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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
Hey Anu

Gr8 part dear

i really enjoyed reading it

love Mayur........so naughty & mischievous

do continue soon

luv
Nidzy

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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Hey Anu

Gr8 part dear

i really enjoyed reading it

love Mayur........so naughty & mischievous

do continue soon

luv
Nidzy

thnx again .. u encourage me de most.. i luk forward to read ur comments
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Fabulous part Anu. Mayank and Nupur are really smart and poor Adhiraj and Sanju baba. Any ways, pls PM me when you update next time.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Next day at coll ... mayu playin basket ball n nupur waitin for him by sittin on de stairs....

adhiraaj comes dere n asks her how ws de movie

n: she lks at him sheepishly....n says ..oh movie ws gud....

a: i really liked ur smartness yest

n: i thot u wud ahv been angry wit us....

a: no... never... so wat r u doin here nw ..

n: driver job.. his bike is spoilt .. so i m waitin for him to finish his practise..

a: oh ok.. he s sllightly hesitant den he asks.. cn i ask u sumting personal....

n: wat

a: r u n mayank .. i mean r u guys gf n bf

n: laughs too much.. 2 yrs we ve been studyin in dis coll.. noone has evr askd dis question

a: i m .. i m so so sorry.. jus dat i keep seein u both tog alwys so.. i . i m really sorry

by den mayu comes dere hey nupsi chalo

nupur goes wit him n from de door hey adhiraaj zyaada math sochna n says byeee

on de bike... kya hua nupsi..

nup: adhiraaj ko doubt hain ki hum dono ke beech kuch hain n laughs

mayu: laughs too oh ho.. to baath yahan takh aa gayi. nupsi.. ab tho mujhe lagtha hain mujhe interfere karna padega

nup: haha nahin mayank ... chodo na...

nxt day after coll wen mayu returns home .. he rings de bell.. n dere s a maid.. she s a special funny maid who s very filmy talks in butler english……she s a tamilian n doesn know hindi……

maid: who r u ?? wat u wmt

mayu: by de way who r u ….

Maid: oh fone .. u no trubl me… u go….

Mayu laughs n he goes to nupsi s house opp..

In de fone mayu s mom .. my son will come nw….. I forgot to tell u ..

Den maid is all panicky n she says ayyo rama … wat do I do( she says in tamil) n she runs out of de house on to de road.. n wen she runs out mayur slowly sneaks into de house)

N den she searches for him n returns home…..

N wen she enters home…N den suddenly tv gets switched on…. Mayu hides behind de sofa n switches it on with the remote….. she gets very scared

Den nupur switches on de music system on n off… she gets very scared n runs to de kitchen …. Dere s he sees omlette being made……n she s all panicky n scared n wen she returns to de hall she see mayur sittin at the table n having omlette they act lik dey r ghosts….

Dey say today the 12 th of february at n suddenly mayu luks at his watch.. at exactly 5 30 we both had omlette n died…. N every yr we come here de same day (dey talk in a very dramatized n ghostly manner)

Suddenly fone rings…. Maid .. madam.. here sumone… madam ghost ghost…. Dat time mayu takes de fone from her.. n he laughs.. he says mom dis maid is super… maid is lik oh ho

Den mom asks sumting he says ya nupsi is also here.. he keeps de fone.. den maid says .. hw my acting.. I know u both no ghost.. I great acting.. den both of dem tells her superb acting…

Maid: u both lovers ???

Mayu: no no she s nupur.. frum opposite house .. we r best frens

Maid: oh;; she ws disappointed….

Den she says I hav made pakoda… den both of dem go to de kitchen n dey take pakoda n as usual dey xchange it…

Mean while a colonel uncle their neighbour comes dere to watch cricket… as his tv gets spoilt…

Den dis maid her name is ruku.. she comes n sys hw mny times water water .. n after water drinkin .. n says sumting.. shukriya….

Den nupur.. she excllaims.. colonel uncle said SHUKRIYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????

Mayu Colonel uncle said shukriya… mayu ws lik wats dere kind of reaction den nupur stamps on his foot n says ..den he also screams n says …. he said SHUKRIYA.????. .den mayu also started…. He said shukriya to u …???

Den she says.. aama ( means yes)

Den nupur asks .. do u know wat shuk- ri-ya means….

Den maid s lik no

Nupur says oh hw cn we say

Den maid s lik pls tel.. me tension..

Mayu u tell..

Nupsi hw wil I tell.. u oly telll

Den very dramatically dey say SHUK_RI_YA it means I LUV U

Den de maid gets hyper….. n she says I wil show him n again he asks ruku water …..

N den wen she goes there to give n wen he says shukriya( she starts jumpin up n sayin ful in tamil.. wat u thot.. an old man lik u .. don't u hav respect dis dat n many tings.. n literally throws him out ) n michevous mayur laughs …….

Nxt day at coll

Suhaani gifts mayank a pen… n wen dey r sittin in coll.. in class.. suhaani dreams bout mayank .. bout him writin wit de pen… I luv u n him writin in many papers n de papers al flyin around….. n suddenly she s out of her dreamland n she sees nupur writin with it n dat too scribbling kind writin very harshly wit it..n she puts it in her ear n all…

Suhaani gets very hurt…

After class mayank if u din want de gift u shud hav told me.. u shudn hav insulted it lik dis….

In de eve wen suhaani is alone in de class nupur goes to her

I m sorry my dear.. frum childhood we r lik dis if I get sumting I giv it to him, if he gets sumting he wil giv it to me n if we both of us get we xchange… so if u wanna giv sumting to him… give me… I ll giv it to him

But agar dil dena ho.. dat u give directly oly I cant act as a broker… n she gives her all de best sign.. n suhaani s ver happy…

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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
dere s inter coll competition .. n nupur s dere in a drama.... n so she hav to leav to bangalore for a week.........
nupur s house her room packin.... mayank is puttin her dupaatta around his neck n playin around.... mayank to nupur s mom .. oh aunty.. ab jaake main peacefully so saktha hun
nupur s mom : haan haan mujhe pata hain tum usse bahuth miss karoge
mayu: main isse miss karunga?? mein yeh soch raha tha ki yeh iinter coll competiton do hafte kyun nahin hain ..
nupur s mom laughs n jus goes off
nupur al senti .. oh so u won miss me huh ... dis is de first time we r gonna stay away .. n she has tears in her eyes.. u cud hav also come
nw mayu is also emotional: n he says evn i wanted to .. but u know BB practise .. dats y i cant. we hav nvr evr stayed apart ... i ll miss u alooot nupsi... n dey hug each other......
he drops her to coll wehr de bus is waitin... btw adhirraj is also goin....
n after she waves him bye
benji n uday .. finally siamese twins r separated
dats it ..... comin up wud b wehr mayu realizes he actually luvs her n nupur wud b...... but wit adhiraaj .. don kick me guys
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: mayurlovers

Fabulous part Anu. Mayank and Nupur are really smart and poor Adhiraj and Sanju baba. Any ways, pls PM me when you update next time.

ya.. but nw bad times r comin up for mayur....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Hey, first to comment Anu. Thanks for PM dear. What do you mean? Nupur will love Adhiraj after the trip? No, pls. Any ways. It's nice that Mayank is not falling for Suhani. But you are telling bad times. Pls sab jaldi thik kar dena. Update soon and PM me when you post...

Love,
Shreya... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: mayurlovers

Hey, first to comment Anu. Thanks for PM dear. What do you mean? Nupur will love Adhiraj after the trip? No, pls. Any ways. It's nice that Mayank is not falling for Suhani. But you are telling bad times. Pls sab jaldi thik kar dena. Update soon and PM me when you post...

Love,
Shreya... 😊

not bad times .. hehe but slight misunderstandins.. i m also diehard fan of mayur.. so won make too many bad tings happen.. thnx for replyin ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
superb update.loved it.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Hey Anu

really nice update dear

loved it

Wow Mayank is gonna realise his love for Nupur

Cant waiit for the next part

plz do continue soon

Luv
Nidzy



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