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Posted: 15 years ago
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at the dinner table mayank is waitin impatiently for nupur s call n his mom s talkin on de fone .. n talkin bout some fashion magazine n he gets irritated.. he gets up takes de fone n says .. gud nite auntn keeps de fone.. his mom s lik kya mayu...
his dad ws lik ur mom ws discussin international issue na dat she s feelin so sad that you cut de call.. his mom makes a face
fone rings.. mayu runs to take it.. oh sorry Dr. sharma is not here.. he has gone out.. will u please call tomm
den his mom looks at his dad n laughs .. in a way lik very gud..
beta i m sittin in front of u alive n u said i m not here..
dad nw wen u wil also talk ur international issue by den al de booths will close in bangalore ( its a bit olden time mobile is not dere hehe)
den fone rings
hey mayu dis is nupsi calling from de garden city( his parents get up n go .. dis wil not get over nw)
hahha hw r u nupsi... wen did u reach .. hw ws ur journey....
journey ws k ya .. jus kept my tings in my room n came to call u up
i ws waitin for ur call
ya i knew u wud be .. dats y as soon as i reached i came n cald u ...
hmm hey mayu... i miss u ya i miss u too much.. i feel i hav left a part of me dere.. i don knw mayu.. feels horrible witout me
u knw nupsi.. i hav already started counting de days lik wen u ll return .. i miss u very very much ..k then don waste ur money .. bye tc...
u too ..
he sits at de dinin table.. den de maid comes .. she sys oh wen u no see one day lik dis .. dis is luv.. de fire of luv..
mayu says jus shut up n she leaves... but dis leaves mayu disturbed.....
next day he goes to coll... wen he enters class he misses her a lot .... he luks at de seat nxt to him.. he misses her wen he walks in de corridor.. he misses her wen he goes to de canteen..
den he walks to de college ground.. wehr suhaani comes.... she says u miss her rite .. den he says ya a bit too much
suhaani: u luv her rite...
mayu:nuthin lik dat..
otherwise jus witout seeing for one day dis feellin dis restlessness.. mayank in dis wurld a boy n gurl cant remain as friends... at some point of time deir heart will hav a differen feeling
no suhaani dere s nuthin btw me n nupur n he jus walks off...
nite at 12...fone rings in nupur s room in bangalore... n he screams .... happy bday nupur...... n she screams back happy bday mayuu.....
oh i thot i wud wish first mayu.. dis time also u oly won.. hey nw keep de fone n go open de door.... n wen she opens she sees sanju n others havin a bouquet..
sanju: mayu cald n said sumhw u shud manage to get dis bouquet n we got dis for u
she went back to de fone... thnx mayu...nw u go to my room n check in my cupboard....
so mayu keeps de fone n he goes to her room
n den sees a card
friends forever
"when you need me, jus close your eyes n u wil find me a heartbeat away"
he closes his eyes.. n den dere is a song sequence.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

it was lovely..

plz add me to yur pm list....

and yippie first one to comment

Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
Wow, Anu. What a nice update. Mayu really misses her much. Continue soon, and pls PM me. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
its realy nice
i loved it
so mayu nd nupz missing eachother 😒
i feel realy bad 4 them
continue soooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
hi,
sorry sorry 4 late reply.
it was wonderful update.
just loved it.
mayank miss nupsi a lot.
wow great.
very nice part .
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
hey thnx evrybody for ur comments.. i jus luv to read dem....here s de nxt part....
next day morning.....
nupur s mom : mayu beta nupur aa rahin hain na .. tum use pick up karoge
mayu all xcited haan anuty mein abhi jaa rahan hun.....
den he goes to coll.. its early mornin.. he parks his bike n he shouts.. i luv u nupur... i luv u ......
suddenly he thinks wat i m saying .. dere s a god s statue in coll n he turns it to n says.. sorry god.. i don knw wat happened to me... frum dis moment nupsi is my old fren... my best fren... nuthin more god... i shud nvr bring dese feelings in front of her ... pls give me de strength god....
den de bus comes.... nupur secreams hey mayuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
n den she runs out of de bus n hugs him.. other frens join..
dey make fun of nupur s drama .. wehr dey were de last..
nupsi.. mazaak math udao k.... kya hua agar hum last hue tho.. bahuth appreciation mili thil.....
den dey go home..
nupur runs to de kitchen wehr mayu s mom is n has a ball dance wit her
mayu s mom .. nupur beta bahuth miss kiya tujhe n she hugs her n kisses her
hey mayu happy bday.. n she hands him a gift.... n says wehr s my gift .. take it soon .. or els u change n come.. den he goes inside n wears de pair of jeans n t shirt..
wen he goes to change he tinks to himself .. what will i do.. i did not buy for her neting.. i ws dreamin bout her de whole time.. wat wil i tel her
wen he comes out.. oh wow mayu.. i m really great.. its got superb fittin na......nw tel me wehr s my gift
mayu sheepishly says i .. i din buy
nupur: oh so one week wen i went u forgot .. she cudn complete.. mayu keeps his finger on her lips n has his eys filled
nupur: hey mayu kya hua i ws jokin.... mujhe pata hain dat u missed me very much.. ab yeh rona dhona bandh karo .. i m back ... n we ll nvr evr leav each other.. hain na mayu....
oh ruku.. hw u ...
fine maadam... here one person... den mayank cuts in .. nupsi .. jaake aunt uncle se milo na...
nupur: haan yar i ll come after sumtime....
nw eve... nupur in mayu s room ....
oh mayu hw much notes yaar... pls take dat other book u also start writing na...
mayu shows a lazy expression ..
oye mayu .. jaldhi kar...
den he goes to take de book .. n sees her card .. n he s lost in it for a minute...
n den goes back
hey nupsi tum baatha rahin thi tumhe bahuth saari baatein karni hain.....
den nupsi... haan yaar ... kitna kuch hain bathane ke liye.....
teek hain wil start frum bday... sinc u cald up evryone knew its my bday tho dey bot a cake n wished me happy bday n den ... adhiraaj....
n she starts gettin up . u be nupur .. i ll b adhiraaj.....
hey y u standin lik dat.. mayu ws standin lik a pucca man... oh sorry n he changes n luks in other direction..
oh mayu tum wahan kyun delh rahe h.. mayu: tumhi ne tho kaha ki u were lukin sumwehr .. acha teek hain
n she enacts lik adhiraaj she walks in his style....n imitates his voice.....
hmm hello nupur: mayu starts laughn by den itself .. she hits him... actually nupur.. jab se mein ne tum he dekha.. i mean .. u knw ..
den both nupur n mayu starts laughin... nupur : woh i mean .. u knw etc etc kah rahe they.his US style( btw adhiraaj did his schoolin in US n his parents r dere).. tab mein ne kaha . kya baath hain saaf saaf kahoo na
den she enacts adhiraaj again: dat nupur. i .. i luv u ..... n he says .. sorry if u are angry.. i jus said wat i felt i mean.. i ..
mayu: tab tumne kya kahan:
nup:mein ne kahan . hmm lemme tink.. sochke bathathi hun....
mayu: oh to ab madamji soch rahin hain...( he s hurt inside) but doesn try to show)
nxt evenin in de colony dey hav a grand party n nupur n mayank dance n hav a gala time.....
after few dys in de evening in de restaurant
nupur to tum yes kaho na
arrey nahi n nahin mayu she xclaims
acha teek hain no kaho
nahin no bhi i mean ...
den mayu laughs oh ho to tum yes aur no bhi nahin kah sakthe
she has de chicken lollipop in her hand n she revolves it n says mujhe sochna hain.. ek aur baar shud go deep inside my mind n tink n tink ....hmmmm
mayu: tum paagal ho..... n he laughs
den late nite .... at 2 o clock fone rings in mayu s house.. his dad picks up.... he s sleepy n also drunk....
kaun... kaun nupur.. oh nupur beta.. in a drunk manner.. he s very sweet...ab time kya hain beta.. n den he calls his wife.. jaake mayu ko fone dena..
mayu in sleepy tone.. kya nupsi.. y u cald so late
mayu.. mujhe neend nahin aa rahin hain ... kya hua... nupur in her balcomny n mayank in his.... but dey r talkin over fone itself... den she says
tumhe kya lagtha hain
mayu: kya kya lagtha hain.. i
nupur: i mean mujhe kya kehna hain
nayu: kis se
nupur: uffo mayu.. adhiraaj se .. aur kis s e
mayu: oh tumne mujhe isliye itni raat ko pareshaan kiya.. hazaar baar tum mujh se pooch chuki ho.. mujhe us se pyaar karna hain ya tujhe
nupur: phir bhi mayu tum batao na... acha mein yes kahun kya....
den mayu becomes silent.. he feels very sad .. he doesn knw wat to say.. den she screams from her balcony to him hey mayu .. y u not answering.. den again to de fone.. hey mayu i ll say yes na.. is dis cald luv.. ruku 's luv
mayu: muje pata nahin
nupur: tumhe kyun nahin pata
den mayu has a sad xpression
den nupur says so i ll say yes na
den he says haan nupsi say yes
nxt day at coll
adhiraaj waitin in de coll ground..... nupur walkin towards him.. she keeps turnin behin n lukin at mayu..... she keeps lukin he asks her to walk... he gives her a best of luck
den she goes near him ... n says adhiraaj .. i .. i mean yes... i .. i .. den seh says SHUK-RI-YA ( dis is deir code wurd for i luv u ) dey had told de maid
adhiraaj luks very confused.... she runs to mayu n says ask him de dubl meanin he will tel u ....
n she runs frum dere
k guys i m ready to get all chappals thrown on me ... cos nupur luvs adhiraaj....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: fariaa70

hi,
sorry sorry 4 late reply.
it was wonderful update.
just loved it.
mayank miss nupsi a lot.
wow great.
very nice part .
keep it up

thanks a loot.. i jus read one of ur ff nw..its jus superb .. after readin dat i m tinkin shud i continue mine.. wil ne one read hehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Hey Anu

really nice update dear

loved it

Wow Mayank is gonna realise his love for Nupur

Cant waiit for the next part

plz do continue soon

Luv
Nidzy

thnx nidzy .... u r a sweetheart 😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
superb update.very nice dear.loved it.continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
Hi Anu,
Very nice and lovely update.
Loved ithe update so much
its describe the feelings of mayank beautifully.
it was too good
update next part soon
Plz try to add the link when u pm so its easy 4 us to access.
Take care

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