Jab Hum Mile- Shanak Fic 30 pg 48 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update sonali..
the phone beeped at the wrong time..
will khanak go alone to beach?
i'm worried for her..
i'm happy that now khanak knows that shaan cares for her..
finally they have small mushy moments in their honeymoon..
continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great to see that Shaan is there with her through everything.

Their closeness is also increasing ... finally she sees that he cares for her ... good!!!

But till how long will she remain in the cottage ... she will want to go out, like she wants to go to the beach now ... Shaan will have to spare some time to take her to places around, so honeymoon is ON ... Cool !

Waiting for the next update...

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
sonali di loved it..😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks ladies will try to send pms whenever I update next!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

thanks ladies will try to send pms whenever I update next!

thank you🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
sonli very hot romantic update😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
i read the whole thing from the beginning
great updates and love ur story!!
thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved ittt sona ...


gr8 job

update soon


luv zara
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok here is part 14, enjoy until the next time i can update.

Part Fourteen

Shantanu noted the possible locations the intel had provided. Tonight would be long night. He wondered if he should leave Khanak here tonight or bring her along tonight.

Khanak tapped him on the shoulder.

He turned and smiled slightly at her.

"Mujhe beach jana hai," she declared.

" I have to see if I can take time out of my schedule to go Khanak," he replied.

She crossed her arms together.

" I was thinking about my plans not yours," she stated.

He frowned at her.

"Tum alkeli jana chahti ho?," he exclaimed.

"If you are busy then I have no choice. I cannot be cooped up here the whole week!," she replied.

Shantanu nodded.

"Ok we'll go to the beach. Go get ready," he said.

She literally jumped and hugged him tightly. She went off to change into capris and sleeveless t-shirt. Shantanu had only seen her in saris and salwaar suits so far. He gazed at her in awe.

She seemed to not notice his staring at first.

" Shantanu why don't you go change? We should get going," she insisted.

She realized he was not responding. She snapped her fingers, then he finally blinked.

" Go change SK!," she said firmly.

He changed and then joined her by the car.

" Chalo Khanak," he said.

They hopped in the car and sped off.

Upon reaching the beach, they locked their valuables in the car and then walked together to the beach. Families and other couples were enjoying water and sun. Khanak waded in and out. She seemed childlike just like the night of their first date. He worried she would go in too far.

Suddenly a wave came and knocked her over.

Shantanu got a bit frantic. Then she appeared after the water cleared back. She was spitting out the salty water. He went to her side.

"Khanak you have to be more careful," he said as she sat up and coughed up the rest of the water from her lungs.

"Yuck it tastes so bad. Can we get some coconut water? I need to get the taste out of my mouth," she rasped.

" Theek hai. Let's get you up first," he said.

She nodded and after the second attempt was standing on her feet again. They walked to the stall.

" You two make a lovely pair. Glad you are all right Madam," the middle aged man said.

" Thanks. Could we have a coconut water?," Shantanu asked.

He took out the few rupees he had kept in his pocket. They chatted for a little while before the couple went to walk along the beach. This time Shantanu walked on the side with the water as to prevent Khanak from wading in along again.

They returned to the cottage and Shantanu had to get ready for a stakeout. He prepared his things and Khanak decided to call home and tell them about " their honeymoon".

Gopi told her she was getting married the following month and wanted them both to come.

" I think Shantanu starts law school after two months. We should have time to fully enjoy your wedding,"Khanak quipped.

"Yeah Khanak you are probably disappointed about your wedding. I see where Uncle was coming from but it was your wedding after all," Gopi said.

Khanak smiled as she glanced over at Shantanu as he was preparing for the night.

"Actually Gopi, I am not disappointed. I thought I was but Shantanu can be really sweet. That makes up for everything else," Khanak said.

Gopi giggled.

" So are you happy with him? I am sure you both have lots to learn a lot about each other," Gopi said.

"Woh toh hai yaar. However as they say low and steady wins the race," Khanak declared.

" Good well I don't want my Jiju to get upset for me keeping you on the phone too long. Just tell him to clear his schedule for my wedding and I expect a full report when you both get back," Gopi insisted.

" No problem, I will dear," Khanak said before hanging up.

Shantanu knocked on the door.

"Khanak I need to talk to you," he stated.

She looked at his grave expression and realized she would have to really listen to what he would tell her now. She had heard her father and brother tell her mother and bhabhi such things whenever they had a dangerous case to solve. Khanak never thought she would have to hear this from her own husband someday.

Shantanu walked over to her. He put his hands on her shoulders.

"Khanak I am trained for this job. I do have experience. However as you know things do not always go as planned. I want you to leave Goa if I don't return by 8am tomorrow. Always remember that I care for you and I will fight as hard as I can to get back to you. I need you to be strong and I want you to be safe. If someone does find you, please call your father," he stated firmly.

Khanak did not shed tears. She was currently the wife of a CID officer. She had heard of young brides being widowed within a short time of marriage. She would pray that didn't happen tonight. She would be brave and have to be strong enough to leave Goa in the morning if he did not return to her.

He cupped her chin.

"Promise me you will leave Goa without me if I am not back at 8am," he said.

She nodded.

"I'll pray we get to stay together the rest of our lives," she said firmly.

She took initiative this time and lowered his head so she could kiss his forehead. He caressed her hair and then hesitantly walked away from her.

Khanak knew she would sleep fitfully. She made some tea and tried to read a book. The tea didn't keep her up past midnight and soon she was fast asleep.

She was waiting outside for Shantanu. He was walking towards her with a bright smile. She was sure he had good news to share. Suddenly gunshots shattered some glass in the distance. She quickly kneeled down. She looked up to see a bright red spot on Shantanu's shirt. She screamed and tried to get to him.

Khanak lurched awake.

"Nahin ho sakta hai!," she exclaimed.

She turned to look at the time. It was 2am. She sighed. There was still time. She hoped she would see Shantanu again safe and sound. She would spent the next few hours, fretting, praying then trying to sleep a bit.

When the clock struck seven am, she started pacing around. The deadline for his return was drawing closer.

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Posted: 14 years ago
ok sonali this is freaking scaring me now...my heart beats were sooo high reading d last part of d update,,,,,,,,,im sure shantanu will come back but im just sooo scared too...lovely update:)

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