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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for all the lovely comments, here is part eight.

Part Eight

Sanjay and Jatin arrived on the scene and tried to get the couple free from gunpoint.

The taller man grabbed Khanak by the neck. Shantanu got angry and tried to get her free. The other two aimed theirs guns at his head.

Khanak was gasping in fear, as the goon turned her towards her father and brother.

" See she is in my hands now and your jamai raja will get shot by my men if you try anything. If you want their blood at your expense stop where you are now and let us go from here. We will be in touch in how you can get them back," he hissed.

Shantanu and Khanak were led forcefully out of the building with Sanjay and Jatin fuming. Everyone was in a frenzy as to how a bunch of armed men had entered and taken away the couple.

They were loaded into the back of a van. One goon sat in the back with them. Shantanu edged over to Khanak and sat beside her. He put an arm around her shoulders and whispered something into her ear. It would be risky but their only chance to be free after all this commotion.

The goon told them to sit side by side otherwise he would separate them forcefully.

They sat up and across from each other.

Khanak trusted Shantanu He had probably been in these situations before but this time he was concerned for her safety as well. They would take their chance as soon as they could.

Shantanu noticed the goon had a spare gun in his boot. When the goon turned away for a second, Shantanu used his training to quickly knock him unconscious. Khanak had to refrain from gasping.

" Chalo Khanak. We have to get out now," Shantanu said as he grabbed the gun.

She reached towards the latch of the door. She never imagined she would have to do something like this in her life. She quickly unlatched the door and Shantanu gave her his left hand and they made the jump from a moving van.

Khanak had landed beside him. He nudged her. She slowly opened her eyes. They checked each other for injuries. Everything seemed fine besides for some bruising and small cuts. Khanak's bangle had broken.

" It's ok I got more of these at home. Shantanu abhi kya plan hai?," she inquired as they dusted off their formal wear.

" Let's get some distance from them then I can see if my cell phone still works," he said. He reached for her hand and they started running as fast as their legs could carry them.

They heaved with the effort it had taken them. Shantanu turned towards her.

" Tum theek toh ho na?," he asked.

She started laughing and trying to catch her breath at the same time.

"Khanak relax. I'll get you home safely.

She tried to stop laughing for another moment before finally her belly ached enough for her to stop.

" Sorry SK. I just can't believe this happened on our engagement night," she rasped.

"Ok now please calm down. Mujhe phone karna hai," he insisted.

She rolled his eyes at him and he looked down in his coat pocket for his phone. He found it and muttered a prayer the call would go through. He thanked the person on the other end and indicated for Khanak to keep walking with him.

They stopped short about twenty minutes later. Khanak was stunned to see a bike there.

Shantanu got on first and then turned to look at her.

" Chalo betho Khanak," he urged.

She looked at him puzzled.

" Yeh bike yahaan kaise?," she asked.

" Jaldi chalo Khanak. Those goons can find us again. I can deal with them alone but if you are there, I just couldn't stand you getting hurt," he declared.

" Theek hai baba aati hoon," she stated as she sat down behind him.

He started the bike. She jerked forward and her hands grasped his shoulders.

" Hold on tight Khanak," he said as he smirked.

They drove for sometime when Khanak felt as if someone was following them.

The window opened and she saw a gun.

" It's them SK! Jaldi chalo!," she yelled.

Shantanu knew he had to lose them. He was glad his office contact had left them a bike. He knew how to lose them. Hopefully the plan would work out.

He sped up and Khanak's grip immediately tightened on his coat. He began swering in and out of the lanes. Some shots did ring out but neither of them got hit.

They lost them after awhile. Shantanu stopped the bike a block away from the banquet hall. It was now 3am.

" The guests are probably home but we should let our families know they don't need to arrange for any ransom or have anyone released from jail," Shantanu quipped.

Khanak's family and the Khandlewals were at her house so the couple headed there. Their families had been awaiting for some news. They were elated to hear they both were fine.

After hugs and pleasantries were exchanged, Sanjay wanted to announce something. He cleared his throat and everyone turned to look at him.

" After the happenings of tonight I have decided this shaadi will be..," he trailed off as several pairs of eyes looked at him earnestly.

Khanak quivered. She did not want to marry anyone else now. They both had been in danger tonight but together they had survived it.

Everyone else was just as apprehensive.

" Yeh shaadi ko bari nahin hogayi. It will be a simple affair and we will have to tighten security. I have decided to call in some CID officers for that date," Sanjay declared.

Shantanu and Khanak exchanged glances. They realized Shantanu would have to make a major decision if the men that would come knew him his future would look bleak in the CID.

Sunil Khandlewal was happy. He wanted his son and bahu to be safe. He saw his younger son's expression. He knew this girl's entrance in his son's life would change things. He was just surprised how quickly it was all happening.

" Theek hai Sharma saab. We all want the happiness and safety of our children," Sunil declared.

Dadi came over and hugged Khanak and squeezed Shantanu's cheek.

As the Khandlewals left soon after, Shantanu stopped and whispered in her ear.

" Main tuhme kal phone karta hoon," he promised her.

She blushed a bit but composed herself when she turned to face her family. She gazed after him as he walked away from her. She would dream tonight for sure .



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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Ooo la la!!
They are fine after all!!
Was it a set up, how did the bike get there? Anyways loved it Sonali!! Ab shaadi!! haila!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
Another cute update 😊

Juz read it and waiting for the next
Hope a romantic fone convo
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Nice adventure!!!!!

they are always gonna live on the edge is it ... Jamai nahi private body guard bhi mil raha hain commissioner sahab ko ... woh bhi handsome wala!

But whats his future/career going to be like ... waiting to see...

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
thanx for the pm loved this one cute adventurous one😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
hei sonali,
its good to know that shanak escaped with shaan's intelligence..
will khanak's father n bro come to know wat shaan was doing?
so the marriage is going to be a simple affair..
i love it..both shaan n khanak caring abt each other is cute..
continue soon..
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
wonderful update keep up d gr8 work continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

Thanks for all the lovely reviews here is more!


Part Nine

Khanak had a fitful sleep for an hour before she finally fell asleep. A calm washed over her as she began to dream.

She was wearing a baby pink sari. She had on a mangastura. She was bustling around cleaning up the room. She smiled thinking of something. Suddenly she froze realizing someone was watching her. She slowly turned to see SK there.

She smiled brightly at him. He had an intense glare as if he was about to tell her something. She went towards him and he pulled her close to him. They stared into each other's eyes for a bit.

He stood back and held her hands in his.

"Khanak I am leaving for one final mission. I need to know if you will come with me. I promise after this, we will be safe and happy forever," he pleaded with her.

"Shantanu aap ne vaada thor diya," she said as she turned away from him.

She wanted to cry and scream some more but when she turned again he was gone. In the distance the phone started to ring.

Khanak lurched awake. Her phone was ringing for real now. She leaned over and picked it up. She was still breathing heavily from her dream.

"Hello Khanak, it's Shantanu here," he exclaimed.

She smiled slightly.

"Aap ko mera number kaise pata hai?," she asked puzzled.

Shantanu chuckled.

" I have my ways," he retorted.

She rolled her eyes. Of course he worked with the CID. She didn't have to give him her number for him to have it.

"So what happened to you? You were breathing pretty fast when you picked up the phone," he inquired.

" Oh I was sleeping," she said.

"Oh sorry I woke you, should I call you later and tell you about our date?," he asked.

" What date? We are engaged now," she muttered.

" Yes Khanak we are. Lekin abhi tak hum date par nahin gaye," he stated.

She laughed.

"So tell me what did you have in mind? You know with last night's incident Papa won't let me out of the house," she joked.

" Lekin tum mere saath jari ho. Besides I got you back safe and sound last night. I am sure he still trusts me," he insisted.

She shook her head.

"Theek hai. Now tell me what you had in mind," she asked.

"I was thinking some dinner then a long drive without disturbance this time," he said.

" So basically you don't have any real plans. I think we should go see a movie and then have dinner," she stated.

" All right it's your first date too. Let's do that. I'll go book tickets for scary movie and then we'll have dinner at this great caf I know," he stated.

"Sounds good. What time should I expect you?," she inquired.

"Let me check the movie timings. I will call you within an hour. Go freshen up," he said.

"Ok so I will see you later SK," she stated.

" Dekho ab tum mujhe Shantanu ya Shaan bol sakti ho," he said.

"I prefer Shantanu then. Shaan everyone else calls you. I will call you Shantanu in my own way," she insisted.

"Ok then Khanak, as you wish my darling. I will call you soon and hopefully see you in a few hours," he said before hanging up.

Khanak glanced at the clock it was already almost 2pm. She wondered if she would be able to get out tonight. She sighed as she heard her nephew crying his in crib and went to check on him.

Shantanu called soon after and told her they would catch the eight-thirty show. Khanak enlisted her Bhabhi in helping her sneak out. Her father and brother would be away for an assignment. However her mother would be watching over them closely.

Urmila feigned that she was not feeling well and had Sunita busy with Suraj while she helped Khanak sneak out later that day.

Khanak met Shantanu a few houses down.

" Jaldi chalo Shantanu," she said.

He stepped on the gas. They reached the movie theatre a bit early. Shantanu was hoping Khanak would grip his arm and end up close to him because she was scared. However instead she was munching on popcorn, staring at the scene in fascination. Other girls clung their guys, but Khanak was different. She kept offering him popcorn which he refused. She reached for the wrong soda and ended up sipping from his instead.

He had to smile at that. She was so adorable. She was one of a kind and soon she would be his forever.

After the movie , they walked with linked arms. Khanak didn't know why she felt so comfortable just slipping her arm with his. When she was with him, she felt secure and like she could do anything she set her mind to.

"So that movie didn't scare you?," he inquired.

" Nahin. When I was young I used to sneak and watch scary movies. Sometimes I used to get scared. Then Bhaiya told me that all of these scary monsters had a hidden zipper under their shirts. They are actually just actors trying to be scary," she quipped.

Shantanu smiled.

"Jatin Bhaiya took away your fears then. He is sure one of a kind," Shantanu quipped.

"Yes he is. Vaise how is Akshay Bhaiya?," she inquired.

" Well like Umrila Bhabhi helped you today, Akshay Bhaiya helped me. Since childhood he would always try to cover up my goofs and pranks," he stated.

" That is sweet. Mujhe abhi bhook lagri hai. Hum kahan jare hain," she asked.

" Sundar Nagar Caf. The chef there used to work for my family. He makes the best food. What do you want to have?," he inquired.

Khanak thought about it.

"Pau bhaji!," she exclaimed.

"Pau bhaji! I never had that," he quipped.

She looked at him shocked.

" You don't know what you are missing. What is the name of your chef friend? Please ask him if he can make that," she urged.

"All right I'll call Shekhar now," Shantanu said.

The couple enjoyed the meal. Shekhar told Shantanu he was pleased with his choice of a life partner.

" I am too Shekhar. Since the day we met I have felt like I could give up everything for her happiness," Shantanu quipped.

They went to Juhu Beach afterwards and walked along the water. Khanak held her shoes in her hand and Shantanu had changed into chappals and simply walked beside her as she waded in and out.

He grabbed her wrist before she could go in too far and pulled her further up the sandpit.

She recalled her dream and turned to him.

" Shantanu agar main kabhi naraz hui toh aap muhje chor ke nahin jayenge na?," she asked.

He looked at her surprised.

"Khanak I never took your hand for leaving it," he declared before pulling her close for their first real hug.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
marjawa sonali ek dum marjawa:)

d last line took my heart away:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Oye, Sonali!!
He called her my darling!! So sweet and they are so sweet abt the whole thing!! Love it and loved their first date!!:)

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