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Posted: 15 years ago
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I knw i haven finished de other one but felt lik writing a new one on mayur.. its based on a movie...
dere wudn be nething romantic cos dey r best frens..... mayur s parents were bes frens since 1st std.. dey stay in villas facing each other.. mayur were born on de same day.... n dey r best frens .. al in coll cal dem siamese twins.... do let me knw if i hav to continue

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Anu, it will be great. Pls continue soon, and pls add me to your PM list, PM me when you continue, dear. 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1

And the winner is Mr and Mrs Mayank Sharma....... they both hold deir hands together and proudly go n take de jewellery... It was a draw durin jewellery inaugration for couples....
wen de gang gets out dey have a hearty laugh
gunjan: luck is always wit u guys yaar ....
dia: i knew it wen i chose benji as my husband we wud nvr win it ..
all laugh at that
mayank n nupur: cut it guys.. ab yeh kaho wher do u wanna party...
N they all decide and go to party
jewellery Merchant: wat was the name of the girl .... nupur and the guy: mayank sharma sir...
he calls mayanks dad dey were frens long back: arrey Mr singh.. kaise yaad kiya....
Mr sharma.. hum tho aapko kabhi bhoole nahin .. lekin lagtha hain aap humein bhool gaye... bete ki shaadhi hui aur humein invite thak nahin kiya
Mr sharma: shaadhi.. kiski.. mayank tho abhi pad rahan hain...
Mr . singh : laughes and says the whole thing ( Mujhe lag raha tha ki yeh coll bachon ki prank hain .. waise woh ladki kaun thi.. woh Bhushan ki beti hain nupur... donon bahuth shararthi hain ... ghar aane do un logon ko....( laughingly)
n he calls his fren n dey call deir wives n say..
both their parents r really cool n friendly
nw at the jeweller s shop... mayank nupur standing.. both wearin red t shirt n black pants...
Mr sharma: woh jewellery do .. mayank holds on it tight.. n mr sharma takes it n gives it back to jeweller
the jeweller says no hw cn i take it back.. neway i had to give it to sumone
mr bhushan : but u shud give deserving this is lik tho cheatin...
nupur: humne cheatin kasie kiya we were lucky .. humara naam tha aur we got de gift...
jewelller: i cant ake it back..
mr bhushan : if we take dis back we also won feel gud
mayank: bcos of dis gave a huge treat to frens says sadly
den his mom u guys don need ne reason to treat and party
dem nupur s dad : consider dis deir bachpana n forgive them
jeweller says no no problem at all
nupur ssdad .. me n mayank s dad we hav studied tog since 1 st std.. n we married with a gap of one week n dese two dey were born on de same day.. nw see de dress dey ve worn is also same color...
n jeweller says i need to give themn sumthin since they r special n after all they r todays winners.. wen is deir date of birth
october 13th
he calls n orders for two birth stones to giv them
nupur n mayank exchanges wat evr dey get.. its lik dat from childhood.. so dey xchange de box.....
next morning
alarm rings at both the house
they cn talk n it cn be heard out .. de villas r very close..
mayank: nupur tumhein yaad hain na from today onwards we r goin to be gud kids...
nupur: of course mujhe yaad hain ...
mayank: so i am goin to wake up
nupur: i hav already got up and i m goin to brush
mayank: which tooth paste r u u sing
nupur: colgate calci gurad
mayank: kids nw dr sharma will tel u de good uses of colgate calciguard...
mr sharma n mr bhushan get out of deir house n dey say nw enuf of shoutin no need of makin de whole colony know dat u both hav got up to study....
meanwhile nupur s house her mom comes to her room
oh ho tho yeh sabh bhaashan bed par leete hue kah rahi thi
mom tumhe kya lagtha hain mayu bhi aisa hi kar raha
nupurs mom : woh tumhari tharah nahin hain .. woh tho padh raha hain balcony mein...
kya????????? nupur gets out of her room to de balcony...
mayank yeh cheatin hain .. mujhe laga ki tum so rahe hon....
nupur s mom comes to de balcony .. ab patha chala aunty mein iski tharah aalsi nahi hun .. mein acha hooh...
nupur s mom .. haan yeh bahuth hi aalsi ho gayi hain....
nupur : tumhe tho mein dhekh loongi...
den nupur stands dere in de balcony den she sees mayank s gaze sumwehr els .. wen she luks she sees him lukin at mr rastogi s daughter in de balcony
nupur acha bachu tho yeh hain baath .. to tum isi liye itni subah utha..
mayank: haha .. sab logh sach hi kahtey badon ki baath humein hamesha sunni chahiye.. tho we ll get such benefits
nupur : abhi mein teek kar dethi hun .. n she shouts sharma uncle shilpa aunty mom dad mayu padhai ke bahaane humare baaju wale rastogi uncle s daughter ko line maar rahe hain ...
mayu gets shocked n jumps n his book falls from his hand directly on the basket of a woman sellin fish..
n she goes to de next house n pack fish by tearing the book .. while all dis nupur has a hearty laugh......
i hope its not borin.. if it is tel me .. i will not continue..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey this ff is from the malayalam movie NIRAM right?anyways its nice...continue soon..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yup it is .. i said na its based on a movie
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG Anu ......loved it dear

Mayur are so cute & mischievous

loved Nupur shouting in the end ......he he he

I've never seen a movie like this

I simply loved it

plz do continue soon

add me to your pm list

luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey thank u soooo much nidzy....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 2

NUPUR gets ready goes down to hav breakfast...
kya mom aaj bhi aaloo ke parathe..
mom: lekin kal tho mein ne puri banayi thi.. agar tumhe wahan jaake khana hain tho woh bathao na... yehan tho ek hain jise mere haath ke bana hua khana bahut pasand hain .. hain na??
she asks nupur s dad
n he nods agreeingly
nupur: says i pity u my dad .... n her mom laughingly goes to beat her n she runs off to de opposite house
mayu s mom : aao nupur beta khaana khate hain....
dey sit at the table... nupur looks at mayank s face.. he s sittin there angrily
uncle woh rastogi uncle hain na... mayank cuts in n says nupur tum yeh curry lo na
uncle is very jovial .. haan nupur beta tum kuch kah rahi thi woh uncle woh rasto
mayank cuts in: kya tumhare apne ghar mein khana nahin banathe ki tum yahan chali aayi ho..
nupur: mujhe yahan aane ke liya tumhare permission nahin chaahiye....
den mayank gets up den after comin back yeh kaisi dress pehan rakhi hain .. aisi dress pehen ke mere saath coll math aana
nupur: mujhe patha tha tum kuch aisa hi kahoge .. yeh dress tho tum ne hi select kiya tha .. bhool gaye kya....
mayu: mein ne .. of course not.. tum yeh change karo bhoothni ki tarah lag rahi ho..
nupur shouts uncl aunt dekho na....
den dey say k nupur jaake change karo.. n she gets up in a huff n goes
den she takes her scooty n comes near his gate .. he s about to sit on de bike...
nupur: wat a wierd taste mayu.. tumhari tshirt tho dekho....
mayank: ho hoh main jaantha tha.. isi liye yahin pena.. pichle hafthe jab tumhare papa delhi se aaye they tab unhone hi mujhe diya..
nupur: oh woh.. papa tho kah rahe they driver uncle ko dene ke liye .. aunty ne woh tumhe diya.. oh so sad....ab tum change kar rahe ho ke nahin
mayu s parents.. ab tum log college jaoge bhi ya nahin .. mayu jagda khatham karo tum change karke aa jao ... n finally both of dem go to xcel colll
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Posted: 15 years ago
#9
Good going Anu

but the part was short

I'm loving this concept

I feel like reading more and more

plz try to make it lomger next time

luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
superb update.different concept.loved it.
continue soon dear.
pls pm me when u'll update the next part.

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