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Posted: 13 years ago


Really very sorry for late update
I was very busy with exams so here now my exams are finished :D so I am updating here is part 21 and I would like to dedicate this part to my Mona sweety (maneetlover1), this update is specially for u sweety, I hope u gonna like it, love u :D..next surprise is gonna be for everyone, read note at very last

Part 21:-

Next morning geet wake up with heavy head just because of crying last night her head was feeling heavy she remembered sasha's abusing at her, she was thinking I am trying to trap maan but it's not true, Maan is my husband how can I even think like this, why everyone always talk to me like this..like I am not a human being...tears formed in her eyes but before they can escape from her eyes someone caught them on his finger..geet looked at him and maan sitting beside her looking at her with painful eyes, she quickly wipes her tears and looked at him with fake smile but maan could see the pain behind her this fake smile but he didn't want to show her, he smiles back and said
Mk:" good morning mishty" he says with smile
Geet smiles back and said
G:" good morning"
She looks away trying hard not to bring tears in her eyes, he looks at her with pain
Mk(st):" I am sorry geet..this is all happening just because of me, but nit anymore I will not let this happen again with you"
Mk:" geet are you coming office today" he asked with glint of mischievous in his eyes, geet looked at him with confusing look, maan pointed at clock, she looked at clock and was shocked to see 9:30 at clock
G:" hey babaji...mein Aab tak ghore beach kar sooti rahi, 9:30 ho Gaye hai, "
Maan laughed and geet looked at him
G:" I am sorry maan, woh mujhe pata hi Nahin cha" she keeps quite as she felt his finger on her lips, maan looked at her with smile
Mk:" don't worry mishty woh humara hi office hum jis marzi time par jaaye"
Geet smiles and
G:" mein fresh hokar aati hoo"
Maan nodded with smile and geet left from there to washroom
She came out from washroom and saw a beautiful White dress with golden embroidery on it, she went to the dress and saw a samll note beside dress and picks up the note and Start reading
Dear Mishty,
I know tum yahi soch rahi hogi naa ke yeh dress yaha kisney rakha, yeh dress meine rakha hai just for you mishty, I am sure tum is dress mein Buhat khubsurat lago gi, I want you to wear this dress for me mishty, mujhe umeed hai tumhe bhi dress aachi lagi hogi, isliye Aab zada der mat lagao Aur jaldi se tayar hokar sajao, tumhara maan intezar kar raha hai, come soon
Your maan"
Geet had tears in her eyes she looked at her dress with smile..she quickly changed into this dress and wears White bangles and earrings she put kajal in her eyes and left her hair open, she was looking very very beautiful,she came down..maan automatically looked upward and was lost in her beauty, yash dadima meera looked at him and thought what happened then they look towards the direction where maan was seeing and smile crept on their lips, sneha looks at her and runs towards her, geet picks her up in her arm
S:" wow mama aap Buhat payali lag rahi ho"
Geet smiles and looked at maan who was staring at her non stop, geet blushed, maan came out from his dreamland and looked at her lovingly
Geet sit beside maan
Da:" geet beta aap Buhat khubsurat lag rahi hai"
Y:" haa bhabhi"
Geet smiles at them and looked at maan who was busy at staring at her, geet smiles at him maan smiles back, they eat their breakfast as usual with smile and fun if yash is there then they laugh so much as they remembered yesterday's incident, he makes baby face and looked at dadima, dadima smiles at him...After eating their breakfast maan and geet left from there for office, maan was kept staring at her even in the car as well, she was keep blushing, after sometime they reach office, geet was not at all ready for going in, she stopped in midway, maan looked at her and understood what she is thinking, maan entwined his fingers with her, geet looks at him with tears, maan nodded his head and start walking with her, geet hold his hand tightly, they walk inside and everyone were shocked to see them like this, maan holding her hand tightly in his, sasha was feeling damn angry and jealous to seeing them like this whereas adi was smiling to seeing them like this, Maan couldn't tolerate anymore and shouted
Mk:" aap sab log meri Aur meri geet ki taraf kya ghoor rahe hai, kya mein aap sab logo ko is kaam ki salary deta hoo"
They all were shocked to listen him "Meri geet"...sasha was dumbstruck to listen him
S:" Mk yeh aap kya keh rahe hai, geet...yeh sab.."
Mk:" sasha, apni had mein raho how dare you tum hoti kon ho mere se sawal puchne wali haa, maybe I should tell you that she is not geet"
Geet looked at him, maan looks at her with smile
Mk:" she is Geet Maan Singh Khuraana"
They were looking at them with open mouth, reality shook them hard whereas sasha was about to faint
S:" Mk yeh aap kya keh rahe hai"
Mk:" wahi jo tumne suna miss sasha..geet maan Singh khuraana ki biwi hai, Aur kal jo tumne kiya uske baad mein tumhe ek second keliye bhi yaha bardasht Nahin Karunga, how dare you to talk to my wife like this,how dare you to disrespect her, how dare you to bring tears in my geet's eyes, how dare you" he was getting more and more angry remembering her tears
Geet was looking at him with tears of happiness, he accepted her as his wife in front of everyone, sasha was feeling scared seeing his angry eyes
S:" woh Mk..."
Mk:" WOH KYA" he shouted angirly, everyone were shivering from his anger, Sasha was scaring
Geet holds his hand tightly to calm his anger, maan looks at her and tried to calm his anger
S:" I am sorry Mk mujhe nahin pata tha ke geet aapki..."
Mk:" mam"
Mk:" geet mam"
Sasha looked at geet with some hope
Hope she save her job
S:" sorry Mk mujhe nahin pata tha geet mam aapki wife hai"
Geet looked at her
Mk:" whatever, I don't want you here anymore, so get out"
Sasha looked at him with tears
S:" please Mk don't do this to me please give me one chance"
She looked at geet with pleading eyes, maybe she could stop maan
Geet looked at maan
G:" plz maan usse Maaf kar dijiye, ek mauka de dijiye"
Mk:" lekin geet"
G:" plz maan" she said with pleading eyes
Maan couldn't say her no and said
Mk:" I am giving you last chance Sasha agar tumne dobara koi bhi aesi galti ki tau mujhse bura koi bhi nahin Hoga..samjhi tum"
S:" yes Mk thank you geet mam"
She looks at her with smile and geet smiles back, both went in cabin,
Maan brings geet closer and hugged her tightly, geet hugged him back with equal passion,
Mk:" I am sorry geet"
Geet was surprised why is he saying sorry, she broke hug and looked at him
G:" maan aap sorry kyun Bol rahe ho"
Mk:" yeh sab meri wajah se ho raha yeh sab takleefe meri wajah se tumhe mil rahi hai, naa chahte Huwe bhi tumhe inka samna karna par raha hai, I am sorry geet I am sorry"
Geet prevented him by putting her hand on his mouth
G:" please maan aesa mat kahiye, aapki wajah se kuch bhi Nahin huwa hai kuch bhi Nahin, wahi hota hai jo kismet mein likha hota hai, kismet ke aage kisi ki Nahin chalti kisi bhi Nahin mere saath bhi jo ho raha woh kismet ka khel hai"
Mk:" tau mein iss kismet ko humesha keliye badal dunga haa geet badal dunga mein, mein kisi bhi takleef tau tumhare tak Nahin aane dunga"
Geet looked at him with smile and hugged him tightly, maan hugged her back tightly, both get lost in their hug

Jo meri rooh ko chain de pyaar de,
Wo khushi ban Gaye ho tum,
Zindagi ban Gaye ho tum,
Zindagi ban Gaye ho tum,


They broke hug and looked eat each other lovingly, maan caresses her face with his face touching her forehead with his, maan looked at her with full love in his eyes, why he wanted her to stay away from him,
Both stay there with their foreheads touching each other feeling each other's breath

Jo meri rooh ko chain de pyaar de,
Wo khushi ban Gaye ho tum,
Zindagi ban Gaye ho tum,
Zindagi ban Gaye ho tum,


Mk(in heart):"Today if I have smile on my face just because of you, your closeness makes me mad, your eyes have so much pain in them but still you are smiling, I had punished you for that crime which you had never done,

Jism se jaan tak pass aate Gaye,
In nigaho se dil mien samate Gaye,
Jism se jaan tak pass aate gaye,
In nigaho se dil mien samate Gaye,


Maan opens his eyes and looked at her, geet's eyes were still closed
Maan kisses her on her right eye and moves towards left, he kissed her left eye, she was smiling, maan kissed her nose cutely, and was about to kiss her lips when she ran from there, showing him tongue, maan smiles at her looked at her with desire like he will eat her anytime, before geet could drowned his deep eyes she runs from there feeling shying, maan smiles he sits on his seat and rest his head back on chair closing eyes and smiling seeing his mishty's beautiful face

Jis aseen khawab thi tamana mujhe
Haa wahi ban Gaye ho tum,
Zindagi ban Gaye ho tum
Zindagi ban Gaye ho tum

Geet went in her cabin, feeling shying, she sits on her chair smiling
Feeling his kiss on her skin
Geet looks at maan from her side window he was lost in his thoughts smile was on his face, she closed her eyes and put her head on table with smile on her face


Jo meri rooh ko chain de pyaar de,
Woh Kushi ban Gaye ho tum,
zindagi ban Gaye ho tum,
Zindagi ban gaye ho tum,


G(in heart):" I'd never thought life can be this beautiful, I thought I will never be happy, i was the most unlucky girl in this world who had no parents no life partner but now I want nothing because I have everything now I have my maan I have my maan, babaji plz never let my separate from me never ever, he is my life my soul my everything"
She opens her eyes and looked at him, she just stare at him sitting there alone gazing his beautiful smile and smiling her own

Har kisi se jisse mein chupati rahi,
Bekhudi mein jisse gun gunati rahi,
Meine tanha kabhi jo likhi thi wahi
Shayari ban Gaye ho tum,
zindagi ban Gaye ho tum,
Zindagi ban Gaye ho tum.


Maan opens his eyes and automatically his eyes moves toward his geet, he looks at her with pure love, both were staring at each other, geet stands up and start moving towards his cabin still looking at him, she went in and stand front of him, both were lost in each other's eyes, her hand moves to his face and put her hand on his cheek, she moves closer and hugged him tightly,

Jo meri rooh ko chain de pyaar de,
Wo khushi ban Gaye ho tum,
Zindagi ban Gaye ho tum,
Zindagi ban Gaye ho tum,


maan understands what happened to her, he puts his hand on her waist and brings her more close to him, both stay there from 25 minutes like this,they broke hug and geet had tears in her eyes, maan kissed her tears away and cupped her face
Mk:" geet aaj ke baad mein tumhare ankho mein ansoo Nahin dekhna chahta samjhi tum" he whispers
Geet looked at him and nodded like a small baby, maan smiles and kissed her cheeks
Mk:" that's like a good girl"
Both laughs and hugged each other once more, just then adi came and said
A:" sir mr singhania aaye hai"
Maan gritted his teeth listening his name
G:" kya huwa maan"
Mk:" hmm kuch Nahin geet, chalo"
Geet nodded they went outside
Ans saw karan, he smiles at them
KS:" hello maan"
Mk:" hello karan"
KS:" hello geet" he smiles at her
G:" hello "
KS:" well maan mujhe aap logo se project ke bare mein kuch important discuss karna tha"
Mk:" yes sure I think we should go in cabin"
KS:" yes sure"
They went in cabin and start discussing the project, maan saw he was passing smile at geet, he feels like killing him right there
KS:" well maan mujhe lagta hai ke Hume yeh project start kar Lena chahiye what say geet"
Geet looked at maan he smiles at her
G:" yeah I think this right"
Mk:" ok then karan kal se yeh project construction site par start ho jaye ga"
Karan smiles
KS:" that's great maan..ok then I should take leave now"
Mk:" yeah ok"
Karan handshake with maan and smiles at geet
KS:" bye geet.. See you very very soon" he said with mischievous smile
Maan didn't like his smile
Geet smiles at him and said
G:" bye"
He left from there smiling
At night both maan and geet left for home, they reach home and retired to their rooms geet was very happy today, maan was also very happy
Mk:" kal ka intezar karo geet kyun ke kal se humari zindagi humesha keliye badalne wali hai, mein woh karne wala hoo jo shahid tumne kabhi Socha bhi Nahin hoga, bas Aab sirf kal ka intezar" maan smiles proudly and looked at geet photo, he kisses it.

Precap:" valentines day ;-)"
" maneet's confession :D"
" ahem ahem ahem ;-)"

Read:-
I hope u like it maybe the song sequence was not very good but next updates gonna be rock, valentines day is on 14 February so I am planning to you give all a very very big surprise which maan is planning too ;-) so be patience now I will update on 14 February with hot update and maneet's confession
So plz plz do tell me and if you have any ideas then plz plz do let me know bcz this ff is going to have an end very soon so I want some amazing ideas from you so I can make it very special for everyone.
Love you all
Mwahhh xxx
Sehri




Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lvd d update...
j track is on d way...msk n j r made 4 eachother...
cont
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update i just love it



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Posted: 13 years ago
hey..how about the baby coming to office and demanding to see her papa...and no one knows who her papa is..something like that?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely part, so Geet saved Sasha hope aage koi gadbad na ho...precap is too interesting😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update i just love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
luved the way maan blasted sasha...
hmmm waiting for the surprise...


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Posted: 13 years ago
omg yaar this was awesome update love u baby for that
and maan saying her Mrs msk wow that was happiest moment for geet that eh accepted her in front of world
loving it to the core
and me dying to read ur next update on 14 yaar make that biggest and woweist of all the other update as our valentine gift dear
love u




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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
specially the part where maan blasts on sasha
the best part was the precap
finally maaneet will confess and ahem ahem!!!!!!!!!!
awesum
waiting eagerly...
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww
awsmmm updt

hayeee yaar plz conttt sooonnn
😃
egrlyyy wtnggg😍

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