MayUr FF - The Blossoming Magic || Part 18 - Pg 92 - Page 63

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update
luved mayank taking care of nupur n all night jst staring at her n stroking her hair..sooo sweet
HONEYMOON!!!!nupur feeling embarrassed in front of everybody...luved naughty gunjan...
luved the cooking classes n the flirting session...nupur became so naughty n mayank jst smiled at her...aweee too cute
plzzz dnt end dis ff soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
Perfect update n romantic ☺️
nupur flirting that was awesome loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
the honeymoon was super sweettt😳 and nupurs reserved nature was quite expected but the naughtiness i saw was defintely shocking!!😆, but i loved it none the less and MN moments together were just wonderful and flawless. I don't think it can get better than this.
the cooking session was awsome by the way!
Loved the update. Continue soon.
Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago
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Ahhh another beautiful update😃😃

Sooo romantic and sweet😃😃

im loving the way Mayank manages to bring out the flirty Nupur...as usual, they bring out the best in each other😳😳

Loved the cooking sessions😛😆
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ok so i need the update on the fresh page so just spamming!! 😛 🤣
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Chapter # 18
The Blossomed Magic

Mayank and Nupur were warmly welcomed back home. "a gaye merey bachey, itna sona ho gaya tha na ghar", Mrs Sharma hugged both of them,

"mom abhi tu ap keh rahi thi 10 din kam hain", Mayank said and nupur blushed , "mom sab thek raha pechey?", nupur wanted to divert the attention from this issue, and mayank passed her a smile, saying that he understood.

"mom gunjan kahan hai?', nupur asked as almost an hour passed after their return and gunjan was nowhere, "beta us ki tabiyat thek nahi hai, do teen din se us k college main koi workshop chal rahi hai, tu jab se shoro hoyi hai wo bimaar hi hai"

"really?", nupur got worried, "main dekhta hon", mayank got up and nupur followed him.

Mayank knocked her door and it was already open, he opened the door and saw gunjan was lying on her bed, with eyes firmly closed, and she was lightly rubbing her fingers over them , "my princess is sick", mayank softly placed his hand over her head and she got up with surprise, "bhai!!, 'wapis a gaye tum dono", she hugged him and then got down from bed to hug nupur, 'how was the trip?', she tried being ecstatic, but was not able to bring the joy in her voice,

"u tell first what happened to you?", mayank motioned her to lie down again and she obeyed, "kuch nahi bhai, just exertion, workshop chal rahi hai", she said casually

"kis chez ki workshop hai?".

Gunajn started explaining mayank about the topics and nupur was quietly observing her. It was not exertion, she was sure about it. There was something else and she could also sense that she was crying before they came in the room.

"wow!, really good", mayank was glad about hearing the topics, "I hope u are doing great!",

'umm, yes bhai, I am being very active during sessions', gunjan replied wiping off a tiny tear from her eye pocket, which she thought went un-noticed, but it didn't ' nupur noticed it.

"ok now u rest!", mayank got from her side, " and no need to watch any TV or something", he ordered with concern and went outside, and as he went, gunjan lied down and nupur was looking at her very keenly.

"kia hua di?", she asked fearfully, as if scared that she read her eyes, "kuch nahi, so jao tum", nupur properly placed blanket over her and switched off the lights, and before going out she heard her low sobs, but didn't made obvious.

Nupur was constantly occupied by gunjan's behavior, she understood that there was something wrong that is why she kept herself to the room, she didn't want to face anyone. She didn't even come for dinner, and mayank took soup for her and this time, nupur didn't accompany him.

Later at night, mayank was busy preparing for tomorrow's office after his holidays when nupur brought him coffee, "thank u so much", mayank said taking the cup.

" main zara gunjan k pass ja rahi hon, ap ko aur kuch tu nahi chaiye?', she asked and mayank shook his head, "nahi tum jao"

Nupur knocked, and slowly opened the door. It was dark, and gunjan was all cuddled upto herself, hugging her pillow tight and her soft sobs were echoing in the room. Nupur's heart was caught in a fist seeing her like this, and controlling her tears she walked to her, and sat beside her, stroking her hair, "gunjan, meri jaan kia hua hai?"

Gunjan got scared with nupur's voice but didn't open her eyes, just shifted her head to nupur's lap and started crying, while nupur kept on stroking her hair.

After a while when gunjan's sobs started fading, she slowly raised her head, and nupur wiped all her tears, "kia hua meri princess ko, please bata do gunjan", she pleaded as tears started to form in her eyes too.

"di ..w o.. merey college main..", she spoke in a low broken voice .

"college main kiya?

'samrat..", he took the name in a very scared tone,

"samrat kiya?',

"di wo'samrat hamari clg ki workshops supervise karta hai",

"haan tu?"

, "di..he..he proposed me..", she said fearing and nupur's eyes were wide opened , "and i.. refused", she added and started crying again placing her head back on her lap.

"di i ran away from there, main itna darr gayi thi", finally she started speaking everything and nupur just wanted to listen, so she didn't interrupt.

"I told him that if he likes me than he will have to come and marry me, main koi time pass affair nahi rakhon gi, di I was so rude", she kept on crying . "mujhe pata hai ab wo nahi aye ga, I was very rude", she sat up and looked at nupur, "per di I couldn't say a yes and start dating", she stated her point helplessly and nupur was just wiping her tears,

"tum hi kethi ho na ye sab ghalat hai, aur di main ne khud larkiyon ko dates pe jate hoye dekha hai, I have seen girls having affairs, chup chup k phone pe baat karti hain, they lie at their homes, di main apne ghar walon se kaise jhoot bolon?, I can't lie to my parents and my brother, they all love me so much, main kaisey..", her voice broke down, "itna trust karte hain mujh pe, nobody even asks me about where am I going, kabhi mom dad ya bhai ne mera cell phone check nahi kiya, they never question me if I ask money, they do so much for me, I couldn't betray them like this, main ne ghalat nahi kiya na di?'

She helplessly questioned nupur and she kissed her check, "bilkul ghalat nahi kiya,",she wiped off her tears and made her lie down, and started stroking her hair, "mujhe tu aj pata chala hai k meri itni choti si princess itni bari ho gayi hai, she is actually caring about the trust of her family" Gunjan closed her eyes.

"tum ne kuch ghalat nahi kiya gunjan, family is always the first priority, u can't give anyone importance over the people who gave u birth and those who love u more than urself."

"di aisa nahi hai k I had some doubt on him, mujhe bus..",s he left her words in between bcz she wasn't able to explain her stance, "I understand gunjan, tumhain sahi nahi lagta ..right?", she asked, as she could understand her point perfectly. She herself went through all this.

"tumhain ye lagta hai k keeping a relation with a stranger is wrong, I understand, tumhain lagta hai k what if your family will refuse him and u had been in a relation with him, that would be wrong, u want the consent of ur family to let ur feelings blossom properly because this is the right way, Hian na?"

Gunjan felt as if nupur was speaking her inner voice, "haan di, yehi baat hai",s he exclaimed, "i..i really do love him",s he added slowly, and nupur hugged her "but you can't let your feelings blossom because to let them bloom, you need ur family's consent and the religion's consent because they make up a part of you, right?.

"haan di!, exactly, I am not alone in this world, so many people are connected with me, but I know he wont' come, I insulted him , wo nahi aye ga", she said as tears trickled down her eyes and nupur kissed her forehead, "well princess u are in for a surprise", she added gleefully and gunjan's eyes were wide opened,

"abhi jab main ne tumhare bhiaya ko coffee di, aur phir main tumhare kamre main a rahi tu tu mom called me to her room first and she told me k kal shergill family gunjan ko dekhne a rahi hai", she said normally and gunjan's eyes almost popped out of her sockets, "kiyaa?'

"gi haan, wo a raha hai gunjan!", she kissed her forehead, "gunjan maybe he will be a bit angry on why did u refuse him or didn't trust him, but don't worry, u have something that is precious , a strong character , and that is something every one seeks in their life partners, whether it be girls or boys. Now if samrat would have mis-behaved with you after your rejection, then surely u would have hated him, but he didn't!, that is why u are in love with him, u can't fall for any cheap person. Don't worry, God is compensating for your intentions gunjan!, he is coming to marry you" ,

"di.. tum sach bol rahi ho?", gunjan was still not convinced but she had to when Nupur pledged on her, "tumhari kasam"

gunjan just got lost at the words of Nupur , "acha chalo ye doodh pi lo and go to sleep"

"mujhe nahi pena hai", she pushed the glass away , "thora sa bache please", she forced her to drink and she obliged bcz she couldn't refuse when Nupur used to address her as her child, "good girl, chalo so jao ab, after all subhaa

"diii!", she whined because she wasn't in any mood of teasing, "acha sorry, so jao", she started ruffling her hair, and gunjan finally sensing some peace in her mind slipped in slumber.

Finally when Nupur was very sure that she was sleeping very soundly, she kissed her forehead and headed to her room.

As she entered her room, the lights were off, and surely Mayank was sleeping. She quietly headed to change and lied down after that. She made sure there was no noise, but as she lied down, Mayank placed her arms around her and pulled her close, "I love u Nupur"

Nupur thought maybe he is mumbling in sleep so she smiled and kissed his forehead, "I love u too"

"I am sorry!", he said again and this time Nupur opened her eyes, "sorry for what?"

Mayank also opened his eyes and Nupur turned towards him, "sorry for being such an idiotic egoistic and a complete je..

"ssshh..", she placed her fingers on his lips, "ye kaisi batien kar rahe ho ap?', she was completely shocked and Mayank held her hand and kissed it, "I overheard your conversation with gunjan and i..

"u did what??', she was shocked,

"I over heard your conversation with gunjan", he repeated and nupur's eyes widened, "I am sorry, but I just came to see gunjan and I just heard everything, sorry, but I am glad I did, atleast now I realize how right u were and how wrong I was."

'dekhiye please there is so need to discuss all that, it's ..

"no there is a need, I was very angry on you, I was very hurt, but I completely ignored the fact that your point is right, all you demanded was a legitimized relation and that is it, now I understand what u meant when u said u didn't want to have an affair, I am sorry Nupur"

'please stop saying sorries, ho gaya na sab kuch, can't we just leave..

"no we can't, listen to me, Nupur frankly speaking, I realized that u were right when today I thought for a split second that how would it feel that my sister has an affair, it really is wrong Nupur, u were right."

Nupur was about to speak something but mayank again interrupted, "u can't imagine Nupur, how am I feeling to here all those things from gunjan, like about family and all, it's like something a brother can be so proud off and I know it is all because of you, just because of you, thank u for making my sister just like you Nupur, I just can't ..

"now will u please stop!, u a re embarrassing me.."

'no Nupur, u deserve all this ,the way u handled gunjan ..'

"u don't know what place gunjan has in my heart", she grabbed his hand tight, 'she is just like my child, she was the first person I trusted after my parents, gunjan is just like my baby..and I will always make sure she is happy", she smiled with teary eyes and Mayank kissed her hands,

"u know what Nupur, I think I am a person who can so proudly say that I respect my wife more than I love her!",he said this and nupur's eyes started brimming with tears again, "I can't thank you enough for not surrendering to my childish ego, thank u so much"

"and I just can't thank u enough for the way u actually forgot ur ego and tried to understand my point of view, I respect you, that is the reason I love you", she said this and Mayank pulled her in a hug, and this hug was a bit different then all their previous hugs, it had that strange connectivity.

"well mom talked to you about samrat's family coming tomorrow?', Nupur asked after a while and Mayank sighed, "yeah, she did.."

"you have any problem with that?', she asked fearfully as she was scared that he may have a problem that he was a suitor for her, "no I don't, but I will have to make sure first that he is suitable for gunjan, I respect the fact that gunjan likes him, but still that isn't enough for me to say a yes to him",

"I hope u will be fair, keeping ur own prejudices aside", she said and Mayank looked at her smiling, "I have no prejudices, because I don't need too", he said and closed his eyes, "did anyone tell u that u look adorable in tension", she said and kissed his cheek, while he opened his eyes "no one except you, Mrs Flirt Sharma", they both broke in a giggle, soon welcoming sleep, as tomorrow was a difficult day for them, it was about their princess's marriage.

Finally the last tangle in their relation was solved, there love blossomed, there magic blossomed, just in the way it should have. The difference of opinion they had , maybe because they belonged to opposite genders got resolved. Being a boy , he couldn't understand a girl's fear, but he did gave her a chance and finally understood what she really meant. Atlast all the cages were opened to let the magic blossom completely.

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

~ The End ~

Please scroll down to the fourth post on this page for a writer' note 😳. My super excited dolls i.e ish and fari have spoiled my sequence! 😆

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
u ended this FF
How could u do this???
kyun kiya tumne aisa-


will edit later




Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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~ Final Writer's Note ~

Ok so sweets, here we come to an end of The blossoming Magic. I hope u all enjoyed reading as much as I did writing for u all. I just can't thank u enough for the endless support u all give. I know u all didn't want me to end soon, but things shouldn't be prolonged na..😳

Apart from enjoyment, I hope u all understood the message I wanted to convey through this story, the difference between the two types of love, the one being strangers, and the other as a married couple. I hope u all sensed the way nupur loved Mayank before marriage, i.e silently and after marriage, i.e openly .. even flirting 😳 .

That was the difference I tried to portray, the way one should carry out their feelings according to me.

I am not against love before marriage, because I know heart is not under anyone's control, but the way u let ur feelings bloom is entirely in your hands. Nupur couldn't help falling in love with Mayank, but she made sure she let her feelings blossom after marriage. It wasn't that she was sure she will get married to Mayank, but still she kept on her morals and without doubt, high virtue is always rewarded.

I hope i was able to put my Point of view across.

Allah haafiz till the next time..

Keep smiling and Keep reading!!

God Bless

Kinza Arshad.

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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i'm glad i logged on early today. it was a treat to begin the day with. thanks for the awesome story.
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i agree to a certain extent with nupur's point of view...there definitely are some boundaries that i believe need to be there before you decide to get married to the person you love, if you're fortunate enough to find love before marriage...but despite a slight disagreement with her views, i immensely respect and admire her willingness to stand her ground about her opinion...and i respect mayank for thinking about her point of view the way he did...i loved when mayank said he respected her more than he loved her...naina

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