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Hamlet53 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ scorpio oye who rubbed you not me I hope meri janamaan...major dutta teri without nehi rahe sakta... have a heart... nakku kay without chaley ga , pun teray without no no! great to hear from you my sweeto
xxxhammie
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

@ scorpio oye who rubbed you not me I hope meri janamaan...major dutta teri without nehi rahe sakta... have a heart... nakku kay without chaley ga , pun teray without no no! great to hear from you my sweeto

xxxhammie


Arre nothing it was a clash of the titans ...
Work , But My Boss is on my side ...So I care less what the other side thinks ...
Dutta cannot do with me ...Awe he is cute , very cute baby .
Dutta and me have one thing in common ... bad tempers .
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Posted: 14 years ago
a very beautifully written updt... cliffhanger!!!!!!!!! dont tell me Ganpat here with the news of Nakkus rishta is fixed with someone else... dont do that plzzz...fingers crossed... updt sooon... do PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res.. .. 😉
will be back in a few 😉
Edited:-
Nice update ,, Hammie,, so we see Dutta Missing Naku in mrng , , hey he asked her abt her future ,,and is skeptical abt her reply ,, but not leaving any oppurtunityy in romancing her ,😆, in the car ,whn the song was being played , sent bajji and rahman with Ropps and enjoyed the small momnets alone in the car, romancing in the PT sessions😆😆 ,AS and bajji have understood their attraction and tring to pair them 😉 ,,Ganpat Kaka now in the pic,,why ? has he got sme other plans for nakku ? or will give his belssing ??
willl dutt agree to AS proposal or think of givng time to nakku? hmm in sab sawalon ka jawab ki liye wait kariye hammie ki next update
Jladi update karo 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Hammie,

your update gets better n better every now n then n i just cant get enough feel like just reading it more n more. I hope Dutta accepts the marriage wid Naku n as for Ganpat not to interfere in this decision that wat i hope of. Dutta is getting naughtier n naughtier day by day n oh oh i really want to see Tasha marriage n SR sooner.☺️

Pliz mat tadpao hume Hamlet serial ne to hamari ashaon ki band baja dali hai lekin tum aisa nahi karo ge yeh to pata hai. Bahut desperate hoon😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hammie I updated spot 😳 sorry it toook so long ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Omg Hammie

The new title of ur Ff sgould strt like

Mishal Raheja as Major Dutta Patil

Weak hear readers keep oxygen pump at ur side and mask on uyr face '

Will need now and then :P

Well you wont belive but everytime I got to Naku entering in the room ,

I got interupted :P

Got hate that interuption , well hammie ,

I am dying over the attitude of my major saab :P

Isnt he the mopst adorable man :P

God he got issues , first no tea than No Naku :P

Hhehhehheh

Love his irrritation and woo he strted doing the exercise alone :P

Hehehheh

I was laughing my ass off and his guts :P

And wooo Naku enters dude , how much he shows indifference he didn't forget tosee what she weras ,how her hair is tied and all :P

Major saab has totally gone nuts :P

And wooo hooo Hammieee !

Dude dutta and his hair :P

U got quite a wild imagination with that :P

I was reading it with minimal expression on my face uz everyone was in the room and my sisters were like , why u look panic , im like come and read u will know and im like

Its just nothing :P

God Dutta has become so naughty he goes with the gel :P

Oh he loves Naku hands on his legs :P

I am loving the way their relationship is growing first they have distance but now they joke around eachother and Naku is no less though no match for patil's besharmi :P

And Hammmie one thing is anyone n the family is from Army ,

I love how he speaks , though he talk in such a rigid and a lil intriguing way ,

But iut shows his love and annoyance to

What women :P

I just love to read that word and imagine it from his mouth :P

Ok Love how he tells through his gesture that how guilty he feels :P

I so love him then <3

And woo Major saab who was angry that nO tea is here is fine now with having notea :P

Btw love what Naku replied to dutta question abt career , he is amd , he is like

This should be me and this is what this lady is answeingg me!
major saab ap kay beechay bohat badal gaya hai :P

Though I think Dutta is more mad abt k Naku may be massaging someothet legs too :P

And though he is angry and he eats what she brings :D

But that's where my heart stops Hammie

Kya sirf khobsurat cum smart cum chirping cum naughty girl nahi chal sakti

Why ye khana L

Mujh ko tu kuch nai ata :that is one reason I asored Dutta .

Ek nicvale main us ka baith phar jata tha :P

OK coming to the shopping trip

Wo wow wo !
hammie show ka naam hona chaiye !
Dutta and naku kay dil ki awaz everysong was like playing for them

And what an awesome song selectoion !
I was like wowww

Amazing selection !
great and anakueyes pleading :D

And wooo those guys were lucky that dutta didn't have leges ion action

Cuz even without that he just knowck them off :P

I was like wooo I want a man like that :P

Har banday ko bitwao ge :D

And ok AS is talking abt Naku and D is out of order !
pagal kahin ka :P

He shjould have said it , she is mine mommy plz make her mine and what h say .

Wo mera khayal waise he rakhti hai

Dutta is gadha and that's a universal fact !

Omg ye gadha abhi kya kaha and now aagian romancing with naku !
Major saab needs control over him :P

Love their closeness :D

My teeths all out :D

I was like wooo !
somethingh is coming , I was enjotying the anticipation adnthe

Something comes

But not what I expected

Baajiii L

God

Hate him !
and then what comes precap

Hammie I am woried abt precap ab ganpat ko kya baat karne hai L

Wooo

Love the update hammie
!m,aza a gayaaa :D

Cant wait for more :D

Cuz ye dil maange aur :D

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Posted: 14 years ago
@ kiran kinooo.i know what you were up to before on the forum baby... tu scorpio and zubby ... oh my god I was larfing my head off ... tu tu mishal ke pechay goa ponche hoi thi ..haa haaah .and what was that about goan GF khudiah... i was lke iss lardki ko dutta style ka chamat parnana wala hai... oh my gawd , I did'nt butt in, I thought baachion ko chaska laney dooo... love you dutta ishtyle... xxx hammie teri feed back has arrived now I can start my update...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

@ kiran kinooo.i know what you were up to before on the forum baby... tu scorpio and zubby ... oh my god I was larfing my head off ... tu tu mishal ke pechay goa ponche hoi thi ..haa haaah .and what was that about goan GF khudiah... i was lke iss lardki ko dutta style ka chamat parnana wala hai... oh my gawd , I did'nt butt in, I thought baachion ko chaska laney dooo... love you dutta ishtyle... xxx hammie teri feed back has arrived now I can start my update...



OH secrets out😲
btw hammie not my fault asie besharam updates kp parhnay kay baad aisa he hota ,
everybody is thinking k Naku is just PT trainer of dutta
and what Major saab is doing hmm
tell me tell me

full on romancing ,
yahi say tu ye khayal aya hai :P

woo anothet update is coming ,
i should get my oxygen pump refilled:P

i hope the laapy is back or still ye paapi update will be done on khandani lappy ,
one advice ,
when write updates send ur to ur email id or store in ur usb warna
u will become

badnaam hammie
and the u will keep on singing

Hammie badnaam hue Dutta tere liye :P
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks very much, HOWEVER SORRREEEY FOR NOT POSTING THE LINK

@ warda: pleased that you enjoyed being transported to tashaland ,I felt I needed that as well so I geared the update more so towards more bonding between them ..more on the tactile side though...tried to keep the erratic nature of the mishal/dutta hence his mood swings ..yes nakku will have to mummy the spoilt ,needs a tight smack on his bum.. its the call of duty he's in a huff about, the where ? you are right they need to chat, but was he ever good with conos? ,he's good at throwing his weight around and bossing and bullying! Me thinks she likes it! ganpat? we'll see if your hunch is true.. xx thanks for the lovely feedback

@ mnx : glad you liked the bits between Dutta and Nakku ...ganapat has caused a stir or two..well that's called rocking the boat! Yeah I know what we all want! Thanks for reading and enjoying xxhammie

@ norey : my sweet thanks for reading the update and commenting , I know you want him to say yes ..but you know though that Dutta is a tough nut to crack ! he needs a hammering on that block of his!! Gadha he salla! Xxx hammie

@ krishaa: muhje pata hai you want ke saab theekh ho jaya ,but remember the course of true love never runs smooth! Waise tu dutta gadha nahi love ki koi baat Nakku se nahi ki..baki cheezain karne main busy hai...chaska ! chaska! But you guys are loving it is'nt that sooo krishaa?xxhammie

@ brvr: hey it was great to hear from you,t hanks for treating the FF like a film,,I feel very complimented yet humbled; come back to the forum when you can ,for you are missed, I will continue to pm you in the meanwhile... mind how you go with much luv hammie

@ nakku: its not me who gets better, it's my love for you all that is the guiding factor! Ganpat weeel you have to wait and watch ,rember he's an exservice army personnel... so bawardaa tu nehi ho saakta... lekin kuch to hai up his sleeve! Xx hammie

@ eternity_love: oye loved your emoticoned response ..haila all those huggies kya baat hai so you finally opened up my pet! Major ki badmaashi ke kamal hai ,hanna?.. yes he's a deep one this ARMY GUY... not great in convos though ,haat paon challaney mein fast hai ..but remember he's the eternal gadha! So like you hinted him might do something totally unpredictable! Xx hammie

@ Scorpio: was absolutely to hear from you ,glad you enjoyed both chats.7&8.. yesss metoo loves the boy/man side of Dutta ... you are right about shaadi and laddo ,pun do't forget uske gadhagiri ! he is capable of kicking with his hind legs! Xx hammie

@ azm: awwoo,you lost your longer version of the feed back! Damn mera chaska NET hazam ker gya grrr!..ooh yes PERSONALLY I too like his majorly peed off scenes...full of action packed...ganapat has caused a topsy turvey with many readers...yaar lardki ka baap hai ,woh bhi itni soni girl ,fikar to karega! Xxxhammie

@ suhana: happy kappy you loooved it! Confession ,arey thera damak theek hai... dutta or kuch bolay no ,no,only action man- through and through ! dream on baby ! once an donkey always a gadha! Good to hear from you hun,how was your booithday! Xx kissey hammie

@ ushankitvc: thankyou mate for reading and for the lovely feedback...with pleasure luv have added you on the PM list!

@ prncz: raj..eh waited for your feedback, long time no speak...yes there are some pending issues that need to be addressed by our Action Man.. don't forget his real ,inherent nature...still we'll have to see..you are right in other areas he's is pretty bold it's all systems go per yaar sharif admi hai I think he is aware of demarcations! Xxx hammie

@nileshni: helloo my friend..listen I'eve noticed your likes ..thankyou, however am delighted that you have touched base! Thanks for a moving feedback ! soo Major Dutta's advances have prompted you to revisit his antic once too many ..hailaa, woh tu hai he besharam admi but he's not a gandha admi ...but we all agree that he is for sure a Gadha admi ..haaa! your last line oye lardki sherni bun, sher languished ,laid back or regal hota hai... remember the lion only prances when he is out to kill, for the moment he will just watch the doe from the foliage ... and maintain his majesty... xxx hammie

@ daya: meri jaan I know what you'eve been up to baby! Hope you had a great birthday! Yes I thought i'll add the songs mujhe pasanad hain..the songs were the cheesy bits haaa.. or soo my friend thought so ... personally I enjoyed the beating up the eve teaser! ..muhje growl wala sher zayda pasand hai! ... Ganapt daru la! Seems to have created a stir!.. chalo lets see what happens ..gosh I miss them mishal/dutta &mahi/nakku so much..thanks for reading and getting back to me always wait for your feed back.xxx waiting for your FFupdate! Xxxhammie

@ sona: thanks for your feed back..please wait a bit xxxhammie

@ kiran: kino thanks for your lovely fun packed feed back was soo looking forward...to it yes true say Mishal -Dutta has this effect he takes people's especially young ladies breath away...dil tu he has taken already! now he wants our jaan as well , I think he is too laid back, shaadi ke mamlaey mein ,smart ass when he's getting a little here and there tu not bad ... soo do you want nakku to be quiet and demure like a shrinking violet? Nahi yaar a little bit of spunk tu hona chahiya ... yess you know mishal /Dutta likes good food and she can cook ...so you better learn to cook fast ,remember the way to a man's heart is through his ...stomach...silly... xxx luv hammie

Lots of love and many thanks for your time and feed backs! Hamlet.27.5.11

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