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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing FF, do continue soon.
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Setting

A far away hilly area village ..some where in Himachal Pardesh.Where lif means a struggle. Struggle with self. This place has seen every aspects of nature Nature's smile n Nature's wrath. Hugh silver oak trees always remain such…standing…lik guarding the beauty of this place….The cool breeze gently touches bright yellow daffodils…lik forcing many suns to come down n dance. White lilies accompany them lik Moons can't liv without those suns …Bright Orange Gulmohars n scented cream Guldaudis spread lik carpets on earth….But this place is same where if nature gives ..same ruins…During winters ..where snow storms…force people to liv inside..thinking whether they gonna hav something to eat next time.Cloudbrusts,land slides, flood also nature giv…But people r happy coz whole world for them is here.What they hav they hav nothing more needed

Characters to be introduced

Rano : A middle aged lady lives with her daughter.Having no one other in her lif except her daughter.She stitches cloths for village people..A local boy Rahul who works in a woolen cloths show room at Shimla.Supply her with stock of wool yawns at weekend.As after staying for six days at Shimla.Rahul comes home at Saturday evenings n goes back Monday morning. Hand knitted cloths r much in fashion. Rano knits caps, mufflers, sweaters for his shop.He takes knitted cloths from last week's stock …when he came to supply her new stock.

Geet: Rano's 22 year old daughter.Have Hazel eyes n fair complex.lik nature has bestowed Geet with her whole treasure...Who works as a typist in A small apple juice factory 9 km away from this village…She works there for 4 days..as production is not much these days.Other days she helps her mother to knit cloths n other works outside home

Both mother n daughter r hard workers.Hence they r livin a quite liv happily.There dreams r not too big…so they hav enough to liv.


Saturday Evening

Rano was knitting her one of last caps from previous week's supply.She was in hurry so she decided to knit even late nite.Coz she had to sew cloths for Mona's wedding early next week.This is a huge order as marriage was arranged in hurry. Mona was Shankar Kaka's younger daughter Shankar Kaka local postman.Kaka got a suitable boy at Shimla so he was in hurry as upcoming winters gonna interrupt marriage if delayed more.Geet was cheeking some details to be typed .She had a type writer provided by office as she had much to type.

Rano: Geet beta mere madad ke de…tere pass to kal ka din hai…kar lenna kaam…yeh order pura karna hai..is ko pura karva do..fir apna kaam kar lena…..

Geet came smilingly n she started to knit other cap.Her hands had been much ruf ..Finger prints from tips had been disappered by continuously workin on type writer..as she also do extra work on it… every document required by villagers was duty of Geet to b typed.n she really gav her best.She couldn't say no..coz good had taken words from her.

Rano: Geet dekh in unn k gollon ( wool yawns ) per Devi Maa ki photo k sticker hai ….log yeh bhi nahi sochte..bhagwaan ko kyo hum aadar nahi detay.Aab in stickers ko uun hee phank nahi sakte..aisa karna kal jaakar Zheel ( lake) main jal parvah kar denna

Geet gav her response ny nodded her head in positive way..n closing her eyes.

Rano smiled n hugged her daughter

Precap: unexpected thing at lake side….



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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
Remya_Pillai thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
interesting prologue..
congrats for the new one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Wow nice start dear. . . Wow congratulation. . . Intrepting one. . Amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luvd it...
luvd deir small and happy family!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
great start love there happy family
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very unique and interesting concept...Geet can't speak...

please continue soon...

and please update ur other FFs also...

thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Amazing part one, poor geet cannot speak. Waiting to see what going to happen in the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys I am on phone online...so can't comment much n likes for u...morrow gonna reply plz forgiv me

Thanx for ur lov comments

Jass
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
congooo for the new ff
amazing start dear...
loved it...😊

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