MayUr FF - The Blossoming Magic || Part 18 - Pg 92 - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadzzz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Cliff-hangering is ur fav game i guess😆...har update mein hook karna as if a drug addict we so crave for next dose🤣🤪...still im loving it...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Express.. I so want to listen to their convo... Update soon...
I dint comment on the update naa.. do I need to say anything abt tht 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved part 4. The way nupur was waiting for him to come back home and her excitement at his return is so adorable😃 Nupur should so tell Gunjan that she likes mayank I'm sure Gunjan will act as cupid between them if she ever finds out but at the same time, Nupur cant really do much since she lives with her chacha chachi, in a way its even harder for her to make her own decisions Love the MaJan scene😆 boys should keep clear from the kitchen they simply cannot handle it😛 but the fact that he even went to try shows that hes a really sweet brother😳 the cash thing is sad but again expected😆 i was really surprised when she didnt sleep maybe she's still upset over the dinner conversation😊
Part 5 is so damn sweet.😍 love the fact that he didnt fall asleep until she did😳 Love his lovestruck heart. sometimes it takes absolutely no time to fall heads over heals in love with someone even if you know nothing about them😳 His part with his mum was really adorable😃 The rishta part shocked me and made me kinda sad too but no worries everyone knows Nupur is only for Mayank😎 love the way you described his reaction. I feel so bad for himHolding the shopping bags with Mrs. Bhushan, Mayank entered the Bhushan house😍.😍😍love this more than anything else. Nice foreshadowing😃
Mayank's interaction with Nupur's dadi is really nice. He should get the dadi to like him if he wants the granddaughter to be his😉 adore the way you descibed the way she was looking and even more than that, the way he kept staring at her when he finally saw her😳 The fact that they finally met is awesome and they were both at a loss for words upon seeing one another😍 you're the best writer ever, you make the smallest simplest things seem so beautiful and sweet👏
love this FF tons. And really sorry for 3 in one reply. I promise I'll do better😆 thanks for the pms love ya🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago
its just soo great a piece kinzu...
loved it...
the way you have written the feeling of them both is so
apt...
loved it..update jaldi se..cant wait...
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Posted: 14 years ago
The first meeting ws so breath taking.😍😍..It ws full of innocence...
Loved this impatient mayank and his thought 'how would she look in pink' is awww...😳
And the last part...OMG my heart is beating loud in excitement...How do u all time manage to make us this much excited and impatient to read ur updates...Just loved it...🤗
Wish finally she wud pick the call...Fingers crossed...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter # 7
Unexpected turns

The phone was ringing and nupur was blankly staring at the screen. She could feel the shiver in her hands and her eyes started brimming with tears.

Neither in 6 years did she had to face him, and today when she was trying so hard to ignore his thoughts, he was again and again coming in front of her.

She couldn't believe that destiny was playing such an unfair game with her. She stamped the mobile back on the table and rushed to the washroom where tears made way to her cheeks.

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"hello"

The call was attended, but to mayank's utmost disappointment, it was gunjan, "kia hua bhai?"

Mayank wanted to speak his heart right away, but sadly, he couldn't, "umm..kuch nahi..wo actually ..wo papers kahan hai research k jo tum se kaha tha?', he tried hard sounding normal and strict.

"bhai wo us din tumhain de tu di thi",

"haan ..wo..mujhe mil nahi rahi hai.."

"bhai, wo tumhari study ….OH MY GOD!",

"kia hua?", mayank was shocked at the sudden change in gunjan's voice whereas gunjan was stunned seeing the sight in front of her, "di you are looking gorgeous", she spoke with the phone still on her ears, and mayank felt his heart pumping at gunjan's statement.

"tum pe pink kitna acha lag raha hai", gunjan was very ecstatic, completely forgetting that she was on phone, while mayank was standing at the terrace, staring at the closed blinds of the window opposite, just picturing gunjan's words.

"bhai tum se baad main baat karti hon", she disconnected the phone and mayank just gazed at it helplessly.

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" di tum..

"bus karo gunjan", nupur said in an irritating tone and , and gunjan got tensed. Nupur started brushing her hair and gunjan slowly hugged her from back, "di tum khush nahi ho na?', she asked looking at her through the mirror and nupur just turned and hugged her, "gunjan…",she could only spoke this while crying and gunjan softly rubbed her back, "di kia baat hai?, tum kyun itni udass ho?, I don't think u are just scared, there is something else..kia baat hai di?"

Nupur came back to senses hearing all this from gunjan, tensed she parted herself from her, "kuch nahi.,.gunjan wo..maa, baba ..", she again started crying with hiccups and gunjan hugged her again, "di wo tumhain dekh k kitney udaas honge, ku ro rahi ho?, aur tumhare parents soch rahe hon gey k un k beti ro rahi hai, aur wo us k pass bhi nahi ja sakte..they'll be feeling so helpless, plz di, don't cry, ", gunjan parted her from her self and wiped her tears while nupur smiled slowly, "ye hui na baat, now don't cry", she kissed her cheek, "acha di, ab main ja rahi hon, mom ne kaha tha k larkey waon k aney se pehle mian ghr wapis a jaon, acha nahi lagta and all", gunjan made a face and nupur giggled, "but u don't worry, jaise hi wo log jayen gey, main dobara a jaon gi", she hugged her again, "main abhi ghr ja bhai ki balcony pe qabza karne wali hon, tumhara kamra wahan se saaf nazr ata hai", gunjan spoke joyfully while nupur felt those tears again forming again.

She kissed her cheek again and looking at her with a critical eye, and then smiling contently she left her room.

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After greeting dadi, gunajn was moving out of the Bhsuhan house in her own thoughts when she bumped into a fairly stronger person then her, "ouch", she rubbed her arm as she looked at the man standing in front of her. Dressed in a white shirt and black dress pants, he was ardently staring at her, "excuse me!", gunjan spoke as his eyes were not leaving her face, "dekh kar nahi chal sakte?", she growled while the man just smiled, "I am sorry", he said politely while gunjan huffed, "hoga Rahul rohan ka koi stupid dost", she thought and left giving him an angry glare.

"samrat", a female voice called him from behind, "gi maa"

" chalo beta . larki dekhne aye hain hum, shaarm rahe ho tum tu", his mom teased him, while he smiled and followed her inside, looking back at the girl, who entered the home opposite the one he was entering.

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The Shergill family entered Bhushan house and the all of the members were there for greetings.

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Hello bhai!!", gunjan made her way into mayank's room who was so shocked to see her,"wapis a gayi?"

"haan", she opened the terrace door and went outside, and mayank followed her "oh no!", she stamped her hands on the railing, "kia hua?"

"larke wale ander chaely gaye hain, I guess ye un hi ki gari hai", gunjan made a sad face while mayank carefully examined the car.

"aisey kaisey?, main ghr k ander enter ho k seedha upper ayi hon, itney se time main ander chaley bhi gaye?", gunjan was speaking all this on her own and mayank went inside. He opened his laptop and started working, shutting his mind from every non-sense emotions he had been experiencing.

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Nupur came in the lounge nervously to face three new people who were completely strangers to her. She smiled slowly, sitting beside Mrs Shergill, and to her advantage, she felt all the gazes were respectful, none of them was taunting or criticizing. This made her really comfortable. It was Mr & Mrs. Shergill, nice, affectionate people and Samrat shergill, their son and the person who would..maybe..these thoughts choked her mind. The sudden comfort she was feeling all vanished. She saw that samrat smiled at her but she turned her face away.

"mujhe nupur se akeley main baat karni hai..", he bluntly said and nupur looked at him in amazement. Her dadi narrowed her eye-brows, "hmm..jao nupur, samrat ko apna kamra dikha lao, "

Nupru was stunned, and she felt herself glued to the sofa. "chalen?", samrat's voice made her come out of her trance and she stood up, walking towards her room and samrat followed her.

Dadi's eyes followed them both, till the way they could.

Nupur opened the door of her room and samrat made his way in, "very pretty room":, he gently said, while nupur just held the corner of her duppatta, nervously entangling her fingers in it." I really like this mauve color, very soothing", he appreciated the wall paint, while nupur still didn't answer. Sensing an unusual silence, he turned to see that nupur was quietly staring at the closed blinds of her window.

"I guess ap k wahan se koi mehmaan aney wale hain", samrat said cheekily , folding his hands across his chest, while nupur turned her face away from blinds, now focusing back to her duppatta.

u are not interested in even asking me to sit?", he said again and this time nupur raised her eyes, "I am sorry, bethiye", she nervously spoke, realizing her mistake, and more fearing her dadi's scolding.

"it's ok, ap k terrace pe betehey hain", he said and went to the terrace door while nupur just closed her eyes to absorb the sudden shock. Samrat stepped out on the terrace and nupur followed her, she had no choice except this..

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"oh My God!! Di terrace pe hai", gunjan shouted and mayank who was so sure that he had successfully ignored all his nonsense feelings, threw his pen and rushed to the terrace.

As he reached, the first sight he saw was nupur dressed in a pink churidaar. It was perfectly gracing her body, with fitting till her waist and slightly flowing down till a little up her toes. Her hair were left open.The fading sunlight was shining on her to make her look like a pink rose.."she is so beautiful", he murmured under his breath.

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"this is so beautiful", samrat said as he looked around the view from terrace, while nupur was again quiet, deliberately avoiding the view of the opposite balcony, and samrat was observing someone familiar standing on the opposite balcony.

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gunjan narrowed her eyes to get a clearer view, "ye tu wohi..", she murmured, as she recognized the man , it was the same she collided with, "ye di ko dekhney aya hai". She reached the conclusion.

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Samrat smiled in voluntarily to see the girl standing there, who was leaning on the railing, clearly showing that she wanted a clearer view.

He couldn't help smiling .

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Seeing that he had caught her staring, gunjan bit her lower lip and ran inside, while samrat on the other hand sighed seeing her go.

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Mayank was standing there, plainly observing nupur, completely ignoring everyone's presence around him and nupur, and nupur didn't dare to look at the balcony once even, she was constantly fiddling with her duppatta.

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Urghhh!!", gunjan spoke to her self as she entered her room, "itni duffer ho na main!, he caught me staring!, this is so embarrassing!!"

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As gunjan left the terrace, samrat got a chance to observe other happenings on the balcony, which were somewhat shocking for him, he saw a boy standing on the opposite balcony, plainly staring at nupur and he looked at nupur who was nervously playing with her duppata, as if her eyes were glued to the floor. Reaching to vague conclusions in his mind, he spoke, "umm, nupur, ander chalein?', and he observed a strange expression, mixed with relief and disappointment, "haan, chalien", she immediately went inside, and samrat observed the boy on the opposite terrace, shifting his eyes from nupur to him, and even far, he could see those lines on his forehead. Smiling at the strange views, he went inside, closing the door of the terrace, and he saw the railing on the opposite balcony being smacked

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"Mayank saw her going inside, which did hurt him, but what was getting in tolerable for him was that man followed her in the room, closing the door of the terrace. He smacked his hands on the railing and and took a deep breath. This is completely insane behavior, he thought.

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Nupur entered the room following samrat and there the servants brought tea for them. "mian bana deti hon", she head towards the trolley, while smart sat on the sofa opposite, "main bana deta haon", he slid the tray towards himself,

"nahi , main', nupur resisted, while smart had already started the work. Nupur again quietly sat down on the sofa, this time observing the vase on the table, .

"lagta hai main ap ko psnd nahi aya", he said, pouring tea in the cup and nupur was confused what to answer, "nahi main..

"mtlb psnd aya hon?", he forwarded her the cup, which she held, making sure their hands did not touch each other, while samrat's vague conclusions were getting clearer, "yeh samne wale ghr..", samrat started speaking and he observed nupur hands shiver, "samne wale ghr ka architercture bht acha hai", he said looking at her expressions going relax.

Nupur quietly started sipping her tea and samrat again decided to barge in he r thoughts, "well I was thinking is it only me to take the decision or would you mind helping me?'

"which decision?', she questioned confusedly while smart smiled, "umm..well, the decision whether we ought to get married or not, remember the reason me and my family came here?',

Samrat's voice was joyous, and he had no intention to trouble nupur but still he could see sweat droplets on nupur's forehead, she closed her eyes for a second to re-gain strength to speak, "I will go by the consent of my family", her voice was plain and stiff and samrat was taken aback. He didn't expect her to answer so bluntly like this. "I trust my family, they will never choose anything wrong for me", she looked into his eyes straight, "I don't have any opinion of my own"

"are u sure?" , samrat also decided to be blunt, nupur swallowed a lump in her throat, "yes".

Samrat smiled, "great!", he got back to finish his tea, while nupur started to concentrate on how to stop the flowing tears.

Although it did hurt. She had an opinion of her own, and that opinion was to marry the person she had been loving since she understood the meaning of love, but she knew this was all next to impossible. Thinking about all this would only end up giving her pain and if all these feeling would leave the boundaries of her heart to enter the world, she won't be able to answer any questions by anyone. So, it was better to corner these feelings in the deepest chamber of her heart and move on. And she was happy that she was strong enough to do that.

During dinner, nupur had gained her composure. She was normal and smiling. She tried guessing samrat's gestures, but the only conclusion she reached was – he was weird!. But all that didn't matter, she would find everyone wired, compared to mayank. So, she decided to just let go off.

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The Shergill family left after dinner, and before leaving the home, samrat couldn't help glancing at the balcony opposite – maybe he would again catch her staring.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay when I read Shergill I knew nothing wrong is gonna happen and Samrat and Gunjan's first meeting just increased my hopes ...
The anticipation, curiosity, the agitation everything was just perfect and I seriously loved the terrace scene - it was just perfect ... All of them looking at each other and having so many different thoughts ...

Really nice update Di ...
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Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*edited*

😃 I kind of guessed it would be Samrat😆
ab Gunjan hai toh Samrat ko toh hona hi hai naa!!😉😆
and from Samrat's smartness, I guess wo jo karega sahi karega
but... one thing is troubling me😕
if Samrat denies the marriage, then what will Dadi say to Nupur?😕
and if he says yes, then???😲

M eagerly eagerly waiting for the next part😃

continue soon😃

thnx for the pm🤗

~jiya~

P.S. I am not the first one to reserve🤔... but I'm the first one to edit😉😃
Edited by jiya_angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww...this was amazing update kinzuuu!!!!!!!!!!! Samrat adn Gunjan were sooo cute and poor MAyank adn Nupur! but i m hoping for things to work out between thm!!!!!! :D :D
another beautiful update kinzuuu!!!!!!!!

p.s. love u!!!!!!!!
Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago

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