and in keeping the warm weather conditions she chose a unique white chiffon saree printed with black paisley motifs with a delicate contrasting border. She fitted her shapely body into a quarter length sleeved blouse. The saree draped around the contours of her lower body and fell into a neat set of pleats under her pallu which diagonally crossed her bosom and remained securely pinned over her shoulder and hung gracefully her pallu end. She looked at her hair gave it a quick comb, parted it from the middle, finger curled the short bangs on either side of her middle parting and with dexterity loosely braided her hair and brought it gently to rest around one side of her neck. She looked at her large green doe eyes and briskly lined them with a delicate flick of kajal..and finally glazed her lips with peach lip gloss.. sprayed herself with a tiny bit of honey suckle and peach ,and grabbed her phone ,tote bag and keys and left her apartment. Her saree swished as she headed briskly towards Reception , where Ms.Tendulkar already waited for her to arrive she was pleased to see Nakusha ,and remarked, "you know Nakusha I was about to suggest that you go and change into a saree, talk about mind reading young lady,"she nodded. Naku ,parted her lips and gave a tiny crooked smile as her eyes beamed ,it was nice to be complimented once a while, she mused ..and his thought made her shudder inside her saree ,but she chided herself, absolutely not he is such a miser with compliments, and then thought come to think of it so was she.. and almost smiled but what would she say to her Sher ,her action man, he who is always in top form. Sangakkarra came too and stood beside her looking very smart in a pale blue shirt tucked in and smartly belted in place over slouch fit black trousers and matching black smart casual black shoes. Ms.Tendulkar, who was on the lookout for her visitors suddenly noted the arrival of an olive green jeep which swerved for designated parking which Nakusha had already arranged for, followed by yet another one.. she turned to Naku ,"there here, Nakusha" , and the three Ms.Tendulkar, Nakusha and Sangakkarra waited..

Finally to Naku's amazement in stepped the tall and handsome fully uniformed with his beret slanted on his head,the stubble faced officer, with a firm face ,and an erect neck and narrow lion like eyes... this officer who was her man!, Dutta walked in boldly with the two British officers alongside followed by two soldiers with covered bayonets held in front of them. Sanagakkarra looked at Naku ,and almost performed a wink but looked at the major and he stopped the fast side blink of the eye. Dutta , headed straight towards the middle aged lady who came towards them and he stood with heels together and saluted, as did the other army personnel, soldiers and officers alike.." ma'am Major Dutta from the Military school ,may I present to you the officers Brigadier.Piggott, and Major Bradley from the British army". reported Dutta curtly ,as Naku's eyes shifted on him but he completely ignored her. Ms.Tendulkar joined her hands in a namaste and sided a little to present her staff, " officers you are welcome here and may I present my PT'S this is Ms. Nakusha senior PT, who will be giving you a guided tour of the key areas of the dera hospital"..Dutta squared his shoulders with pride, instead as he tried desperately not to gawk at her, "and this is Mr.Sangakkara, a trainee PT who has joined us recently" introduced Ms.Tendulkar, and Dutta was the first to shake Sangakkara's hand , followed by the British officers. Ms. Tendulkar, made way for Nakusha, "now officers I shall leave you in the good hands of my senior PT who will take you from now and I shall see you later", and with Ms.Tendulkar left, and Dutta waited silently for his lioness to come into action. Naku with quiet confidence invited the vistors "if you follow me Sirs, and look around , and feel free to ask questions the two officers flanked her on either side and Dutta and Sangakkarra followed them . Dutta now stole a glance at her well shaped curved back in her graceful white saree, he longed to touch her.. so close he thought yet so far, Bradley turned too this extremely becoming little petite PT, he thought churlishly everywhere he goes he stumbles across beauties ,"umhh Ma'am spoke Bradley and Naku turned to him, "please call me Nakusha" she said politely and Dutta looked at the back of her neck and he opened and closed his fists as his nostrils flared slightly ,..zayeeda friendly bun rehi hai yedri! he grinded inside, "yes Nakusha so tell me how many PTs do you have in here?"asked Bradley, "well as this is a small unit in terms of PT treatment, we have currently three , and one trainee, but it is sufficient to fulfill our needs as we have not more then 20 patients here currently ,"Pigott asked as they toured ,through the building, "so who deals with patients with severe needs ?"Naku turned to Pigott as she continued to walk briskly in her saree, while Dutta watched her very move from behind, "the complicated cases Sir we refer to the larger and more sophisticated unit of the military hospital, you see this unit has been formed for the convenience of people who live around this area, as travelling to the military hospital unless in an emergency situation in an ambulance ,may be a costly expedition" ,she explained. They approached the therapy rooms and Naku held the doors open but Dutta overtook the holding of the door from her and moved his hand to move ahead , made Bradley noticed immediately, that here was he thought a silent visual swap between this PT and the otherwise serious Major Dutta. Naku proudly drew the visitors attention to the equipment and with her body language showed how some of the contraptions worked..and all the while Dutta too moved his neck but his narrow eyes shifted back on her and lapped up whatever he could from a distance . Bradley yet again noted the lions eyes lingering longer than required, on this dainty little lass.. Piggott walked up to Naku in the treatment room and expressed his desire to meet a patient..Naku cheered up and replied, " well sir, I have a patient for you, or shall I say a success story, so if you please follow me I think I know where she might be.."instructed Naku and lead them towards the TV lounge and day care area...and there for sure sat Nandi who suddenly stood up while she yanked her cuff crutch on her upper arm. Her eyes popped out as she saw these officers enter the room, Naku smiled and turned to the visitors, "meet Nandi, my success story gentleman"!, but Nandi smiled as she caught Sangakkarra's eye, "hello officers and the full name is Nandini, she chirped..the visitors asked her brief questions about her accident, but much to Dutta's delight and joy Nandi praised the input from her PT and she almost gave Naku an endearing hug ,when she suddenly caught sight of the very handsome Indian officer she literally stared at his face, and quite spontaneously her eyes fell on his name and she blinked and then yelled Major Dutta Patil ! the Major! ..Dutta 's eyes widened in embarrassment not knowing why his young chit of a girl should yell his name ..till he saw her turn towards Naku and fire her with the question.."Naku he is the one, your action man! Naku's face turned red and Dutta brought his folded hand to his mouth and lowered his eyes. Bradley smiled and tried to catch Dutta's eyes... it was quite obvious something was going on between the major and the PT... to be continued,hamlet53~ 28.4.12

Precap "Yes, Bradley you have guessed it right, Nakusha is my fiance, admitted Dutta.



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Abhi tumhe satane ki baari aagayi, 😉
So u ready Hammie,

The boring cow went all gaga realisin him standing naked n him enjoyin her reaction to the hilt..😉.God! who said there is a famine, atleast monsoons in India is predicted to be normal this year n hammie went ahead with a generous shower scene aptly described by tahera later...tahera, u dunno how much you lifted my spirits that day with ur remarks . so me not adding much here.😛

The phone cal cracked me up, at one end he is so meticulously preparing her for the application n then at the same time enjoying her company thoroughly, beautiful mix of light romance n work. "oye likes mein sirf ek he cheez lekna "Saab". uhmm do ye thein dafa lekh dena" ...😆 me too chuckling here, luvd this remark, oh! more to come me finding it difficult to sit in place frequently fallin off, how he is teasing n teaching but naku unperturbed, superb!!! hammie, me enjoyed this mmensely.

oye, almond eyes baas! chiseled face nahi hai ?? 😃aur nandi err nandini ko kya hogaya achanak, baar baar gir rahi hai, pagli seeking some attention after her long hibernation maybe, poor girl sangakkara not in the mood... aur naku toh major ke jaise behave kar rahi hai with sangakara all precise n blunt almost, but sangakkara too not giving her any chance to complain.

hmm... the outs[lady] agitated at the prospect of an 'in limbo' situation where things are hazy n their future in combat unclear, they have a point n who else than major to answer their queries. Major did well to bring to parekh's notice n finally had to handle it the way he suggested 'a debate' on the matter which im sure will be more than just interesting. I too feel this is not to be treated in the light of 'male bastion conquered', it has a profound importance on national security and also has to be seen how well a female officer can contribute in the forces instead of puttin her safety n integrity in jeopardy.

Gosh! parekh leaves no leaf unturned when it comes to embrassing Major with the visitors now comg to his home n an impeding visit to Dera hospital without as much a notice to get thinking really, im wonderg how come parekh has taken so much liberties wit major's pvt life?😕
Wow! tendulkar n nakusha all set to receive the guests n me excited to closely watch major's body language when he is with naku amidst strangers. And no surprises, even Bradley noticed the change in major''s behaviour. But Nandi did what no other would have dared to, spilled the beans, in full public view.. bravo! 👏
So this turned out to be a pleasant reading not as u made it out to be, enjoyed every word n surprised me actually. wil wait for the next, the question would be if ul be on time or not these days, me n tahera enjoying the suspense, crackin jokes at ur expense, so its a double entertainment on this thread one after d UD n one in between. Happy writing hammie... 👍🏼
Edited by -bharti- - 13 years ago

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