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Posted: 14 years ago
part 14
was sweeter than the halwa itself i must say and at the end their suniy's😳 and I love you's had me in awes, defintely a nice moment. And wow nupur turned to more forwarding than i presummed but i guess it was needed for the story to move on but i liked the part nonetheless.
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 15.
i love this phase of their relationship, overcoming all and finally understanding each other its really beautiful. And nupur is so adorable, but it was saddening to see her sad about her room, i understand very much a room is a personal space and you have so many memories attached to that one room that may seem like only a four wall bedroom but its much more.😳
they both are just blissful together and the happiness they bring to each other is wonderful.
updatesoon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg...

its awsom...

par mayank nupr k dukh ko samajhta kyun nahi!!!!!!!!!
he must understand he pain of losing home...

i felt bad for nupur :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
o Kinzu that was so beautiful and cute part
i love it
thanks For pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter # 16

Sharing Lives

It was almost 8, when nupur's sleep was being disturbed by a constant ringing. She tried to ignore thinking maybe it was her dream, but it was not.

She opened her eyes to find her in the exact position she slept, in the strong hold of mayank.

Blushing deeply, she reached for the cell phone, which was ringing an alarm of 8.00 am.

"inhon ne hi lagaya hoga hai", she thought and looked at mayank with an intention of waking him up.

. "suniye 8 baj gaye hain", she gently patted on her arm, which was enveloping her waist.

"hmmm", he grunted and pulled her more close.

Although nupur was blushing till the roots of hair , but still managed to carry on with her wake up processions.

"I think u have something important at 9", she again tried after a couple of moments, but mayank had slipped in slumber again.

His arms were around her waist, and head very calmly resting on her shoulder. His ruffled hair tickling her neck and fingers dipping in her waist, and his breath playing on her collar bone was running a chill down her spine. Her mind was budging to hug him back.

"I think u have something important at 9.00", she caressed his hair and insisted softly.

"hmmm..board..meeting", he answered in broken words and nupur's heart contracted with affection for him, he was looking so adorable mumbling In sleep and this was the first time nupur saw a glimpse of innocence in mayank. She smiled and kissed her hair, "tu uth jayen na, it's 8.10"

"2 minutes", he pleadingly said and nupur again smiled, "thek hai"

Nupue carried on her caressing for the next two minutes. She really wanted it to continue till the end of time. Nothing could be more pleasant for nupur – mayank enjoying her caress in his hair, but she couldn't carry on.

It's 8.12", she announced and this time, forcefully removed his arm from her waist, while he grunted in irritation.

"main 10 minute main change kar k ati hon, tab tak ap uth jana..ok!", she kissed his forehead, while he opened his eyes, looking at her with droopy eyes, "okay!", he agreed and closed his eyes again.

Nupur returned, dressed in a magenta sari , finding mayank still asleep. "main ne kaha tha na 10 minute mai uth jayen ga", she sat beside him, warning him, but he showed no signs of waking up. Sighing, she slowly leaned down on him, "ik minute main uth jayen nahi tu pani gira don gi", nupur made sure her voice was alarming but it didn't effect mayank.

":I am very serious", she repeated with the same sternness, and again seeing no movement, she stealthily grabbed the water jug and standing up, she carefully removed the blanket.

Mayank was sensing the blanket being moved away, and was about to pull it back when he was SPLASHED WITH WATER!

"What the..", He sat up dumbfounded, his hair and face all wet, and he saw nupur laughing, holding a half –filled jug.

"kia?, main ne kaha tha ap se k main pani gira don gi!, I am very strict"

"She proudly declared, controlling her giggle and mayank's mind worked out the way for revenge.

"strict, tehro zara!', he jumped out of the bed and nupur ran towards the balcony, " nahi please..dekhiye..". She quickly headed towards the terrace door and mayank jumped over the couch and grabbed her wrist and pinned her to the corner, taking the jug from her hand, "kia keh rahi thi?, strict ho?",

"ap late ho rahe they tu..", she said giggling, "acha !, firstly u drench ur husband and now u are laughing", he increased his grip and nupur giggled more , "I was just..

And before nupur could complete her sentence, mayank started pouring the water from the jug over her and she closed her eyes as a reflex action.

Water was wetting her hair locks and falling down her forehead, to her eyes and then to her cheeks, a few of the drops lingered on her lips, while some of them trickled down her chin.

The act which was supposedly to be his revenge, turned out to be a heavenly sight for him.

Water in the jug finished, finding places all over nupur's face and hair, so mayank placed it away on the sofa and nupur opened her eyes, a few drops falling from her eye-lashes made her blink twice, "main ne abhi abhi change kiya tha!", she frowned, narrowing her eye-brows and started wiping droplets from her face with her hand and mayank held her hand and entwined his fingers in it. Nupur was constantly looking in his eyes, and she read something which made her heart pump vigorously,

"ap ko dair….",

and she was cut in between - as a certain husband of hers' placed his lips ever so softly on her lips, making the time go still for a moment.

After a spilt second surprise, nupur also surrendered to the moment, making it a silent yet passionate, tender yet powerful expression of their deep love.

Mayank pulled back first and nupur opened her eyes, "as for now I am really getting late, we'll continue in the evening", he nibbled her ear lobe, while she sighed softly.

Mayank went to dress up and drying her hair properly nupur came down stairs. "good morning mom", she wished as she saw Mrs Sharma busy in the kitchen, "morning beta, dekhna zara gunjan uth gayi hai?'

"gi.."

She headed towards gunjan's room and she was already coming out, "morning di!", she kissed her cheek and rushed down the stairs, "gunjan araam se..

"it's ok dii.., bye mom, main ja rahi ho..bye di", she rushed out of the gate at a lightning speed and then came the other super fast kid of the Sharma house, "bye mom, bye nupur, I am leaving", he rushed through the lounge, "beta breakfast

"time nahi hai mom",

and he was gone.

Both the Sharma women started giggling at the super fast ways of these siblings, "pagal hain dono!, pata nahi mayank tu hamesha hi late uththa hai, koi na koi bahaana bana k..aj kia bhaana bana raha tha?", Mrs Sharma asked and nupur who was drinking water felt it stuck, "gi wo..", her words got lost as she remembered all what he was doing in the morning , "wo aj tu alarm hi nahi snooze hua", she said uselessly adjusting spoons in the tray.

"chalo ik bar tu us ka kasoor nahi hai", Mrs Sharma spoke in a jolly tone and nupur blushed deep. "merey khyal se tu ziyada tang karey na tu pani phenka karo is par, aisi hi uthey ga", Mrs Sharma went out of the kitchen advising while nupur bit her lower lip and was turning all red, giving competition to the tomatoes in the vegetable basket.

The whole day went in the normal routine, Cooking, cleaning, and setting. Gunjan and Mr. Shrama were there for dinner, but mayank was not. Nupur really missed him, but his sms saying,

"don't miss me much, dinner thek se kar lena ..<3",

made her smile to the fullest, and she was sure that her reply saying..

"well that is something I can't help, but I'll eat, make sure u do also.."

Will also bring a smile.

It was almost 10, when everyone retired to their own respective rooms, and nupur was still waiting for mayank. She didn't go to gunjan's room, as her exams were coming so she decided not to disturb her. Adjusting some displaced things in the room, she changed and drying her hair, she went to the balcony.

She stood there, closing her eyes, allowing the soft breeze to playing with her hair. She opened her eyes to see the lighted sky with stars. She re-called longing so much to see all this, but she was always afraid to step on her terrace, but today there was no fear, no hesitation.

She sat on the couch, endlessly admiring the vast sky, filled with stars., she tried to find her parents in every shining star, and she was sure they were also smiling on her, she could feel it.

Letting the tears flow, she went to the memories of her childhood, when there was nothing except warmth and love, but then everything changed, she was brought in a hostile environment, and now again everything changed, it was again warmth and love, not only a love of husband, but parents and in form of gunjan, the love of a child too.

She saw a shooting star and closing her eyes she wished the happiness of people which filled her life with colors, "God please, always bless my home, please!"

" and bless you also",

Mayank's sudden voice shocked her , "a gaye ap", she ran towards him and hugged him tight. The loneliness she was feeling in the past few hours all was compensated as he hugged back.

She slightly moved apart, and mayank noticed frozen tears on her face, "tum ro rahi thi?", he asked as he softly kissed every mark of tear on her face, and instead of replying she hugged him back, but this time mayank moved her away, "nupur I have something for you", he picked her up and she closed her eyes, quietly resting her head in his arms, she was feeling to weak to question or tease.

He made her stand by the side of the bed and what she saw, filled her eyes again with tears. The whole bed was filled with HER things. All those things which were in her room, her companions , her windchamp, her cushions, her teddy, her paintings, her sketch books, her wall papers, the pictures of her parents, the numerous photo frames of her parents, she was sure her heart would stop beating. She grabbed the picture of her parents and rubbing her hands over it she hugged it as close to her as she could.

Mayank hugged her from back, and kissed her shoulder, "I have brought all your companions back to you", and nupur's tears gushed out with more speed. Mayank increased his grip of arms and she turned in his arms, hiding herself in his arms, and holding the picture close to her, she could feel the closeness of her parents and mayank. She wanted time to cease in there.

After a while, mayank raised her head, looking in her eyes, "u are alright?", he softly kissed her eyes and she slowly nodded, "ap ye sab kab le k aye?', she asked as he had kissed every tear on her face, "abhi le kar aya hon, I was thinking about your words, about how u considered all these things as your companions, and I thought u were right, these things are very important for you, is liye main le aya, sorry couldn't understand last night, today just thought k mujh se koi mera karma le ga tu kaisa lage ga, and I can understand how would it feel, tu main ne dadi se kaha k nupur k sari chezain chaiye, unhon ne de gin.. this is it..u don't have much things", he added the last bit in a naughty tone but she kissed him, ignoring every blush in her heart, "thank you", she replied as she pulled back, with her cheeks flushing with red color, and mayank smiled, "lets set your things", he suggested and observed a child like twinkle in her eyes, "haan thek hai".

She jumped out of his arms, and mayank observed her excitedly placing all her things in different corners of the room, she was so excited that she herself stood on the chair to fix the wind champ on the terrace door, obviously mayank was standing by her side to make sure she doesn't trips, but he wanted her to feel all the zeal.

She placed her sketch books, in between his files and he glared at her, faking anger but she pouted with such innocence that mayank couldn't help kissing her again.

Later at night, after setting all the things, both of them were sitting on the terrace, with nupur cuddling to mayank, holding the picture of her parents tight and looking at the sky.

"kia dekh rahi ho nupur?', mayank asked as he was observing tears in her eyes,

"mama papa se baat kar arhi hon", she said and mayank felt his heart sink, he raised her head again and she was smiling,

"main un se poch rahi thi k ap un ko kaisey lagey."

She was saying all this in a normal tone and mayank could feel his own eyes getting wet, but he couldn't show his weak side, because there was no way he could feel her pain, he swolled a lump in his throat and gained strength to speak, "tu kia kaha unhon ne", he tried to ask normally, while she smiled even more wide, as if she got the first chance to speak her heart out.

"unhon ne kaha k ap bohat ache ho, thora ghusa karte ho, per mujh se bohat pyar karte ho", she replied, looking back at the sky,

".aur kiya keh rahe hain", he encouraged her to speak her, he wanted her to share all her pain today..

"aur keh rahe hain k main apni shaadi main bohat achi lag rahi thi, mama ne kaha k main bikul un k jaisi lag rahi thi, per papa ne kaha k main mama se bhi pyari lag rahi hai, per mujhe tu lagta hai mere mama is duniya k sab se pyaari dulhan thi, main ne kaha un dono se per nahi mane wo dono," nupur was constantly looking at the sky and mayank also looked at the sky, she was blankly staring at stars and speaking, ' aur keh rahe they k ap bhi bohat handsome lag rahe they, mama keh rahi thi shaadi k baad bhi waisi hi rahon jaisi pehli thi ", mayank silently prayed for their souls to rest in peace,.".aur keh rahin thi k halwa bohat tasty lag raha tha…..phir..

phir?

Phir main ne pocha k ap dono kyun nahi aye mera halwa taste karne..tu..unhon ne kaha k..

Her sobs started and mayank increased his grip, "kia kaha unhon ne?', he could feel his voice getting weak too.

"unhon ne kaha k wo kabhi nahi ayen gey", and all the tears she was hiding came out of her eyes, and mayank hugged her tight, controlling his own tears.

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Finally after ages m first one to comment...😃😆...an update by u...wat a start ...😳

anyways beautiful update.⭐️...angel...it had everything👏😳./...d MN romance☺️...n sweetness😳...but wat i loved d most was the last sequence...i just loved the way mayank actually cared to do all that...n awww nupur...shez so adorable...getting excited n all...awww...n the last bit...whr she is hugging her parents photo n talkin to them...awww...ur d best...!! n yep i adored mayu thr...:)
i just love this ff...to d core...😃...fantastic update...Ms. FAntasia😳😆...
tc ! love ya:) n keep smiling always!🤗
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG kinzu
u updated this ff- wo bhi itna subha subha...


edit

ahhh kinzu- 2nd time i m crying after reading mayur f
at first i cried after reading jaees update and now ur update also made me cry
but the main difference is that its a tear of happiness
Gosh what an amazing update hunn
this is d best art of this ff.
U portrayed my mayur in a very sweet, nice and simple way
they r adorable and alws magical as usual
frm d morning scene to d night scene everything was just outstanding

my magical oops srry our magical princess - u dont know how beautully u wrote d whole part.
it was just out of d world...

yaar agar aisa chalta rahega tou kabhi bhi hum mayur magic se bahar nehi aa payenge...

Kinzuuu a tight hug for writing such an awesome update


love u dear
keep updating

Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'm one of the first people today cant ever thank you enough for updating early🤗
this was the most beautiful update i have ever read. The purity and simplicity in mayur in your ff's makes them even more beautiful than arti have already made them😍 love the part when nupur throws water on his face. I could literally imagine arjun and rati doing a scene like this in my head thanks to your description😍 his revenge was so adorable😳 the last part when he bought all her things to her is the sweetest thing he could've possible done. Love the fact that hes doing so much to understand her. Nupur's bond with mayank's mother is really sweet as well😳 the ending was sad but beautifully written. the loss of parents is one that no one can ever forget😔 poor nupur. 😔
thanks for the pm🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful updt kinza
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Cinderella, i can't read anything. there are codes appearing and they are messing up the writing!😕, and i'm shocked because for no one else this happening only me! :((

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