Waiting for 'Mr. Wrong' (AR mini FF)(22/08/10)updt - Page 2

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Hi friends,

Thanks to all of those who r liking my ffs,but i have realised that i still need to work a lot on my writing skills before i think of writing this ff stuff,as my ff's have failed to grab the attention i thought they would:)so i think for the timebeing,am better off writing and be a good silent reader:)nobody showed any interest in volunteering in my ff,"obsessed about you".:(

Anyways,here goes the 2nd of this ff.pls comment if u like it.


Part 2.

"oh,so there u r!"

It was smriti maasi, who should have been drowned at birth, like all useless cats were done in the west. Eyes gleaming in anticipation,which she knew would only make me lose my temper for her entertainment,she started.

"what happened to that boy who had come to see u last week,riddhima,my darling?"

some more smriti like cats,scenting blood moved closer so that they could see me wriggle like an insect pinched with a pin.

I counted upto 20,my smile stiff upon my face. Then i said politely,

"if u call a 40 yr old widower with 3 kids,a boy, who still considers himself a young swinging bachelor boy,smriti maasi,no thanks. I can do without him."

" but at ur age riddhima, it is necessary to compromise. And by the way, he was extremely rich and well settled."

" and that is y he was asking 20 lakh to bestow his hand, heart and offspring upon me?" !

" but every girl has need of husband !"

She said and i found an excuse that my mother was calling me and escaped.

I am a doctor, a cardiologist,earning good money. But still i would not be complete without a husband and children to call my own!

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So this was part 2.

short part

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wow dear ur writing skills are awesome and great sense of humour. toatally loved it. but bbz why so short. plz try writing longer parts. i didn't wanted it to finish😆

Thanks friend,plz accept my thanks note as it refers to all those who commented:)i cant thank all of u individually,so pls forgive me for this:)plz keep checking my ffs as i cant pm u all.ur wait ends here as u were waiting for armaan's entry and here he comes:)

Part 3

I escaped to the balcony to take some deep breaths.

Some voices made me hide behind the potted plants for fear of detection.

" no, no, no ! I know it is ur wedding rahul but if if u think u can drag me there among the bevy of beauties, who have no other intention than to ensnare me for my bank balance, u r mistaken ! "

" but armaan. only in social get togethers like these can u find girl of ur dreams, IF she exists."

" i know that the girls of today do not know the meaning of sincerity, faithfulness,loyalty and love and the first priority is to snare a rich man who can keep them in the way they r quite unaccustomed to ! And they will try all sorts of stunts like flashing their eyes or dressing to kill to capture us," said the second voice.

"mr. Oh so proud" need to be taken down a peg or two. What did he think we women were? In a few words, he had called us mercenary and cold blooded. What were men but chauvnistic and arrogant beasts?

Forget about the wedding. It is going to be the confrontation time.

But i had to wait till there was no one around. Rahul handed his relative a drink, told him that he would tell a waiter to keep him well supplied with food, tried to persuade him once more to join the party and left when the grouchy man said,

"just fade away, will u, rahul?"

Oh so this "baarati" needed food, but did not have the common courtesy to join the common herd, did he?

He was going to be served by the bride's sister herself. I collected some squishy pastries and arranged them in a plate. Imagine how colorful they would look against his face,i thought to myself and grinned but let that dream fade away, reluctantly.

The man was sitting sipping his drink,watching the stars and thinking,i was sure, deep,dire degraded thoughts about the females in general.

"here" i cooed softly through gritted teeth.

"i hope this will sweeten ur dispostion a little, after ur diet of drinks"

And he looked straight at me. It did not help matters that he was one of the tall,well built and very handsome group, the sort that i distrust on sight.

" i knew it ! I was wondering what excuse a girl would take to make contact with me ! U girls never give up, do u?" he said nastily.

I looked at him. And then i raised the plate...sometimes u must follow ur dreams.


And that was the moment when aunty smriti,hungry for some more blood, came upto the balcony just to see his handsome face moisturised with 5 luscious pastries.

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