MayUr FF - The Blossoming Magic || Part 18 - Pg 92 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wao KinZu I am Waiting For it yar
First Of All congrats on your 10th story
This is really Super Great u deserve It
the first part is so cute
Love to read More
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Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome start
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
You started another FF 🥳 so so happy I really miss your writing whenever you stop. The beginning as usual is fabulous, loved it so much. I'm sure the person was nupur who else could it possibly be😆 and mayank glancing at her terrace and being teased by his friends was super sweet. Looks like he's already attracted to her😍
Huge huge Congrats on your tenth story🤗 you have improved massively since you're first one. Each FF keeps getting better and better than the previous one😍 and 😆 also Congrats on your username change. And the success doesn't go to us its completely yours for being such a fabulous FF writer.🤗 FF sounds very romantic hope we get lots of pbms and sajda's🤣
Thanks for the pm🤗 PS: I'm last again😆 people are proud when they're first to reply I'm proud of always being lastROFL
Edited by MayUr-ArTi_fan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Express.. Congrats swty 🤗
the nickname i gave u totally justifies ur act.. ir shuld i say ur act of updating at a lightening speed justifies my nickname for you... be it anyway, i am so happy shappy for you... 😊
and the update.. can't wait to read further... 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter # 2.
Underlying attraction.


She was just seeing the path where he left his footsteps behind, with a strange blush taking her over.

"nupur!', her trail of thoughts was broken by a loud authoritative voice, "ayi dadi!", she immediately rushed inside and before closing the door of the terrace, she glanced at the gate of the opposite home.

She rushed down the stairs, fearing the stern look she had to face now, nervously adjusting her duppatta, she knocked at her dadi's room, "gi dadi, ap ne bulaya?"

"beta ap terrace pe kiya kar rahi thi?", she asked in a soft yet authoritative voice, and nupur felt earth shrinking beneath her feet, "dadi main bs..

"abhi ramo ne bataya k ap kab se terrace pe khari thi, ap ko pata hai na hamien ye sab nahi psnd", the strictness in her voice was not fading and now adding more problem for nupur, she was looking at nupur too.

"dadi main terrace pe..", her voice was stuck in her throat, and tears started brimming in her eyes,

"oh ho, ro kyun rahi ho?",

Nupur lowered her eyes, just an attempt that her tears were not visible, "acha ab jao kitchen main dekho khane ki tyaari kaisi chal rahi hai, aj sham ko kuljeet k dost khane pe a rahe hain tu abhi se tyari shoro karwa di hai", she spoke in one go and nupur turned quietly , "nupur!"

"gi", she turned,

"beta hum ap ko jis bhi chez se mana karte hain us main ap ki bhalayi hoti hai", she spoke softly and nupur nodded and rushed out of the room, allowing the stream of tears to flow.

On entering the kitchen, she started the work. Her hands were busy peeling vegetables, but her mind was again and again wandering at her dadi's words. Tears were not stopping, but she had to stop them, she couldn't afford the dinner being spoiled.

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The night was falling, and all the dishes were almost at their end stage. Nupur was mixing ghee for gajr halwa when she was hugged from back.."diii"

"gunjan!, ufff!", she turned back in anger, opening the grip of her arms, "kia hai?, kitna gram ghee bhon rahi hon, gir jata tu?", she glared her and gunjan pouted, "kia di?, ik tu tum se do din k baad milne ayi hon aur tum ne datna shoro kar diya hai"

Nupur giggled at her pouting and hugged her, "nautanki!, ye bata kaisi tha seminar?'

"bht acha di, and I really enjoyed"

"hmm", she concentrated back to her halwa, "di main tumhain leney ayi hon, chalo movie dekhtey hain.., nupur turned back, amazed and gunjan started giggling seeing her eyes widened, "gabhrao mat, cinema nahi, DVD pe dekhtey hain, main ne sharukh k nayi movies ki DVDs mangwai hain, chalo tumhare kamre main..",

"aj tu possible nahi hai, chachu k dost a rahe hain khane pe , tu main..

"tu tum nakrani ban gayi ho, hain na?"

"gunjan!", she didn't like the way gunjan spoke,

"tuu aur kia?, her roz is ghr main koi na koi party hoti rehti hai!, kabhi uncle k dost, kabhi aunti ki friends, kabhi rohan aur rahul k classmates!, aur tum pe orders chaltey rehtey hain, sara ghr ka kaam tum karti ho?, kyun?

nupur was just smiling at her superfast way of speaking, "tu kia hua gunjan, mera ghar hai ..main..

"exactly,. Tumhara ghr hai ye!, sirf is liye k tumhare parents zinda nahi hain inhon ne tumhain naukrani bana diya hai..", gunjan spoke everything at a spree ignoring that tears had started forming in nupur's eyes, and on seeing it she wiped them off, "acha thek hai, mat ro plz, tumhara khana kharab ho jaye ga", she was about to grab the spoon when nupur held it, "chal ab tu ja gunjan, dadi phir bolen gi k itni raat ko ghr se bahir..

"ufff di!, sirf 7 baje hain!", she angrily glared at nupur and she lowered her eyes giggling, "acha main ja rahi hon, per kal hum movie zaroor dekheoin gey, waise bhi mujhe abhi bhai ka.."

She left her words in between, grabbing her mobile and nupur's heart started beating with double speed, she was waiting for gunjan to complete her sentence about her brother but she was lost in her mobile, "umm..bhai ka kia gunjan?"

"umm kia?",she raised her head looking at her confusedly,

"wo kia kaam hai tha ghr pe?

"kaam! Haan wo bhai ko ik research kar k deni hai, literature k bare main hai tu us ne mujhe keh diya, main ne socha tha usey subha kar don gi , abhi hum movie dekhain gey, per abhi hi kar deti hon, movie hum subha dekhain gey, ok?!", she stiffly looked at her and she nodded. Gunjan again hugged her and left.

Nupur started cooking again and wondered how come his name always used leave her breathless.

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"bhai ye parh lo", gunjan handed mayank some printed papers and he lowered the volume of tv, hmmm", he said grabbing the papers, "thank you gunjan, per main subha parh lon ga", he again raised the volume and gunjan sat beside him.

Mayank was watching JAILED ABROAD on National geographic, and gunjan joined him, "bhai plz change karo, itni depressing chezain nahi dekhni hai mujhe, pehle hi mera mood thek nahi hai!", he spoke angrily and mayank lowered the volume, "aj kia hua hai g princess ko?", he giggled,

"kuch nahi, bus wohi di k bare main..", she left her words in between and mayank felt his pulse rise momentarily, he waited for her to complete her sentence but gunjan got up from his side and went out of his room.

Mayank tried concentrating back to the show, but his mind was wandering between the incomplete sentences of gunjan.

He knew she referred to nupur as "di", she was their neighbor, mayank's age fellow, which meant two years elder than gunjan. He knew gunjan was really close to her, nupur lived with her dadi and chacha chachi, her parents had died since she was 15 years old. He had known her since then, that was the time she and her family had shifted in mayank's neighborhood. He remembered the first time he saw her, a quiet girl, with swollen eyes, holding the picture of her parents tightly. Since then he had just known her through gunjan, and today again she told him an incomplete story of her life.

He sighed and switched off the TV. He tried reading the papers but closed everything and came to the balcony of his room. The wind was very chilly, and the view opposite mayank's balcony was nupur's balcony. He had sometimes seen her, but she immediately used to run inside, today he could see the light on, which meant she was awake. He sat down on the chair, involuntary waiting for the light too switch off, He glanced at the clock and it was 10. He knew she used to sleep early. And he was right, the lights went out at about 10.30, smiling contently he came inside.

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

res...me first!🥳

Edited:

Part 2 - great job!👏

Aww...my poor Nupur! She was crying thinking about her Dadi's words...

Looks like Nupur is treated like a servant by her uncle & aunt...Gunur bond was cute!😊

"Nupur started cooking again and wondered how come his name always used leave her breathless." ... aww...how sweet! 😃 "Love"...❤️😍

Awww...he was so anxious to find out the rest of the sentence but Gunjan left it incomplete.

Mayank kept watching her room until the lights turned off...awww😍...U r a pro at showing little things like this which make me smile...

Can't wait for the next part!

Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

2nddd...
Ishi i LOHA( Love+Hate) U

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Kinzaaa
beautiful update as usual...
i felt sad for nups- poor nups... she is too restricted to her uncle's family..
nups-gunji relationship is really very nice...
awww mayu is so sweet---- he was watching nups frm his balcony...
sweet, nice and simple update- loved it so much
keep it up






Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Faria-



2nddd...
Ishi i LOHA( Love+Hate) U





Awww...my cutie...Love u too! 😆
Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
hey mehek loved it...continue soon...mayur...always a magic😉 will never get bored of them
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#50
LOVED It.. It was sooo sweeet...

waiting for ur next update..:):):)😊😊😊

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