My FF~~'Only Hope'~~Updated Part 11 (Page 17)

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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

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+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

Hey guys by seeing so many writing FF's. I got interested to write a FF on my own...I read some of the FF's... i hope the story is not same with anyother...if so please tell me.... it is my Attempt in writing FF..
Hope you all like it....!!!!!!!!

ONLY HOPE

CHARACTERS:

Bharti : A Beautiful and talented girl. She is talks so much and teases all. But by heart she is so sensitive. She is a chief editor in MU

Payal : A cute bubbly girl. She is the Twin sister of Bharti. She works as a RJ.

Bhaskar : A handsome play boy. Never is serious about his future. His passion is playing football. He is the champion in that.

Armaan : A Cute Lovely Handsome Guy . He is always thinks about his future. Talented person with a very Kind heart.

"Bhaskar and Armaan are the best friends , as their way of thinking and behavior is totally opposite"

Amarjeet : He is the Boss of the MU magazine. He is so serious in his work and always shouts at everyone without any reason

Gyan : A funny person who always helps bharti in everything. He is the best friend of Bharti . He is the chief associate editor

Vineetha : She always thinks that she is beautiful and she is big rival for bharti.
She has a little interest in Gyan

Edited by bubblygal1711 - 15 years ago

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Awesome character sketch...
Cant wait to read more....
Continue soon..

Take Care
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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

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Posted: 15 years ago

Introduction

It is a crowded city. People are busy going to their works and important places. All the cars and vehicles are moving very fast to reach their destination. Then there is a beautiful house. In that house,comes a playful shouting of two kids. They are playing with ball inside. Then suddenly one of the girl throws the ball outside, over the Huge wall of the house.

Another girl shouts at her and goes outside the house to get the ball. When she goes out she suddenly sees a boy holding that ball. She goes and ask him to give back the ball and the boy hands over the ball to her. She says "thanks" and he gives a cute charming smile and says "your welcome" .

Both of them leave form that place the girl looks back to see the boy and at the same time the boy also looks back. Both of them share their looks and both of them smile at each other. Exactly when they turn back to see each other there comes a song in the background.

"Aajeeb ithefaq hai
Kya mulaqat hai
Mil gaye aaj phir
Koi toh baat hai
Takaluf chodiye
Aji tarruf kijiye
Ummm
Takaluf chodiye
Aji tarruf kijiye
Aaye aur chal diye

Dont say alvida
Dont say alvida
Dont say alvida
Na kaho Alida
Dont say alvida
Dont say alvida
Dont say alvida
Na kaho Alida"

Then the music ends..!!!!!!!!!!!

To Be Continued

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ghazal naz

@ghazal_naz

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

ah it really sounds great

bharti and payal twisce sis👏

bhaskar and arman friends😛

gyan help bharti🤣

do contui

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surveen

@surveen_kapoor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

awsome swettyyy :) i hope i can read this one LOL

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

Nice intro buddy ...👏👏
but would u plzz use a different font ...can't read it properly ..!!

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deepu_mech2

@deepu_mech2

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

😛 vaery nice plot 😛 really interesting

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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

Part 1

Ten years later…!!!!!!!!!

Everyone busy working in MU..
Amarjeet enters…!!!!!!!!! (with james bond music on the background)
He goes to the receptionist..

AJ : Any important calls for me till now??????...

[with frightened voice]
Jene: No sir..!!!!

AJ : Is bharti in office????

Jene: No sir..!!!!!

AJ: Did she inform you anything?????

Jene: No sir..!!!!!

AJ:[Shouts] Do you have brains??????

Jene: No Sir…!!!! OHhh.. Am sorry Sir..!!!!!!!!

AJ: For every question 'NO SIR NO SIR'… Do you 'NO' anything??..

Jene:[frightened] Sorry Sir…!!!!!

AJ : Hmmm….okay… When bharti comes ask her to come and meet me….!!!!!!

Jene: Ok Sir…!!!!

AJ leaves and Jene gives a sigh of relief …

Jene : Phew…!!!!! His correct name is MR.HELL…ohhhhhh…. He is torturing like hell… it is a worst fate for me to work in this office….. if i would have studied a good degree..i wont be working under him I would throw this job away….!!!!!!!

Just she finished her sentence. AJ comes back again…!!!!!!

AJ : OH….MR.HELL ah…

Jene: [Shocked] OMG…sorry sir …!!!!

He gives her a funny angry look…

AJ : Always before commenting about anyone….just look thrice behind you…

Jene: Sorry sir…!!!!!

AJ : I think you know only three words when I am before you … NO SIR.. SORRY SIR..OK SIR..!! Hmmm….come on do your work properly…!!!!!!!

Jene : OK Sir…!!!!!

AJ leave that place and jene checks weather he is gone completely….!!!!!!

At Bharti's Home :

Payal is getting ready to go to the radio station. She is getting ready with the breakfast.

Payal : Bharti …!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

No response…

Again she shouts… But no response…!!!!!!!

She goes to check bharti's room….she see bharti is still sleeping…
She goes near her and shouts at her ears..

Payal : WAKE UP..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bharti wakes with sudden shock…

Payal : Whats up sis?? Still sleeping…..not in mood to go to office ah???????

Bharti is still in shock of payal's shout….!!!!!!!!!

Payal: OH SIS…!!!!! [Waves her had before her eyes]

Bharti comes out of that shock…

Payal : What happen??? In dreams ah??? … or still thinking about that boy???

Bharti: What boy?? Whom are you telling???

Payal: That boy whom you saw for just one moment…who gave you the ball ten years back…you always think about him that "Who is he??" …!!!!!! Your DREAM BOY…!!!!

Bharti : Just shut up Payal…!!!!! He is not a dream boy…!!!!!!

Payal : Oh…then for past ten years your thinking about him ah…but he is not a dream boy….then who is he??.. your lover?? Ah tell me…!!!!!

Bharti: What are talking about??...when did i say about that boy to you???....

Payal : You didn't say anything….just read your diary yesterday and came to know that….

Bharti: [In anger] Oh you idiot…!!!!!!! You read my diary…you don't know that you should not read other's dairy….!!!!!

Payal: Just saw it….found interesting….!!

Bharti : YOU…!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comes near Payal to hold her neck… Payal gets a step a back…with smile in her face…

Payal: Ohhh…..ok ok..sorry for reading…as am your sis na….why you hide this from me….!!!!!!!

Bharti : I don't know yaar….i am not able to forget…and if i say this to you….you will laugh at me….!!!!! That's why…!!!!![keeps a sad face]

Payal : Oh my poor Bharti….!!!!!!!![comes near her and keeps her hand on shoulders of bharti] Don't worry we will find a detective to find that boy..!!!!!!!! HA HA HA…!!!!!

Bharti : You idiot…!!!!!!!!!!
Payal Runs form there and Bharti chases her…They will be running all over the house….
Enjoying themselves…!!!!!!

Then bharti gets ready and comes to the dining table to eat breakfast….Payal serves all…

Then after serving…

Payal: OK Bharti am going now….see ya in eve…

Bharti: [With food in her mouth] Ok bye…!!!!!

Bharti locks her house and leaves….
She gets inside her car and starts it ….
While driving she again thinks about that moment….when she meet the boy for the first time….Fate is that..she saw that boy again…!!!!!!!

to be conti... 😃 😃

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

WoW Hasini Congrats on starting your very own FF!!👏

Well the character sketch itself seems very interesting but Payal and Bharti twin sisters?? Hmm this one is really exciting! Love the starting part esp the beautiful sg!

Oohh love the first part! AJ 😆 😆 AND FATE HUH..

Hmm i'm thinking it's ARMAAN!!😳

Waiting for the next part!!😊

PS: Just wanna say that i love the BIG fonts!! 😆 It's clearer to read!!

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 15 years ago

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Dear Hasini....kudos on starting ur FF...👏 am sure u gonna rock just as ur rock with the awesome VMs u make...!!

Btw read the character sketch..n luvd it... like the fact that Bhaskar n Armu r shown as buddies.. & Payal - Bharti as sisters.... thats new n interesting..!! 👍🏼

Well luvd the Introduction epi...esp. that 'ajeeb itefaq' part n wow...Bharti has already started dreaming of THAT boy... wowwwwiee.. cant wait for ArBi to come face to face after 10 years.... Awesome..❤️

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