OS Avita- Together Again..Completed - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prashu 👏👏 Wonderful ⭐️⭐️
I lovved it ... It was very romantic and sweet. U wrote this bfr the epi was aired 😲 It actually showed Avi jumping into the room thru the window 😃 U go girl 👏👏
Wud wait for the nxt part ... This one was 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow prashu that was wonderful👏

bravo gal & such a brilliant scene & sweet ... your prediction come true dear in today's epi bravo👍🏼

bonne chance my dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prash!!!!!!!!🤗



It was just brilliant & fabulous...👏👏

I really loved the way Avi brought out the truth frm Arpi [I am also expecting to see such scene in show😉]

I knw what will happen next...☺️

Plzz update soon...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful OS Prashu, I love it completely. Hopefully, everything you say comes true and Arpita returns to Avi. I can't wait to read the next part of this OS. It is beautifully written and I could imagine everything. Pihu will only admit her true name if Avi threatens to end his life.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prashu dear...superb part...You have defined their feelings nicely...Avdesh's belief won...loved the way Arpi stopped him by saying "You can't kill my husband"...waiting for more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi prashu...
disss is awesome yaar..
I have been missing Avita frm a long time and u r OS came at the rite time...
btw...update soon dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prashu beautiful
You should sendthis tarck to the channel/production house they will definetly like it
Prashu Get in to wriiting
You will be amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok, i think i m very late
the start was good and i liked that arpita was just pretending to be pihu
and they will marry once again(lucky couple)
thanks for the PM di and sorry i m very late on commenting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely Prashu..When do you write the next part?? Does it come with a SR...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely Prashu..When do you write the next part?? Does it come with a SR...[/QUOTE]
@ Bold 🤣 🤣 True Lax ... Forget of having an SR on the show ...they'l never do it 😕 But atleast we can hav one in the OS 😉😆
Prashu ...hope ur listening 😉😆
BTW Lax, have u read the OS by Manal ? ... u must read it ... its on ur favvv topic 😉😳

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