MayUr FF - The Blossoming Magic || Part 18 - Pg 92

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello my sweets!! 🤗

So, here i am back with another story to trouble you all
😳. But well now it's so long that u all must develop a habit of my tactics 😎 . It would be easier for you! 😉, because i won't be stop writing! 😎 and the reason is that you all shower your immense love on me. 🤗

So, here is my next story..

The Blossoming Magic..

This story is a bit special in the sense that this is my 10th story. 😃 😳. Seriously i don't believe i have written so much! 😲. Again because of you all.🤗
As arjun says that 50% of the credit of his success goes to his fans, i would declare the same, in my case it's 75% you all! Love u all.

Hope this one again brings smiles on all your beautiful faces and well ..also turns your cheeks pink 😉 😳 😆

Enjoy reading!
God Bless
Kinza Arshad.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter #1.

Stealing glances...

Sunrays washed her face, as she squeaked and slipped in her covers to avoid light. After a minute or two, she popped out of the covers and opened her eyes slowly welcoming the new day of her life. She sat up lazily, resting on the bed back. Yawning against her palm, she stepped out of her bed. She said her morning prayers and folded the sheets. Running her fingers though her silky long hair, she held them in a ball. Loosely placing a clip over her hair, she headed for a bath.

Giving herself a warm shower, she entered the room back, with her bathrobe wrapped tightly around her body, she started choosing what to wear. After a momentary confusion in her decision, she dressed herself in a blue shalwar suit.

Standing in front of the mirror and brushing her hair, she was looking like a flowing stream of water.

She dried her hair and tied them in a tight braid. Spreading her duppatta properly over her chest, she was about to head out of her room, when she stopped hearing familiar voices.

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"I am so sorry for being late guys", mayank stepped out of his home shouting, and he was greeted with a loud cheer from his friends, who were waiting for him since the last half an hour,

"finally tu ne ghr se kadam bahir nikala", gaurav said huffing,

"yar wo", he paused to take a bite from the apple in his hand, when neel snatched the apple and took a bite instead, "yar wo main samne wali ko khirki se dekh raha tha", neel imitated mayank, munching the apple, and all of them started laughing. Mayank snatched the apple back, "stay in your limits ok!", he took a bite himself.

"ohhhhhh! Possessive'hmmmmmmm.."

All of them started producing these sound affects in chorus and mayank immediately looked at the terrace of the home opposite. "shut up guys!, kia pagalpan hai!, ab dair nahi ho rahi hai?, lets leave!", his voice was genuinely strict and all of them repressed their laughter, "yar pagal hum nahi tu hia!, idiot!", neel hit him on his forehead and before mayank could say something more, neel sat in the car and mayank himself took his seat, stealing a glance at the terrace again from the corner of his eye.

After four adjusted themselves in the jeep, and the car rushed down the road leaving a fading noise of their loud voices.

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She nervously came out on terrace, seeing the flowing dust that was left behind by the fast speed of the car. She kept looking at the road for a few moments, with a beautiful shy smile playing on her lips..

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Di, first of all congratulations for your 10th story😲 (I have just finished one whereas I have 2 pending and 1 about to finish😆) ... Anyways, I can't believe we have sustained so much torture of yours - but frankly speaking - the more, the merrier ...

Blossoming Magic - such a cute name and the first part made me feel that this a candy floss love story - cute romance and a feel-good love story which we all badly needed ...

I am already loving it and I just loved all of it ... it was all so beautiful and cute ... And now I am eagerly waiting for the second update ...

God bless you,
Jaee D. Rathore
Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤗Kinza!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗 Sweetheart, u know how much we love it when u "trouble" us!! 😉😆

Hun, I'm already smiling like crazy after reading your intro message..😃😆 So I'm sure, it will bring smiles to everyone's faces!😊

Congrats on the 10th FF!!! 👏🥳

Part 1 - What a cute beginning!!!

I know u haven't mentioned her name but I assume it's Nupur ...loved how u showed day to day things ....helped set up the atmosphere...

Mayank's convo with friends was interesting and funny! 😆

"yar wo main samne wali ko khirki se dekh raha tha" 😆😆 Someone is paying way too much attention to the opposite house😉😆

She comes out as soon as he leaves....hmm....looks like both have a thing for each other. 😉

Loving it already!!! That's no surprise to me considering it is written by our very own magician!!! 😊

Can't wait for the next part!
Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i was hoping that the one pm in my inbox was from you and low and behold it was...my magician is back to spread magic...believe me we never want you to stop writing so keep the stories coming!...great beginning...waiting to see what this one's about...i love the title because it sends a really positive vibe

i dunno if i ever told you but i was reading your first fanfic again since it randomly popped on top again and i was seeing how much you've developed in your story telling...your stories are amazing if i compare it to the first one haha...i still remember the rv, jd, and drugs issue and kinda being doubtful about whether id like your writing but your writing style is what made me want to read more of your writing...and soon enough i fell in love with your writing and the stories you had to tell

the fact that you continued despite not maybe having the response you wanted for your first fanfic makes me so proud of you because that allowed us to see what a great writer you really are...and im sorry it took me 5 stories to realize your name is kinza and not mehak haha...so thank god you changed your username

naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i love ur stories😍.. and awesome start of this story.. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey!!!!!!! The magical girl with her magic is back
I was so eagerly waiting for u to start ur new story.
As always this story also seems very interesting.
A very good start and waiting to read further.

Congrats for ur 10thStory
May the zeros keep adding to this number.

Lots of Love
Prachi


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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG, OMG, OMG,😃😃
Kinza is baccckkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃
great start to what is going to be a beautiful story.
loved it. but that is nothing new, have always loved your stories.🤗

congrats for your 10th ff.
may you write many more in future.🤗

thanks for the pm.

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