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Ravjot

@rainydays.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Inspector Ravs saved the day😎🤣

You already know what I thought and how much I loved it =)

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

beautiful one shot

it was intense in all the right places

particularly loved the part when the inspector came in!

your jodi with prem rocks......keep writing!

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sweetness4eva

@sweetness4eva

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Meera, that was absolutely fabulous!!!
You know what? I can't actually decide which one of your oneshots i love the most? Its like, I love so many of them that I cant decide which one is my favorite!!! BUT, this one, just got the favorite spot for today!

On coming to the one shot, It was beautifully written Meera! You are absolutely a wonderful writer!! Its like everytime I see a oneshot by you, I cant resist it, because I KNOW its going to be good! So if I have to put it simply, I love your oneshots, your writing style, and your stories!!! I dont know how you come up with such beautiful ideas!!!!

Okay so enough of my bak bak! In short, I loved it! And keep writing more!! What did I love the most? Prem coming to the wedding, and the only sensible person to figure out that Meera's eyes said it all, that she was not happy...

BUT i do have a question? When Prem says tu mujh se baat mat ker or something along those lines to Adi, I was wondering, maybe he spoke like THE PREM ? You know who was yelling at manmeet right before PremAshlesha wedding???

Okay gotta get lost now, have guests coming over so have LOADS to do..and if mom sees me here, I wont be around to read any of your oneshots EVER!

Adios

Mahrukh!

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

heyy...

that was a fantastic one shot, as usual😃... need i say anything more?

(well, aparantly i do😆)

loved the storyline... meera and prem make a lovely couple😳 (aint i right😆😉???)

anyways... that better not be MY ADI (*gets fists ready*... meaning my darlign aditya narayan...See my username to get an idea what i'm talking abt)...

even if it is though, i dont mind (*thinks...and relaxes fists*)..., but i just cant imagine him as a bad guy😕

yeah... and now more abt ur one shot...

like i said.,.. i loved it as usual...(*claps so hard that hands start hurting*)

it was one of those superduperfragilisticexpialidocious ones... (i dunno what tt long word means😆 but i am guessing its a compliment... and if u've nvr heard of tt word before... well, its in tt mary poppins song in the movie... the one starring julie andrews..😃)

oh and the best part yet...

i loved inspector rajvot's appearance... (u reading this ravz😃)??... ravz as an inspector...😆😆 (will surely looks funny... *ducks*)