Jab Hum Mile- Shanak Fic 30 pg 48

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Author's note: I do not know what my new work schedule will be like so I may not be able to update as frequently as I used to with first fic Tu Hi Meri Zindagi. This one takes place for now in Mumbai but it is AU in the fact that Khanak has her own cause and career. Shantanu has a career of his own as well. Hope you enjoy this first part,( first few paragraphs are the preview posted in the Tere Sang Shanak OS threas page 14, I have added more to it )

Khanak Sharma never expected she get into serious trouble quite like this. She had been raised in household where everyone was liberal and exercised their freedom to the fullest. She was her parents' only daughter. She had an older brother who was a cop and her father was the police commissioner in their restrict. She should have been safe. She didn't know how she got herself into this mess. She had been doing social work. She wanted to keep the orphanage safe from a local gang instead she herself was in turmoil.

She slowly opened her eyes as cold water was splashed on her face.

" Hey !," she yelled.

" Hello doll. You are going to be guest here until and if your father follows our wishes," one ugly gangster hissed.

She eyed him disgustedly.

She looked at him, trying to size him up. There had to be at least one weakness he had. She was a cop's daughter she needed to fight back somehow.

The gangster pulled out a knife two more emerged behind him. She gulped. One she could deal with but three big goons versus her, she needed a plan fast.

Meanwhile somewhere in the distance CID officer was approaching. He was a young man in his mid-twenties. Danger had become second nature in his life since he got recruited four years ago. This gang could lead him to the head smugglers that were causing havoc in Mumbai. He was part of a special task force. He often went on missions alone and sometimes he would be away from his family for months. As far as they knew he worked for a private agency and he would have to travel on last minute trips here and there.

He sensed some commotion ahead, he got his gun ready as he approached.


Gangster number one was confident with two more men behind him this girl would have to listen to whatever he wanted her to do. He could harm her, scare her and harass her all he wanted. There was no one here hat would protect her honor. She would be nothing compared to them three. Another set of men would take over after some time. There was no way her father or brother could get here and out with her alive.

The CID officer noticed three men edging towards a common destination. He slowly came closer to catch what they were all interested in.

Then he heard the gasp of what he realized had to be some poor helpless girl. He closed his eyes in anger. He did not want them to be warned of his presence. These brutes had already crossed a limit in his book. Ganging up on an innocent woman was one of the things he could not stand for. He had to take action now.

Meanwhile, Khanak tried to think of what to say or do to make them back off.

"Please let me go. I'll tell my father to do whatever it is you want him to. Just please put that knife away," she urged.

"Haha. No way! We finally got ourselves a prize. We are not gonna let you go until we have some fun," he sneered.

She looked at him with disdain.

" Come on boys get a close look at this beauty," he declared.

There was no movement behind him. As he turned around dumbfounded the last silent shot nailed him in the forehead.

When he fell, Khanak's breathing started to relax as she stared into the most intense eyes she had ever seen.

He came closer to her.

Her breaths increased in fear. What if he was from some rival gang? He would take her elsewhere and she would never get to go home again.

" Don't worry. I'll get you out of here before the others come along," he assured her.

His words touched her soul and assured her he was one of the good guys. She relaxed as he released her from her bonds. Before she knew it, he was leading her out of there.

They had to climb through some damp tunnels. Suddenly they heard some footsteps and yelling. He pinned her against a wall protectively as they both hoped they would not be discovered.

He released her and they continued to make their way out of the place. He took out his phone. He punched in a few things and soon his gps was activated.

"Wow you have a gps in your phone? I never had use for one," she stated nonchantly.

He rolled his eyes. He couldn't tell her he usually used it for missions. It was an uncoded phone. She didn't need to know this. He would get her a safe distance from here then his duty towards this stranger would be done.

Some time later they found an opening. He climbed up first then offered his hand to her. She almost slipped but he caught her in time.

Khanak gasped as her feet had slipped. However the strong, handsome stranger had pulled her out in the nick of time.

They shared an eyelock until they both realized the situation they were in and how they just had met a short while before. They pulled apart. They walked side by side for a bit until they reached a vehicle.

" Where should I drop you? I have to go do some work but I don't want you to land in trouble again," he stated.

Khanak looked up at him.

" My father is Sanjay Sharma, he's a police commissioner . You can drop me at any police station. They will inform him once they see me," she insisted.

He looked at her puzzled. She had probably been through so much but then again she had no reason to believe he could be trusted either.

" Aap ka naam kya hai?," she inquired as he stopped the car at the local station.

He smiled slightly.

"Just call me SK," he retorted.

" Thanks for saving my life. I am Khanak," she said with smile before she started to get out of the car.

" Take care Khanak," he whispered as he watched her walk away from his life for the first time.

He felt something in his chest as she moved further away from where he was. He soon sped off into the distance. He could not linger too long here. No one should know his full name here. He could not blow his cover just yet.

Index

Part One pg1

Part 2 pg 2

Part 3 pg 3

Part 4 pg 5

Part 5 pg 6

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Part 9 pg 12

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Trailer pg 13

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Part 11 pg 16

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RB81 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei sonali,
just now opened this thread..n got ur PM too..

ok sonali..so our SK is a secret agent..sounds interesting..continue soon..
i know u r one of the regular updaters who wont make us wait long for the next update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it is very interesting sonali di
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Shona di...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

wow loved it...

SK is CID officer...(right)...lovely & wonderful description...

khanak is social worker belonging to family of cops...amazing description...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

he saved her...awesome description...

he does not want to reveal his identity...excellent description

its very interesting so
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow Sonali...it's different and so interesting !!!
I liked the beginning and waiting for more...continue soon !!
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thanks ladies get my new schedule soon, can't update everyday this time around but will try to a few times each week. glad you enjoyed the first update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the first update di...

continue soon...
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hey everyone got a major test on Friday, here is promo for next part


Jatin Sharma had snoozed off despite his efforts to stay awake and await news of his missing sister.
Suddenly the phone rang waking him up.

"Sir Khanak Madam milegi," a peon said on the phone.

"Kahan hai woh?," Jatin exclaimed.

"Mere samne sir," he replied.

"Theek hai main abhi aata hoon," Jatin replied as he got up from the armchair.

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" Aap ko pata hai ki hamara chota beta kab aagaya?," Madavi inquired.

Sunil shook his head.

" Iss barr phone nahin aaya. I will tell you when he calls," he assured his wife.

Madavi shook her head.

"Pata nahin uska kya hoga Sunil. I am worried," she muttered.




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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sonali!!!
Sorry for the late reply, but MOTW OSs are driving me up the wall!!
Nice concept and build up!! Both of them strong characters!!
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow shona what story im loving it shaan a secrate agent and khnak police comiisrs aughter cool story cant wait👍🏼

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