Painful Rapture~thread2~ chp.59 ~ pg 144~3.8.12

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Pushpa95

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hi hammie , congrats for completing one and half century and for new thread . I know i am late for congratled you i am sorry . I was out of town for my cousin wedding so i cannot comment on previous ud but read the ud it was nice. once again congrats for new thread lots of love take care

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Nakusha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hi hamlet

i'm angry with u .how dare u talk abt quiting . we just luv ur ff & i infront of the forum declare ha pata hai ur line ko chori kiya hai 😆 hammiee is amazing & ab nakre chodo aur accha lekho . ud soon more of dutta & naku

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hamlet

i'm angry with u .how dare u talk abt quiting . we just luv ur ff & i infront of the forum declare ha pata hai ur line ko chori kiya hai 😆 hammiee is amazing & ab nakre chodo aur accha lekho . ud soon more of dutta & naku

aye Naku !arrrhggg! kya bole re tu...phir se bol...shaking my head phir se bol! haaa yes ma'am , waise laat parthne the mujhe brvr se ..instead meri naku ,quiet ,simple naku is giving me a mouth full...yesss baaby...i have done it but thanks nehi kiya ,i see if i can do fast thanks abhi ...one liners hoonge.than PR IF YOU WANT IT FOR FRI XXHAMMIE

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@ tamanna, thanks for comment, and pm regarding it...xxhammie

@ warda, yours annotated in thread 2..xxhammie

@ Nakusha, aye Naku! you always manage to notice things which I overlook.. thanks for your comments they make me smile often, you have been a faithful reader and hammie shall remember that...bahut pyar! xxhammie

@tahera, thanks for appreciating my effort ,yes some degree of referential reading has to be done, as neither of the two professions covered are remotely linked to my vocation, haan yes there's no kala or suds ,but their is my Khan! who has got many readers back up so much so that, one of us have to go..so khan reha gi ,magaar hammie will go... thanks xxhammie

@ Missey, ke haal hai kakki? Good to hear from you, haan pata hai thujhe Dutta ke awaargi aur badmaashi pasand hai!...tra liye he tu lekha tha is pagal hammie ne...xxhammie

@ sona, what are you saying sona I send you pms ,I checked my out box ,for chap 37 ,you didn't open it ..so not really my fault...listen thanks for your feel good comments ..xxhammie

@ brvr,..pity Khan is much hated by the handful of readers that I have, well I either lower my eyes ,turn my head and look the other way ,or I blow a short fuse, looks like my fuse has blown forever. You mentioned in your comment , "he is lacking the previous sharpness" may be so ma'am ..but one thing is for sure ,hammie is lacking the previous sharpness , well spotted ma'am, and with bowed head I acknowledge that before every one. Listen thank you as always for putting up with my writing , brvr , hammie is humbled by your lovely remarks, which many a times split me ,haaa ha ...yes I noticed the blue font...cold... don't know what to say ma'am... except please forgive me dear brvr if ever I was cheeky and shirty with you on the thread...much love xxhammie

@ daya, yours done on thread...xhammie

@ ranju, thanks for reading the UD and commenting...look forward to your thoughts ,many thanks .xxhammie.

@ ivy, just saw your comment on thread 1,must say i did miss your comment so much...i went into a worry phase ..ivy never comment as well...but yess ,like always you read it and liked my UD.thanks my mate...xxhammie

Thanks every one . sorry for this easy option ,but didn't want to do spamming... regards hammie

more on this thread ..to follow ..daya ,warda ,pushpa..

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Congrats hammie on completing another half century...had been a wonderful journey...in terms of cherishing this saga between our tasha and your much awaited feedback on our replies...can still recall the day you posted your first chapter...at that time i was just heading towards exams hardly10...15 days to go...so had to held it for some time then and later started off with it when there was no looking back then...😊 haan mujhe saab yaad hai ,thought may be thujhe yaad nehi tha...may 11?haina? thanks very much for your warm thoughts.. kurriye

Call of duty had once again called them to join their respective fields...and this is one thing for which i praise these two characters a lot..ohh i always enjoy whenever dutta is checking himself in mirror...and pleased with his looks ...no doubts on that..😊 yess me to like that about him his preening, its clear mera FF is all about him...

the chunni is his partner here again ...love it how it is always placed safely in that laptop case as his most prized possession ...😳 that it is .special edition..."mera maal khahein nehi jaye ga!

aww...him missing nakus tea and sandwiches...and on that part i agree naku aadat bhigarti hai...but i guess no one can resist to pamper him more and more 😳 true baaby all the chorrison the forum like to pamper him as well,us FFwriters just please the readers!

and the OUTs too discussing his new looks...i know how students react when suddenly teacher comes out with a new look 😆...them discussing it sounded so natural... so tu bhi heckout kerte hai profs ,oye bas aja parhene jatai hai tu class mein ...eyelids ghommne nehi..sort you in pms...

oyee they thinking he got a facial...lol...he is tu naturally handsome ...😊 i do agree but the actor to is urban male who looks after himself, apart frpm being hand some he can be a handfull also

Major and brig.Parekh ...i enjoyed their informal conversation a lot...about his looks and asking about his aaye...relived to know he will return to conventions and no doubts that one person is naku 😊..once again loved the detalied description of his sitting posture...in discipline in front of his senior...it makes it so easy to picture it while reading...

a very well written session with OUTs...very well detailed*applauses* thanks baaby I think we both are moved by army offis...because dutta is a major i have to cover training angles..

Khan has actually disappointed Major here...her major reason to deny and accept the post is only major...here she fails the spirit to serve the nation ...an integral elemnt of an army officer..as a mentor major questioning his capabilities towards his students and his disappointment was

very evident...a teachers role in a students life is not only to teach them but also to highlight their capabilities ...to guide them towards the path for which they are actually meant to be..

i kind of enjoyed their argument...particularly duttas parts...very clear and staright...rightly said the

degree of risk is involved in many other fields a s well...or i would say it is always attached with each individual in some way or another...yes in their field its probably higher...but thats where they are actually trained to work in all the hazards...just with a motive to serve their country...and the title is so apt for khan here...lady doth sure protest too much!!! Warda ,this complete section is so beautifully worded by you, in fact it has given body to what I had originally written ...you have worded it very sincerly..thank you for such indepth thinking..

Naku and Nadi share a lovely bonding...more so of a friend than a patient doctor...and for that naku deserves the credit...it makes so easier for the patient na when the doctor is more of a friend ..it defo helps to recover soon...apart from medicines the TLC also do wonders...and btw i love the deal between them...tasha getting married when nandi will be standing on her feet...hammie me planning to bribe this girl now.😆..hehe...wese i love nakus spirit a lot...her dedication towards her work :)so do I fighting fit, that's why he chose her because of inner strength.

Khan and Kapur caught together...was one surprise...i love kapur casual proposal...kudiye tu bhi mujhe pasand karti hai...it was cute...but as expected the answer had to be no...is it true she is already spoken to someone in her community or she just said so to get rid of kapur...Enjoyed it how Dutta made an entry...Friend or foe...ahh...loved the lines 👏

Too eager to read how this track will turn...now the two of them had to face Majors wrath ...excited to read weather khan will confesssomething in front of Major...keeping fingers crossed for that...

well that you will have to wait and see in the next UD..

And the ending is beautiful with tasha fone convo...love it how they are concerned with their respective works during their working hours...so much in discipline...and end their day with each other...oyee naku will never change inquiring about his work...love his reaction there...😆

and im sure his ohhh ahhh ohhh are very effective on naku...😉
Naku, pe tu pata nehi but tera pe assar tu zaroor hoya hai..😆..haaa haa

Looking forward to the next update...thanks a ton for our weekly dose...this is also like an aadat😊 ...and many congrats once again for shifting to the second thread...way to go ...hopefully we will complete those 150 pages as well with the same fun we did here...kind of feeling

as well...have loads of memories on this thread...will always cherish it...still remember how we used to spam...daya...ivy...brvr...wese we plan to continue the same on another thread as well*ducks from chappals* 😆 hain?when wasthat,or rather where was I on another planet ?

But as an ending note for thread one ...would like to thank you to start an ff ...based on army background...letting us know the pain which is suffered by the loved ones of these officials...the degree of risk involved in their jobs...how a mother...sister...a wife/lover let go her man

with such courage...just because of the spirit to serve the nation...her son is no more hers ...he belongs to the country now...What a feeling it is...im finding it difficult to write and those who actually been through it...kudos to them...Salutes those officials who serve miles away

from their homes ...keeping their lives on stake and making it possible for us to sleep peacefully in our homes...Thank you so much Hammie for writing this journey in such a beautiful way...BLess You !!! wow 2nd power fulled para graph,its all happening to you baaby ,chaal shall I recommend you to join the forces..its true Warda...they sign their life away...any time ,any where..

thank you baaby what a mind blowing picture ..the best bit ...me saving it in my pics...love the postures... thanks kurriye kya comment diya hai..me bahut kush ..thankyou ..bahut pyar...your affectionately hammie!

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hammie ! first and foremost CONGRATZ with your new thread although I know exactly how miffed you were to figure it all out ...making me tear my hair out in the process haha ...i'm just kidding...u still have to fix some things :P anyway getting to the update...chup ker you have already done my head in! bas!ab me not moving an inch! leave me as Iam...bare aye madam jee! ...hummmh thanks for the congrats,and sorting my mess! pappy! babzi ,mooti ,phisti bossy boots and the rest...have to think of some more best fit epithets!

Chapter 37 ~ the lady doth protest too much...
So ur UD is in another thread lol and my comment in this one 😆😛 talk about confusing haha woh bhi tumare saath...ur probably more confused on how to annotate everyone's comments 😛 cut and paste dear hammie...its an excellent option lol ...
shuddd up! ####//
So we're back to work...but seems that Major Dutta is having some difficulty enjoying anything that is not made from his lover's hand ...oh an I tell you the amount of screen space that chunni gets...substitute hai na...sniff sniff and put away in laptop case for safe keeping ...if I was Naku I would need to be jealous of those chunnis that are always entangled in him haha ...😆😆 yaaah baaaby not real but sub! jab tak real ne kabze mein nehi aate , long life chunni...us ke pyar ke!

I quite liked the progression in the story with Khan. The fact that Dutta saw the talent she had and when she herself was putting that offer down he was quite a manipulative soul...using words to make her reverse that thought of hers...well done major...glad to see her accept the challenge...and would love to see where it takes her ...there is a lot of potentional with the girl which is what Dutta sees and would like her to work on...
oye ..come into my embrace niccce one pappy , tu tu kani ko pasand kerti hai like hammie tu you definitaly desreve a a a brushof the palms ...nope peeche haat no embrace!
Naku and Nandi ...the way their story pans out is nice. The way you show the slow improvements in her condition overtime and the way you have mentioned that personal and professional life in some sense come together...the goals ...achievements ...and Naku's selfless thought to first put Nandi's situation before her own marriage I would say is great. Her life isn't about just getting her love but to have him there when she feels that she has done much with her life and can share that joy with him...
thanks Daya lovely interpretation...loved it..remind me of your dedication...my heroine!
Then came that Khan and Kapur scene. He was so straightforward ...just said what he felt which i liked...instead of avoiding it or beating around the bush...of course I like the pairing of the two but it seems that its a no go on one side... and Dutta lands their ...have to specifically mention the line "who goes there? and added "friend or foe? lol well well that is Dutta for you ...so of course what else is going to do but blow up BOOM ...GO TO YOUR DORMS NOW !
yes it sprang to mind , hamlet in middle of night above his castle ...its when he sees a shadow ...trust's no one ...
And need I say the lovely end with TaSha...he was quite calm to my surprise haha ...and when she asks about his work and i just died reading the answer..."haan woh mein ne do premiyoon ke upar zoor se bomb phoraha! ...haahaa well he did indeed...but whether they are lovers ahhh well that is at question ...
find out in next UD...have to PR it though!
Loved the update Hammie...sadly I only got a chance to even open the UD today...maaf ker...late latif is me this time...hmm ...ab chal phir milenge chalte chalte...lots of love...see you in pms! I know sharmilee, tera kam ...listen I do appreciate your lengthy and intersting comment ..much valued..and thanks for always ..always being there for me .. hammie so needy ...with much love pappy...your xxhammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

dearest pushpa , thanks for your kind thoughts, hope you had a fantastic time at the wedding ..pleased that you read and found the UD enjoyable..the next one should be with you by tommorrow or Sat..will pm you... much love xxxhammie

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tahera57

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

hi, hammi believe it or not this is my 5th try this laptop has seen its best days, no,its even past that its working by my will power to last a little longer.hehe any way " aisa mat karna hammie,aisa mat karna" arrey kam se kam major dutta sey hi kuch seekho jis kaam ka commitment kar liya.toh bas imean they are holding back their wedding till the work they've undertaken is done. anyway i love major dutta he is different to dutta the don. it is refreshing to read something unrelated to ltl. i think its a plus point. i love this dutta and look forward to uds every week. i hope you are never upset enough with your readers to stop writing. keep marching on with entheusasim . good luck tc god bless.

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-bharti-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by Hamlet53

Thanks very much friends for your feedback on chapter 37 ...the last one from the first thread as it stands...have to admit that it was a chapter I enjoyed penning down as the writer ,however to my surprise only a handful of readers found any joy in it . However, me being hammie admits that of course I was taken aback a bit , may be its time to phase out the UDs a bit and finally call it a day, so am considering it. Besides my FF is not heavily about LTL1, which may , to my mind be the reason reader's interest have dwindled. But, still I am grateful to you all for reading and a lot of times plodding through rather extensive, tedious pieces of the workings of my mind.. Ok now this was written a few days ago...now today [Thursday] got a telling off from Nakusha ,and a nasty face emoticon from my brvv, so since then have calmed down a bit "All is welll"...love can I love you and leave you...thanks for putting up with me..
@ brvr,..pity Khan is much hated by the handful of readers that I have, well I either lower my eyes ,turn my head and look the other way ,or I blow a short fuse, looks like my fuse has blown forever. You mentioned in your comment , "he is lacking the previous sharpness" may be so ma'am ..but one thing is for sure ,hammie is lacking the previous sharpness , well spotted ma'am, and with bowed head I acknowledge that before every one. Listen thank you as always for putting up with my writing , brvr , hammie is humbled by your lovely remarks, which many a times split me ,haaa ha ...yes I noticed the blue font...cold... don't know what to say ma'am... except please forgive me dear brvr if ever I was cheeky and shirty with you on the thread...much love xxhammie
sorry for this easy option ,but didn't want to do spamming... regards hammie
more on this thread ..to follow ..daya ,warda ,pushpa..

Ok! now i get the full understanding of ur somewhat strange comments. Firstly Hammie i wish to thank you for all the hard work that u put into penning the beautiful story n isnt the 150+ pg of the thread an indication of the luv n adulation? It is also proof of the appreciation n popularity of the same. How can u say that not many r interested in ur work anymore? I understand off late due to bad health u r under considerable stress n i assume that could also have been reason for ur assumption.

Comg to my comments i give an honest opninion as to how i feel abt the story, the characters along with the joys, pains n disappointments in a candid manner. Infact i enjoy the comments of other readers too, give me an insight of their take which is enriching. If this [my comments] anyway upset you my sincere apologies. I feel there is an undercurrent of disappointment with our take on your writing, again sorry to have let u down. No plz, u dont have to be sorry for anything n never ever have i felt u crossed the line for me. N my earlier postin of the smiley was only showing some irritation for the waitin of your replies as is my impatience to know if it was worthy. Thanx for the same again. Luv u!

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

@ brvvv. replied to your pm...thanks for knocking some sense in me..need that from time to time...mazza ata hai mujhe 😆😆 haaa ha ...attention seeking kala bundar!

listen every one, there will be UD today ... my friends in India and Pakistan...soorry bit late hoga UD...ap ki sham tak...if i aim for UK 1.00pm..kuch unaviodable kam hai ...ok .love you and leave you for the mo.

yours with much affection kala bundar, aka hammie ,

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