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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey music girl nice start..waiting 4 d nxt updt.
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Posted: 13 years ago
CAN YOU PLEASE GIVE THE CHAPTER NO, DATE AND PG OF UPDATE ON MAIN POST
WE CANT COME TO KNOW WHETHER IT HAS BEEN UPDATED
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤗thank you guys - you rock🤗

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update
want to know what has happened in the past - well; maybe in the next or the other part; thanks 😃

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsem wait to know more past thanks 😃

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

nyc updates. .thanks😃 ...

Originally posted by: zaara2212

loved it 😊

hmm sanya's baby talks are cute 😊 especially spaghetti😛

wonder what happened in the past hmmm I took the character "Sanaya" by watching my little cousin talking 😆😆😆 Thanks

Originally posted by: gill123

Love it hey thanks 😃

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Wonderful part...
Sanaya is so cute...😛🤗...
waiting for the story to reveal...
please update soon..
"I thought part 4 was boring 😆 nevermind... 😃

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awesome update

want to know past
what will be geet reaction now
cont soon
thanks for pm aww...thanks 😃 meena. sure, the past is coming 😆

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thnx 4 pm

maan and sanaya met
do continue thanks 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 5

He turned and saw Geet.

She was watching them; glaring.

Maan shrugged and handed her daughter to her.

Maan's POV

I don't know why she's so psyched about it. Come on, I was just holding her daughter! Yeah, her daughter! I wonder why I kept bragging her in every thought. Well, it's because of this kid that Geet isn't willing to listen to my apologizes.

I am having enough of it. She's glaring at him as if I am sort of animal who's going to hurt her daughter! Ditto! She thinks I'll hurt her daughter. Maybe she even thinks I am an animal? But I am not that bad. Well, I guess this word exactly fit me; for what I did. Yuck!

She's making me going crazy day by day! Me, Maan Singh Khurana, am begging some random girlwait a minute, she isn't some random girl! She is my Geet, only mine.

Now I wonder from where she became a Duchess; which is making my task million of times more difficult. And yeah, this sister of hers; keeps giving me her dirty looks all through the breakfast it's enough to put someone from eating! Gosh, whatever, tonight gonna be the night!

I am going to read this diary, with a full stop!

End of Maan's POV

"What happened baby?"

Geet's voice broke Maan's thoughts.

"Mama"

Again the word "mama" pierced his heart and broke it into gazillions of pieces.

"MamaBarbie didn't have breakfast!"

"What?" both adults cried.

"Barbie" Sanaya said pointing to the doll that Maan was holding. "She didn't eat" Sanaya said quickly and took a deep breath and continued.

"Lazyon (bone) she was sleeping!"

"Okay sweetie, what will Barbie eat?"

"Cereals"

"Are you going to feed her?" Maan couldn't help asking. Sanaya nodded her head for a 'yes'. "How" Maan couldn't resist asking. Sanaya looked at Maan confused. Then she pointed to her Barbie Doll's mouth. "Are you going to open her mouth and feed her?" Maan pressed grinning at the girl completely forgotten about Geet's existence for a moment.

Sanaya looked even more confused. She looked at Barbie doll's mouth and the patted it. Then she looked at her mother.

Maan was grinninggrinning like a monkey.

"What is he doing? Teasing my daughter! Oh God, this guyhe even teases a small babypoor baby; she'll start crying in nanoseconds thinking her doll doesn't have a mouth and can't eat" Geet thought and started to smile looking at Maan.

"Wowhe's grinning like a fool" Geet noticed and chuckled silently.

Sanaya was busy examining her Barbie's mouth; Maan was busy staring at the little girl; and Geet was staring at Maan's smile.

Maan torn his gaze from Sanaya and looked at Geet "how will she feed her?" he asked.

Geet smiled and said "maybe by the nostrils" and she laughed. Maan chuckled. Sanaya turned to look at them confused and started to cry "mamamamamamaBarbie doesn't have a mouthow she eat! She starve" she cried loudly. Maan and Geet's smile froze.

"Hush babyhush" Geet tried to make Sanaya stop crying but she kept chanting the same words. Maan looked guilty.

Geet didn't know what to do her cries were getting louder.

Maan was damn guilty.

"I don't blame Maan; I myself got carried away why didn't I stop him from asking these dumb questions when I knew Sanaya would start crying" Geet cursed.

"Come on, baby" Maan said snatching gently Sanaya from Geet's arm. Sanaya looked at the stranger who was now holding her. She had stopped crying. "You want a Barbie who has a big mouth?"

Sanaya nodded.

"I'll show you" Maan said wiping Sanaya's tears.

Sanaya nodded again.

Maan took Sanaya and started to walk towards the main entrance leaving Geet puzzled.

Without turning back Maan called "I am talking her for a walk for some minutes; when I'll come back I hope she forgets about this"

Geet nodded and took her heals to her bedroom.

After some minutes

"How could I let my daughter alone with him?"

"No" she gasped.

"He won't do anything" she debated.

"No, he won't, I trust him"

"Trust?"

"Yeah I trust him"

"Trust? Geet you TRUST him?"

Geet closed her eyes and found the word 'yes' coming from her mouth.

"Hello Barbie Dolls Limited Company I am Maan Singh Khurana, yes, I am ordering a barbie doll with a big mouth understood? A very big mouth! I need it by tomorrow? Yup, tomorrow? So be ready or else it won't be good for you"

Sanaya looked at Maan who smiled at her. "Let's go" he said and strolled around.

Geet peered outside the window.

She still remembered

Why doesn't he care?

Her face was drenched in tears. The door cracked. She turned. He had returned. He looked like a furious lion; breathing heavily. "GEET" he had roared

to be continued...

Edited by music_girl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
who is sanaya's father dear as her mother is definately geet there is no question about that
but who is the father
looks like she might be maan's daughter i might be wrong but do tell me

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