MG SS: She Is Back... |completed|

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Warning: There Are Many Loose Loops, Read At Your Own Risk, then don't complain!
Part 1

"Welcome everyone" the mentor said. "Here come the duchesses" the mentor continued to the reporters.

"Welcome Miss Nandini and Miss Geet" the mentor saluted his duchesses as they climbed down the stairs in their magnificent gowns.

"Here, at the Starlight, are the best tycoons and many of them are around India; for example Mumbai's Mehra or Delhi's Khurana's" the mentor explained. "The Duke arranged all this for searching the best bachelors for his sister ' Nandini" the mentor continued. "The Duke will be back in some minutes"

"In the meantime, you can interview Miss Geet and Miss Nandini" he continued talking to the reporters.

The reporters crowded the duchesses. Some parted in small groups so that they could interview both duchesses at the same time.

"So Miss Geet, why you haven't thought of marriage?" Reporter A asked The Duchess Geet.

"Oh'no, no marriage for me" Geet replied smilingly.

"Oh'Mr. Khurana" the mentor called to the man who was busy setting himself at the bar.

"Hello, sir" he replied. "So, Mr. Khurana'" the mentor started when he cut him short "please call me Maan, Mr. Khurana makes me so old" he laughed. "So Mr. Maan, have you come to meet the Duchess Nandini?" mentor asked.

"Me? Oh, no, actually my brother is out of the town, so I thought of coming to see the duchess for him" Maan chuckled.

"Well, there is Miss Nandini and her sister ' Geet" the mentor pointed to the stair case.

"Geet!" the word pricked his ears. "Did he just say Geet? Nah, Geet and a duchess? That too the sister of a duke'oh come on, Maan Singh Khurana, stop having illusion" Maan told himself.

The mentor marched and scolded the reporters "well, people, you took too much of the duchesses' time, please stop interviewing them, you can do this later after the reception." The reporters were busy cursing the mentor under their breaths but little did he care. After all, keeping the duchesses away from the media was his work.

Maan looked up at the stairs. The reporters were moving away, obviously the mentor was shooing them away like some vulgar mosquitoes. He looked at Nandini, dressed in an Asian style salwar kameez, she looked typically like some normal Indian girl but something in his mind said that she was the best for his brother. Something inside of him wanted to glance at the sister ' even if he didn't come here for checking out the sister. "Whatever Maan, one glance won't hurt" he tried to control the urge.

He glanced at the slim figure and his mouth dropped in dead shock! This was Geet ' his Geet

"Geet"

"My Geet"

"A Duchess "

These words had not connection - or did they?

Geet, as she used to be, dressed in a pink sari with her rosy cheeks and her juicy fleshy lips. He realized he was staring at the duchess. He approached the crowd.

"Well..." he heard Geet's sweet voice breaking the noise. "I would like to share something with all of you" she said looking at the reporters. "We are listening Duchess" Reporter A told her.

"I want you to meet my little one and a half year old daughter - Sanaya" Geet said.

Maan couldn't believe his ears - did he just hear daughter?

"No, Maan, she isn't married or is she? Is she a widow or a divorcee? Is she'" his thoughts trailed off as the little angel appeared..

Two little legs appeared behind Geet. Shyly a little girl came forward holding her mama's hand. She clutched her mother's legs and peeked at the crowd. Geet's hand touched her left shoulder and she blinked innocently at her mother in confusion.

"This is my daughter" she said.


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Part 1 - page 1
Part 2 - page 2
Part 9 - page 65
Part 10 - page 69

Love you all...❤️ Frankie
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You duffer!!!!!!
Www u write too well...

I was just flying wen I read it was dedicated to me!!!!
Thnks sweety nd u bettr continue soon:))

Is Sanaya Geet's adoPted daughter??????

Nevr mind...u knw I'm bad at guessing..

Lve u sugar..muah!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start... waiting for the next one...
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nice one
add me in and pm me
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pls continue

its very interesting


pls pm me too
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beautiful indeed!...have tears in my eyes😭.. Is it just for sally?? well sally tell frankie tht i also want to read the story further so kindly add me to d p.m list...😊
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Originally posted by: soniya_lovesu

<font size="2" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">beautiful indeed!...have tears in my eyes😭.. Is it just for sally?? well sally tell frankie tht i also want to read the story further so kindly add me to d p.m list...😊</font><div></div>

Sure di...anything fr u:)))
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Part 2

The little angel blinked at her mother in confusion with her innocent eyes staring at her. Geet smiled; and nodded towards the reporters. Sanaya looked at her mother innocently and then looked at the crowd back again at Geet. Geet gently shoved Sanaya in front of her. Sanaya moved forward very slowly and bowed to the crowd.

Then again, she shyly hid behind her mother, crawling to her legs. Maan was smiling at the perfect scene in front of him.

"Miss Handa are you married?" Reporter Q asked Geet.

Maan looked at Geet sadly. "Please Geet, please answer" he thought. "It's my final chance to get you back". "Maybe Sanaya is your adopted daughter maybe I still have a chance" Maan thought smilingly.

Geet looked horrified at Q. "Oh wellplease no personal question" Nandini moved forward glaring at Q. "It was just an introduction; if you guys ever see Geet with Sanaya, we hope you won't build rumours" she said waving her hand in the air giving a nasty look to Q.

"Dearest Reporters; the Duke has arrived" the mentor called trying to distract them from the Duchesses. Geet gave the mentor a grateful smile.

All the reporters instantly forgot about Geet and Nandini and thronged around the Duke and the other famous tycoons.

Brij answered some of the reporters' questions and moved to Maan.

"NandiniGeet" The Duke Brij waved to them. He signaled them to come forward to meet his partners.

"Geet Nandini, meet Mr. Khurana" Brij introduced them to Maan. Maan looked at Geet with his innocent eyes boring onto hers.

Geet stared in shock at Maan. She hadn't notice him since the reception had started. Nandini gave Maan a murderous glare. Eye-widened Geet shook hands with Mr. Khurana. Maan felt he was hit by lightening again; after two and a half years. "Meet my beloved sisters; the Duchesses; Geet and Nandini" Brij pointed out them to Maan. Maan nodded at the Duke Brij then again focused his eyes at Geet giving her a pleading look.

"Me and Mr. Maan Singh Khurana are working for a deal together as business partners" Brij announced proudly.

Geet and Nandini stared at Brij shocked. Did she hear this well? Her brother was inviting her own death? Oh no, not again

Brij didn't notice Nandini and Geet staring at him. "Mr. Khurana is the best tycoon ever in Delhi" Brij continued.

DelhiDidn't she know about itIt was the same place, same person who left her nowhere; who insulted her like anything, kicked her out of his life.

Geet feared that she would start crying. She held Nandini's hand very tightly. Suddenly she felt someone tugging her sari. She looked down and saw her daughter who was giving her one of her mean looks. It was obvious she was feeling sleepy and her momma was busy talking to strangers than looking after her.

Geet forgot for a moment that she was cursing Mr. Khurana, she even forgot he was there; she just smiled at her daughter's innocent face who was giving her angry looks. "You're sleepy" Geet asked. Sanaya nodded and crawled on Geet, she hugged her firmly; resting her head on her shoulders.

Geet nodded at his brother; the Duke and back to Nandini, without looking at Maan, she walked away.

Maan looked at her moving figure with a hurt look. But the Duke didn't notice anything; so he continued talking about their deals to Maan, who kept saying "hmm" to everything.

Finally Brij excused himself and went to talk to the other guests. "Hello" Maan greeted Nandini. Surprisingly Nandini just scowled at him and said "no need to be a goody-goody, I know your true nature". She huffed away. Maan looked at her a little miffed.

"Did she know the truth?" he thought. "I better look for Geet".

Maan walked through zillions of corridors in search of his Geet. He wondered if she was still his.

Geet was busy making Sanaya sleep. In nanoseconds Sanaya had already fallen asleep. Geet patted her belly while ruffling her hair. She was smiling at her daughter who was her world. She then remembered that Maan was here, at her house. She sighed and took her diary and started to write:

He is back! The one who ruined my happy life! He is back! Back again

She sighed again. She wasn't in a mood of thinking of Maan. She closed her diary placed it on her bedside table and took her night-dress. She entered her bathroom.

Maan peered inside the room. He found Geet's daughter whoever she was, sleeping soundly. He tiptoed in her room and saw the little girl sleeping soundly.

She was fair as her mother, her eyes same as Geet, her curly short hair made her beautiful. She looked so cute in her pajamas.

Maan's eyes laid on the diary. He flipped some pages and acknowledged it was Geet's handwriting. He tucked the diary under his jacket and jogged back to the hall.

Geet came back; her eyes at once laid at her daughter. She couldn't help smiling.

"Oh God, I need some of my beauty sleep" she giggled.

She kissed her daughter's forehead; covered her with a blanket and went to sleep.

Maan looked at the diary. He had retired to his hotel's room that he had earlier booked. He closed his eyes and said "I have to do it sorry Geet"

He opened the first page.

Edited by music_girl - 11 years ago
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oh lovely 😊
waiting to know abt maan and geet's past hmmm

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