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hey guys..

thank u so much for likng my previous OS on MAYUR..."trying to create magic...:)"...

ao i am back with another OS on MAYUR...hope u all will like it, last time i continued it from a situation in the episode, but this time i am starting from teh scratch.

CHARACTERS:

MAYANK SHARMA:
a 19 year old handome boy from morena, who is extremely lively and enjoy's his life to the fullest and a dow n to earth person, extremely rooted to his values. , coming to mumbai to complete ihis graduation in advertising.

NUPUR BHUSHAN:
a 19 year old beautiful girl from mumbai, who is totally focused on her studies and thinks it is her only aim, does not has a sigle friend except her mother, and she is working hard so that one day she could give her mother all the happiness of life.

SAMRAT SHARMA:..
ypunger brother of mayank, very studious, speaks less but loves his brother very much..

GUNJAN SHERGILL:
The diva of excel college, very beautiful and hot but has a heart of gold!.

SHILPA BHUSHAN:
nupur's mother, very sweet ladywhaich wants her daughter to gert married as soon as posible.

PART 1:

Samrat and mayank sitting on the morena rail way station

M...tu dekhna samrat, mumbai hamare sare sapne sach kar de ga...

S...haan waise b mumbai sapno ka shehr hai

M...haan aur sapno k shehr main sapno ki rajkumari bhi tu miley ga na..

S...ufff bhai tum hamesha aisey batein ku karte ho?

M..ku k tu kabhi nai karta, acha chal train a gai hai, agr miss ho gai na, tu tujhe tu koi kuch nahi kahe ga, bauji mujhe hi jotey marey gey..

Maynak and samrat reach thier uncle's house, where they both will live alone as thier uncle has left for bangkok, for his business.

Next morning,Nupur entering the excel college when she strikes into gunjan..

N...oh...i am sorry

G...it ok nupur., waise b tumhari jaise perfectionist se ghaityan kabhi kabhi hoti hain, so its ok

N...haan aur main apni her ghalti se sekthi hon.

G...ufff...tum kabhi normal tarike se baat nahi kar sakti..

N...mujhe class ke liye late ho raha hai..

nupur leaves for her class when she bumps into mayank and aall her books fall down.

M...i am sorry..main ne dekha nahi..

Nupur turned her face and mayank was mesmirzed for a sacond by her eyes...he had never seen such beautiful eyes, but her controlled early..

M...i am sorry...wo kia hi k mera aj pehla din hai tu mujhe class nahi mil rahi...advertising k class kahan hain.

N...chaliyen main dikha deti hon

Mayanka and nupur were walking through the corridor

M...waise mujhe tu clg bht psnd aya, itna bara hai..hamre wahan tu itni jaga main 5 clg ban jaye..

Nupr was quietly walking..

M...waise main advertising lena nahi chata tha, per phir main ne socha k aj kal scope bht hai,. main tu bacphan se docter hi bana chata tha per us main mehnat bht hoti hai

Nupur was still quiet

M...arey waise main ne ap ko bataya hi nahi k main kahan se hoon, main morena se aya hon, ap kahan se hain.

N...classroom..

M...kiya?...

N...class room a gaya hai..

M...aray haan..thank u..

Mayank walks into the class and nupur is walking behind him

M...rehne dijiye, agey desk tak main khud hi chalka jaon ga... thank u so much..

N...ye meri bhi class hai..

M...ary wah, ye bht acha ho gaya, warna main soch raha tha k kisi aur se jaan pehcahn banana pare ga..

He pulled the chair for her.

M..bathiye na..

N..no thanks main front row main bethti hon

M...ye tu bht hi achi baat hai, chaliye aj main b frnt row main bethta hoin..

Thier sir gave them asignenments which they had to complete individually.They both were now thinking about their plans to complete assignemnts.Nupur was about to leave when mayank again called.

M...suniye ...yahan libaray kahan hai?

N...chailey...

Both were again walking and again mayank was talking non stop and nupur was quiet.

They reached the library

M...thank u agian

Maynk entered and saw nupur was again following

M...arey rehne dijiye ,books main khud he dhoond lon ga

N..mujhe apne liye books leni hain

M..oh..sorry, phr se wohi ghalti kar di..

Both of then issued their books.

Nupur was sitting in her room, when she remenbered the new boy and his funny attitude..

SB..arey wah..jo larki kisi bheer main b nahi muskarati thi, wo aj akele beth k muskura rahi hai..

Nupur straightens her face..

N..arey kuch nahi maa, aj ik naya larka aya hai clg main ,morena se...bht funny hai

SB..morena?

N...tum ne suna hai is k bare main?

SB...haan suna hai achi jaga hai..

N...haan achi hi hogi, tabhi whan k log bhi ache hain

SB...oh!..tu thek hai, tera dulha morena se ho ga..promise..

N...maa please ye her waqt dulhe ki baat mat kiya karo, mujhe abhi bht kam karna hai , aur abhi koi shadi nahi karni...kam as kam 4 saal bad, jab main tumhain ik bara sa ghar de don gi, tab sohcne gey shadi k bare main

SB..beta 4 minute ka bhorasa nahi hai, aur tu 4 saal ki planning kar rahi hai..

N..maa asie batien mat kiya karo

She lay down in her lap,and shilpa bhushan was thinking that how should she convince nupur for marriage...she had to do it soon..

do comment...😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start and i love the talking mayank
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lovely work mahek continue soon ...........
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wonderful story mahak
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely part!!!!!
Really loved talkative Mayank & serious Nupur...
continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hehe interesting. MN role reversal. 😳

We could have gotten this for MJHT S2!!
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great cs loved it continue soon
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awesome
loved it
mayank talkative and nupur serious
great
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res .. Hehe Loved This Reversed Idea 😆
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lovely start..mayank is sooo funny.....cont soon

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