FF:Pyaar Ka Rishta Final Chapter updtd Pg 67 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
Mini - update le aayi 🤗

Off to the comment straight up. The first scene between GK was so real! I could almost imagine being Kesar right there, watch someone who was beginning to affect my system, especially weighing down my conscious so strongly - sound up all that fake happiness for 'everyone's sake' and feel so helpless and mad all at once! And his reaction just makes you wonder all over again, how everyone in that house continues to live with the guilt of putting her singularly under the scanner and out to the situations of test - none of which she deserves or can handle forever!

PB was being what any mother in her place would be, I know, and despite how realistic that is, its just hard to not feel agitated by her double standards. Even more than Gulaal, she needs to be shaken up and told, Vasant is not coming back. I like how you brought up that point by the way, the way her mind is working and how she may find logic in putting Gulaal on the burner, because she still thinks it can become alright! If only she could move beyond Vasant coming back to be the saving grace again, perhaps she would venture to wonder if Gulaal, or any woman in her place, could, would, or even should truly accept such a man back in her life! I mean sure, Gulaal's the abandoned one here, so one can think on the surface about how if Vasant accepts her again it would be okay - but the real issue is (and would be, with or without a Kesar in her life) can she accept him again, without the prejudice of that past to stand record?!

I hope you were not trying to give us any hints about Rupa and Kesar btw?! 😆 Good for her the wedding is fixed - please pack her off already, I get all wary knowing any single girls are on the scene 😆 Rewa is, I repeat, such a sweetheart. MB is seemingly helpless - but sadly, that's not what a head of the family can afford to be. PB is going to need some hard lessons. Kesar is the angel of course - and Gulaal is already beginning to sense a brand new elixir seeping through her existence.

Loving the story Mini, update soon!

xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely lovely chapters mini 🤗 loved all of them, hey i like how the story is shaping up, n sorry dear for commenting so late, i was not able to do so due to Eid but have read all the chapters n really liking them, keep up the good work dear n Congratulations for starting a FF 👏 update soon dear, n i m loving the sweet chemistry between G n K but dear mujhe previous chapis k restaurant walay scene men aik cheez samajh nahi ayi thi, can i ask? 😳 otherwise great work yar, update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

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Mini...just wow yaar...thank you
ohh she was abt to say kesar to her father...feeling very sad for her...she has to say a big lie to her family on her birthday...bang on kesar for asking those questions that even she dont want to question herself...
Good to see every one are giving wishes to her...MB is really good yaar...magar PB😡...pehle hi gulaal ka zindagi kharaab kardi aur blessing bhi kya diya hai...an kesar n gulaal ka friendship se bhi usse problem hai...dekh PB is getting to my nerves slowly now...tu usse kuch karegi ya mein kuch karu...kya karoon ek villian tho chahiye na.and I will definitely as for your help when something has to done about her😆
helmet scene was really nice...aur bie mein sawaari...thanks😳
mandir scene...ofcourse log andhe toh nahi hai...hum kab thak koi baat chupaasakthe hai...but it really hurts her na...of course they will notice and though Gulaal is quite strong she does get hurt when people talk rubbish😭
loved the scene in gulaals house...kithne jhoot bolrahe hai...roopa ki shaadi fix hone waali hai...good that atleast gulaal koh ek problem kam toh hogi na...
loved the way she said why she is doing all this...kesar is speechless na...ohh ho sweet of kesar...party surprise for gulaal...such a sweetheart he is...gulaal all happy na...PB koh dhakhkha nikhaal ke ghar se bhahaar pekhde...if u need JK ki help lele...we dont mind...ok but thoda sa aur jhelna padega.wohi tho meri maggie masala hai😆

So there r having some awkwardness between them n they r brushing them too...but for how many days...looking forward for next one...update soon...


Ramya,thanks a lot for your lovely comment.means so much to me😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis

mixed feelings. kabhi kushi kabhi gham for gulsar in one day. bechara guyz tired hoga itna quickly emotions switch kiya just in one day uff.wow slowly gulsar fallng in love😊.nice kesar feeling when gulaal is sad.ya natural PB doesn't like if sanskar laxmi is happy. some dialogues i didn't understand becos i don't know hard hindi nice chapter 😊

Savz,I am so sorry about it.If you can tell me which bit you did not understand maybe I can roughly translate it to you😊I tried writing the dialogues in English but I felt that it would make more impact if written in Hindi cause in my head the characters are always speaking in Hindi.thanks for liking it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

beautiful chapii gulaal hiding the truth from the family is heart wrenching feel for revji and poonamji and she is fullfilling the duty of elder sister is so beautiful and kesar putting helmet lol can expect this from him and the push pull was intense bache ne phir thapad nahi khaya bach gaya and he made the bday plan so sweet and no gift for her bad kesar ek bday hug hi kar liya hota and thenga to panba

lovely chapii minizz and i m so graeful that u update daily u know these days wen we cant entertain ouself ur ff is real saviour feels like watching a daily show i hope u continue updating us daily and want so many chapiis😃 thanks a lot😊

Arti,thanks for your comment😊and I am glad you are liking it.very happy that you liked the push pull thing between GK though it's not yet intense.ek b'day hug-tumhe kisi na kisi tarah se GulaaI- Kesar thappad scene chahiye na,that's why you want Kesar to give her a hug.I know but maybe I can fulfill that wish of yours in some distant future😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Mini - update le aayi 🤗awww... Jzee


Off to the comment straight up. The first scene between GK was so real! I could almost imagine being Kesar right there, watch someone who was beginning to affect my system, especially weighing down my conscious so strongly - sound up all that fake happiness for 'everyone's sake' and feel so helpless and mad all at once! And his reaction just makes you wonder all over again, how everyone in that house continues to live with the guilt of putting her singularly under the scanner and out to the situations of test - none of which she deserves or can handle forever! thanks for liking it.you know I could see that scene in my mind and I just kept on typing.I love writing GK😊

PB was being what any mother in her place would be, I know, and despite how realistic that is, its just hard to not feel agitated by her double standards. Even more than Gulaal, she needs to be shaken up and told, Vasant is not coming back. yepI like how you brought up that point by the way, the way her mind is working and how she may find logic in putting Gulaal on the burner, because she still thinks it can become alright! If only she could move beyond Vasant coming back to be the saving grace again, perhaps she would venture to wonder if Gulaal, or any woman in her place, could, would, or even should truly accept such a man back in her life! I mean sure, Gulaal's the abandoned one here, so one can think on the surface about how if Vasant accepts her again it would be okay - but the real issue is (and would be, with or without a Kesar in her life) can she accept him again, without the prejudice of that past to stand record?! I have something planned in my mind regarding this.Let's see how it pans out.

I hope you were not trying to give us any hints about Rupa and Kesar btw?! 😆 no way,Jzee I can assure you that will never happen.see that's why her wedding is fixed😆Good for her the wedding is fixed - please pack her off already, I get all wary knowing any single girls are on the scene 😆 Rewa is, I repeat, such a sweetheart. MB is seemingly helpless - but sadly, that's not what a head of the family can afford to beMB is not in his element right now.but who knows it may change later on.Let's see. PB is going to need some hard lessons. Kesar is the angel of course - and Gulaal is already beginning to sense a brand new elixir seeping through her existence.

Loving the story Mini, update soon!

xx

Jzee,thanks a lot for the support.very happy that you are liking it.will try to update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

lovely lovely chapters mini 🤗thank you so much😃 loved all of them, hey i like how the story is shaping up, n sorry dear for commenting so late, i was not able to do so due to Eid but have read all the chapters n really liking them, keep up the good work dear n Congratulations for starting a FF 👏 update soon dear, n i m loving the sweet chemistry between G n K but dear mujhe previous chapis k restaurant walay scene men aik cheez samajh nahi ayi thi, can i ask? 😳 otherwise great work yar, update soon 😊

Kiran,thanks for the comment and I am very happy that you are liking it.so kya doubt hai,pucho na.It regarding the dialogues or the scene itself.please do tell me about it😊thank you once again.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Mini..yaar me a lil sick so chotu comment..loved the last two chappis..yaar..



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Posted: 13 years ago
aaj hi padha mine all the chapters very nice and lovely yaar
ye dono pehale se hi dost hai na acchii baath hai 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
comments updated in pg.14..😃

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