Waiting for 'Mr. Wrong' (AR mini FF)(22/08/10)updt - Page 5

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani

wow bbz as usual mindblowing update.

loved the little convo between AR but bohot chota tha. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write a bit more bigger update. btw whats ur name? i am saniya.

love

sani

Hi sani dear, am nirali:)thanks for have been praising my ff.i have mentioned the reason for shot parts already,so hope u understand and bear with me.

Keep reading and commenting.

Part 6 (END)

I looked up,startled. If this was some sort of flirting he is trying on me,he is going to have another pastry slapped on his face.

"i beg ur pardon?" i asked coldly.

"i dislike playing games,so dont try to get flirty with me, understand?"

"i am not playing any games,riddhima. For once in my life, i am serious. Thi is because our future life and happiness depends upon it. "

I blinked and blushed.

He continued,

"all my life, i was under the impression that people wanted me only for my money and the people i was acquainted with never gave me reason to change my opinion."

"u must have been moving in the wrong circles" i smiled.

"of course ! Till one day a firebrand walks into my life, and brought me to realise that the goodness has not vanished yet completely and that there still exists love,true love, stealing my heart away in the process. That was the lady for me. Dear, dont u dare go away till u hear everything i have to confess. That is ur punishment for the free pastry decoration."

Of course i had no intention of moving. But if he wanted an excuse to hold my hand again,well...as men go,he was not that bad...

"Who r u trying to fool riddhima",i thought,"he is as perfect as one can be"...but modesty demands u hear him out.

"so i am giving u an ultimatum,girl. U had better marry me and put me out of my misery and make me a human being who loves and trusts his wife forever, or i shall yell and tell everybody, how i have been mistreated by the sister of the bride. Why do u think i did not wipe off the pastry?" he opened his mouth when he found i had no intention of saying anything.

There was only one way to stop him, with a kiss. When a girl knows that she is well loved and respected, she gains the courage to take the initiative.

Who cares about a little bit of pastry,here or there,infact it made the kiss more exciting.i was lost in him now as his arms folded me to his loyal,loving and caring heart...and i knew i was there to stay !

End.

lovely end to an lovely ff

very gud ..interestingg....luved it....u write so welll👏

do write more in future....

heyyy dear,
awsome part
do write more FF
thanks for PM.


love
Riddss

OMG!!!!!
What a mini FF!
Where were u hiding Nirali???
Awesome!
Esp. the bit when Armaan threatens Riddhima to marry him 😆
Loved every bit
Thanks for the PM
Take care
Love,
Ashu

thank u friends for appreciating my ffs:)
Ur encouraging words motivate a lot:)am sorry that i cant reply to each comment individually but i do read them all and each comment mean a lot to me:)

Love,
Nirali.

NiRaLi!!!!!
Kahan chup ke baithi thi abhi tak!!!
Wow kya ending ha jaan!
I loved when Armaan threathned Riddzy to marry him!
That was fantastic!!
But y u end???
Sad!
But it is okay u have obbession going on!!
N i loved it when Ridzy kissed him!
It was sweet!!
Love u Nirz!!

Jinszy!!

lovely ending

eeekkkksss nirali. i loved this ff. can't believe it finished. i'll miss it. plz write more. love ur writing style and ur way of putting sense of humour. loved it.