Kahe Toh Se Sajna/Thread # 1 / MG /FF - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
the setting of story is intresting and different
and geet seems a quite person
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
very interesting and
hutk
concept...Geet can't
speak...
Happy family. . Wow
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
amazing part
happy to see happy family
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Hey jass awsome written superb
Loved it very very good
Congrates for new ff
Thanks for pm do cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
congrats on the new ff...
hmm interesting prologue...
awesome update.. luved it..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Hey buddy,
hav'nt recd any pm yet neither of this ff nor od previous once.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
congrats on ur new ff dear...nice start ...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

well come dear

amazing part.. good start


waiting for next part... sad 4 geet

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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Note

Prologue

Kehte hai Pyar Andha Hota hai…Pyar koi Bandhan nahi manta…woh to ho haata hai…Agar woh ho jaata hai to kyon hota hai...Mujhe nahi pata Maan…na he main kabhi jaan payungi…Aur na keh paaungi…Apke liye mere ek Darr ne…Ek mazboori ne…Mujhe aapse baandh diyaa…Woh mazboori jisse na nikal pane k liye aap mazboor hai…...Jo shaayad kabhi khatam nahi hogi…..Ja agle he pal khatam ho jaaye…...Aise he ek pal main maine barson pehle sabh kho diyaa tha…Au raise he ek pal main maine aap ko paya hai…Jo apke liye to mazboori ban gaya hai…...Apki mazboori ne mujhe Duniya ki Adaalat main Apko apna Sajan banaanay per mazboor kar diyaaa…Aap kush nahi kar sakke…Per kissi din ussi Adaalat main aap ne mujge fir se Khadda kar diya to …Kya kahungi main…Apne Sajan se…Kyonki kush keh paaun…Woh haq Uper waale ne mujhse pehle he sheen liya…

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Author's note

Hey buddies here are some highlighted parts of prologue...I think many of my buddies not interested in my prologue...so not took it deeply..and said mother n daughter hav happy family..But plz look at highlighted red part..how her lif had passed through difficult conditions...Mazboori...means her lif is not good one...plz if u r not interested don't comment but not make fun of my creations...Ya I write for my satisfaction..But not lik a mad scientist who do his work without knowing its outcomes...I want also response...If nobody interested leave it .Even I m not getting which type of ideas attract people..even I went through many creations ..n I don't think k person lik me can't rite ..what's better in those creations ...I can't get...its better to leave



thx


Jass

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
hey dont get demotivated i like ur ideas
very good continue
i was waiting for ur ffs getting updated not for this kind of notes i m very upset that ur upset
plse continue yaar

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