FF:Pyaar Ka Rishta Final Chapter updtd Pg 67

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok guys.just trying this out.my hands are shaking while typing,but finally decided to post this.This is my first ever attempt at any kind of story.so please do tell me whether it's good enough or not and do not hesitate to point out the mistakes...that would be really helpful.Okay then here goes nothing😊

Pyaar Ka Rishta

Fireworks in the sky can be seen and a beautiful palatial home decked up like a bride with flowers and lights comes into view.The music and hustle-bustle indicates some sort of function going on in the house.A man in his fifties is taking care of all the guests.Suddenly he turns around and calls out"Panba,Dulha kahan hai?bahut der ho rahi hai.ab tak tho hamein wahan pahunchna chahiye tha..."Panba,his wife says with a smile"ji shaayad woh abhi bhi tayyar ho raha hai.main jaake dekhti hoon.aap chinta mat kijiye" Soma Patel or as people respectfully called him Motaba prayed in his mind"maavdi bas aapki kripa bani rahe tho sab shubh hi hoga" Upstairs in a darkened room a young man is pacing up and down, completely confused and restless"main yeh shaadi kaise kar sakta hoon.yeh tho sab ke saath dhokha hoga.yeh mujhse nahi hoga"he goes to his desk,takes out a pen and paper and writes something.He reads the letter and thinks"iske ilava mere paas aur koi raasta nahi hai,main dhokha nahi de sakta...lekin Panba aur Motaba"

Just then the door opens and his mother comes up to him"arre beta,aise andhere mein kyun baithe ho chalo jaldi neeche aao,hamein jaana hai na...sab log tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain"He tries to speak"Ba aap..." "nahi main kuch nahi sunoongi,tune mujhse vaada kiya hai.yaad hain na,ab jaldi se aaja"Panba replies with a hard look on her face and leaves the room.The young man looks on at the letter on the table helplessly,puts on the pagdi and leaves the room.Walking down the stairs he looks at his entire family smiling at him-Motaba,Panba,Giga kaka, Jamna Kaki,his sister Rewa,cousins Dushyant and Raman and Raman's wife Sudha.Just one person was missing his brother-the only one in whom he could confide. But now it is too late, he decides and forces a smile on his face. With all the rituals done the baraat starts for the bride's house.

Chapter 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=3

Chapter 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=5

Chapter 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=8

Chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=10

Chapter 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=13

Chapter7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=15

Chapter 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=18

Chapter 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=21

Chapter 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=23

Chapter 11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=27

Chapter 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=29

Chapter 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=30

Chapter14: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=33

Chapter15: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=35

Chapter 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=37

Chapter 17: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=40

Chapter 18: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=42

Chapter 19: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=44

Chapter 20: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=46

Chapter 21: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=47

Chapter 22-A: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=50

Chapter 22-B: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=50

Chapter 23: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67?pn=53

Chapter 24-A: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67

Chapter 24-B: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67

Chapter 25: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67

Chapter 26: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67

Chapter 27: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67

A New Beginning: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1947592/ff-pyaar-ka-rishta-final-chapter-updtd-pg-67




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prachurya thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow! First of all Nachooo ' coz u brought an FF!
The start is very intriguing- still a big suspense whether the groom is Vassy or Kesu. 😳
Awaiting the next chappie!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏Hey mini...me super excited...pls continue..i would love to read it..nachooo..me too prachu...thats too great a start👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mini...new FF...please do continue...now me also joining the dance...nacho...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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mini Wonderful dear..a very good start..am so eager to know whats going on...please update soon yaar😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachurya

Wow! First of all Nachooo ' coz u brought an FF!

The start is very intriguing- still a big suspense whether the groom is Vassy or Kesu. 😳
Awaiting the next chappie!

thanks a lot for the comment.It means a lot to me😊this is a result of reading all the wonderful FFs on this forum.so thanks for that😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: manzilmukul

👏Hey mini...me super excited...pls continue..i would love to read it..nachooo..me too prachu...thats too great a start👏


Piu,thanks a lot yaar for your encouragement.gives me confidence😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mini...wat a start...lovely yaar...
pls continue...next part jaldi la...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MR21

Mini...new FF...please do continue...now me also joining the dance...nacho...


Ramya,thank you😃maybe I will also join u all naachooo😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alanta

mini Wonderful dear..a very good start..am so eager to know whats going on...please update soon yaar😳

Atlanta,thank you for the comment😊will do as soon as possible.

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