FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55

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hello everyone... & this is my First Fan Fiction on AviTa...


What happens when...

Love at first sight turns into an obsession



Intro:- characters
ARPITA SHARMA- 20 yr old sweet but short-tempered girl. Very popular in college... Street-smart & full of attitude. Arpita belongs to an upper middle class family.

Aparna Sharma, Arpi's mom- ( bhouji)
Subodh Sharma, Arpi's Dad- (Panditji) total Joru ka Ghulam... šŸ˜†
Jagat Sharma, Arpi's brother-Elder to Arpita. he works in Avdhesh's office...

AVDHESH SINGH THAKUR- 26 yr old. Rich, spoilt brat of the family... Very Handsome..šŸ˜
Girls fall at his feet and are ready to do anything for him... He does not care about anyone's feelings... Again, Very Short-tempered...

Sunanda Singh Thakur, Avi's mom- ( arpi's mom)
Baldev Singh Thakur, Avi's Dad- ( Pankaj Dheer... acted in Rja ki aayegi baraat... Check in the celebrity index)
Chirag Singh Thakur, Avi's bro- Younger than Avi...

other characters will be introduced slowly as the story proceeds...

Index-
Chapt 1- pg 4
Chapt 2- pg 6
Chapt 3- pg 10
Chapt 4- pg12
Chapt 5- pg 15
Chapt 6- pg18
Chapt 7- pg 22
Chapt 8- pg 26
Chapt 9- pg 29
Chap 10- pg 30
Chap 11- pg 34
Chap 12- pg 36
Chap 13- pg 38
Chap 14- pg 40
Chap 15- pg 45
Chap 16- pg 51
Chap 17- pg 53
Chap 18- pg 55
Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hiee
Ramona
loved the intro!!!
plz do continue...it sounds very interesting!!!
i would love to read ur FF...
Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: prash_t

Hiee

Ramona
loved the intro!!!
plz do continue...it sounds very interesting!!!
i would love to read ur FF...

thanks a lot dear....
Suhana6 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hai ramona the intro is really good yaar...
do continue....
i am waiting 4 your ff....:)

awi as a spoiled brat...wow....new avtar of awi....;))
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Posted: 14 years ago
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arre wah for a moment i was confused

guess the real gkd is too much in my head

looks like interesting build up

do continue pls
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Ramona,
sounds very interesting!..will be looking forward to your FF when you post it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunaha6

Hai ramona the intro is really good yaar...
do continue....
i am waiting 4 your ff....:)

awi as a spoiled brat...wow....new avtar of awi....;))

oh yess yess.... even I want to see Avi like that..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chatterbox

arre wah for a moment i was confused

guess the real gkd is too much in my head

looks like interesting build up

do continue pls

Hi CB di.... surely will continue....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dreamygal301

Hi Ramona,

sounds very interesting!..will be looking forward to your FF when you post it.

hi Dreamy di.... will post ASAP 😊
Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ppl... pls suggest a title na.... I dont have any...
Chapter 1 will be up by tomorrow.... as Im very busy preparing for Christmas.... hardly any days left and so much work....
If you want me to PM you..... Addd me to ur Buddy list....
THATS ALL FOR TODAY.....

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