You Are Always Mine..!!A SAJAN FF.epilogue 130 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
"Jo mera nai hota..usey mein kise aur ka honey nai deta"

This Line Make Me Curious I Think Samrat Did It With Gunjan For Bet Or Maybe Lust 😳 Just Proves That He Used Her I Think But Now Loves Her & Maybe Realised His Mistake 😳 This Line Seems SOOO Cheap From My Side . & Poor Gunjan, Something Has Happened & She Know That She Couldn't Be Anyones Else Than Samrat . SOOO Samrat Was Right Naa About This Line ?! High Expactions Nowww ;) 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

When Are You Planning To Updateee ?! 😳

tonight sanz 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

"Jo mera nai hota..usey mein kise aur ka honey nai deta"

This Line Make Me Curious I Think Samrat Did It With Gunjan For Bet Or Maybe Lust 😳 Just Proves That He Used Her I Think But Now Loves Her & Maybe Realised His Mistake 😳 This Line Seems SOOO Cheap From My Side . & Poor Gunjan, Something Has Happened & She Know That She Couldn't Be Anyones Else Than Samrat . SOOO Samrat Was Right Naa About This Line ?! High Expactions Nowww ;) 🤗

lolzzz..sanzzz hehe...lets seee...but i thinks it wil be different...😆dont raised ur expectations dear...coz i am not sure about anything...😳...but i wil try best not to make u disappoint...i wil update soon..i love this line too😉
Edited by mars14 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: fend

hey merrii
first of all congrats for ur new ff🥳
loved the concept n cs its awesome👏
loved the intro part it was superb👏
very well written
do cont soon
thanks for the pm

hey rukma api
thanks a lot
thank u soo much ..m gladd u loved it...i hope u wil love next too thanks a lot...

Originally posted by: kins103

nice one

continue soon

thanks dear
thanks a lot sarah

Originally posted by: princess_sara

Unress

*edited*

Welll ...now what to say..u r again out with an awesome story on sajan.
which literally Drag me in the Dreamland of sajan.

and coming to the story..i think it is going to be a super duper amazing.
and all the flashes of sajan passionate scenes.gave me a pleasure reading it..lolz.. but i mean it...

sooo plzzz dear...try to continue sooon.
cuz i can't wait to read it further...


cont asap.

Sarah.

hey Sarah thank u sooo muchhh for super duperrr comentt...
i was too in sajan dreamland lolzzz

i hope sooo tooo...a lots of more to come...lolzz
i wil update soon dear.thank u sooo much

Originally posted by: princess_sara

CONGRATS DEAR FOR A NEW SS ON SAJAN

Party..Party...party...party...party... :) :) :) :) :)

cont sooon.

Sarah

thanksss a lot...wil going to update my all ffs😆party khahn hai mjhey bhe batao lolz

Originally posted by: SM_317

wow congoo 4 ur new ss..🥳i knw this ss will be equally amazing lyk ur previous ones,😳awesomee concept..cont asap nd thnks 4 pm..

hey thanks a ton...aw...i realy hope sooo..thank u soo muchhh

Originally posted by: Ayesha_LuvSaJan

OMG ! Yayyee A new FF on SaJan 😳
loved your CS and introduction !!
Can't wait for this FF to start
continue soon
and add me to your pm list

heyyy ayshhh tahnk uuu sooo muchhh...wil update soon dear...u r always in pm list😃n on top of my frnds list😉

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER

Very Nice CS and Starting part was also Good. Story is looking interesting. Waiting for Flashback parts. so,do continue soon. Thanx a lot 4 the PM. and, Yaa...Presentation is much better then your previous FF.

thanks a lot for the enouraging comment...thank u so much...

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

wats dis!!!!!!!!!!! wid each ff of urs...u g8 better n better!!!!!!!!!!!11 superb yaar!!!!! best of luck...hum toh hain hi padhne k liye bekaraar!!!!!!!

heyyy sammm...thank u thank u all coz of u guys...thanks a lot...n mein update karney k lea lolzzz

Edited by mars14 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: saniya456

awsum & luvly its so intrstng i like it...👏 thnx 4 da pm me...😳

thanks a lot saniya...
thanks radhi😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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CHAPTER ONE
The rising of Sun hidden behind greish clouds, slow drizzling and the pleasant breeze blowing in Swizertland gave life to every creature... The clock struck seven and alarm start ringing..
Gunjan s sleep got distrubed and she wakes up. She put off the alarm. With heavy steps, she takes the towel and clothes and went in washroom closing door at back... After half an hour.. She came out dressed in green skirt with mahroon blouse drying her hairs ..
GUNJAN:rythm..rythm uth jao jaan
Gunjan slightly shaked rythm and then get buzi with her hairz. Rythm turned around but sunrays didnt alow him to sleep in peace.so he get up rubing his eyes with his palms.
RYTHM:gud morning mama...
Gunjan smiled at him and kises his forehead..
GUNJAN:gud morning jaan. Now go and get ready.. Mein breakfast banati hon...
RYTHM:mom..
GUNJAN:no excuses. U have to go to school..get up..hury up now
Rythm deprestly get up kising her forehead he left. Gunjan get ready. And went in kitchen. She made breakfast and served it. She called Rythm and both mother son have a chit chat while having breakfast. They pick up their stuff and locking the apartment rythm n gunjan went downstairs..they sat in car and set off. In eight yearz, gunjan was able to maintain the living standard. A livly luxurious lyf to rythm upto some extent...
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Sunrays distrubed his sleep. He wakes up and saw tym it was 7.. He went to get ready feeling extremly strange depresion...he went in kitchen make a sandwhch n a cup of coffee. He left at half past seven for office.. He enjyd the cool breeze... He reached office at eight. Everyone welcomed him warmly.. Each eye having an appreciation .. Where he had a decorative fake smile on face... Reaching in his cabin,he felt his heart heavy,... Dont know he was feeling strange pain ...
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GUNJAN:rythm lunch rakh diya hai yaad sey kar lena.
RYTHM:aur apka ?
GUNJAN:mein ofice sy kha lon ge.
RYTHM:lunch mein tab karun ga jab ap ho ge sath. .
GUNJAN:i wil be busy rythm.
RYTHM:health kam sey zyada important hai.
Gunjan smile at his anoyed face. She stoped car and puled his nose.
GUNJAN:ok boss.. I wil be at home in noon..Mama k sath gusa karna acha nai hota.
RYTHM:sorry but i wil not be agree with you at wrong point.
GUNJAN:you dont have to rythm.
RYTHM:take care Mom and dont forget to come for lunch. I wil wait for you.
GUNJAN:ok jaan.. U too take care. Love you.
RYTHM:love you too Mum..!
Rythm huged her and kissed her cheeks. Gunjan kissed his forehead.
GUNJAN:bye rythm.
RYTHM:bye mom.(just then rythm remembrd) I hope ur new boss wil not be rude. Best of luck.
Gunjan smiled.
GUNJAN:i hope so too...dont argue with anyone..ok..
RYTHM:wrong people needs correction always mom. bye..
GUNJAN:u can t be changed.. bye.
RYTHM:never!
Gunjan smiled as he went away n get vanished in building.

Gunjan drived to her office RGS... Today she wasnt in any mood of doing work but world dont move on our wishes. As she passed the lobby,everyone greeted good morning. She smiled at them n went at the receptionist as to submit some files..she heard some gals..

He is dam hot yaar...
He is so handsome yaar..
Jb wo hansta hai tou merey dil k to dhakan tez ho jati hai ...
Aur jab wo bolta hai to lagta hai k bus wo bulta rahe aur mein sunti rahon...
Sach mein yaar i am in love with him...


Gunjan shaked head helplesly. But her heart beat was no doubt racing faster n faster...but why ? Just then she heard a voice...
"Miss gunjan.."
She turned n find the former c.e.o .

(Mr. Shubhankar...he is very nyc nature n mature old man. He considerz gunjan lyk his own daughter and cares for her n rythm a lot..to him every guy z son n every gal z daughter)

GUNJAN:gud mrning sir.
SHUBHANKAR:gud mrning beta. Kasey ho beta?
GUNJAN:mein tekh hon sir.ap kasey hain ?
SHUBHANKAR: phely sey better hon...par doctorz ney bed rest ka bola hai. Aj bus tmhey good bye aur good luck bolney k lea aya tha aur new c.e.o sy tmhara introduction bhe karwa deta hon take wo meri pyari si beti ka khayal rakhey. Bohat acha farmabardar beta hai wo..
GUNJAN:thank you sir. Its realy v.kind of you. Dont worry about me. I wil be fine. Ap bus apna khayal rakhey ga.
SHUBHANKAR:merey dil ko sakon tab miley ga jab meri beti kush rahe ge. Chalo ao tmhey milwa don tmharey new boss sey... Dont wory tmhey jo bhe problem ho usey bol dena...ya mjhy tou tm bata he sakti ho..

(gunjan thinks in world some relations we get in a bonus from Almighty.. And those are indeed v. Precious and a great suport for you.)

(they moves towards the cabin...)

GUNJAN:jii... Naam kiya hai unka?
(mr.shubhankar open the door and led her in)
SHUBHANKAR:Samrat Shergill.
GUNJAN:SAMRAT SHERGILL..

She repeats with stammering voice..and hearing her magical voice and her pleasant fragrance He turned to them and its lyk the end of life for both of them at that moment.

SHUBHANKAR:samrat yeh Miss.gunjan buhshan...
(cel start ringing)...excusme..
SAMRAT:MRS.GUNJAN SAMRAT SHERGILL..
(shubhankar left without hearing it.while 4 both of them was a STOP)

Hoon Aj Tk May Isi Baat Pe Heraan...

Tum Ho Mere Aur Mujhay Hee Muyassar Nahi...!

...
GUNJAN S POV:
At last! At last! It happened. What my sxth sense were alarming from morning.. Yeah i heard right... SAMRAT SHERGILL... this name ... Raised my heartbeat... Awaken my sensatins... The feeling i used to feel eight yearz before... Same Perfum. Yeah.. I can feel his Fragrance, his Presence.. My feelings for him... The gals compliment. I felt myself burning. jealousd. Yeah i am feling to go and kill them. How they dare to say or even think about My Samrat. He is Mine.. Nothing new for me...same possessivness, He z the first n last guy came in lyf...!!!

SAMRAT S POV:
I heard her. The Same Magic..The Same musical tone...my heart beats in same maner as it used to... The Same feelings. I turned and saw my wish to be fulfiled after long wait of Eight Yearz...Shez my love!i hate any1 caling her not from my name. She z Mine..


GUNJAN S POV.
After Eight Yearz... My eyes were seeing him.. I felt the same glow in my eyes... He was still handsome,hot,charming,attractive and MY SAMRAT...yeah his hairz had grown a bit..he must be careless in having a haircut..spectacles oh he dont lyk them..instead always used contact lense.but y now ?..his dressing Dashing n Amazing lyk always... My cheeks were deepend in dark shade.. Why not ? That blush was just meant for him... I shiverz just in same way i used to when find his gaze on Me...his voice..the same Possessivness..for me..i felt my breaths stoped. It was all Same...all which happened when we met for first tym...


SAMRAT S POV.
OMG!It was unbelievable. I was seeing my Chashmish.. my Gunjan...beautiful...black shiny hairz...a bit short length. She cut her long hairz. Why? I always used to admire them...spectacles...her eyes i love them...her cheeks..blush...she was same...my eyes had glow just it used to be see her.. My heart beat raced in same maner. Attractivness ... Towards her... In same way... Carving to have her in arms.. Just Same feelings when we met for first time,...!!


They keep on Staring for five mins...and tearz formed in eyes of joy n pain.. Mr. Shubhankar came back.

SHUBHANKAR:i have to go. Samrat gunjan i wil meet you tomrow. Best ov luck...Samrat..Gunjan..Samrat..!
Sajan broke eye contact..
SAMRAT:yeah. Sorry sir.
SHUBHANKAR:everythng fine na?(sajan noded)okay then see u both...Bye..
He left...Now Sajan were all alone.

kaisay aik lafz main bayaan karun???

Dil ko kis baat ne udaas kea...!!!

Gunjan pov.
I wanted to held him from coller and to ask from him Why he left me ? Why he done that with me ? Why? But No. My ego didnt alow me. My self respect didnt alow me. When SomeOne leave u without your Mistake then how wil you alow urself to make urself dust of their feets?he had done for twice leaving me alone to suffer..i dont want myself to break down in front of him So i truned to go..but..!

Samrat s Pov.
We were alone. I want to keep on stare at her. I want to held her...and shake her..asks her why she left me ? Why she didnt forgive me? I was true to her. I knw i was wrong but ? She could punish me. Why left me ? But my ego n self respect didnt alow me. When u had done everythng for that persn n they left you all alone... U felt lyk cheated.. She turned to go but i try to stop her..
Gunjan turned to leave when samrat spoke up...


SAMRAT:chash...

She cuts him seeing him with hurt n tearz in eyez and pain in words..

GUNJAN:Gunjan Bhushan..Your personal asistance..how can i serve you Sir ?

His heart pinched hard..overcoming on the oceans of emotions he asked bending on table...
SAMRAT:RGS ka past record ?
GUNJAN:i will send it in Two mins ..
Saying this She left..leaving a hurt Samrat..it feels like someone stabs his heart hard...

Gunjan s Pov.
Being harsh with him. I wished myself to be die... To hurt him..i wished myself to be buried in mud...but i couldnt help it. I dont want myself to lose. Where i wshed to hear him calling me.. His hurt tone.. pierced my heart.. I want to die!!


SAMRAT S POV.
Shez still angry wth me. Why? Why it hapenz to me? Her harsh tone. Pain in voice. Her complaning eyes. Hurts me badly. Pinched my heart. Pierced my chest... I feel kiling myself on giving her pain...my ego dont want to show the pain n hurt but I wasnt able to hide my Pain and Hurt... I wished to die!!


Udasi tum pe beety gi to tum b jan jao gy...

,,,,Koi nazar andaz karta hai to kitna dard hota hai.

She left and Samrat drop himself on Seat..eyes closed..tearz droping..

Coming in her cabin,her tearz streamed out...

usne toda wo talluk jo meri jaat se tha..

Usko ranz na jane meri kis baat se tha..

Anjaan raha logo ki tarh wo bhi mujhse..

Jo achhi trah wakif mere haalat se tha..

...
(one thing to mention. Rythm z realy an extra ordinary kid. A very Mature Kid. As u wil read nxt u wil fel lyk hez nt a kid but in my ff he realy is :P so pls bear it if u found it unreal..but for me its not.)
As Rythm enterz in class heard few sentences hitting on him lyk Stones...

Oh see see Who comes?
RHYMING POEM...

Rythm smiled helplesly.. These taunts realy doesnt meant to him. Like always he ocupied the first bench and saw written different taunts. He ignored them..he was in 5th grade.. The taunting section may be goes on but the teacher came and all get quite ... The teacher takes attandance and after it she asked students to open books... And as rythn saw the name of chapter.. He felt someone pinched his heart hard n tearz brimmed in eyes...
TEACHER:rythm u start reading the chapter. Students title of story is An Orphan...
Someone from back cried.
An orphan wil read orphan..
And other students start laughing. The Teacher made them Quite...
TEACHER:Rythm...
RYTHM:i am not an orphan. Samrat Shergill is my Father and he is alive...
He completed with shaking voice.. He raised from his seat and start reading the lesson.. And now his voice had same frequent flow lyk usual.. He hadnt learn from her mother to broken down in front of everyone... He had stonger mind than usual age felows...
As he finished reading teacher praised of him a lot...he smiled fakely.everything remains fine but Rythm s mind was doubled..wandering in a single sentence..that make him weak always...he wants to cried his heart aloud but his inner didnt alowed him.. Till mid break bell rang..rythm was putting his books back when a group of boys walks to him...
Boy:hey book worm.
Rythm looks at them.. David and his friends were there. David was realy jealoused of Rythm s brightness and Popularity among students n teachers both..
RYTHM:Hi David.
DAVID:So you are not or...
Rythm cuts of him ..
RYTHM:i told u i am not.. Rythm Shergill son of Samrat Shergill...
DAVID:where is he ? We never saw ? Tel us about him.
Rythm remained quite. He was lost in thoughts..
DAVID:why are u lying? Why dont you acept that u r an orphan.?
RYTHM:I AM NOT AN ORPHAN.
His tone wasnt harsh or rude..he was realy a calm kid.. He was ryt n he had no need to show anger as to prove himself right... He left ... He was now in lonly area of school and tearz escaped...he wiped them..

Rythm S Pov:
I am not an orphan. I know. Dad wil come one day for sure i know. He loves mom and... Might Me too!! God i asks you plz give me one chance i want to see my parents together. I want to be with them. I want to walk helding my mom dad s hand. I want to show Dad my achievments. I want to play with him. I want to do masti with mom alng him. I want to surprise him on his bday. I want to see my mom hapy with him. Plz God u always listen my prayerz plz do me this favour i want my dad to know his son is pride for him.. .. U dont make good people sad. My mom never hurts anyone Plz make her happy. Plz gave her his love. Plz God, just for once gave me a chance to unite my Parents once again!!!!!


PRECAPE:

I have no right to hide it from Rythm. I am not Selfish.

Thank you God.. You are my best friend.

Who are you ? Why are you staring at me from so long Dude ?


NOTE:
Do coment how u felt reading it?sory if it was boring povs..but i am teling u already its will be lyk that.. Dialouges wil be less.. Story z all about feelings of these three characterz. And if u think i am not justifying with charcterz kindly tel it openly..i wil not feel bad..coz i knw its my first tym for writing such an emotional ff n i am realy bad in it.. If u are not lyking it plz tel me honestly i wil not continue it...!!!
LOVE
MARIE
Edited by mars14 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
wonderful update..its sad that people tease rythm...hopefully rythm will meet samrat and help sajan get over there ego...cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Merri🤗 sorry i thought I already edited my comment..😳 Gunjan & Rythm have adorable MOM & SON relation...It so sweet the way they takecare of each other & be there for each other.😍.We can make out Rythm is matured & responsible than kids of his age..😃The best part I liked about The update is SAJAN CONNECTION..❤️ The way they can feel eachother's presence & inner thoughts & feelings..😛 SaJan meeting was mind blowing..😍 True love never dies & can never be hidden..Their response to each other was understandable..Bcse of their past...Can't wait to read more..Plzz continue soon..Precap was very interesting..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
superb update
hope rythm will make sajan together
feeling bad for sajan and rythm

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantastic update loved it finally sajan met after 8 yrs felt bad for rhythm

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