FF:Pyaar Ka Rishta Final Chapter updtd Pg 67 - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago

So Kesar in reflective mode again! Arrey yaar yeh sach main kuch bol payega yaa nahi😆…that day too he was just dreaming about her and poor Sharamaji had to bear the brunt….But he need not be worried about loosing friendship na, she is already so desperate to hear what he has to say…sigh! I hope the day comes soon….and Reva is no where around, twice now she has stopped him…Don't get me wrong…I do love her in this FF she's been great…but aise hi chalta raha to Kesu bechara kab confess kar payega?😲 Arrey yaar itna rear view mirror dekhega to ek din car thok dega😉 sahi main jaldi confession karwa then she will sit on side seat na not behind...

Why is Reva so keen to send him away…arrey usse Gulaal ke exams pass hone ki news to pata chalne deti..na..Aur Sudha ka prob kya hai…accha khasa Dulli angle ban raha hai,usko dur hi rakh…😡

That phone convo between GK and RK was so sweet and emotional😳, They are still struggling to come to terms with their brother's death na…and Gulaal is real strength for both of them…That was excellent scene yaar…very touching….Aur Talli's realisation…aha! I hope Dushyant aur who hamesha ek saath Khush rahe…God Dushy ko utni strength, courage aur patience de …aur ye dono jaldi se marriage karke GK ka road clear kare…😃..

And now to the best part of the chappi☺️…Finally he completed what he started at the door the other night…haha you described it so well that fleeting kiss…aur woh nataku Gulaal……Can you please please bring next chappi really quickly😍 and yes exclsive GK…please?

Mini Thanks for a lovely chappi 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Mini I really love ur way of story telling, so interesting and unexpected turns..need not to say, I enjoyed the last bit...so cute yaar 😳update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mini so well written par itna chotu chappi kyu,ab aage gul aur kesar ka romance dekhna hai,jaldi se bada chappi laa
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Posted: 13 years ago
updated comment on page 35 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

aray yeh kab aaya 😲


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hey mini very nice chapi dear 🤗 car men kya ho raha tha 😆 n the song, oh i love it, n rewa also loves the song, she is a sweet heart, gud she understood what was going on between GK 😳 n result dekhne when she took gulaal with her, kesar had to feel irritated na 😆 n yeh sudha toh peeche hi par gayi talli k, talli is so sweet that she loves dushyant, sudha ko toh i vl throw somewhr 😕 n kesar took gulaal to her room n kissed her forehead, aww so sweet but he didnt even come to know that gulaal was awake 😳 update soon mini, n tell me y this chapi was small? waiting for next long chapter 😃

Kiran,thank you for liking it.well the song is special to them na.they had their first dance to it😳while writing it,I thought it was big enough baad mein when I posted patha chala it's small.but I was feeling lazy sorry for that😊will try to update soon.thanks for the support.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

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Mini..such a lovely chapter...thank you😊
kesar understands her fear that she is not showing to anyone...as he think its only he who can bring that lost happiness in her life...ab confess karde yaar...ladki kab se wait karrahi hai uske liye...but we have to see his dilemma as well..he cant lose her friendship for love na...thoda sa darr hai,hope he will get over it soon.
offo car ki rare view mirror se eye-lock...just love this song mini...me love this reva...she is sweet sis n SIL...I too love this song.If only we had seen this song instead of "yeh jeevan hai" in the show😭
reva pass hogayee..but kesar ka baat toh poori kardena hotha...kitna mushkil se kuch kehn achaaha...but reva interrupted na...n dekho kesar koh jaane koh kehrahi hai...
Sudha koh baad mein phekdo yaar...not sure wht problems she will create to talli-dushy n kesar-gulaal now...n more over pb bhi uski side hai na...
loved the phone call bit...kesar dont want to make reva angry at him na..he so misses vasant...me just loved this scene...two dimensions of kesar-gulaal n kesar-reva...thank you
talli all feeling for dushy...ab toh she is confirm that she loves him...talli tu na dushy se future planning banaale...
kesar coming home late n gulaal waiting fr him without eating food...how sweet...n he lifting her in his arms...n i just loved loved the scene in her room...she realizing his gaze on her...n also the small kiss...n she thinking abt the kiss..me all dreaming now...just a perfect scene to end chapter...

Waiting for next chapter mini..update soon...

Ramya,thanks for the lovely comments.This means a lot to me.sorry for the late reply.yesterday I was feeling very lazy😊will try to update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

oh boy its fifth time i m writing the comment i hope it gets posted...it's so irritating na.happened to me twice😡ok coming to the chapii i m floating in the air too such a brilliant chapii minizz loved how kesar was all niharofying gulaal from the rear mirror and the song was so apt anyone can lost in such a soulful song and rewa finally caught them aah such a sweet and lovely sister sudha witch get the life whats ur problem lady if talli prefer dushy but somehow wenever i see them together the last scene from the original show flashes in my mind and i go all rofling how much we carved for dulli and the producer showed us big thenga but here the mission impossible become dulli possible😳..just tried my hand at it.never thought everyone would love it so much or it must be the fact that Talli will no loger be a threat to KG😆thanks for that though i feel for bechara dushy i cant hate him to that core k i pray for him and talli poor soul and love how these tow lovebirds dulli and GK are finding thier solace in the house and then kesar fear about his sis was so touching oow let me hug u sweety and then the last scene loved loved loved it he carried her in his arm planted a kiss and she thought about the kiss what else we should ask for ...everything is going perfect bas sudha and pb doesnt created any problem

fantastic chapii minizz and i hope my comment gets posted

Arti,thanks a lot.so happy that you loved the last scene.was a little nervous writing it.will try to update soon.thanks for all the support.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: enchanted23

So Kesar in reflective mode again! Arrey yaar yeh sach main kuch bol payega yaa nahi😆'that day too he was just dreaming about her and poor Sharamaji had to bear the brunt'.But he need not be worried about loosing friendship na, she is already so desperate to hear what he has to say'sigh! I hope the day comes soon'.and Reva is no where around, twice now she has stopped him'Don't get me wrong'I do love her in this FF she's been great'but aise hi chalta raha to Kesu bechara kab confess kar payega?😲 Arrey yaar itna rear view mirror dekhega to ek din car thok dega😉 sahi main jaldi confession karwa then she will sit on side seat na not behind... bechara uska pehla pyaar hai thoda tho taras khao but shaayad jaldi boldega.and Rewa being KMH,kisi ko tho banana tha tho use bana diya😆

Why is Reva so keen to send him away'arrey usse Gulaal ke exams pass hone ki news to pata chalne deti..na..Aur Sudha ka prob kya hai'accha khasa Dulli angle ban raha hai,usko dur hi rakh'😡

That phone convo between GK and RK was so sweet and emotional😳, They are still struggling to come to terms with their brother's death na'and Gulaal is real strength for both of them'That was excellent scene yaar'very touching'.Aur Talli's realisation'aha! I hope Dushyant aur who hamesha ek saath Khush rahe'God Dushy ko utni strength, courage aur patience de 'aur ye dono jaldi se marriage karke GK ka road clear kare'😃..main bhi saath mein pray karungi😆

And now to the best part of the chappi☺️'Finally he completed what he started at the door the other night'haha you described it so well that fleeting kiss'aur woh nataku Gulaal''Can you please please bring next chappi really quickly😍 and yes exclsive GK'please?thank you for liking it.It's my first time writing anything like this so I was feeling very nervous about it.Thank you so much🤗

Mini Thanks for a lovely chappi 🤗

Aditi, thanks so much for your comments.so happy that you are liking it.will try to update soon.and exclusive GK,I will try😊Thanks for the support.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alanta

Mini I really love ur way of story telling, so interesting and unexpected turns..need not to say, I enjoyed the last bit...so cute yaar 😳update soon😊

Atlanta,thank you so much for the lovely compliment.will try to update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sauris

Mini so well written par itna chotu chappi kyu,ab aage gul aur kesar ka romance dekhna hai,jaldi se bada chappi laa


Sauris,thank you so much for your wonderful comments.means a lot to me.sorry for the chotu chapter.will try to make the next one bigger😊thanks for the support.

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