You Are Always Mine..!!A SAJAN FF.epilogue 130

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You Are Always Mine...!!! A SAJAN FF

Love..!!
A word which can make u the happiest person or the saddest person of the world. The feeling which gave us the most heavenly union Or gave the most painful seperation.

When two people fell in love.. Trust,understanding counts the most.. When u dont trust ur partner then u have no right to be with ur partner...

Ego always spoil the relationship. Selfishness cant give happiness. It always hurts u badly.

Misunderstandings...! The bigest enemy of a relationship..and are worst when are not tried to be cleared.

You Are Always Mine.</font>..is a journey of two people...who were perfect match for each other...love was always in their heart...but ego,misunderstandings and selfishness or selfesness created by themselves ruined their lyf...!!

When love is true then fate brings the two lovers themselves..made for each other aredestined to be together..!

Fate gave rarely the second chance...and even then too only few one used it and..learnt lesson from past mistakes..!

It is the biggest reality that without Trust,Love,Compromise and Sacrifices... a relatinship cant be succeeded.
A SAJAN LOVE STORY..Having love,romance,passion,happiness with tears,pain,sepration...!!!
You Are Always Mine!!!!

Note:story wil have past and present...eight yearz leap between it...and story will be unfolded slowly...and yeah as title shows story reflects Love makes us Possessive about our loved one and its positive n negative effects!!!


Plz scroll down for CS..



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CHARACTERS SKETCH
Characterz are inspired from real lyf having all mixed emotions.. as in our usual lyf we dont get control of our all emotions at the right tym lyk anger..our egos..self respect..selfishness..selflesnes..regrets..pain...expectations..attraction.
.passion...hate..revenge...beside that all we want our love beside us all tym and happiness.our all desires to get acomplished..we are possessive about our love!!our mixed cnfused all over changing emotions n mood swings!!

(present status wl be explained here)

SAMRAT SHERGILL :

A successful buisnessman..c.e.o of Shergill Industries...living alone in mumbai from past eight yearz..and now..is moving to Swizertland..as invited to join RGS...and also with a hope to get his desired dream to be fulfiled...living in vila near a beautiful beach with HIS WIFE...who left him eight yearz ago!!! He z much extra possessive and beter say a Janonii one..if he loves anythng then he wil make sure it wl be his only purely...he cant bear any cheating...he z a bit egoist too...but at same tym he knows how to love selflesly and be true to anyone.his a bad habit..he z over possessive and also he dont show of his feelings eaisly.he ruined his lyf himself...y?what?when?how!!!!read the story..at present he z regreating..he loves his wife lyk nothing..and want her..to ask for forgivness or waiting for her to forgive him..!!

GUNJAN BUHSHAN:

She is living with her son, Rythm...and is doing job as persnal asistance of C.E.O of RGS brand..(Royal Glow Suits)...but nw apointed FOR New C.E.O Of RSG...she left india eight yearz ago...she mises her first love..her husband..but dont want to acept it..or can say want him but her ego or self respect dont alow... To trust again z dificult for her...she was hurt badly.. She z trying to make herself hapy by keeping away herself from him...cheating herself or say punishing herself for doing mistake called Love!!! She z ziddii or say determined!! Lyf relaties made her stubborn.

Rythm Shergill:

A cute 7 yearz old lively kid.. Loves his mom a lot. Mises his father too a lot,and he knows Samrat by Pic...and is determined to see his Parents united again n get his family..!! only knows that their parents love each other but are away coz of some misunderstanding..He iz far mature than his age felowss !! Blesfuly born inteligent!!caring protective n loving son ...n mix habits of his dad n mom...

Other character wl be explained later as story will be continued!! Story wl be focused on sajan and also a bit rehan...how a kid sufer too sometyms coz of parents egos !!!must be very confused lolz..just wait for update...

share ur views...!!!
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CHAPTER ONE PAGE FIVE

CHAPTER TWO PAGE SIX

CHAPTER THREE PAGE THRITEEN

CHAPTER FOUR PAGE NINTEEN

CHAPTER FIVE PAGE TWENTY FIVE N SIX

CHAPTER SIX PAGE THRITY TWO

CHAPTER SEVEN PAGE THIRTY SEVEN

CHAPTER EIGHT PAGE THRITY EIGHT
CHAPTER NINE PAGE FORTY ONE N TWO

CHAPTER TEN PAGE FORTY FIVE N SIX

CHAPTER ELEVEN PAGE FIFTY

CHAPTER TWELVE PAGE FIFTY FOUR

CHAPTER THRITEEN PAGE FIFTY EIGHT


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CHAPTER FIFTEEN PAGE SEVENTY

CHAPTER SIXTEEN PAGE SEVENTY SIX N SEVEN

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN PAGE EIGHTY THREE N FOUR

CHAPTER EIGHTEEN PAGE NINTEY N NINETY ONE

CHAPTER NINTEEN PAGE NINTEY FIVE(SEPARATION UPDATE+GUNJAN S PAST)

CHAPTER TWENTY PAGE 101 (SAMRAT S PAST)

CHAPTER TWENTY ONE PAGE 104/105 ( RYTHM S BIRTHDAY + SAMRAT S ACCIDENT)


CHAPTER TWENTY TWO PAGE 108


CHAPTER TWETNTY THREE PAGE 111

CHAPTER TWENTY FOUR PAGE 115

CHAPTER TWENTY FIVE PAGE 122

CHAPTER TWENTY SIX PAGE 125

EPILOGUE
Edited by CrazyMS - 13 years ago
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(part in purple is imaginattion )
INTRO PART
At Present:
18th September,2011..Sunday Night!!!
(gunjan always wearz skirtz lyk second mjht season)
Gunjan was doing office work sitting on her study table at one corner of the room. She finished the work..and wearz out the spectacles and rested head at back seat.
GUNJAN:rythm home work ho gya ?
(rythm usualy wearz printed t shirt with jeans or trouserz)
A seven yearz old kid sitting on bed placed at gunjan s back ,scattering the whole bag on bedsheet writing in notebook.
RYTHM:mom just two minz..
GUNJAN:bus ise lea kehti hon k phely homework kar liya karo fir kehla karo..
RYTHM: Mom kal sey phely homework karon ga i promise...
She just noded in sleep..
GUNJAN:hmm..

He kissed her forehead..then he kissed her closed eyes.she clutched the coller of his shirt. Her heart beat raised..she could feel his hot breaths on her lips..and he leans down to capture her treambling lips..

She wake up with jerk...she was sweating...she turned and scanned the whole room. No one was there... She was dreaming of him.. She held her head in wrists and rubbed to ease the pain. She wiped an escaping tear.

Tumhari yaad..tumhara kareeb ana..tumhara chona...sab wesa he hai..aj bhe lagta hai yahen khaein bohat kareb ho tum..tmhara ehsas...sach he tou kha tha tum ney..
"Jo mera nai hota..usey mein kise aur ka honey nai deta"..she felt lyk someone whisperz in her earz...
She heard the door opened and find rythm coming with two glases of milk.
GUNJAN:rythm..tm kuin laye mein ley ati na ?
RYTHM:mom kiya huwa mein ley aya.. Ap thak jati ho na sara din work kar k... Dont wory jab mein thoda sa aur bada ho jaon ga na..to phr apko yeh hardwork ni karna padey ga.

He said giving gunjan the glass...leaving a staring thoughtful gunjan. wil it be possible ? A wish. A hope.. She rejected it as she had lost trusting anyone more.. And it doesnt make diferece he is her own son... He was too her own husband..but what happened? Nothing. She sighed..

RYTHM:mum kidhar ghum ho gae ? Chalo na peo milk...
Gunjan smiled as he flicked her nose..and drank it.. Rythm too drank it while sting on table in front of her.
GUNJAN:thank you rythm!
RYTHM:my pleasure mum!
Gunjan smiled and takes glass from him..
GUNJAN:chalo brush karo aur bed pe leto. Its late now.
RYTHM:okay ap bhe ao fir jaldi sey..
GUNJAN:ok..

Later gunjan after changing lyed next to rythm...and creased his hairz..he was sleeping peaceuly huging a frame. Gunjan takes it..and with teary eyes stared at it.. The only Pic of him with her which she have from past eight yearz..it was usual of her to spent the night in memory of him sleeplesly since last eight yearz...

Kuin chod diya Mujhey Samrat !!!!

She was quite near him..her arms around his neck...so close to eachother...that air could hardly pass through them...her fragrance..her musical voice... Samrat..!!

"Sir...Sir..!!
The male voice brought him to awake from his dream..
"Sir plane land kar gya hai...Welcom to Swizertland..!
(samrat always dressed lyk amir khan in gajni)
The guy in a business classy suit..blue half sleves shirt with black blazzer.., noded..and picks up his spectacles..and put his dairy and other stuf in bag and left silently the business class of plane...

Tum..tmhara ehsas...tmhari kushbu...tmhari yaad...sab wesa he aj bhe...jo mjhy andar tak bechain kar deta..tmhari chaht ko aur zyada kar deta...kuin aesa lagta hai k aj bhe hum kareb he hain aik dosrey k...jesey khabi aye the.

his asistants along him make a way to mercedes for him..and he left alone..

Kuin chod k chali gae Chashmish!!!

He tuned the fm. While driving on the deserted dim lighted roads..

Na janey kab sey.
Umeedien kuch baqi hain.
Mjhy phr bhe teri yaad kuin ati hai.
Na janey kab sey.

(gunjan stares at the pic...and memory start revolving lyk a film...his smile..his charm...his eyes...his soft cheeks...his hot breaths...gunjan get up with jerk )

Dur jitna bhe tm mjsey.
Pa$s merey tm.
Ab to adat si hai mjhko asey jeney mein.
Zindage sy koe shkwa bhe ni hai
Ab to zinda hon is nely asman mein.

(he stopped the car near the sea shore.. He came out. He stared the sea blankly... As he closed eyes..he feels her very close...her hairz hiding her face...her shy lowerd eyes...her blushing cheeks...her shivering lips...he blinks his eyes)

Chaht asi hai teri bharti jaye.
Ahat asi hai teri mjko sataye.
Yaadein gehri hain itni dil doob jaye
Aur ankho mein yeh ghum num ban jaye

(gunjan wiped tearz as standing in balcony seeing the moon..
I love u...
Samrat wiped an escaping tear and then gave a flying kiss..
I love u...
As the wind blows..she touched her cheeks and felt a shiver passed in her body.)

Ab to Adat si hai asey Jeney k
Bhula do Yaadein
Mita do yaadein

(samrat drives to a flat...and as switched on lamp in bedroom. It pierced his eyes..he put of it again..gunjan sat on a chair huging his pic...samrat throw himself on couch and takes out her pic from wallet...)

Ab to adat hai asey he jeney k...

(rythm wakes up and saw gunjan. He takes a shawl and covered gunjan with it..and kised her forehead...gud n8 mom..i love you..rythm wiped her dry tearz and saw pic. He kissed Samrat s pic.. Gud n8 Dad. I love u too...he went to his place to sleep)
Gunjan slept on chair peacfuly while Samrat slept on couch.. Rythm slept on bed.
Dreams are the Place where they were together...
share ur views!!!
thanks
MARIE😉
Edited by mars14 - 14 years ago
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Merii🤗❤️ Wow!! Congrats !!👏👍🏼 On your new FF..The new concept is very BOLD & MATURE..😃.Its really nice to read such stories..CS was mind blowing..You can really understand the person so well..The intro was superb!! & so true & real..😊.Rythm's character was very cute..Its so true what u said...Parents decision's effect children a lot!!...Plzz continue soon...All The Best for You...😃

The intro was superb.You can really feel their love & longing for each other..😍 Rythm was my favorite in this Ff..He is really the sweetest son ever..SaJan thinking about each other & missing each other was too romantic & too Januable..Can't wait to read the next part..Continue soon..
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Hey meri first of all congrates dear...

u again back with a new SS congo shongo pongooo


n just read CS again n i knw wats the different...

just loved SAMRAT N GUNJAN's cs...

n omg wats dis they are nt together omg this misunderstandings naa...

n omg they have sonnn

n dat too Rythm is their son... hayyy

u knw wat mein na last desire ke baad na mein last desire ka next season
mein aisa hi SS start karne wali thi jisme aise hi Samrat Gunjan n their son Rythem hota...

already wrote CS bt then decided nt to start coz sab ne kaha my last desire is too
sad n next season tobahut hi jyada emotional hota...

aur ending to sabse jyada sad.. so droped idea...

n started fanaa...

bt m glad dat u have started it... i hope i can get wt i planed in my SS...

though want sumthing diffeent ok...

hmm nw about CS

its superb amazing...

i really like it... plzz do cont first part asap plzzz

n want sum Rythm n Samrat scenes plzzz

plzz do cont asap...

n may ur this ss gets success...

Love😊
Radhi...
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itni raat ko kaise cmnt karu...

kal noon me aaram se long coment dungi lolll

btw already read CS n story plot...
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Merii dear i m vry with u
mujhe pm kyo nahi kiya??????
aisa nahi chalega...;)(jk)
vaise cncpt aur cs dono hi bahut acche hai
realy
cont soon


kriti
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congo on yr ff...waooo meri to gud yara loved it alotzzz...very well writen...
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nice...i really loved it,...cnt soon...
thankss.
love
tia
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