My FF~~'Only Hope'~~Updated Part 11 (Page 17) - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
Congrats on your new FF👏, I'm loving it. It's very fresh and interesting. So cute how Bharti and Armaan have had these meetings in their childhood and it's sweet that Bharti and Payal are twins. Can't wait for Armaan's entry! Continue soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Sun is rising with a beautiful color of bright orange… Birds are singing and enjoying the beautiful breeze….Everyone are waking up and getting ready to do their routine…!!!!!

Everybody's morning will be with pleasant music….but one person is getting curses form all apartment members for disturbing them…..




Part - 3



By keeping loud music early in the morning with max Volume… Volume is MAX.. it can even break down the whole apartment….

Neighbor: OH GOD….!!!! Never seen a Guy like him….disturbing everyone at morning 6 Am… I need to complaint to the secretary….

His Wife : NO use dear…!!!! He is soo rude…and many complaints have said against him….

Neighbor : Oh man….!!!!! [Shouts] BHASKAR….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Yes…!!!!!! Bhaskar THE MAN…!!!!!!!"

Bhaskars room : Untidy and everything is thrown away….
Bhaskar is getting up and dancing for the music….He goes near the fridge and gets something to eat for bearkfast…. He sits and start to eat his breakfast singing with the song…..

Suddenly his mobile rings… it was his friends

Bhaskar : yo…whats up dude?????.....

Friend : Hey man… coming for practice today???????

Bhaskar : Hmmm yeah….!!!! I will be there at sharp 8…

Friend: ok then… see ya….

He cuts the phone, finishes his breakfast and goes to take bath….
After he gets ready… he locks his apartment and gets on his car…
He starts the car and drives away….

Then he suddenly stops his car near a house and he gets off the car……
He goes inside… and rings the bell…
One person… old lady opens the door….

Bhaskar : Hi… Where is he???

Old lady: Is getting ready to go to office….!!!!!

Bhaskar: Oh ok…tell him that I will wait for him near the car….

Old lady: Okay…!!!!

Form bathroom…a guy comes out with a towel wrapped around his waist
Tall, Handsome, Cute, HOT,…..!!!!!
He takes a shirt and coat for rack …. Red shirt and black coat…gets ready and comes out of his room..
Then that old lady comes near him….

Old lady : Beta…bhaskar is waiting for you….

Guy : Ok ma….Bye

Old lady: Have your breakfast dear….

Guy: Hmmmm…. Ok give me soon.. it is already late..

Old lady: I told you not to work late at night….

Guy: Ma… you know about my Office right.. I need to work… it is very important for me…

Old lady : Ok Beta…. Here eat..

He eats his breakfast very fast and takes his bag and leaves the house…

He goes outside and stands near the car of bhaskar…..
Bhaskar stares at him and gives a wide smile…. He also gives him a cute charming smile…


To be conti.... 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Nice part...
Continue soon...
Bhaska will always remain Bhaskar...
The naughty bad MAN

Take Care
Zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
Hasini... super duper INTRO....of U KNOW WHO...i cant wait for ur 4th part..coz i know..that handsome..cute hot HUNK...can only be my jaan..Armaan....yahooo!!!!
& well the Bhaskar in ur FF...reminded me of Saif from Salam Namastee...a DUDE...but a RUDE one...😉 but i know..he is gonna b driving Girls crazy..with his "I M the MAN"
btw....luvd the relation between Payal & Bharti... especially the way Bharti scares Payal...so like Bharti...
Great job girl...pls. write the next one soon...cant wait for my Janu to make his grand Entry..❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
Hasini dear you got me smiling like a cuckoo reading that introduction of THAT GUY ..! I'm so sure it's Armaan!! So excited!! Pls continue soon..! Love the entry of Bhaskar as well!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
wow well i can guse that the guy in towel is armaan.....what an entrey must say
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: bubblygal1711

Introduction



It is a crowded city. People are busy going to their works and important places. All the cars and vehicles are moving very fast to reach their destination. Then there is a beautiful house. In that house,comes a playful shouting of two kids. They are playing with ball inside. Then suddenly one of the girl throws the ball outside, over the Huge wall of the house.

Another girl shouts at her and goes outside the house to get the ball. When she goes out she suddenly sees a boy holding that ball. She goes and ask him to give back the ball and the boy hands over the ball to her. She says "thanks" and he gives a cute charming smile and says "your welcome" .

Both of them leave form that place the girl looks back to see the boy and at the same time the boy also looks back. Both of them share their looks and both of them smile at each other. Exactly when they turn back to see each other there comes a song in the background.

"Aajeeb ithefaq hai
Kya mulaqat hai
Mil gaye aaj phir
Koi toh baat hai
Takaluf chodiye
Aji tarruf kijiye
Ummm
Takaluf chodiye
Aji tarruf kijiye
Aaye aur chal diye

Dont say alvida
Dont say alvida
Dont say alvida
Na kaho Alida
Dont say alvida
Dont say alvida
Dont say alvida
Na kaho Alida"

Then the music ends..!!!!!!!!!!!


To Be Continued

HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA! GO GIRL👏TUJHE bhi meri aadat lag gayiii.. hyaaa pritam ki tarah chori ki ROFL😆😆😆 BAGGROUND MUSIC KI😛😛😉 My creature😆😆 dont worry baby.. GO AHEAD and use😳 my sweetheart its lovelyu👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

He goes outside and stands near the car of bhaskar…..

Bhaskar stares at him and gives a wide smile…. He also gives him a cute charming smile…


Part 4


Bhaskar : Hey ARMAAN…Lets go…

Armaan: Ok.. !!

On the Way,

Bhaskar : Hey dude… why don't to come over to see the game….

Armaan : No Bhaskar…I have important meeting today…have to complete all the work and submit…

Bhaskar : Oh Armaan…..Always work work…..dont you feel bored..???...

Armaan: Hmmmm…..No…I always love my Work..you know me….

Bhaskar : Yeah sure…no one can change you…..

Armaan: hmmmmm……Correct…!!!!

Bhaskar : Hey forgot to tell you…. Rita called me today…she called both of us out for dinner…

Armaan: Dinner???... Me???.. Joke ah…she is your GF and why is she asking both of us out??

Bhaskar: Armaan…. Some function it seems….do come na…you're my only Best friend..

Armaan : Hmmmm…. Ok sure… I will come…

Bhaskar: Ok Dude… thanks….

Armaan gives a charming smile…!!!!!

Bhaskar: And can i ask you something????????

Armaan: What????..

Bhaskar: Why don't you have any girl friends??????...

Armaan: [Sighs] Bhaskar… I don't want any girl friends…I don't need.. I want a girl.. who is most beautiful and charming in this world… I still remember one incident in my childhood that am not able to forget…..

Bhaskar: Oh… do tell me…what is it dude???

Armaan: Once when I was walking down the street… I saw a ball… then girl came out of that house and asked for the ball… Second time I helped that girl when she was wounded….i don't know who she is….but not able to forget that girl….

Bhaskar: [Burst into Laughter] Oh man…what a wonderful story… you don't know who she is and that to in childhood…met her for two times… and you cannot forget that girl… very funny dude… Oscar wining story ah…

Armaan: You will never understand what is this feeling. You can only understand when you find the right girl… not this rita and all…

Bhaskar: chill man… said just for fun and true love…it is bullshit in this world….

Armaan : you will never change…

Bhaskar:[smiles] I know that…

He drops Armaan in his office….and he leaves…

Armaan Office :

Armaan : Good Morning Sir..!!!!!

Boss: Good Morning…!!!!!

Armaan: Sir.., Here are the New Photographs for this week issue…!!!!!!!

Boss: Hmmmm…..[Neglecting] I will see to that…you shall leave now..

Armaan's Face is down.. he moves out of the Boss cabin….

Armaan Saying to himself…

Armaan : Oh man…I am getting bored of this company…We shall never get any recognition…Oh god….please get me some relief…!!!!

Armaan Goes back to work….!!!!!!

At the play ground….

Friend: Hey Man… Bhaskar…you really looking great…

Bhaskar:[with a smile] oh yeah…am always great dude….

Friend : Hmmmm….ok lets start the play…!!!!!

Bhaskar : Sure…!!!!!!

They all started to play….

Bhaskar finishes his game…

Bhaskar : hey guys need to go… have work…

Friends: Okay Bhaskar….bye dude..

Bhaskar : Bye…

He gets in his car… and he calls to Armaan…

Armaan: Hello Bhaskar…Whats the matter??

Bhaskar: Hey I forgot to tell you man… I need to go to meet an important friend…I cannot meet you today…

Armaan: Hey it is okay… by the way whos that friend???

Bhaskar: He was in our college… you don't know him…he met with an accident…have to go and see him…

Armaan : Oh god… which hospital??.. I will also come…

Bhaskar : It is…..Lif……

While driving…he didn't notice he dashed with another car….

Armaan : Bhaskar…Bhaskar…

Bhaskar stopped talking over phone and he started to shout…

Bhaskar : Dam it….who is that??.. cant you see while your driving….

A girl was coming out of the car….bhaskar started to stare at her….

He was keeping on looking at that girl… she was cute beautiful…

Bhaskar cut the phone… and he was speechless… he was keep on looking at that girl…he was totally lost…

She came near him….



To Be conti.....😃😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
WOW please continue PLEEEEEEEEEEEEESE ........ Gr8 part loved it
WOW ARMAAN...........................😍

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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Hey Hasini!
Reading your story reminds me of "Ranbir Rano" that show, if you ever watched it..😆
You know like they met when they were young..but after that nvr met again but both of them are actually thinking abt each other..
It's good man!! I love it!! Love the character Bhaskar..funky,cool dude.. And Hmm he sees a girl..I'm thinking it's gorgeous PAYAL....😳...
Pls continue soon!!
It's always leave me excited the way you end your FF!!!! 😊and got to say i still love the big fonts!😃
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago

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