FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Nice FF Ramona...👏
Good that the characters and scenario are hatke from our GKD...

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese continue soon...with a loooooooong part...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Milii

Nice FF Ramona...👏
Good that the characters and scenario are hatke from our GKD... I wanted to try something different...

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese continue soon...with a loooooooong part...
Will surely try....

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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
hello everyone... this is the next chapter.... its a lil short... I was a little busy...
Chapter 2

It was a 20 minute drive from home. Jagat was all tensed as he was once again late because of Arpi. He kept staring at her angrily whilst driving. Arpita was least bothered about it as it was not an unusual thing, she was busy fidgeting with her cell phone. On reaching college, Arpi waved Goodbye to Jagat and made her way towards the main gate. Meanwhile, Jagat heaves a sigh of relief as he can reach office now…

As Arpi proceeded towards the main gate, she felt someone's warm hands covering her eyes. Blinded for a second, she calmly said – "Manjari..." and gently removes her hands from her face..

Manjari- Tum har bar hume kaise pechaan leti ho??

Arpi- Aisa karne ki himmat sirf do logon mein hai... ek tum aur…

Manjari- Aur woh…

she said lazily.Before she could complete, Arpita continued..

. . . . Ab tak so raha hai. Subah se 10 times use call kiya. No response.. He didn't even reply to my messages… Let him come. Aaj nahi bachega!!!

… she said angrily.

Manjari- Achha theek hai.. uske saath jo karna hai karo. But first lets go to class.. Hurry up!!! We're already late..

Both of them rushed to their classroom and took their seats. Arpita whispers " Now lets have a good nap!! "

Manjari giggles…… Oh come on Arpi… He isn't that bad. Besides he's also cute.

Arpi- Okay okay... fine.

During class, everyone was distracted by a group of boys who were yelling and singing on top of their voices… thus disturbing all the other classes along the corridor… Arpita and Manjari were also irritated.

Manjari- Yeh RanVijay bhi na… jab dekho tab sabko pareshaan karte rehta hai…

Arpi- Aur nahi toh kya.. He bunks the lectures all day and then keeps pestering me for the notes..

Manjari- It's all your fault.. Y do you always lend him your notes ??

Manjari- Woh… Woh… He's my Friend na.. Bas isliye..

She says lowering her eyes.

Manjari- ONLY Friend ??? ( she smirked)

Arpi- Oh !!! Enough Manjari… Pay attention to what Sir's teaching..

The group of boys were none other than RanVijay and his Gang.. A nuisance for everyone.. Always creating trouble for all.. He had a soft corner for Arpita, infact he liked her very much.. Arpita who was unaware of his feelings, only considered him as her friend..

likewa pls and also commentwa

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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Like it, was waiting for ur FF,
It realy different.


Good going dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Very interesting and lovely chapter!😃 Eagerly waiting for the upcoming part! Do update soon and plz.... a much longer one!😆 and by the way... mindblowing title dear! 😉.... keep it up!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shefads

Very interesting and lovely chapter!😃 thanks di... Eagerly waiting for the upcoming part! Do update soon and plz.... a much longer one!😆 yes yes... will surely try...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
it is quite different from real gkd story
thata why i love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Wow.... Its very different from the real story loved how u made Arpis mom sweet and caring and has her hubby under her shoes.....
unlike the serial where she is tortured by kanjoos😡
great going ramona......
update soon.......keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
hiyeeeeeeeeee ramona...............the ff is really creating intrest....dear i know the trouble in typing but plzzzzzzzzzzzzz make the updates a little bit lengthier..........
OMG whats cooking between RV and arpi.........Awi jaldi ajao yaar.........😎

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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
avi is spoilt breat here
it seems interesting 😆

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