OS Avita- Together Again..Completed - Page 5

Originally posted by: danno

hey prashu...
another talent jhallak hi padha...😆😆😆 Hehehehe
woow very nice OS... Thnks 😳
now its my turn to jalkaaing my smaal talent ...that is poetry for u..
so here it is...
Aaakhon me neend nahi hai...
toh sapna kaha se aayega...
agar jindgi me nahi ho tum to
toh muskurana kaha se aayega..😃

Awww Sharan...Kitni pyari poem hai😳😳😳😳😳😳

me waiting eagery for u r os's all part...👏

Zaroor ..jaldi hi aayega next part

Originally posted by: joliefille

Parashu dear i m waiting for it..

plz update it as fast as u can, Sure sure...I wld update it soon😳

bz i don't trust these cvs but i trust u😡 😳

u will solve the mystery very soon .

so i m waiting😍

Ill update soon sweetie

Originally posted by: jasveensokhi

Hey Prashu di meh first 2 comment wow😳 Hiee Jas😳

i realy loved ur first part n now excited bout d next one

n congrats👍🏼 for ur first part of ur awesome OS👏 Thnks sweetheart...

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

hey prashuuu 🤗 Hiieee Priya🤗

me not first me not first 😭 but next time i will be Hmmm😳

he he he even though i am not first here but i read your complete with SR first 😍 I know my editor😆

Love you for dedicating your first OS to me ❤️ 🤗 Love you tooo❤️

i didn't do anything prashuu its all your efforts i just helped you in few things 😳

after Thori si waffa your OS together again is close to me 😳 Awww😳

it is ur first one and you completely rocked in it 😉 😳😳😳😳😳😉

you portrayed Avita emotions well and also love the way you wrote how he comes to her and kidnap her also Avi gave the flying kiss to her 😍 Its cute😳

Love you aloads 🤗 🤗

Hugs frm me tooo🤗

Originally posted by: BenNevis

Hey my cutie pie😃

wonderful OS of Avita . Thnk you so much di😳

Loved it to see how they want to restore things back and Avi know the truth of pihu. I wish the CV's might give some brain to Avi to find the truth of pihu on his own after reading ur OS. I hope😊

Avi believes its his Arpi then why dont he try himself finding who she is? This is a great point u showed the CV's to give some brains toAvi now.

Im looking forward to the next part hope there will be no more hurdles to face before their marriage.

Can i expect the SR after the marriage too in the second part?!!!😉😆😆 Hmmm..its a surprise😳