Waiting for 'Mr. Wrong' (AR mini FF)(22/08/10)updt

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Hey friends,as i have quite lot of free time these days,the writting bug has surfaced in me:)so here i am with another new concept although i did not get as much response as i expected from my previous two ff's i.e "love is BLIND"(completed) and "obsessed about you"(open for all).so i will be continuing this if u guys want me to.

Index:
Part 1 page 2
part 2 page 2.
Part 3 page 3.
Part 4 page 4.
Part 5 page 5
Part 6 page 7.

Intro:

They are poles apart. She is a disillusioned spinster who hates men, and he a jilted man who hates women. What happens when they run into eachother?

So this was the intro,let me know if it interests u and if u want me continue it or just drop the idea.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey friends,where r u all?should i continue?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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& yaa dear,
plzzz continue soon with obbsed about u
plzz yaar


love
Riddss
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Originally posted by: Riddss

& yaa dear,
plzzz continue soon with obbsed about u
plzz yaar


love
Riddss



Thanks for liking this one dear.obsessed about you is open for all but to my disappointment nobody seems interested in voluteering:(i just had the concept in mind,not the complete picture,but dont worry i will try to update that one too,hopefully soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear...!!!!
the plots seems very interesting do continue soon...
n ya please add me to ur Pm list.. :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome intro continue soon!!
and pls add me to your Pm list

-Amna

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey
nice concept
continue soon do pm me
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hey friends,

Heres the first part, u may not find it interesting enough as it consists of riddhima's thoughts to give a glimpse of her personality,but it will get funny as it progress.

PART 1

There is no more spare item than the sister of a bride during her younger sister's wedding. Especially if is she is her 26-year old spinster sister. She is going to be the target of all the guests who ask in softly modulated voices well pitched to reach her ears.

" Oh so that is the elder sister? And unmarried? What is wrong with her? "

The implication being that there must have been something worng with me that i did not accept all those idiotic specimens brough up for review on the matrimonial field who were so obedient to their family's dictates that they were willing to be sold for a price called dowry.

How would i be able to respect a man who did not have the self-respect to say i take this woman as she is without the trappings of gold?

To begin a new life with her without resorting to the hard earned money her poor father had to shell out to get rid of her. All because society demands it !

Something wrong with me !
Or was there something wrong with me because i did not have the sheer gumption to find an eligible boy like rahul for myself, as muskaan had done? But to find your fairy tale prince charming, you had to kiss a lot of frogs first, and i was not willing to do that.

Of course i knew that absurd cliche about the girls who keep on waiting for "Mr. Right" to come along get left behind. And if you want a "bungla" and "gaadi" along with "balma anaadi", you have to shift yourself.

But at what cost? Get a name as a flirt, like muskaan had or of a desperate or frustrated female? No, thank you.

Atleast i had my self respect and i was happy that i held onto my principles. So here was i, dressed up in a baby pink anarkali long silk suit, trying my best to put on a modest demeanour, because i did not want the cats to say.

" look at her! Behaving so immodestly because her younger sister is getting married and she is not ! I can not beleieve that she is not jealous. If she had a bit of sense, she would have trapped an eligible boy herself."
What was i supposed to be - a mousetrap to trap rats??

And that meant smiling at nothing at all and talking in a soft voice and making no eye contact with any one of the masculine gender. Not that i wanted to do it. The family members of the boy's team consisted of some desperate flirts who wrongly imagined that a marriage was the best place to gain more addressess of pretty girls. Intentions strictly dishonourable, of course.

But i wonder if there exists a guy i can look upto? Will I ever be able to find my "Mr. Right" or should i say "Mr. Wrong" as am said that something is wrong with me?

* * *
So this was the first part,do let me know if u like it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome Part ...
Continue soon
thx for the PM


-Amna
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome part
loved it
con soon
plz add me to ur pm list

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