OS Avita- Together Again..Completed

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hiya Everyone...🤗🤗

I finally decided to write an OS😆

This is my first OS. So please bear with me😃 There would be many bloopers😆

I Hope you all will like it😳

Please tell me any mistakes done by me😃

Here goes the Summary:

This OS is all about Avdhesh finding truth about Pihu and their cute confrontation😳



Ill update as soon as possible.😳


Im waiting for you reviews and Feel free to comment😳

If you like please press "like" button

Thank You😳

Index

Part 1...Page 1

Part 2...Page 10


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Prashuuu 🤗

me first me first

finally a OS from you 😳


Wohooo my editor became a writer oops not just a simple writer like me jo or ramona you're a romantic writer ☺️ 🤣

i am glad that instead of troubling you i am going to help you in it 🤣

here is a small gift from me also you better eat share with my baby 😡 🤣 then both of them go to dentist with your rotten tooth 🤣 🤣


love you 🤗

Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW Prashu di i m realy happy dat ur r writing OS

ALL THE BEST DI👍🏼
Edited by jasveensokhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prashu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗





Finally u did it!!!🥳🥳🥳

I m so happy for u...

& I knw u will do an excellent job...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Edited by jes_jade - 14 years ago
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Parashu dear i m waiting for it

plz update it as fast as u can,

bz i don't trust these cvs but i trust u😡

u will solve the mystery very soon .

so i m waiting😍
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hey prashu...
another talent jhallak hi padha...😆😆😆
woow very nice OS...
now its my turn to jalkaaing my smaal talent ...that is poetry for u..
so here it is...
Aaakhon me neend nahi hai...
toh sapna kaha se aayega...
agar jindgi me nahi ho tum to
toh muskurana kaha se aayega..😃😃😃😃😃😃

me waiting eagery for u r os's all part...👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by danno - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Note: Guys, this is not a mystery neither the actual secret behind Arpita and Pihu. Its simply Avdhesh finding the truth whether she is Arpita or Pihu in his own way. Its my simple prediction. I hope you all will like it😳



This part is dedicated to Priya. Since she helped me a lot in my OS. It was her idea.Without her , I wont be able to complete OS ...This part is dedicated to my CKD phamily.

Love you sooo much🤗




Avdhesh was crying. He didn't know what to do😕. There was conflict between his heart and mind. His heart believed that she is his Arpita. Whereas his mind believed Bahuji. Bahuji's words kept haunting him "She is not Arpita. Arpita is dead. She wont come back again" Frustated and irritated by this, he deceides to find out all by himself. He is fine now. Pihu helped him to overcome his state. But he cant get over the moments he shared with her- their first eyelock, mandir scene, the times when she cared him. (Pihu now is back at her Mama's place. Since Avdhesh recovered from his state, Bahuji with the help of Pawan and his family took Pihu back at her Mama's place😡)

On his way, Avdhesh remembers beautiful moments with Pihu. How could he forget the way she looks him with love and pain at the same time? How could he forget the moment he touches her,Its like he is touching Arpita. If she is not Arpita, why there is something which pulls us towards each other? No no...She has to be Arpita and I know she is, tells to himself. Its almost midnight. He reaches Kranti Lal's house. He goes to the backyard of the house and jumps through window into room. Pihu is sleeping. Moon light is falling on her face. She is prettiest person... For some time he is mesmerized and stares her . He comes back to reality, covers her mouth with a cloth. And handcuffs her. He carries her and leaves. He keeps her in a hut in the jungle. She struggles to free herself but cant. Avdhesh burns the fireplace and uncovers her mouth.

Pihu is furious, "How dare you bring me in here? What do you think of yourself? Why don't you leave me!! Just free me and let me go"

Avdhesh puts his finger on her lips and stops her😳, " Shhh...you speak a lot Arpita." With that he releases her hand too. Pihu gets up and leaves but Avdhesh stops her " Arpita..Plzz don't go ..I know you are Arpita. The moments we shared. Don't you think they were enough to make me believe that you are Arpita! I brought you to tell How much I love you and also apologise for wht I have done" Pihu is listening quietly. It seems as if she is melting at Avdhesh's words and her anger starts to vanish slightly. Avdhesh continues " I know what you went thru. I cant change it but we can start our life again... Plz don't leave me"

Pihu shouts at him and leaves. Avdhesh catches her hand tightly. Pihu tries to slap him but he catches her hand and hurts her.. Pihu pleads him "Dnt make me do or say anything...Plz"

Avdhesh" Ok fine..! Go! Leave this place. You are not Arpita. I m sorry. Leave Now" (emphasizing more on last two words ) Pihu is standing there, stunned.

He takes gun and points on his forehead " My Arpita is gone. I was the reason for her death. I made her suffer. Its better to die than to live without her. I don't deserve to live." Pihu is shell shocked. Tears are flowing down her face. It seemed that her world is crashing down. And in split second Pihu saves him.

She says" What are you doing Avdheshji? You have no right to kill my husband!!" With tht She cries and Avdhesh too. They don't know for how long they were crying and holding each other.

Finally Arpita spoke "Don't do this ever again. I can't see you getting hurt." Avdhesh smiles and hugs her tightly.

After some time He asks her "Why didn't you said me before? "

Arpita- "It's something, I cant tell you." there is anger in her voice. "I don't have any enmity with you. I love you. But you said you loved me. Still you didn't even let me speak neither you gave me an opportunity to prove my innocence. I just wanted one chance. Was it too much to ask?" Avdhesh knew he was wrong. He didn't have anything to say. He knew he had done a grave mistake. Arpita continues, "I don't blame you on everything. It was my mistake too. I didn't tell you everything caz I knew you would go any extent to kill Ranvijay. And I didn't want you to go in same dark way which you were before. But I think my efforts are wasted. You did same thing which I feared😭😭😭"

Avdhesh, "Im sorry. I didn't know what to do. My brain didn't listen to my heart and I killed him" Thts all he could say at the moment. "I wanted to kill myself with what I did; I wanted to do same thing with me which I did to Ranvijay".

Arpita calmly -" I can understand.To kill someone is not the solution to any problem."

Avdhesh promises that no one would ever come again in their life now. And tht he would try to mend his ways. And Arpita promised tht she would be with him always. Both knew Avdhesh would now keep his promises and would go against world for Arpita. She will now get all rights of a wife which she deserves. 😊😉

Their eyes meet. 😳 They couldnt take eyes off each other☺️

They leave for their respective houses since Arpita didn't want to disclose her truth to anyone. She would tell everything in detail to Kranti Lal and his family.

Arpita wanted to remarry Avdhesh in temple and receive blessings of God before starting their married life again. They would surprise Ammaji, Bahuji, Shikha and everyone in Haveli later.

They reach her house. Their eyes meet. There was different shine in their eyes which was beautful. There was longing for each other. Arpita reaches the backyard and waves him bye. Avdhesh gives her a flying kiss and waves good bye...Arpita blushes... And He leaves for Haveli.😳😍


**************************End of Part 1***********************************


Wait ...wait another part is coming up😉

I knw ..its small one

I hope you liked it.😳 Waiting fr your reviews.😃

Feel free to comment.

[If you like it, plz press "like" button]


Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Prashu di meh first 2 comment wow😳

i realy loved ur first part n now excited bout d next one

n congrats👍🏼 for ur first part of ur awesome OS👏
Edited by jasveensokhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey prashuuu 🤗

me not first me not first 😭 but next time i will be

he he he even though i am not first here but i read your complete with SR first 😍

Love you for dedicating your first OS to me ❤️ 🤗

i didn't do anything prashuu its all your efforts i just helped you in few things 😳

after Thori si waffa your OS together again is close to me 😳

it is ur first one and you completely rocked in it 😉

you portrayed Avita emotions well and also love the way you wrote how he comes to her and kidnap her also Avi gave the flying kiss to her 😍



Love you aloads 🤗 🤗
Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Hey my cutie pie😃
wonderful OS of Avita .
Loved it to see how they want to restore things back and Avi know the truth of pihu. I wish the CV's might give some brain to Avi to find the truth of pihu on his own after reading ur OS.
Avi believes its his Arpi then why dont he try himself finding who she is? This is a great point u showed the CV's to give some brains toAvi now.
Im looking forward to the next part hope there will be no more hurdles to face before their marriage.
Can i expect the SR after the marriage too in the second part?!!!😉😆😆

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