FF-Dil ki har ek Dhadkan~Veera ki SHADDI~74

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OKay...So HI...My name is Nikita, and I am not new to Kis Desh forum...for those who know, I wrote DIL PAR LIKDO NAAM MERA...Which was my first FF on this forum...So this is my second FF...IM really excited..and I LOVE COMMENTS...So please leave them...I will update as frequently as possible..Please dont be a silent reader...Cuz I take song requests...or plot changes...So give feedback!!!


HOPE U like this first part....
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As Heer boarded the plane, she found her seat and settled down

Heer looked at the ring on her finger....She was happy that her bauji had let her go to Europe for 3 months...but this ring upset her...She couldn't stand to think about this for 3 months... " I'll put it back on when I get back...plus ,I'm not denying my responsibility toward this relationship but I cant stand to look at the ring during this vacation."...Heer took the ring off, and slid it through her chain...She wore the chain, and then looked down at the ring around her neck..She felt free...


Neha- Noone is sitting next to you Heer?

Heer-(breaking out of her thoughts) Abhi tak toh...

Guy-Excuse me...

Neha-Oh sorry...is this your seat'?

Guy-Yeah...

Neha-Oh okay...Bye Heer...badmein aaongi...

Heer watched out the window as she thought about what had happened yesterday...She came out of thoughts..

Sab rab par chor de Heer, tu sirf aapne aap ko enjoy kar...Jab vapiss anna hoga tab rab ki jo marzi hogi vohi karna...

A voice inside of her told her...

Suddenly the pilot made an announcement.
All passengers please fasten your seatbelts, the aircrafts will shortly take off....

Heer began to breathe heavily as the plane moved onto the runway....

Heer threw her hand over the hand rest, unconsciously seeing that his hand was already there...He smiled seeing the fear on her face

Guy-Dehkiyeh...Please relax...

Heer realized that her hand was over his, and quickly removed her hand...

Heer-Sorry...

As the plane's speed grew, so did Heer's fear....

Heer reached out and grabbed his hand

Heer squeezed his hand....

As the plane flew into the air, he stared at Heer...He noticed every facial expression she made and smiled sweetly...

Guy- Ab plane hawa mein achuki hai...

Heer opened her eyes and pulled her hand back...

heer-I'm soo sorry...

Guy-Nahi, its okay...I'm guessing yeh aapki pehle plane ride hai??

Heer-(smiling)-Yeah...

The looked at each other for a moment, until Heer broke the silence

Heer-Uh...Mujhe unchihe se bouth daar lagtha hai...

Guy-Dont worry about it...Aap mere saath bilkul safe hain- I mean...Iss plane mein...

What did I just say? I'm loosing it...

XXX

Heer popped in a pill shortly after she ate, and was out cold...

Juhi-Heer ko dehkar athi hoon...

Neha-No point...she must be knocked out...Ek do pill kagaye hogi...

Just then Reena came by Neha and Juhi

Reena-Haan haan, humhare Heer...Puri duniya dheekna chathi hai liken ek plane main bhi nahi betsak thi...

Kasak- Tum log Heer ke bare mein baath kar rahe ho, mujhe uske baju wali seat mein jo betha hai uski tension horahi hai...

Juhi-Reena tu kiske saath bethi hai?

Reena-Some guy...He thinks soo highly of himself...Mujhse baath kartha rehtha hai... Its disgusting...

Kasak-Chup reh...Mein tere peeche wali seat mein hoon, hasthi rethi hai...Stupid flirt...

Reena-See, someone understand me...

Kasak-Mein teri baath kar rahi thi...

Reena-Shut up Kavi...
Kasak-Its Kasak!!

Reena-Arre, we've been calling you Kavi since....since like...

Flight Attendent- Ladies, could you please take your seats...We are experiencing some turbulence...

Juhi-Mere bichari Heer...

XXX

The guy was now reading a book, until he felt a sudden weight on his shoulder...He looked to his right...Heer's head was looming up and down, Her hair covered her entire face, and so the guy moved Heer's hair, and tucked it behind her ear....Heer moved a bit, and the plane bounced up and down...

Guy-Thank god she's sleeping, varna plane ko assa hiltha hua dheek aur daar ja thi...

Even in her deep sleep, Heer felt the plane bounce as if she was on a roller coaster...She gripped his arm, the warmth of his arm seemed to sooth her as she stopped moving and stayed against him...

He couldnt help but stare...

He came out of his thought when...

Preet-Bhai!! We found you...

Harman-Prem bhaiya!!

Prem looked toward them...

Prem Juneja on vacation with his 2 younger brothers...He was an entrepreneur at the age of 25. He had recently finished his MBA, and taken a break before starting his fathers business. His brother Harman was only 2 years younger, at age 23, and Preet was the youngest of the three at age 22.

Prem-Tum logoon neh teek se kaya??

Preet- Haan bhai...Yeh kyon hai?

Preet pointed to the girl who was rested on Prem's shoulder....

Prem-Voh...actually mujhe flight meh mille, and well she's afraid of heights...

Fligh Attemdent- Excuse me sir, would both of you please take your seats, the seat belt sign is still on....

Harman-Bhai, we'll see you later...

Prem soon drifted off to sleep, and his head was over Heer's...Heer's hand was still wrapped around Prem's,...and they stayed that way for the rest of the flight...

The flight had landed in Crete, and Island in Greece. Prem and Heer were awoken by the loud clapping of all the passengers as the flight had landed...Heer's eyes opened first she put a hand to her head, as it felt heavy, and then looked to her side...It was Prem...She tapped him lightly...and his eyes slowly opened, seeing her so closely he quickly moved back....They both looked at each other awkwardly, and then saying nothing exited the plane...

Heer went threw the customs, and then found Juhi...

Heer-JUHI!!!!?
Juhi looked around trying to find the voice that called out to her....

Reena-Juhi....look over there!!

Neha-HEER!!!

Heer went toward them and Reena began to talk...

Reena-Uff...look over there, that guy Preet....

Heer-What guy?

Kasak-Kuch nahi, madam uss ladke ke saath flirt kar rahi thi

Heer-Reena!

Reena-What? voh mere saath flirt kar raha tha....

The five of them picked up there luggage, and then headed toward the gate where there tour guide was holding out a board... "Caesar European Travels Lmt"

Neha-Voh raha..

Victor-Hello ladies, and welcome to Greece, I am you tour guide for the next 2 weeks, Victor

Neha, Juhi, Heer, Reena, and Kasak-Hi victor

Neha-How many people are on this 3 month tour?

Victor-Another 25...so in total there are 30 of us...You'll all become close friends seeing that you will be together for 3 months...All the people on this tour are between the ages of 20-28....So not much age differences either...

Reena-Thats nice

Kasak-Haan haan, Queen of flirting ko toh bus bahana chahiyeh...

Juhi-Stop it guys..</FONT></font>
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kvashishat thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey hun i m liking the concept... kinda made me think bout ddlj... its cute..... plz make a pm list and add me up update soon
luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really really interesting concept.....LOL....wow heer is already engaged....cant wait for ur next update.....
similar to ddlj,,,
continue soon....:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Only this little comments?? Please comment

-nikita
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Originally posted by: Sunehari*Rose

hey hun i m liking the concept... kinda made me think bout ddlj... its cute..... plz make a pm list and add me up update soon

luv


tina




Thanks for the comment..Trust me it wont be like DDLJ...I promise...I just noticed it actually seemed like that!! LOL...I will make a PM List...and u will be on it...Thanks again..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

<font color="#9900cc">hey<br>interesting<br>loved it <br>awesome<br></font>




Thanks for the comment...I think u had also read...Dil park likdo naam mera...anyway..Thanks for reading and keep commenting...
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Originally posted by: iditri

really really interesting concept.....LOL....wow heer is already engaged....cant wait for ur next update.....

similar to ddlj,,,


continue soon....:)




Thanks for comment..keep reading...and I will PM whenever I update...
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Thanks everyone soo much for reading...I would like more comments...But for now...U get a short update...Thanks again...I hope I get to read many many more comments next time...Come on silent readers I know ur there!!!😃






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Harman-Shit, mera luggage kahan hai??

Preet-(eating a sandwhich)-Hahaha...Mujhe mera aur bhai ka milgaya...By the way where is bhai??

Harman-I have no clue...

Just then prem came toward them and took his bag from Preet...

Prem-Harman tera bag kahan hai??

Preet-There it is...The Blue one...

Harman got his luggage and then Prem continued

Prem-Ab tum donna ka hogaya hai toh...HUmhara tour guide vahan hai...

Prem, Harman, and Preet headed toward Victor who now had a sign in sheet...

As the rest of the group stood in a mob near Victor, Victor explained the plans for today

Victor-First and foremost, WELCOME to crete, the largest island of Greece, we will first head toward the hotel and check everyone in...Everyone will be in pairs of 2's just for an organized buddy system. So lets head to the bus, our bus is the green and grey stripped one...
They headed to the bus and took there seats...

Juhi and Kasak sat together, while Neha and Reena sat togther...

Kasak-Heer kahan betegi??

Juhi placed her bag on the seat behind her....Humhare peeche...

Neha and reena sat in front of Kasak and Juhi, and behind the two empty seats, one of which Juhi had saved for Heer, Preet and Harman sat...

Harman placed his sweater on the seat infront of his,

Harman-Prem bhai can sit there...

Heer and Prem entered the bus last, both were on different sides of the bus taking pictures of the scenery...

Juhi shouted seeing Heer enter the bus

Juhi-Teri seat!!!

Heer came and sat behind Juhi...

harman also shouted and showed Prem his seat, when Prem sat down, he noticed heer..

Heer looked at him and smiled

Heer-...I'm sorry Plane mein...actually main sleeping pills leli thi...

Prem-Nahi, its fine, sorry toh mujhe kehna chahiyeh..mein bhi so-

Heer-Nahi its okay...

Prem-Wase, pure flight mein aapka naam----

Heer-Oh....Mein Heer, aur aap?

Prem-Prem...

Heer-Aap akele?

Prem-nahi, mere do bhai bhi haan...Humare peeche...

Heer-thats nice...

Prem-Aur app?

Heer-Mere char sahelioon ke saath...

Prem-Thats nice...So just vacationing??

Heer-Well, sort off, I just graduated from my university as valedictorian, and my photography professor gifted me with these tickets...

Prem-Oh wow, you take photography...So what was your college major?

Heer-English Literature and Art History...

Prem-Wow,

Heer-I know, thats lame, but...

Prem-what makes you think thats lame??

Heer-Because...thats what everyone else thinks

Prem-Well not me, I love english literature, have never really explored the history of art, but I'm quite found of painting...
Heer-Really you paint??

Prem-yeah...

Heer-So, tumhara major kya tha college mein, I mean are you still a college student or-

Prem-(laughing)-Nahi, I just finished grad school actually

Heer-Oh...oops

Prem-Yeah, and Maine business mein major kiya

Heer-Really, business, aur painting jaise creative hobby?

Prem-Kyun ,business creative nahi hai kya?

Heer-(smiling)-Well, jab mein business ke bare mein sochthi hoon, I think boring....But thats just me...

Prem-Well for you information, Business is very exciting...

Heer-(still smiling)-I didn't mean it like that...

Prem-Yeah yeah...

Lost in each others conversations, they didn't notice the bus had stopped

Victor-(on the microphone)- Alright...We are here at Hotel Florentine...If everyone would gather there things and head to the lobby where room assignments will be given...

Heer and Prem got out of the bus with everyone...

Victor began assigning rooms...Most were singles, and some were doubles...

Reena, Neha, and Kasak had seperate rooms on the third floor, where Juhi and Heer shared a room on the second floor...

Victor-Now that everyone has received room keys, there are two different options...After getting fresh in your rooms, we will meet down here in 2 hours...You can choose to stay in the hotel today and rest, as no guided tour is planned for us...But there is a beach about two blocks from the hotel, or I can take a bunch of you to the city

Neha-City!!

Juhi-Shopping

Heer-Oh no...Please leave me out of this...Mujhe shopping nahi janna...

Reena-Oh god Heer, please...Chal na...

Juhi-Okay fine, no zabardasti...Par everyone has to have there phones on, and if we separate we must call each other....

Heer-Haan, yeh teek hai...

XXX

Preet-Bhai, mein toh city jaoonga...

Harman-haan haan, vahan ithni kubsuraath ladkiyaan jo hongi...

Preet-Exactly...Ab sightseeing karne ka hack mujhe bhi toh ho...

XX
Victor-Please...Shhh...Quiet down...Before I let you go upstairs and decide... Can everyone go stand next to the people you were sitting next to in the bus...(after a few minutes)-Now look at these people carefully...This person will be your buddy, and when evere we go to a new city, I would recommend that you stick with your buddy, so we can have an organized system...and noone gets lost...

Reena-Arre heer, humhe appne naye dost se milwaogi nahi?

Heer-oh...Prem...Yeh hai mere saheliaan, Juhi, meri sabse achi dost, Reena, Neha, aur Kasak

Prem-Hi, nice you meet you...Heer, just one sec (looking for his brothers)-Harman!! Preet!!

Harman and Preet, came to Prem

Prem-Harman, Preet, yeh hai Heer, Juhi, reena, Kasak, aur Neha...Aur yeh hai mere chote bhai...Preet aur Harman

Preet-reena!!

Prem-Tum isse janthe ho?

Reena-Hum flight mein saath bete the...

Prem-oh...

Neha-Oh...toh yeh voh hai...Bouth funny ho na tum Preet

Juhi-Neha!!

Neha-What?

Kasak-Arre Neha toh complement kar rahi thi...Main tum dono ke peeche beti thi...aur sirf reena ki hasi sunahi di....

Preet-Voh toh hum asse hi baath karre the...

In Prem's room

Prem-Preet!

Preet-Kya hua bhai?

Prem-Tum reena ke saath flirt maath karna...

Preet-KYUUUN???

Prem-Preet, kisi ladki ke dil ke saath khel na accha nahi hota

Preet-Haan haan, sirf isi liye kyun ki shayad aapka dil...Heer par agaya?

Prem-what?

Harman-Arre shutup preet

Prem-Preet, tum kabhie bhi kisi ladki ki respect nahi kardpaogeh...Aur dehkna jab tujhe pyaar hoga na, thab koi tujhe reject karega....

Prem left the room, upset on how immature his brother could be....He walked into the lobby and saw Heer standing at the reception making a phone call

Everything seemed to stop, Prem thought he was on medication. He looked at the clock mounted above the reception desk, the second hand stopped moving...Was he hallucinating ? He looked at Heer, so plainly dressed in a pale pink churidaar, yet he couldnt help but be awed by her. Her simplicity was beautiful. He walked in her direction, he felt like he had no control over his body. Standing just a few inches behind her he inhaled the fragrant scent, she smelled so sweet. Just then time began to move again...He was on hold from the operator and turned in Prem's direction, jumping slightly...


-Nikita

Edited by nikitaic - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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if u make a pm list then add me tooo
and indeed i have read ur other ff(dil par ............
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hey
that was awesum
soo sweet
loved it
thankz for pm
Edited by pooji123456789 - 16 years ago

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