Jab Hum Mile- Shanak Fic 30 pg 48 - Page 28

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww!! Sonali!!
Its definitely not a filler!!!
Loved the line..I got my eyes on you darling..so caring and sweet!!!
Just awesome as always!!!
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
sonali di too good👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Sonali,

Read last 4 updates together at a stretch...was busy last few days as I had no internet at my rural visits and so I missed reading everything on the forum !!!

It was a whirlwind romance in last 4 updates...enjoyed every bit of the rituals at Gopi's wedding, Shaan sneaking in...Shanak in rain and Shaan at his romantic best !!
He joins law school and seems it's going to be a bit tough for them.
It is one of those few FFs that I am reading from part 1 and am hooked to the story...Mainly because of Shantanu's profession, his trysts with goons and your easy writing style !!!
continue soon !!!

keep it up !!
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Posted: 14 years ago

@Sonali - 👏👍🏼😊...

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Posted: 14 years ago
The last two parts were fab👏

shaan and ducks in ladies sangeet😉
the maang filling part... luved it😍
almost like a bidaai for khanak

there cute and mushy moments☺️
very well penned abt hubby and wifey general discussions😊

and continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Sonali 😊
Awesome part like always beautifully written 😃
Its definitely not a filler loved this part very sweet 😃
Thank u 🤗
Keep writing 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey shona di...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

awesome updates ...

amazing as always...

shanak of ur ff r just amazing & wonderful...loved all the parts...

&

i loved it how u described that khanak shot the gangster...& she was pro at it...awesome description...

&

shanak convo...mmm lovely...gopi & ducks...awesome... description...they got married interesting...

update soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
will try to update on Wednesday
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks ladies. surprise ended up just writing up a fresh update now

Part Twenty-Four

The weeks passed by. Khanak and Khushboo were at the women's shelter donating some clothes and talking with the women,

The caretaker of the shelter took Khanak aside this week. She seemed frightened.

" Aasthaji kya hua? Aap pareshaan lagri hai aaj," Khanak said with concern.

" I am sure you have heard of Munna Bhai who was arrested some months back," Aastha said.

Khanak frowned. Munna Bhai had been injured severely when the chandelier when she had shot it down. If he was not dead , he was too injured to harm anyone else now.

"His niece was here yesterday with this mean looking guy. They were looking for a couple, more in particular the girl. I tried to explain this is a woman's shelter and not that girl's place but they kept threatening and saying the girl has been here before. I was wondering since your father is a police commissioner maybe he can look into it," Aastha said.

Khanak nodded.

" Could you come to the station and tell us how they looked like?," she asked.

"I am afraid Khanak. Is there anyway someone could draw the descriptions and give it to the police? I fear what will happen to the other women if those goons figure out it was me who gave the information to the police," Aastha said.

"Koi baat nahin. Main hoon na. I can draw. I'll just come with a sketch pad,"Khanak assured her.

Khanak drew and wrote down whatever Aastha could tell her. She did not recognize the two people but decided to hand over the information to either her father or brother.

"Khushboo Bhabhi I have to go to the station. If Shantanu or anyone else asks about them just say I went to meet my family," she said.

"Khanak this seems serious. Are you sure you don't want me to come along?," Khushboo asked.

"Nahin Bhabhi. Even if Dad or Bhaiya are not there, Tiwari saab will be around. I will see you all at home soon," she stated.

Khushboo hesitated for a moment before she got into the car and left.

Khanak sighed. She hoped the past would not darken their future now. It had started to rain heavily. She met Tiwari who said her brother would be in shortly. As she waited she wondered if she should tell Jatin about what had transpired in Goa. She shook her head. Her family may think it was all Shantanu's fault and ask her to leave him. She would not be able to live without Shantanu.

Jatin came and Khanak got up quickly to greet him. When she mentioned it was about the women's shelter , her brother led her into the back office. She showed him everything and told him whatever information she had.

Jatin took a deep breath.

"Khanak I appreciate you trying to help your friends but I am concerned about your safety. Also you need to think of more people now. There are so many people who would be lost if something happened to you," Jatin said.

"Bhaiya I understand. I won't do anything to cause any danger to anyone else,"Khanak stated.

"Khanak lekin tumari zindagi.."

Khanak turned solemn as she spoke," Bhaiya, meri chinta karni zaroorat nahin hain. Jiske paas aap, Papa aur Shantanu jaise pati ho, woh ladki sab se zyaada safe hai."

Jatin smiled.

"Pagali"

He hugged her and patted her shoulder.

"Chalo main tuhme ghar chor ke aata hoon," he said firmly.

Suddenly there was knock at the door.

" Saab koi urgent phone call hai aap ke liye," Tiwari said.

" Bhaiya I will be fine on my own. You take care of yourself. When you get a chance please update me," Khanak urged.

" Theek hai. Call me when you reach home," he ordered.

"Jee Bhaiya," Khanak said with a smile.

Shantanu was studying for an exam but he was restless. Tomorrow was father's day and he had wanted to plan something for Sunil with Khanak. She was supposed to be back now. He hoped she hadn't gotten stuck anywhere in this storm.

He was done reviewing the chapter and decided to go make some coffee. He went into the sitting room and sat down in that same seat where he had seen Khanak after she had saved Dadi. He had been stunned to see her in his house and startled to see she was injured. He had decided then and there she would be the girl he would marry.

Meanwhile due to traffic, Khanak ended up walking some distance in the rain. She was glad she had sent most of the things home with Khushboo and left the drawings and notes in Jatin's office. She called her brother when she reached the front door. She hung up and then opened the door with her keys. She was trembling with the cold.

It was past nine pm. On Saturdays everyone had their own plans, she didn't expect anyone to be around waiting for her.

She was startled to see Shantanu sitting and looking up at her when she walked in. She too was reminded of how surprised he was the day he saw her sitting in the same exact spot.

He looked at her the same way he had that day. He was surprised in a good way.

"Khanak tumhe itni dher kaise lagi?," he inquired.

" There was so much traffic because of the storm ," she muttered.

He looked at her head to toe. Her hair was dripping wet, her clothes clung to her slender form.

" Sub theek hai na?," he asked.

She nodded trying not to show she was actually freezing. He came close to her and tucked a strand of hair behind her ear.

" You must be freezing. Why don't you go change? I need to discuss something with you," he said.

She merely nodded and headed upstairs to get changed.

Shantanu made chai for her. The plan would go to waste if his wife took ill. Sunil would feel bad and wouldn't want to celebrate the day as much.

He found her with fresh clothes but with her hair still wet. He shook his head. He bent down and pulled her to a standing position so that her back was against his chest.

Still holding on arm around her waist, he grabbed a towel and started drying her hair.

" Sometimes you are still like a child," he hissed as he now used his hands to dry her hair.

She smiled as he finished drying her hair and placed the towel on her shoulders.

Her worries subsided for the meantime. She loved the feel of his hands. He was so good to her.

She grabbed a hair brush and sat down across from him.

" So you had something to tell me?," she inquired.

" Tomorrow is father's day. I was wondering what we could do for Dad," Shantanu said.

"Hmm what do you and Akshay Bhaiya usually do every year?," she inquired.

" We usually play cricket at the club then Mom and Dadi always make Dad's favorite food," Shantanu stated.

Khanak thought for a moment.

" This time you and I will cook for Papa," Khanak declared.

Shantanu looked at her surprised.

"Khanak I can make tea and coffee that's about it," he quipped.

" Hmm, chai toh acchi hai. No worries SK, as along as we work together we can make things work," she stated.

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey shona di 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

amazing update...

loved it...

so munna bhai's sister is after khanak...wonderful description...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

she says about all what she knows from aastha to jatin...but didn't tell her & shaan's last encounter with munna bhai...

she gets drenched in rain & shaan is worried about her...loved their convo...awesome descri[ption...

u gave a surprise by updating today...

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