My FF~~'Only Hope'~~Updated Part 11 (Page 17) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Sorry for the late reply😳
just finished reading ur ff.....omg hasini it's fabulous👏
i really like the way you started it😃
childhood crush, suspense......u rock girl👍🏼
interesting story so far! good stuff!
eager to know what happens next😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
O man bhaskar is crazy 😆 love the part please continue soooon waiting for the next part 🤗
take care
naley

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

He stares at bharti and give a smile…….

AJ: We can?????????????


PART 6


Gyan: Sir…..Like Administrative Manager????...

Raichura gives a shocking look……

AJ: Oye Gyan……it is perfect…..As we are suffering from many problems…Mr.Raichura….This is the job for you….

Bharti: [Smiling] Sir….very good idea hai sir…. Gyan superb idea…

Raichura:[Still in shock].. But sir… What???...

AJ: you have to clean toilet, Bathroom, and look after the neatness and whenever there is problem in electric appliances you have to come and look… NO QUESTIONS…if you don't want… you can leave mens Universe….you can go now…

Raichura leaves with a sad and shocking face…..Crying literally..

AJ: You both can also leave…..

Gyan and Bharti : OKAY SIR…[Laughing]

Then AJ suddenly stopped…..

AJ: Hey Bhati… give add in news for Photographer… and the interview is in 2 days….

Bharti: Sure sir…..[smiles]

Bharti calls all newspapers and ask them to give add based on the interview of new photographer…..

At the Bhaskars Home…

Bhaskar is still dreaming about the Dream Girl whom he saw…..And Armaan is in the kitchen..Making Coffee….!!!!!!

Armaan: So Bhaskar tell me are you really serious about this girl…

Bhaskar: Ya man… I don't know…but I love her… it is like SAATH JANAM KA BHANDHAN…!!!!!!

Armaan: OMG…Bhaskar is talking like this….never heard you talk like this……this love will change anyone…

Bhaskar: Ya…. I don't know how to find her….

Armaan: I Will try…As it is my best friends Love I will try to help you….[give back him a beautiful smile]

Bhaskar: thank you thank you soooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhh Armaan…….!!!!!

Bhaskar is soooo happy on this… he jumps and runs happily….. Armaan is soo happy to see his best friend happy… he smiles seeing bhaskar…

Meanwhile at Bharti's home..:

Bharti reaches her home and opens the door…. She sees payal scolding someone in kitchen….Bharti goes inside the kitchen…

Bharti: Yo Madam… kya hua??.. whom are you scolding dear…?????..

Payal: Some stupid dashed my car today… it is totally damaged….

Bharti: Did you ask him the damage??.. that Kuthe…how dare he do like this to my sweet sis….

Payal:[still in anger] I was about to ask him but he was staring at me….and was blabbering… I was scared… so I escaped from there….

Bharti: Blabbering ah what he was??????.....

Payal: Something nonsense… chodo bharti…lets have our dinner…

Bharti: Okay… lets try to find who that Mr. Crack up is …..

Both Payal and Bharti have dinner together…

Next day morning…..

Payal and Bharti were getting ready for work….

Bharti: Hey payal I am going to office… important work is their today I will be late….

Payal: Ok SweetHeart… see ya…

Bharti: Ya dear…and I will find out who that idiot is… you gave me his car number na I will find out…

Payal: OKies….!!!!!!

Bharti gets inside the office and goes to Gyan's cabin…

Gyan: Hello Miss. Bharti… whats up??????...

Bharti: Need your help gyan….

Gyan: Whats the matter Bharti???...

Bharti: Some stupid yesterday dashed Payal's car and it is damaged now… I got his car number…can you please find out the Address and tell me….

Gyan: Oh god…is Payal Okay??... yeah sure give it to me….

Bharti: Yeah she is fine… here it is….

Gyan: Ok I will tell you in few hours…

Bharti leaves his cabin and Gyan calls someone and ask them to find out the Address and tell immediately….

Bhaskar's Home…

Everyone are shocked to not to here any music form bhaskar's Apartment…..

All of them thinks that something has happen to him… so everyone decides to go to his apartment…

Neighbor : [knocks the door] Hello…!!!!!!!

But no reply….Everyone are shocked…… Tries many times but no response…

All of them are really scared now……

Then all decided to broke the door and get inside….

All tried and finally succeeded in breaking the door….

All of them get inside like getting inside a BHOOT BANGLA….Finally they spotted someone… they get closer …

EVERYONE ARE SHOCKED…..!!!!!!!!!!


To Be Conti....😃😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Nice part dear...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
Hope Bharti does not scolds Armaan for Bhaskar's fault...
Continue soon...

Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Oh gosh... no sound frm Bhaskars appt... i m scared too..dun tell me Bhaskar has become DEVDAS in Payals yaad...😲
n wow...so i think its gonna b Bharti firing Armu for Bhaskars fault..n thats gonna b so cute...their first fight.. waiting for it..😊
Luvly epi... i m really luvng our New n Improved n Madly in luv Bhaskar..❤️
Luvly epi..write soon..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Gr8 part as usual Hasini ..!!👏👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great part Hasini!:)
Hahah i just realisd that Armaan always makes coffee!!😆 But yes his coffee is great.. Bhaskar totally struck by love at first sight..! Loving this new transform Bhaskar!!
Gyaan and Bharti good collegues..! Hmm i like that!
Raichura!!!😆 😆 😆 Poor him!! Downgraded to a bad postition..! 😆
Hmm photographer advert.. Yay!! Pls bring Armaan there pls..! pls..!! Want him to meet and work with Gorgeous Bharti!!!😳............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great part dear ...waiting to know bharti's reactions ... i simply love this bhaskar ... he is really sweet...😛

please continue soon ... would love to read more ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Hasini,
I am back after attending my friend's wedding. will read your updates and them I will comment.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Hasini,
Totally loving your FF👏
loved the character sketch. I loved the way you described Armaan cute and hot, rare combination😆
loved the Bhaskar-Payal car scene.
So Raichura is the poor photographer😆
I hope Armaan and Bharti will get their dream lover soon😳
Waiting to see Armaan in MU.😍

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