My FF~~'Only Hope'~~Updated Part 11 (Page 17)

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ghazal naz

@ghazal_naz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

oh now that is something diffrent. love of bharti's childhood........love this part......payal and bharti is so cute.....and AJ was feb too

very good job

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Zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Nice part...
Loved it...
Cant wait to read the entry of our DREAM BOY!!!
Continue soon

Take Care
Zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

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Jaslin

@jassie_17

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Ok..What a coincidence that I was listening to Don't Say Alvida a few minutes ago.....

Apart from that awesome character sketch and intro Hasini...Simply lurved the first part too...

The dream boy has got to be Armaan na???

Awwww....Bharti-Payal chemistry seems really interesting!!!!

Please continue soon dearie!!!!

Cheers,

Jassie

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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

While driving she again thinks about that moment….when she meet the boy for the first time….Fate is that..she saw that boy again…!!!!!!!

Part - 2

Once when she was going to school…She fell down … she started to bleed on the hand…
She saw some boy coming…. It was that same boy whom gave the ball to her…he had a kerchief and tied around the wound and rubbed the tears on her chicks….
After that he dropped her in the house and said "Bye" she also waved her hands….

She removed that kerchief…and washed it….she saw that some name was stitched on that….Name was "Armaan" ..
Next day she wanted to give back the kerchief…but she didn't see him….

Bharti thinks all this by driving her car….
Bharti says in her mind

"Who is this boy??.. why am not able to forget him????"

The car stops near her office… she gets down out of the car…
And enter the office…

Jene : Mam… Sir said he wants to meet you in his cabin…

Bharti: Ok thanks Jene…!!!!!!!!

Bharti goes inside the office…and goes to AJ cabin…

Bharti : Good morning Sir…!!!!!

AJ: Good Morning…Why late today???

Bharti: Oh Sir…I was not feeling well…. That's why…

AJ: Hmmm…Never be late to office again like this….

Bharti: Okay sir…!!!!!!!

AJ: Ready with this month Issue…???

Bharti: Oh…sir all articles are ready…only thing is…Photos are delayed sir….

AJ: Oh Man…Where is that Photographer?????????? Why he is always late in doing his job…

Bharti: Sir…!!!!! I think we should change and get a New Photographer sir….This guy is sooo lazy and not at all dedicated to his work…. He is also creating problems….

Just then Gyan Enters….!!!!!!!!

Gyan : Good Morning Sir…!!!!!

AJ : Good Morning Mr.Gyan….!!!!!

Gyan gives a wide smile to Bharti and She also returns with a lovely smile……

Gyan: Sir… There is two days only left to give for printing…!!!!! But that Photographer is not concentrating in his work sir…..!!!!!

AJ : [Anger]Everyone is complaining on that Photographer….i must take some action against him….

Bharti : Ok sir…!!

AJ : You Both can leave Now….

Gyan and Bharti leaves AJ cabin….
Bharti goes inside her cabin and gyan follows her….

Gyan : Hello Miss .Bharti Madam… Today you came to office very late it seems….Why??..What Happen????????

Bharti :[sitting in her chair] No yaar…slept off…was tired yesterday…with loads of work….

Gyan : Hmmmm…..so what plans for weekend ???

Bharti : don't know….Me and Payal are planning to go to a movie….not sure…Why??

Gyan : No..just asked…!!!!! Thought of going for dinner….whats say???

Bharti : No sure…I will tell you…!!!!!!

Gyan : What do you think of that photographer??? … Why is he like this????

Bharti : Think is a lazy geek….!!!!!!! He always creates problems….!!! Not finishes his work in time…hope so AJ sir will terminate him….

Gyan : Hmmmm….Lets see….!!!!! Ok Bharti I will get back to work…. See ya

Bharti : Bye Gyan….!!!!!!

Bharti's Home : Evening….

Bharti : [Opens the door….and screems] Payal….!!!!!!!!!!

Payal : What??...What happened????...

Bharti : Nothing…..!!!!!!

Payal : What do you mean by nothing?...i was afraid of hearing your screem…..[she breaks to tears]…pls don't do that again bharti…

Bharti: [Holds payal] Hey it is okay…..it was just for Fun….Am sorry….pls forgive…

Payal smiles and bharti also smiles back….

Bharti: Hey Gyan called both of us for dinner this Saturday…

Payal : But we planned for going to movie rite….

Bharti: yeah so tell me what shall we do??.. dinner?? Or Movie???

Payal : Ok we shall go for dinner….as Mr.Gyan called na….

Bharti:[with a cunning smile] yeah….Lets empty his pocket on that day….HA HA Bichara…!!!!!!!!

Payal : He is Bichara ah??.. What happen last time when we all went for movie…he made you buy all the tickets by promising that he will….forgot that ah???

Bharti : [Raising her eye brows] [Serious tone] How can I forget that….He made Miss. Bharti fool huh…let me see…this time…. He is gonna be Mr.Fool himself…

Payal : han han….!!!!! Bas…!!!!! Lets see whos gonna be…now we shall go and have our dinner….

Bharti: [gets up] Whats for dinner???.. anything special????... [jumps on the floor] ah ah tell me…!!!!!!

Payal: Bharti stop it…!!!!! Lets eat…

Sun is rising with a beautiful color of bright orange… Birds are singing and enjoying the beautiful breeze….Everyone are waking up and getting ready to do their routine…!!!!!

Everybody's morning will be with pleasant music….but one person is getting curses form all apartment members for disturbing them…..

to be conti.... 😃 😃

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Jaslin

@jassie_17

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Interesting update dearie.....

Hhmm...photographer not concentrating on his work..Time for the photographer to be terminated by AJ and get Mr Armaan in quick!!!!

Can't wait for the next part dearie!!!!!

Waise I think this is the first time I'm replying so quickly....heheh...Great work!!!!

Cheers,

Jassie

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Awesome update...
Loved it...
Cant wait to read the next part....
Continue soon...

Take Care
Zoya

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Interesting..Bharti has yet to see the Photographer..

Arre faster na i want these two lovebirds to meet!!😆

Am kidding just take your time! So funny when Bharti enters the house and screams for Payal!..😆

So like Bharti to scream and so like Payal to panick!..

Love it and carry on..:)

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N.H.Talagala

@naley4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

wow loved ur FF i read it today very interesting & keep me wanting for more🤗 love the fact bharti & gayan are best friendz something totally unique!!!!!!!!! waiting for armaans & bhaskar entry😳
please post more ...........loving ur FF😍

Naley 😊